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Once Upon A Time

Chapter 14:

They were driving for a few minutes on a deserted street when Maan stopped the car. He hit the brakes with an annoying screeching noise.
"Kya hua... Tumhare khatara ghaadi ko hamesha hi yeh rukne waali bimaari lagi rehti hain! Shaadhi ke baad you better buy me a proper gaadi, i'm not going in this ugly thing!" she said in annoyance.
"Hello? Geet Madam! There is nothing wrong with my car samjhi?" he said faking anger.
"Acha? Then, why did it stop on this deserted spooky street?" she asked raising her eyebrow.
"I'll go check..." he said getting out of the car.
"Maan! Don't leave me alone! Just look at this place!" she said nervously looking around at the road they were on, surrounded by a jungle.
"What's wrong with this place?" he asked looking around.
"It's a jungle!" she said scared.
"Your home place... Jungli Billi," he said before going outside and opening the bonnet of the car.
"Shut up Maan!" she yelled after him.
She sat inside with her arms crossed over her chest. She looked around and started to get scared. She got out and went to stand beside Maan thinking 'Maan is so hatta katta, he'll save me if anything happens! :-)'
"What happened this time?" she asked.
"I don't know! It just stopped," Maan lied. It was him who actually stopped it.
said Geet.
"Maan, I'm telling you! You seriously need a new car!"
"But, I love this one," he said shyly.
"I don't," she snapped.
"What about, you let me try to drive," she said.
"No!" he exclaimed quickly.
"Mera matlab... Agar tum chalao gi toh aur bhi kharab ho jaayegi," he said covering up.
She squinted her eyes at him then said, "True..."
Maan chuckled.
After a while he said, "You know... We should just stay here all night. Mausam itna acha hain... Sky is clear... Thandi Thandi hawa chal rahi hain... Main hoon... Tum ho..."
They were lost into each other's eyes. They both inched forward slowly, slowly, slowly. Getting closer, and closer, until their noses were touching. Maan moved his face closer to kiss her cheek. Then he looked towards her lips, anticipating a kiss. Geet turned around.
"Only after marriage," she said and was about to walk when Maan pulled her back by her wrist.
He was leaning onto her, while she was standing against the side of the car.
"Maan... No," she whispered.
Maan continued to inch forward. He removed her hair, revealing her shoulder and softly kissed her shoulder, making his way along the nape of her neck. He was about to kiss her lips, but stopped. He didn't want to kiss her if she didn't want him to. Before he could move away. She put her arms around his neck, and pulled him closer kissing him passionately. Maan was taken aback. It took him a few seconds to realize what was happening. He pulled her as close as he could, deepening the kiss. He moved his hand around her waist and caressed her long hair, running his fingers through it. Geet also pulled him closer, running her fingers through his thick black hair. They finally broke apart. Geet looked down blushing nervously. Maan smiled running his fingers at the back of his head. After a minute or two of just standing there embarrassed and nervous, Maan started to chuckle. Geet joined in. The chuckling turned into laughing.
"I can't believe I just did that!" she said amazed.
"Me neither," said Maan.
He was so surprised that Geet kissed him. They stood still, thinking about the kiss. Then next second, they were kissing once again. It was Maan this time. In one second he pulled Geet by the waist and they started kissing softly and passionately. They broke apart again. They looked at each other.
"Umm..." Geet said looking at his hair, "Fix your hair Maan," she said shyly.
He smirked and said, "Why doesn't the person who ruined it in the first place fix it?"
"Maan... Stop!" she said.
He let out a small chuckle and fixed his hair quickly. Then stared at her, and fixed her hair, that he had messed up a few minutes ago.
"Maan... Will you please fix your car now!" she said.
"But, it broke down! It's not gonna fix," he lied again.
"Ugghhh!" she said annoyed.
"You know, we can reach home in an hour if we walk. Why call and disturb everyone," he said.
"Okay... Fine, let's go," she agreed.
Maan smiled to himself as they started walking, ofcourse, after taking their important things from the car. Maan held her hand as they walked on the side of the road.
"Only 1 and a half week left until or marriage," he said.
