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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111



sorry dear u have to wait till tomorrow morning as its getting late nd i have to sleep as tomorrow morning i need to get up early because of Navratri nd i m having Fast. sorry for breaking ur heart



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Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice update i cant wait to see how Maan manofying to Geet pls cont soon next part pls thanks

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey every1 Happy Navratri to all of u. May all ur wishes come true. nd Nw thank u so so so much for ur Lovely comments nd support so far. i really feel so happy to know that u all r liking my FF. nw here's d Part 23 of my FF. hope u all will like it too. pls Feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it😊

Part 23:

Next morning Maan was sitting at Dining table waiting for Geet to come as his Dadimaa has called both Shilpa nd Geet for breakfast. But he was surprised to see Shilpa coming alone.

Shilpa: Good Morning Dadimaa.

Savitri Sevi: good morning beta. Where's Geet. I told both of u to come together.

Shilpa: Wo…. Dadimaa di is not feeling well.

Savitri Devi (worried): Y? Wat happened to her? is everything is fine.

Shilpa: ya Dadimaa. Everything is fine. Wo actually she was having a slight fever from last nite. She was insisting to come here but I only said her to take rest until she feels fine. So I have given her medicine nd she's sleeping rite nw (she said while looking at Maan) I m sorry if I had done anything wrong

Savitri Devi: u haven't done anything wrong Shilpa. Maan ke sath rehte rehte Geet bhi unke jaisi ho gayi hai. ab atleast wo thoda aaram to karengi.

Shilpa smiled faintly. Maan knews y Geet has not came for breakfast nt just because of fever but she was hurted badly by him.

Shilpa: Jiju! Wo di has said dat she'll join d office after half day.

Maan: ya no problem.

Savitri Devi: Bilkul bhi nahi. Geet will not go to office today. She'll take complete rest until she gets fit. Nd I'll visit to her after sometime.

Shilpa: ji dadimaa.

Suddenly Savitri Devi has got call so she has to excuse herself leaving Shilpa nd Maan alone.

Maan: hws Geet?

Shilpa: She's still sleeping.

Maan: did she had anything since night?

Shilpa: No. I tried to gave her food but she refused to eat nd u know hw much stubborn she is. She just cried nd didn't realize wen she slept.

Maan: hhhmmmmm

He gets up nd started moving outside.

Shilpa: Jiju where r u going?

Maan: to rectify my mistake.

He said nd leaves from dere. Wen Savitri Devi came back she found dat Maan is not there.

Savitri Devi: Shilpa, Maan kahan hai?

Maan: Wo jiju, Di se milne……

Savitri Devi: ok ok I understand. He cant even see her suffering from slight fever

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Maan reaches to outhouse nd goes to Geet's room. he saw that she has not even changed her dress. He goes near to her nd sat on his knees at the floor to face her. he saw the marks of tears on her cheeks. Her eyes were still wet nd her hairs were just disturbed nd their strands were coming on her face. He slowly removes the strands from her face nd tucked it behind her ears. He tries to wipe away her tear marks. She was looking so innocent while sleeping just like a kid nd he had hurted her so much. Suddenly he noticed that she's holding something in her hands nd has hold it tight to keep it near her heart. He slowly take it out from her grip to see nd was both surprised nd happy to see. It was their engagement pic. She loves him so much that she dnt want to let him go away from her nt even just a photograph. He smiles nd keep d photograph at the side table.

Maan: Itna pyaar karti ho mujhse Geet, dat u cant even want my photograph away from u. I m sorry Geet. I m sorry for hurting u. I had promised u that I'll never let u cry nd today because of me only u cried so much. But tumne bhi to mujhse kabhi kuch nahi kaha, kaha to maine bhi nahin kabhi tumse kuch. We both have lost so much in our Egos dat we have forget that its not necessary in love who'll confess first all is necessary that we confess at the right tym. Nw I realize my mistake nd nw I'll bring my old Geet back. My Geet who use to argue wid me, who use to irritate me wid her nonsense things, who use to care for me. Now I'll never let u cry. nd i know hw to manofy My Drama Queen.

By saying dis he moves closer to her nd slowly kissed her forehead. For the first tym he was kissing his angle. He smiled nd puts d blanket on her nd leaves from dere

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As soon as he came outside he saw Driver coming towards outhouse holding a bouquet of White roses.

Maan: What's Dis?

Driver: Sir, Ma'am has forgetten dis in Car last nite. I called her also but she didn't listen.

