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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice story ... I am really enjoying it ... please can you add me to your PM list ... Please and thank you :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updt....plz ghaddi kharab kar dena😆
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awwwwwwwww altho i'm super happpy that there was more (U little nautanki!!!! lol) I LOVE LOVE LOVVVVVE that *picture perfect moment* u captured at the end of the 1st part of maneet laughing together and the cameraman caught it..! awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! *squealing moment*
Jassiiii thats sooo sweet! they didnt need the *bhaiyyya jiiii... ishmile!* dialogue for the cue hehehe - natural ones are always best and it was the most fantastic moment evahhh to pen down too!! *bigggg huggg to u*!
the fight over 'drashti-gurmeet' was too funny, lol it just cracks me up as well as confuse the hell outta me in a silly way, when the actors get mixed with the fiction.. let me shu'up before i confuse us both completely.. :s

anyways..!!! the ceremony was sooo beautifully depicted!! awww I LVOED IT!!! it was as if i was attending their wedding and just admiring the most perfect couple EVAH from afar.. hayyye!!!

anddddd OMG the last line by maan (in his head) was my fav!!!
"gaadi, plz kharaab jo jao" LMAO!!!! awwwwwwwwwwwww SOOO CUUUTE!!!
Jas i could pinch UR cheeks for making Maan SO adorable!!! (i wish the same wish he does, cos he totally deserves some alone time with his geet when he so badly wished for some before the whole gang intruded on them thanx to her! lol)

and o. m. g.! me tooooo!! i wanna watch golmaal 3 sooooooo bad!!! soooo soooooo bad!!!!
uff.
ur update has put the fattest smile on my face, it was SO super cute so like er.. totally makes up for the length missy!! not that it was too short.. ;)

hope ur feeling tonnnnnsss better bubs!!! have sum cranberry juice for that tummy -ache ok, and a little bar of chocolate should do the trick hehe
o wait???!!!!! it's probably all that halloween candy!! u silly moose!!! lol
LOVE YOU!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chotii

awwwwwwwww altho i'm super happpy that there was more (U little nautanki!!!! lol) I LOVE LOVE LOVVVVVE that *picture perfect moment* u captured at the end of the 1st part of maneet laughing together and the cameraman caught it..! awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! *squealing moment*
Jassiiii thats sooo sweet! they didnt need the *bhaiyyya jiiii... ishmile!* dialogue for the cue hehehe - natural ones are always best and it was the most fantastic moment evahhh to pen down too!! *bigggg huggg to u*!
the fight over 'drashti-gurmeet' was too funny, lol it just cracks me up as well as confuse the hell outta me in a silly way, when the actors get mixed with the fiction.. let me shu'up before i confuse us both completely.. :s

anyways..!!! the ceremony was sooo beautifully depicted!! awww I LVOED IT!!! it was as if i was attending their wedding and just admiring the most perfect couple EVAH from afar.. hayyye!!!

anddddd OMG the last line by maan (in his head) was my fav!!!
"gaadi, plz kharaab jo jao" LMAO!!!! awwwwwwwwwwwww SOOO CUUUTE!!!
Jas i could pinch UR cheeks for making Maan SO adorable!!! (i wish the same wish he does, cos he totally deserves some alone time with his geet when he so badly wished for some before the whole gang intruded on them thanx to her! lol)

and o. m. g.! me tooooo!! i wanna watch golmaal 3 sooooooo bad!!! soooo soooooo bad!!!!
uff.
ur update has put the fattest smile on my face, it was SO super cute so like er.. totally makes up for the length missy!! not that it was too short.. ;)

hope ur feeling tonnnnnsss better bubs!!! have sum cranberry juice for that tummy -ache ok, and a little bar of chocolate should do the trick hehe
o wait???!!!!! it's probably all that halloween candy!! u silly moose!!! lol
LOVE YOU!!!!
xxxxxxxxxxxx