"Hmm..." she said smiling.
"Where do you want to go for our honeymoon?" he asked mischievously.
"Ummm... What about Mumbai?" she said.
Maan was surprised.
"Why the heck would you want to go to Mumbai for our honeymoon?" he asked confused.
"I might get to meet Gurmeet or Salman...Or John, or Shahid... Or-" she said, but Maan cut her off.
"Oh please! I do not want to hear the list again!" he said.
She giggled.
"And we are not going to Mumbai for our honeymoon!" he added.
"Geet... Do you love me?" he asked after a while.
"Of course I do!" she said shocked at the sudden question.
"Really? You never really told me properly..." he said.
"I love you Maan," she said smiling.
"Me too," said Maan.
They both walked smiling in satisfaction.
"I'm tired Maan..." Geet said slowing down.
Maan picked her up.
"Maan!" she yelled holding onto him tightly, "What if I fall?"
"I'm holding you Geet... You won't fall!" he said.
Geet looked at him, with eyes full of trust.
"Maan... I'm sorry to say this... but you just are SO CUTE!" she squealed.
Maan pulled her closer while he walked carrying her.
"Why can't you ever say hot instead of that disgusting word?" he asked annoyed.
"What? I've never told you how hot you are?" she asked shocked.
Maan smirked.
"You know, Tito was asking me for your fitness secrets," she said giggling.
"I told him... Be an Angry Young Man," she said.
He chuckled along with her.
"You can put me down, if you're tired," she said.
"Are you crazy? You think I'd miss the opportunity of carrying you?" he said with a smirk.
"Maan..." she said, "Please put me down."
Maan put her down and they continued walking.
"I want to confess something," he said after a while, nervously.
"Kya?" she asked restlessly, "Do you have an ex or something?" she asked tensed.
"No Geet! Actually... The car didn't just stop..." he said.
She stopped walking.
"Aage bolo," she said quickly.
"I purposely stopped it," he said tensed.
"Maan!" she yelled and smacked his shoulder.
"And I'm darn happy I did..." he murmured to himself.
"Argghh! I can't believe you did that!" she said angrily.
Maan chuckled at her angry expressions. This made her even more mad.
"You're such a... Such a... Ugghh!" she said not knowing what to call him.
She started walking really quickly. Maan jogged to catch up to her.
"Did I tell you how beautiful you look when you are angry?" he said sweetly.
"Shut up!" she retorted.
"Sorry!" he said.
"Please ghussa mat ho!" he said.
"Okay, call me anything you want!" he said.
"Stupid Duffer Idiot Fool Dumb Loser Monkey Pagal Gadhe Khote Dush Dha-"
Maan pressed his lips onto her. He was just listening to her insult him and she was no where near stopping, so he had the urge to shut her up. And, it seemed that she didn't even mind. They were standing in the middle of the road, kissing passionately. Anybody coming by would think they are crazy. But, the road was clear. They broke apart, and Maan nuzzled in her neck. Geet hugged him all of a sudden. They pulled out of the hug.
"My CutieSweetyDushtDhanav!" she said kissing his cheek.
"That's a great way to manaofy you," he said.
"You should get angry more often Geet," he added.
"Chup!" she said.
"I wasn't angry! I was just joking around," she said.
They walked on. They were almost home.
"Maan... You have to stop doing that!" she said out of nowhere.
"Doing what?" he asked, although he very well knew she meant kissing.
"You know... that..." she said.
"It's not my fault, you look so yummy," he said.
"Stop talking so weirdly Maan!" she said.
"And no more... kissing!" she said.
Maan chuckled at her hesitation to say kiss. The Khurana Mansion was visible now. Maan was disappointed.
"Geet... Maybe we should go back and get the car," Maan said.
"Are you retarded?" she asked, looking at him in disbelief, "Do you have any idea, how tired I am?"
"Don't worry... I'll carry you," he said winking at her.
"Shut up Maan!" she retorted.
"Is Shut up Maan! your favourite line?" he asked.
Geet was about to say, 'Shut up Maan!', but then stopped. She didn't reply.
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They entered Khurana Mansion.
