Hi every1 thanx a ton for ur Lovely Comment nd support so far nd sorry for kept u all waiting for next part. but i m not well nd suffering from Fever. here's d Part 27 of my FF. hope u all will like it. though i tried my best in writing dis part but if u all didnt enjoy it den pls forgive me as i have written it at my ill state. Pls Feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it.😊
Part 27:
Next Morning it was 8:00 AM wen Geet woke up. She rubbed her eues to get out from her Dream World, then she noticed that she was not at Couch infact she is on her Bed. She looked around d Whole Room. yes it was her Room
Geet(To Herself): Main yahaan kaise aayi? Main to Couch pe soyi thi to fir? Kahin mujhe Neend me chalne ki Bimaari to nahi ho gayi? Shut up Geet wat r u thinking? But then hw I came over here?
She closed her eyes to remember wat has happened then opens her eyes because she realized who brought her over here. None other den Maan. Only he's d one who can think so much about her. no matter hw he irritated her last day but the fact is dat he loves her thatsy he cant see her in any kind of Difficulty ns she loves him too thatsy last nite she didn't argue much for room. though she has shown lots of anger to him but only she knews that it was all fake. She smiled wen she thinks hw Maan has brought her over here
Geet (to herself): He cares so much about me nd I was so rude to him yesterday. Dnt worry Geet just talk to him today. I'll ask him to leave for Mumbai but I wont go so soon I'll come later hope dat'll conveince him. But where is he? Did he already left? No she has to check out.
She quickly gets up from her Bed nd moved outside d Room. She saw that there was no one in d Couch, she looked at the Kitchen nd saw her Mom alone over dere, her Nanimaa is still sleeping in her Room. She quickly goes to the Balcony thought that May be Maan would be there but found no one over dere also. She wondered where he could be. Did he left without even telling her? Her face was started frowning with the Thought that Maan has left from dere. As soon as she was about to turn she bumped into someone which makes her lose her balance. She was about to Fall wen someone catches her through Waist. Geet's eyes were shut in fear dat she was about to fall in ground soon she realizes d grip of strong hand around her waist. She knows of whom dat Grip is. It was none other den Maan. She slowly opens her eyes to look at him nd she was right. She was safe in Maan's Arms. There was an eyelock moment between both of dem for few minutes, den slowly Maan raise her up nd geet settles herself. They looked each other for some moments den Maan decides to break d Silence.
Maan: Y u r always in a hurry? Mana ki I use to call u Amritsar Express but that doesn't mean that u behave like dat only.
Geet: Actually I was worried. I thought u left without telling me so I was searching for u nd......
Den she stops wen she saw Maan Looking at her with smile.
Maan: So u thought that I had left huh?
Geet: No, I mean yes......
Maan: Geet relax! I completely understand wat u want to say. Ur eyes has told me everything. Actually I had gone for a Jog.
Geet: Oh I thought that u left
Maan: Geet, u know MSK he never backs out from any Challenge
Geet: Challenge?
Maan: ya challenge. Remember last evening at kitchen?
Geet: O ya I need to talk about that only. i........
Maan: So u agree to come wid me
Geet: Maan pls let me complete.
Maan: ok go on
Geet: Maan I cant come wid u. pls Try to understand its not easy for me not after all happened dat day. Pls dnt make dis Stupid Challenges. Its of no use. Just forget about all dis nd go to Mumbai. Dadimaa is alone over dere nd u know that she use to have Palputations Problems still u r behaving like a Kid. Pls Maan.
Maan Listened to her quietly. He loves dat Geet cares for everyone so much
Maan: If u really Care for Dadimaa So much den y r u not coming with me. Ok I'll go without u but tell me wat Answer I'll Give to Dadi wen she'll ask me about u. u think that she'll be in good health after knowing about the truth.
Geet: Maan, dnt try to blackmail me emotionally. U know very well hw much I love her. but pls Maan u r clever enough to give her any excuse
Maan: I wont give her any excuse Geet because u r coming with me.
Geet: that's not Possible Maan
Maan: don't decide too early Geet because 24 Hrs. r not over yet. There's still 11 Hrs. left. Nd life can change in a minute then 11 hrs r enough to change ur Decision.
Geet: But Maan......
Maan: See u at Dining table for Breakfast
Saying dis he left from dere leaving Geet Puzzled. She knows that it was not easy to win from him but she'll also wont give up.
Geet(To herself): Fine Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. I have came here to make u understand Politely but I guess it will not work as u consider it to be war. Ok 11 Hrs. r left na. let see Who'll win.
Saying dis she also left from dere.
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It was 10 AM in d morning nd everyone has almost finished their Breakfast. Wen dey heard d Door Bell. Malini was going to open d Door wen Geet stops her.