Maan looks at d roses. He knows for whom Geet has brought dis. He smiles.

Maan: Ok. I'll give it back to her. u can go.

Driver: Ok sir

Maan takes d roses nd goes to the Mansion.

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It was 11:30 am wen Geet finally wakes up. Her head is still heavy nd she still didn't forget the last nite events. She slowly gets up nd was surprised to see Savitri Devi Sitting in front of her.

Geet: Dadimaa Aap?

Savitri Devi: Ya Geet. I need to talk to u.

Geet: Yes Dadimaa.

Savitri Devi: Geet I Didn't expect dis from u. u haven't tell me about dis?

"Seems Maan has told everything to Dadimaa" she thought

Geet: No Dadimaa. Actually…….

Savitri Devi: u know wat Geet I think u had never consider me as ur own Dadi, otherwise u never hide this from me.

Geet: No Dadimaa, its not like dat. I always consider u as my own Dadi.

Savitri Devi: Let it be Geet, if u have considered me as ur own Dadi den u must have told me at nite only dat u r having Fever.

Geet: Fever?

Savitri Devi: ya u r suffering from fever na from last nite. Thank god that Shilpa has told me in d morning otherwise u wont bother to tell me.

"So Maan has not told anything yet" She thought

Geet: Sorry Dadimaa. I don't want to bother u.

Savitri Devi: Beta, hw can u think that u will bother me. U r like my own child.

Geet couldn't able to control her emotions. She hugged Savitri Devi. She's feeling guilty as Dadimaa still didn't know wat has happened between her nd Maan nd she still consider her as her Daughter-in-law. Savitri Devi thought dat Geet is missing her mom.

Savitri Devi: Arey aap to rone lagi. Hum to aapse jhooth ka naraaz hue the. C'mon nw stop crying.

Geet: Sorry Dadimaa

Savitri Devi: its ok Beta.

Suddenly geet looked at watch nd it shows 12 of noon.

Geet: omg. Its 12! I need to go to office also.

Savitri Devi: No Geet. U r not going anywhere. U r goimg to take full rest today. See ur eyes r still red.

Geet touches her eyes. She knews y her eyes r red.

Geet: Dadimaa. I m perfectly fine nw. trust me. Pls let me go office today. Its really important. I need to complete some incomplete tasks. Pls.

Savitri Devi: But beta…..

Geet: Dadimaa I promise that I'll not take much stress nd will come home early. Pls let me go.

Savitri Devi: Hhmmmm. Aapse aur Maan se hum aaj tak kabhi jeet paye hai. ok fine but remember ur promise.

Geet(smiles): yes Dadimaa.

Dadimaa caress her hands on Geet's forehead nd leaves.

Geet (To herself): sorry Dadimaa but I dnt have courage to tell u truth. Pls forgive me for hurting u.

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Its been 1:00 pm wen Geet finally reaches to office. She wanted to avoid any confontration wid Maan so she straight away moved to her cabin. As soon as she entered her cabin she saw a teddy bear at her seat. It was d same Teddy Bear that she has saw that day at the Mall. She goes near to it nd Found a greeting attached to it. She takes d greeting nd opens it found a Sorry Card with a note written by Maan.

"I m sorry For hurting u, but I didn't mean it nd it is a famous saying na that sometimes we hurt the person who r very close to us. May be I had also done the same thing. Nothing was false Geet, it was me who was wrong not u. Pls forgive me. Pls."

Maan

"So Dadimaa has told maan that I m coming to office" She thought nd looked at the Maan's cabin through the glass nd saw that he's standing near d glass waiting for her reaction nd as soon as she turned to look at him he holds both of his ears to say Sorry. Geet has never seen Maan like dis. She moves towards d glass nd looked at Maan for a while nd den close d Blinds. Maan initially got stunned at her behaviour but den calms himself because he knows that Geet's anger was rite at her place.

Maan(To himself): Its not so easy Maan but I'll also not stop trying. Lets See Ms. Geet Malhotra hw long will u stay angry wid me. I'll not give up so easily. U have to talk to me.

On the other hand Geet puts d teddy from her seat nd was about to throw den stops herself from throwing it. She looks at it nd keep it on another chair nd get seated. Den she hides her face with both of her hands

Geet(to herself): Wat does he think about himself. Wenever he wants he can hurt me nd den says Sorry like I don't have any feelings of mine. No dis tym I'll not give up on his efforts. I came here just to complete dis incomplete project nd will focus on dat only.