Ya now, I'm smiling sooo wide rite now that my sister just said, "You're Wierd!" and left the room!
LOL.... I am soooo happy you liked it and even happier you commented!
You're the last to comment, but I'm replying to you be4 almost every1 who commented!
Heehhe...
Okies...I better stop smiling be4 my cheeks start to hurt!
While reading your comment, my smile was just getting bigger and bigger!
Lol
Every1 wants the car to break down, but then that would be soooo unlogical... unless Maan pretends that it broke down, hahaha
Awwww... your the first person to comment on the laughing part... When I was writing it, I just had to stop and picture that thing in my head and smile! And then, I just added the part where the pic is taken
Heheh...you were confused while reading GurTi in the FF, think about me... I was writing and you have no idea how many time I wrote Maan or Geet instead of Gurmeet or Drashti!
Lol
Yes, Yes, cranberry juice always helps!
And so does the chocolate😉😉
Every1 was telling me that its cause of the Halloween candy, but it was actually cause I ate toooo many aloo parathas!
Lol... I couldn't resist!
I don't get them too often!
Exept for the three times I've been to India, we have them for breakfast almost everday!!
Thanks sooooo much for commenting Saz Di!!!
You made my day!
Luv You!!!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
I m soo sorrrryyy ;( I m replying so late..well.. reserving.
will be back (: you know I read it the first you posted :P just lazy & busy to commment.
I need another update soon (:
thankyouuu(:
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Ya now, I'm smiling sooo wide rite now that my sister just said, "You're Wierd!" and left the room!
LOL.... I am soooo happy you liked it and even happier you commented!
You're the last to comment, but I'm replying to you be4 almost every1 who commented!
Heehhe...
Okies...I better stop smiling be4 my cheeks start to hurt!
While reading your comment, my smile was just getting bigger and bigger!
Lol
Every1 wants the car to break down, but then that would be soooo unlogical... unless Maan pretends that it broke down, hahaha
Awwww... your the first person to comment on the laughing part... When I was writing it, I just had to stop and picture that thing in my head and smile! And then, I just added the part where the pic is taken
Heheh...you were confused while reading GurTi in the FF, think about me... I was writing and you have no idea how many time I wrote Maan or Geet instead of Gurmeet or Drashti!
Lol
Yes, Yes, cranberry juice always helps!
And so does the chocolate😉😉
Every1 was telling me that its cause of the Halloween candy, but it was actually cause I ate toooo many aloo parathas!
Lol... I couldn't resist!
I don't get them too often!
Exept for the three times I've been to India, we have them for breakfast almost everday!!
Thanks sooooo much for commenting Saz Di!!!
You made my day!
Luv You!!!
-Jassi



oye jassi ! are you even remotely aware of just HOW CUTE u are? 😆 you're soo sweet for replying always + just.. U ARE! lol

and i cant believe its cos of the aloo parathas!! *slaps head in disbelief*!
damn i have to say, i'm a massive paratha fan too tho - can never say no to them!!! hehe esp kima ones.. yummmmyyy! lol

te e lo ji!! gaddi kharaab nay honi? o lekin kyun? jassi, jaa ke pee la thodi lassi lol te meri gal sun, ye it is illogical, but thats why mischievous maan needs to come out and just damn right Pre-tennnd!! would be sooo much fun to see. altho, i suppose a sulking maan would actually be soo adorable - if the car doesn't break down it gives him more reason to behave like an annoyed baby at not having what he wants, and geet might even just sense it + make it up to him with a cute / sexy moment before she leaves the car ! 😉 + who knows, munda could take it further from there . . . 😆 OR OR OR am actually looking forward to what U have in mind if the car doesnt break down / does break down..!! whatever u do i'm Sooo looking forward to it!

and honestly?? u get confused between gurti / maaneet as well? awwwwwww jas!! lol

that camera moment was of the most 'awwwwwwww'-ish moments in this ff, and just generally too! how could i Not comment on that First and most importantly?? lol

my internet went all gay on me a while ago, I opened up the page, and it just died!! urgh, so i had to wait for my bro to get off this comp so i could read + reply hehe

am soo sooober oooober tired now, got lots to do tomorrow,
so shall be saying my goodnights!! ;)

Sweeeeeetest Maaneet dreams bubsy!!!

*big fat huuuuge jhappi!*
xxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chotii



oye jassi ! are you even remotely aware of just HOW CUTE u are? 😆 you're soo sweet for replying always + just.. U ARE! lol

and i cant believe its cos of the aloo parathas!! *slaps head in disbelief*!
damn i have to say, i'm a massive paratha fan too tho - can never say no to them!!! hehe esp kima ones.. yummmmyyy! lol

te e lo ji!! gaddi kharaab nay honi? o lekin kyun? jassi, jaa ke pee la thodi lassi lol te meri gal sun, ye it is illogical, but thats why mischievous maan needs to come out and just damn right Pre-tennnd!! would be sooo much fun to see. altho, i suppose a sulking maan would actually be soo adorable - if the car doesn't break down it gives him more reason to behave like an annoyed baby at not having what he wants, and geet might even just sense it + make it up to him with a cute / sexy moment before she leaves the car ! 😉 + who knows, munda could take it further from there . . . 😆 OR OR OR am actually looking forward to what U have in mind if the car doesnt break down / does break down..!! whatever u do i'm Sooo looking forward to it!