Geet: Mom u finish ur Breakfast. I'll go nd check.
Malini: ok
Geet goes to the Main Door nd as soon as she opens it she saw A girl standing facing her back towards her.
Geet: Excuse Me!!!
As soon as d Girl hears d Voice she quickly turns back cheerfully to face Geet. She was in her early Twenties nd wearing Blue Halter Top dress dat came acroo just above her knees.
Girl: Hi! Umm Let me Guess. Geet Rite?
Geet: Ya. But u.....
Before she completes d Girl hugs her tightly
Girl(excitly): Hi!!! Finally I met u. it was so good to meet u.
Geet hugged her in amuzed away den parted herself
Geet: umm Excuse me dnt mind but Have we met before?
Girl: Oh! So stupid of me I havent introduced myself to u. Hi I m Savera. Savera Malik
[Enter Savera Malik. A young, Cheerful nd lively girl from London. Twin sister of Armaan who is just 5 mins. younger from him nd Maan's Good Friend. fond to be called as Savy A fashion Designer by Profession nd having a Good Bonding with his Bro. Will act as a Cupid for our Maaneet]
Geet(confused): Savera Malik.
Savera: Hey, tum Savy ko nahi jaanti. Kaise janogi I havent able to come for ur engagement. U know Armaan Maan's Friend?
Geet: ya
Savera: I m his Sister. Just 5 mins. Younger from him.
Geet: oh ok.
Savera: Will u mind if I come inside?
Geet: oh ya Sorry. Ya sure pls come.
Savera: thanx.
Wen it took Geet so long to come den Maan decided to go to check himself. As soon as he goes to living Room Area he saw Savera over dere. He felt Both Happy nd Excited to look her over dere.
Maan: Savera!!!!
Savera(excited): Maan!!!!
As soon as Savera saw Maan he ran towards him nd hugged him tight. Geet saw dis nd her Face become to frown. Before dis she has not Seen any other girl being so close To Maan except her. Maan noticed d change in Geet's Expression so he Hugged her back nd it has been a warm hug. Geet didn't feel good wen she saw Maan hugged her so tightly. Finally Maan Broke d Hug nd looked at Savera.
Maan: Hey! Savy, it was so good to see u. but wen did u came back from London
Savera: yesterday only nd after Landing to Mumbai I had gone straight away to ur Home to meet u, pata chala ki tum to yaha Amritsar me ho. Fir kyat ha Savy ne apna Bag uthaya nd straight away came to Amritsar. I hope I havent done anything wrong. Did I Geet?
Geet(came into senses): Umm no Ofcourse not. Its good to see u.
In the Meanwhile Geet's Mother too came in d Room.
Maan: Mom, she's Savera Armaan's Sis.
Savera: Hello Aunty.
Malini: Hello Beta! Hw r u?
Savera: I m fine Aunty. Hws u?
Malini: I m fine too. (den turned to Geet) Geet y dnt u arrange breakfast for her. She must be both tired nd Hungry.
Geet: Sure Mom.
By saying dis She leaves for Kitchen.
Malini: Savera Beta I would love to talk to u but I need to go to Office rite nw but I'll be back today soon.
Savera: No problem Aunty. Carry on. Bye
Malini: Bye!
After Malini has left Both Saver and Maan sat on the Couch nd started Talking.
Maan: Thanx Savy for coming here that too in such a short notice.
Savera: dnt say thanx Maan I m ur Friend afterall. Moreover I was curious to know too that who's dat Girl who had made MSK's night restless.
Maan blushes
Savera: omg did I saw MSK blushing. Bro. was rite u have really changed a lot
Maan: Pls Savy change the topic.
Savera: ok Fine nw tell me everything from start.
Maan told her everything hw they met, their engagement, hw he falls for her, hw he got misunderstanding due to which Geet yells at him nd came over here.
Maan: So now u understand wats d Problem is. thats y i asked u last nite for ur help
Savera: Dude its really a big problem
Maan: Wen did I denied from it? Datsy I need ur help
Savera: Maan tumhari help ke liye hi to Savy London se yaha tak aayi hai aur ab Waapas tabhi jayegi jab tumhari Love story ko track pe le aayegi. Waise u know u r a big Idiot?
Maan: y?
Savera: Aur Kya? Achi khaasi love story chal rahi thi tumhari. Ab tak tumhari Love story ki train ka Destination Platform bhi aa gaya hota but thanx to u Tumne Vridant naam ka ye jo Back gear lagaya hai isse tumhari Train waapas usi Platform pe chali gyi jahan se Shuru hui thi ya Shayad usse bhi pehle.