Saying dis she wiped her tears nd started concentrate on her work. After 15 mins. She noticed Nakul, servant of Khurana's coming inside her cabin with Tiffin.

Geet: Wats it Nakul?

Nakul: Ma'am Lunch for u.

Geet: Who ask u to bring my Lunch over here? Well whoever has asked u tell him that I don't need his concern. I can take care of myself. He don't have to bother for me.

Just den she recd. A SMS on her cell phone. She saw that it was of Maan.

"Khane se kaisi Naraazagi nd waise bhi kisi ne kaha hai ki hume apna Breakfast skip nahi karna chahiye nd u have skipped not only ur Breakfast but ur dinner also nd if u r thinking that I asked Nakul to bring Lunch for u den u r wrong its been sent by Dadimaa, she has send it for me also nd if u dnt believe me den u can enquire from Dadi itself. M sure u'll not break her heart"

She read the SMS nd looked at Nakul

Geet: Nakul, sach sach bataiye, ye lunch kisne bheja hai?

Nakul: Ma'am ye lunch Dadimaa ne bheja hai. she said that u r not well so u should take ur meal at tym.

Geet (conveinced): ok. Keep it here. I'll have it later.

Nakul: No Ma'am first u have it.

Geet: Nakul, I told na I'll have it. Nw don't stand on my head otherwise I'll complaint to Dadimaa.

Nakul: Aapko jo karma hai kar lo. Job to waise bhi jani hai

Geet: Matlab?

Nakul: Matlab Dadimaa ne kaha hai ki jab tak aap lunch na khatam kar le main yahaan se jaoon na warna meri job chali jayegi aur aap keh rahi hai ki agar main yahaan se nahi gaya to aap meri complaint kar dengi aur meri job chali jayegi. So in both cases my job is in danger so its better that I follow Dadimaa's order.

Geet shakes her head in disbelief. She knows that it is useless to argue wid him so she closes her file nd started having her lunch. After she finished she handed over the Tiffin to Nakul nd asks him to leave. As soon as Nakul leaves she gets herself involved in work again. Maan was watching all dis from outside.

Maan(to himself): thank god! Atleast she had something.

He smiles nd move towards his cabin.

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Nakul goes to Maan's cabin to inform him that Geet has taken her lunch.

Nakul: Sir Ma'am has taken her lunch.

Maan: Hhhmmm. Use pata to nahi chala ki maine tumse kaha tha.

Nakul: No sir. I had done exactly wat u said. Ab to meri Job nahi jayegi na.

Maan(smiles): No,don't worry ur job is not going anywhere.

Nakul: Thank u sir. Nw u also have ur lunch. U also havent taken anything since nite.

Maan(looking at the close blinds of Geet's Cabin): My lunch is finished already.

Nakul: Wat sir?

Maan: huh… nothing. Dnt worry I'll take.

Nakul leaves from dere

Maan knews Geet has not taken anything since nit end she was so much upset that she'll skip her lunch also. So he asked Nakul to bring her lunch at the office nd given him Strict instructions that he'll not say that Maan has asked him to bring lunch. He'll say that Dadimaa has send dis. Maan knews dat if Geet will come to know that he has send dis then she'll never had it so he had to take the help of Dadimaa's name nd it actually worked.

Maan (to himself): Ms. Geet Malhotra u may be very Stubborn but u had no competition wid Maan Singh Khurana.

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In Sanjeevani Shilpa was sitting at Cafeteria thinking about Geet. Though she has talked wid her few mins. Back nd geet assured her that she's fine but still she couldn't able to take her mind away from Geet. Just den Armaan came to her. Shilpa was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realize Armaan's presence over dere

Armaan: Hey Shilpa!

Shilpa said nothing Armaan patted on her shoulders

Armaan: Shilpa!

Shilpa(came back into senses): Armaan? Wen did u came?

Armaan: Few Mins. Back wen u r lost somewhere. Who's it? Boyfriend? (he winks)

Shilpa: Armaan Pls. I m not in a mood of joke.

Armaan: Wats Wrong Shilpa? Is everything ok?

Shilpa: No Armaan (den she tells her whole incident) nw Di is not talking to Jiju. I don't know what to do Armaan?

Armaan: Shilpa! Itna sab kuch ho gay and u didn't even bother to tell me

Shilpa: Armaan at that tym I was not knowing wat to do. For the first tym I saw Di like dis. I m really worried nw.