"Itni der kyun laga di aapne?" asked Dadi.
"Woh, actually raste mein ghaadi kharab ho gayi thi," said Geet glaring at Maan.
"Theek hain, toh tum apne ghar phone karke bata do ke tum aaj yaha ruk rahi ho," said Dadi.
(By the way, Geet's family is now living in their Delhi house, because of the wedding.)
"Lekin Dadi, main yaha kyun ruku gi. Driver ko keh dijiye mujhe chodne ke liye," Geet said.
"Just stay here, Geet. It's almost eleven," insisted Maan.
Dadi concealed her smile and said, "Haan Geet."
"Okay," she agreed.
"Maan... Why don't you show Geet your room. After all, it's going to be her room soon too," said Dadi.
Maan and Geet went upstairs to Maan's room. It was the biggest room Geet had ever seen.
"Maan, you have such a gigantic room!" she exclaimed as she looked around amazed.
"It's going to be your room soon too," he said and then added, "Look around, I'll be back."
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When Maan came back, he found Geet giggling at something. He noticed there was an album in her hands. Then, Maan understood.
"Shit! Not the album!" he yelled and ran as fast as he could to snatch the album.
"Maan! Give it back!" Geet pleaded between giggles.
"No! Who said you could look at it?" he asked angrily, holding the album up so it would be out of her reach.
"You told me to look around!" she said.
"I didn't tell you to invade my privacy!" Maan replied.
"Maan! Please?" she tried again.
"No!" said Maan again.
"But, you look so damn cute!" she said then added, "Especially in this one!"
She took out a photo from her pocket and flashed it in front of his face. Maan looked at the photo shocked. This was exactly what he was fearing. The Picture! It was the one of his worst childhood pictures he hated because everyone looked at it laughed, and called him cute or worse, adorable. It was him on Halloween, dressed up as a big, fat, round, orange pumpkin!
"Geet!" Give me that right now!" he yelled, as she pulled the picture behind her back and got ready to run.
"Not until, it gets published on the first page of a magazine!" she said teasingly. Maan caught her wrist stopping her from running. She freed herself. They ran all around the room, scattering the pillows, knocking down furniture. The room was getting to become a big mess. At last, Maan caught her and pinned her down to his bed.
"Give me the photo, Geet!" he warned angrily.
They were both out of breath from all the running. Maan snatched it from her hand.
"I promise I won't show it to anyone! Please let me have it!" Geet pleaded.
"Geet! No!" Maan said bringing his face closer to Geet's.
"Awww! But, you look so ADORABLE!!!" she said, and then pinched his cheeks, really hard.
"Geet!" Maan hissed, as if indicating he's about to do something real bad.
PleasePleasePlease!" she said.
Maan got closer and his lips met hers. He started kissing her wildly while, his hands went crazy moving around her. Preet who had come to say Hi, giggled and ran away but, it made no difference to Maan. He was too into kissing Geet to notice or care. He nibbled on her lower lip. She gasped, and he entered his tongue into her mouth. Maan pulled away because he was completely out of breath. He moved his lips down her jaw line, to her throat, to her collarbone, kissing it gently. He bit her near her collarbone. Geet gasped and regained her senses. She pushed Maan and stood up.
"Maan! I told you not to!" she said angrily.
"Well... You wouldn't shut up!" he said, "And it's not like you didn't kiss me!"
Geet tried not to think about how she'd felt when they were kissing. She didn't want to remember, how pleasurable the kiss was. She didn't know that she was blushing so hard right now.
"Hmm... I wonder why you are blushing so much," he said fake thinking.
Geet blushed even more now and went into the guest room that Dadi had gotten ready for her. Dadi was leaving the room when Geet entered, and Geet didn't get to thank Dadi. But then, when she went to the bathroom she thanked god that she didn't meet Dadi.
There was a red mark where Maan had bit her.
"Maan Singh Khurana! You are so dead!" Geet said in her head.
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Thanks Everyone for your support and patience!
Hope you guys liked it! Sorry, I know its a bit short, but I wanted to update today, so i could PM everyone for both my FFs at the same time!
~Love You All~
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-Jassi

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