and honestly?? u get confused between gurti / maaneet as well? awwwwwww jas!! lol

that camera moment was of the most 'awwwwwwww'-ish moments in this ff, and just generally too! how could i Not comment on that First and most importantly?? lol

my internet went all gay on me a while ago, I opened up the page, and it just died!! urgh, so i had to wait for my bro to get off this comp so i could read + reply hehe

am soo sooober oooober tired now, got lots to do tomorrow,
so shall be saying my goodnights!! ;)

Sweeeeeetest Maaneet dreams bubsy!!!

*big fat huuuuge jhappi!*
xxxxxx

Hahaha... I laugh soooo much when you call me cute because in school I have the reputation of the smart but mean girl who doesn't take crap from anyone! LoLzz... I seriously find it funny when u call me cute!😆 Okies...no I better make the gaddi get kharaab... hehe... still have to think how Y'know, I just hate when technology lets you down! It totally sucks! And then I hate it even more when your on the coputer havin fun and then some sibling comes and takes over! It totally sucks!
LoLzz... I've been in the position TOO many times!!
And guess wat!! You won't believe it my sister just said, "Jassi, get off because I'm probably gonna need the computer for my homework now!"
😡😡😡😡😡
Life sucks! sumtimes
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ayeshaaa.

I m soo sorrrryyy ;( I m replying so late..well.. reserving.

will be back (: you know I read it the first you posted :P just lazy & busy to commment.
I need another update soon (:
thankyouuu(:

It's totally fine with me! I'm getting used to it... LOL😆 I even added u to the PM List of The Kidnap even tho u didn't comment yet I always get lazy too, ur not the only one😉😃 -Jassi
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Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Hahaha... I laugh soooo much when you call me cute because in school I have the reputation of the smart but mean girl who doesn't take crap from anyone! LoLzz... I seriously find it funny when u call me cute!😆 Okies...no I better make the gaddi get kharaab... hehe... still have to think how Y'know, I just hate when technology lets you down! It totally sucks! And then I hate it even more when your on the coputer havin fun and then some sibling comes and takes over! It totally sucks!

LoLzz... I've been in the position TOO many times!!
And guess wat!! You won't believe it my sister just said, "Jassi, get off because I'm probably gonna need the computer for my homework now!"
😡
Life sucks! sumtimes
-Jassi



LOL in this case, i'm the annoying sibling cos as soon as my comp flopped on me, had to bug my brother to stop using his! 😆 but yes, i hate having to wait for someone else to get off lol or get off for someone else!
ooo here's something random - whilst waiting for him to finish off, i started painting my nails.. of course they look gorgeous lol but anyways, it just reminded me of ur obsession with nails + nail polish lol awww!

Right, so the gaddi's all set to get kharaab... jassi ji.. cooool! hehe

G'nite!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey jassi just read ur fan fic and OMG where do i begin:

The good things about this fan fic:
Love Geet character...from her crazy dressing style, wild hair, always popping buble gum to her fun loving character...u knw mast type...I love tht bout her
Mann: I love the way he flirts with her..he is not tht stupid and egoistic as in the show..either denying his feelings..i loved the way he always showed geet how much he cares..even though she protested...
Dadi as usual dadi is great😆😆 (no comments bout her lol)
Preet: loved his "thought" bout wht he thinks bout girls..of course brainwashed by maan lol..love their realtiionship...
Love geet's family and aww i love it when older borhters are possessive lol...(wish i hdad one 😉)
LOve the way maan and geet fight with eachother over everylittle thing and maan's nickname for Geet as jangli billi lol...LOVE IT!!!! and of course Geet calling him all da words in the dictionary lol...hahaha
LONG STORY SHORT: I LOVED EACH AND EVERY CHAPTER!!! 😆😆😆
Things I hate about this fan fic:
ummm NOTHING!!!😳😳😆😆
You are such a wonderful writer..No lie...better then me lol...I jsut love this fan fic and I could so go back and reread ur fan fic again lol..hahaha

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