Armaan: Dnt worry Shilpa (he says while keeping his hand on hers) Everything will be fine. Ye problem Maan aur Geet ki hai nd dey will definitely sort it out. Just give both of dem some tym.

Shilpa: But Armaan……

Armaan: Trust me. Everything will be fine.

Shilpa: I always trust u Armaan

Armaan says nothing but smiles nd shilpa also knows dat she don't have to worry if Armaan is wid her.

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In Khurana's Construction its been 4:30 pm nd Maan's Efforts haven't stopped yet. Sometimes he sends Coffee to Geet with a sorry note so sometimes he sends Bouquet of flowers with Sorry Card. Geet didn't know wat to do. It doesnt suits his Image u know doing all dis. it suits to the Person Like Armaan, moreover she was afraid. She was afraid that if Maan continues to do like dis then Office Staff will think wrong about him nd her. She was thinking about all dis wen Peon came to her cabin with a file. She asked him about dis to which he said that its d construction file of Noida's Project.

As soon as she opens d file she again finds a Sorry note in it, she gets irritated nw so she crushed d note nd throw it in the dustbin. Maan watched all dis nd gets hurted by her behaviour. His Patience was getting over nw but he decided to be quiet until Office staff is dere. Geet again gets herself busy with work nd didn't realize of tym. Finally she looked at clock nd saw that its been 6:30 pm nd whole office has gone. She picked up her Bag nd was about to leave wen he saw Maan standing in front of her. Geet looked at him nd den walks towards d Door. As soon as she reaches dere Maan stops her by holding her Wrist.

Geet: Maan Pls Leave me.

Maan: Not until u listen to me.

Geet: I don't want to listen anything.

Maan: u have to Geet.

Den he pulls her towards himself. Dere faces were just mere inches away. Geet can feel his Heartbeats racing against his minds. She found herself lost in his eyes once again but quickly regains herself nd frees her hand from him. As soon as she turned to leave Maan again holds her nd pinned her against d wall. Geet has started breathing heavily. She can see the intensity, the Passion in his eyes. His Gaze was burning her. She tries to free herself from him but his Grip was too strong that she cant able to free herself. Maan held his grip even more tight on her Shoulders. He can see that her eyes were pleading him to leave her but he didn't wanted to leave her not until he say wat he wants to say.

Maan: Geet I m sorry. I m sorry for hurting u. I didn't mean it Geet. U mean a lot to me. I was a jerk that I was losing u to someone else. Nothing is fake between us Geet. everything is true. our Relationship, our emotions everything. Pls Forgive me.

Geet's eyes began to get watery. She closes her eyes not believing wat she was seeing. The Love, the care, the pain in his eyes. Drop of tears have started falling from her eyes. Maan notices her tears. He moves his face more closer to her. Geet can feel his warm breath on her face but still she didn't opened her eyes. Maan slowly kissed away her tears from one eye den moved to another. Geet clenthes her fist tight to get control on herself. Maan drews his face back nd looked at Geet. Get slowly opens her eyes nd looked at him. Maan cups her face between his hands

Maan(softly): Geet, Pls don't cry. u r angry from me na den give me any punishment. U yell at me, u take me to dat tacky dhaba again, u irritate me with ur nonsense talks I promise I wont complaint for any of dem but pls dnt cry like dis. I cant see u in tears. It hurts me Geet

Geet: y?

Maan: Because I love u Geet. I love u so much that I cant tell u. if u suffer from any kind of a pain den it ached me Geet.

Geet looked straight to his eyes. she didn't believe wat she was listening. The words that she was waiting to listen dis from him so long nd today he finally confessed it but is it enough to cover up wat he said last nite?

Precap:
Will Geet forgive him

so guys hope u all will like dis Part. Hit d like button if u all like it nd do leave ur coment/criticism. its necessary😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy this time me first

wow yaar
it was just great 👏
love the way maan was trying to manofy her
and the way he expressed his feelings for her .......... awesome
thanks for pm me
and also thanks for updating so fast
continue soon.......
waiting for next part.......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved this update😊
Loved the sweet gestures made by Maan to manofy Geet.
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update.....

ofcourse i loved it..........
it was truly fabulous..................
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.. grt update.....

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update Geet will defo forgive him she also loves him but Maan has to wait
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Ahhhhhh why u are trying to kill me her I can't wait till next part now I will have to whatch my inbox every 1minet till u update the next part ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh daying her thanks alot for that and for ur pm and I will day for ur next pm

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