Maan: Ab galti ho gyi na
Savera: Dats at I wanna say ki tumse Galti kaise ho gyi? I mean After Aamir Khan if Mr. Perfectionist title suits to anyone den its MSK. Den hw can he do any mistake?
Maan: Savy, I m not a god ok
Savera: Dnt get Irritate Maan. Actually dis is d Problem of u guys. U Guys never understand wat a Girl Feels in her heart nd dats d main cause of complication.(she said seriously)
Maan: Hey, wat makes Savera Malik so serious nd by the way u were saying like u have confessed for ur Luv to ur Mr. Rite many times.
Savera: No, I havent nd waise bhi agar Savy ka koi Mr. Rite hota to savy is waqt tumhari problem nahi solve kar rahi hoti but I m D younger Sis of the Gr8 Love Guru Remember.
Maan: ya hw can I forget that. Anyways nw tell me wat I do nw. only 9 hrs r left.
Savera: Hhmmm. Acha tell me Did Geet saw u with any other girl before dis
Maan: No. y
Savera: ok Den I have a plan. Its quiet ols but always works But before dat there is something that I want to tell u before only.
Maan: wats dat
Savera: See may be in this Period Geet will feel hurted because u r going to ignore her, may be that bothers u too but u have to do this. U have to be strong
Maan: But is it necessary? I mean I already hurted her a lot
Savera: Yes Maan it is necessary. See Geet has not seen u with any other girl before dis so she thinks that she's d only girl in ur Life in other Words she's taking u For granted. So wat would be her reaction if she sees ur interest in someone else?
Maan: Hhhmmm Sounds interesting. But r u sure it'll work
Savera: Ofcourse it will afterall Savy the Great ka plan hai.
Maan: But Savy......
Savera: Trust me Maan. Nothing will go wrong.
Maan: ok lets see.
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While dey were chatting in d living Room Geet was in kitchen. She is really not having a Good Feeling wen she saw Savera with Maan. She has never saw Any girl so close to Maan. Nd to her surprise Maan too responded for her hug dat too a warm one. An unknown Fear has started to overcome in her mind. Fear of losing Maan. Then she shrugged off all her thoughts.
Geet(To Herself): Wat d hell wrong with u Geet. She's just a friend of Maan. That's it. Moreoevr she is Armaan's Sis who is d Best Friend of Maan as well as ur Friend too den hw can u think like that about his Sis. But the way they were hugging.... so wat dey were friends nd meeting after long tym. Wats d big Deal. But wat if Maan shows his interest towards her. Afterall I m being so rude to him. Shut up Geet!!!!! Wat r u thinking. Just chill ok.
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In d Living Room:
Savera: Relax Maan! I told na everything will be fine nd Geet will go with u Mumbai today
Maan: U know wat Savy. I don't know what should I have been done if u were not there. Thanx
By saying dis he again hugs her. As soon as he hugs her Geet came out from d kitchen nd saw dem Hugging. She acted like she was about to faint. Den she controls herself.
Geet: ummmm sorry to disturb u guys. But savy y don't u get fresh
Both Savy nd Maan broke d Hug nd looked at each other with a smile
Savy: ya Sure. Shona I'll be rite back.
Maan(smiles): ya sure
Geet opened her jaw as soon as she heard word shona from Savera's Mouth. Her innerself was burning wid anger. But she decided to control it rite nw. Geet showed Savy the way for her room nd as soon as she lefts from dere she turned to Maan.
Geet(angrily): Wat was dat?
Maan: Wat?
Geet: Dnt act like u dnt understand anything
Maan: Geet, I really didn't understand wat r u saying?
Geet: y is she calling u Shona?
Maan: Well, she love to call me Shona
Geet: dats wat I wanna ask, y?
Maan: well she's my friend nd a friend can call by any name
Geet: oh really. As far as I know u said u never had any Friendship with a Girl.
Maan: Wen did I said dat? I said dat I stay away from girls. But Savy is Diferent u know. But Wait a Sec. y r u getting so restless if she's calling me shona? R u jealous?
Geet(muffled): Who me? Ofcourse not. Y should I care if she calls u shona?
Maan: But ur tone is saying something else
Geet: whatever I just wanted to tell u that only 8 Hrs. r left nw so better go nd pack ur Bag instead of talking wid ur Savy
Saying dis she left from dere angrily. Maan looks at Savera who was hiding behind d door listening to them smiling. She shows him Thumbs Up to which Maan responded with a smile.
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It was 1:30 PM nd everyone is going to have lunch. Geet's mom has taken half day off because of Savy. She really liked her because of her sweetness. Geet was going to Sit wid Maan wen suddenly Savy takes her seat nd sits over dere.
Savy: sorry, its reserved for nw. I hope u dnt mind
Before Geet could say anything her mom Intervenes
Malini: ofcourse not Beta. Y would she mind? Afterall u both met after so many years. Geet, u come nd sit with me.
For the First tym Geet is getting irritated on her Mom. Last nite she was d only who make her sit Beside maan nd today wen she really wanted to sit she asked Savera to sit beside him. But she controls herself nd sits beside her mom. She notices Maan nd Savy talking with each other like there was no one around. She was hardly able to have her lunch.
Malini: Geet, wat happen?
Geet: Nothing Mom
Malini: Den y r u not having ur Lunch?
Maan notices nd about to say something wen Savy stops him by holding his Hand. Maan looks at her nd she gestures from her eyes to be quiet.
Geet: Wo Mom'. I don't feel like having.
Malini: y? r u feeling fine?
Geet: ya mom I m fine.
Malini: Den have ur lunch. Dnt skip it. Ok
Geet: k Mom
Malini(turning to Maan): So Maan, at wat tym u guys will leave for Mumbai
Maan: Mom, somewhere around 5 of d evening because Savy has some work at Mumbai so we both will leave by 5.
Malini: No, I mean to say U nd Geet
Maan: oh! Sorry Mom I thought u were talking about me nd Savy. Actually Mom Geet wants to stay with u for few more days so I wont force her she can stay over here as long as she want.
Geet(To himself): Ya nw y would he care that I'll go with him or not? Savy jo aa gayi hai. Ab to usiki fikr hogi.
Maan: u said something.
Geet: uumm.. no. Excuse me I need to go.
Maan: But lunch?
Geet: I m done.
Saying dis she left for her Room. Maan looked at Savera who assured her to relax. Geet closed d Door nd sat on d Bed thinking about the closeness that she was seeing between Maan nd Savy.
Geet(To Herself): Wats wrong wid u Geet? Tu khud hi to chahti thi ki Maan yaha se chala jay end nw wen he's going den y m I not feeling Fine. Because he's going wid Savy nd not wid me M I getting Jealous of her. ofcourse not. Den y I m having dis strange Feeling. I don't want to hate her she is too sweet but still I couldn't able to Accept their Friendship. Babaji! Wat should I do nw?
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Its about 4:50 nd Maan nd Savy were in d Living Room with their Luggages. Maan looked Worried as Geet has not yet came out from her Room. He fears that whether this trick of dem will work or not.
Savy: Wat Happen Maan? U look Worried
Maan: Savy, only 10 mins. R left for us to go nd Geet has still not came out.
Savy: Relax Maan! do not fear wen Savy is here. We still have 10 mins. She'll definitely come.
Maan: hw can u be so sure?
Savy: Maan, I m girl if u remember nd I know the mentality of girls so just chill ok.
Maan: ok
Suddenly Malini cames in d living Room.
Malini: so u both r ready to go.
Maan: ya Mom.
Malini: ok its really feels great to spend tym wid u Maan. Nd Savera I couldn't able to spend tym wid u properly. U should have stay with us for few days.
Savy: I m sorry Aunty but if d Work was not important den I would definitely stay wid u. but dnt worry I'll visit u before I go back to London.
Malini: Anytime Beta.
Maan: Mom where's Geet?
Malini: Beta she's still at her Room. I guess she's not feeling well nd sleeping. Should I call her?
Maan(hopelessly): No mom let her sleep. (den turned to savy) lets go Savy. Otherwise we'll get late.
Savy: ok.
Savy hugged Malini nd both Maan nd Savy turned to leave. Maan closes his eyes to accept the fact that Geet is not coming wid him even Savy couldn't believe that her Plan didn't work dis tym. She don't know how to console Maan.
Maan(To himself): I don't believe dis Geet that Mygoing wid Savy doesn't affect u but y do I still feel that u'll come with me wen I know that every hope is over nw.
He started moving towards outside wen stopped by Geet's Voice
Geet: Wait!!
Geet's Voice brings smile back on Maan's Face. He quickly turned to look Back. He saw Geet standing over their with her Bag.
Geet: I'll also Come wid u.
Maan: But u say u want to stay over here.
Geet: Ya.... But...... Pinki has called me to tell that Mr. Chopra is Arriving tomorrow nd he demands for meeting day after tomorrow so I felt necessary for me to present over dere.
Maan: oh! R u sure? (Maan knows dat Geet is lyieng because he talked to Mr. Chopra a few hrs. before nd he had no plan to coming back)
Geet: ya. Just wait I need to meet Nanimaa before I go.
Maan: sure
Geet left from dere. Maan looked at Savy who was smiling.
Maan: Hey! its Working.
Savy: I told u.
Both of dem smiles nd waits for Geet to come
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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