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Posted: 14 years ago

--------Present--------

As they both recalled the first time they had collided, they both thought of the same thing. That first run in on the lawns of Kapoor Estates had changed their lives.

Would it be the same this time? Would this collision alter the course of their lives once again, just like it did all those years ago?

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Geet didn't know what to do as she still stood in the embrace of the man she'd once loved more than life itself. Just like always, she was lost in his eyes – his beautiful eyes. In them she saw shock, concern, confusion and a tad bit of resentment.

However, she didn't have time to dwell on Maan or his eyes, because just over Maan's shoulder a visibly pregnant woman groaned as she held her swollen belly.

She quickly stepped out of Maan's arms and went to the woman.

"Mrs. Kelly, what's wrong?" she asked.

Mrs. Kelly didn't answer, instead she was breathing heavy. She was in the middle of a contraction. It was at the moment everything else faded and all she saw as her patient.

"I need a wheelchair," Geet yelled.

A nurse came from behind and helped ease Mrs. Kelly into the wheelchair just as her husband entered.

"She's been having contractions for about an hour now," he said. "I know you said that there was still time but she's in so much pain I didn't know what to do."

Geet recalled sending Mrs. Kelly home a few hours ago because her contractions had turned out to be Braxton Hicks Contractions – false labor. Clearly, she was now in active – real – labor.

"It's ok, I'm glad you brought her in," Geet said with a smile as she began checking Mrs. Kelly's pulse. "Let's get you into a room."

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Maan stood silently still trying to comprehend what had happened. One part of him knew that he'd just run into Geet – his Geet. Yet another part of him was sure that it had all been a figment of his imagination. He didn't know how long he stood there, but it wasn't until a nurse came up to him that he came back to reality.

"Can I help you Sir?" the nurse asked.

"Ummm…yes, Naintara Khurana," he said.

He was surprised at the look on the nurses face, almost like she was expecting him.

"Please have a seat, I'll get Dr. Mehta for you," she said as she pointed at some chairs for him to sit.

Maan took a seat still reeling from what had happened only moments ago.

"Mr. Khurana?" someone called.

Maan immediately stood up and came face to face with a man, wearing glasses, dressed in blue scrubs and a white coat.

"Yes," he said.

"I'm Dr. Mehta," the man said as he held out his hand. "We spoke on the phone."

"Yes of course," Maan said as he remembered. "How is my sister? How is Naintara?"

"She is fine, nothing to really worry about," the doctor said just as the pager went off.

Maan waited while the doctor checked the pager attached to his hip.

"I'm sorry but there's a trauma coming in that I have to attend to. If you please just have a seat I'll be back with you as soon as I can," the doctor said as he turned to leave.

"But my sister," Maan said.

"She's fine, nothing life threatening, I promise," the doctor said. "Let me take you to conference room where you can wait…away from all this."

Maan quietly followed the doctor to a conference room at the back of the ER department.

"Please, help yourself to some coffee," the doctor said before leaving.

Maan looked around the long room and felt uneasy. He was trying to be as calm and patient as possible but he didn't know how long that would last. He placed his luggage on the floor next to the door as he took a seat in one of the leather chairs.

Twenty minutes later, with a cup of coffee in his hands, Maan exited the conference room because he had to stretch his legs and maybe get some air. As he rounded the corner he saw her again – his Geet – coming out of a room from the other end of the hall. It was then that Maan fully took her in.

She was dressed in powder pink scrubs, a white lab coat, her hair tied in a ponytail, and her hands reaching over her as they placed a set of stethoscopes around her neck. She was engrossed in conversation with an nurse and was signing what looked like a chart as she walked.

She always was a multitasker.

She was headed in his direction but didn't see him in the shadows. Within seconds two other nurses pushed a large hospital bed out into the hall, where a pregnant woman lay breathing hard, with her husband by her side.

"Let's go have this baby Mrs. Kelly" he heard her say with a smile. "And Mr. Kelly, remember to breathe…in…and…out…the last thing your wife needs is for you to pass out in the delivery room."

Maan smiled as he heard her giggle. It was still the same giggle. The one that made his heart flip and made him smile as well.

"What would I do without you Dr. Handa," Mr. Kelly said.

It was then that Maan saw that was embroidered on the white coat she wore.

Geet Handa, M.D.

Obstetrics & Gynecology

She was doctor. She'd finally become a doctor.

One part of his heart swelled with pride and joy. After all these years, her dream had come true – she was a doctor, just like she'd always wanted to be.

But deep inside, another part of his heart was cold, bitter and resented the fact that his Geet was now Dr. Geet Handa. It was because of that dream, she'd shattered his dream, his life and his heart.

After all, it was because she was a doctor that they were not together. As proud as he may feel, he could never forgive her for that.


JAZ

ps: sooo...whatcha think 😉

Edited by jnawaz - 14 years ago
*Guli* thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Okay im here!!!! #3... finally...

dude like seriously... 1st one i didnt kill u... the 2nd one... i loved u and this one... why o why do u keep leaving us hanging like this!!!!... ugh!! i hate u!!! u know that!!! geez!!!!... i mean wen he thinks something and then he figures out wats going on u decide to end it!!! i dont like this... and esp i have no idea wats going on in this one.. its killing me!!!!😡😡
😆😆 a note just to say i love u is like hella important... 😆 i can imagine dhaval doing something like that!!!! cant wait just a little bit!!!! gotta love maid of honors and best man!!!!!😆
so now he finds out shes a doc!!!!... lets see what happens now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv u babeji!!!😳
Edited by *Guli* - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous Updates!!!

Loved them.

A knew light on Maneets relationship. Well everything starts off without a hitch, maintaining that. Well thats the hard part. And Maan and Geet had to face that...

loved the letter scene. "i love you"... hilarious. That entire scene was to cute. And all the grooms men are playboys. I could only imagine. The dowry scene the shoe scene. In my mind i was singing the song from Hum Aapke Hain Kaun! lamo.

Maan is imagining her, or believes he is, What can that mean?
Proud of her but not. So bittersweet.

and he is saying that it is because of her and she is saying that it is because of him!?!

Some communication problem, that makes me conclude that Annie is at fault...but i cant forget the married part. Please elaborate on that...im going crazy..

FAB updates. LOVED Them
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee
n tht kapoor lawns part was awesomeee
n ya if geet wanted 2 become a doctor
y couldnt maan wait n y did he get married
im confuseddd
n hope in nxt updae u will surely clear my doubt
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Posted: 14 years ago
i never loved two bumping into each other more...LOL😆...
the Flashback scenes was were just fab with Geet falling into Maan's arms...the best one when they first met...
and the present...Geet becoming a doctor shattered his dreams??😕
and the mystery conts...i shall be waiting for the next one...but u dw..and study hard for ur exam...updates can wait...i wish u all the best..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved their flashback.
Their first meet at a wedding.
Their collided. Their embrace.
Their sweet talk.
And most important bout Meera-Dev secret letter.
Tat was hilarious.
Back to Present.
Maan feels proud seeing her being a Doctor.
She succeed to be a doctor. Her Dream
But sth is holding him back.
Bof r blaming each other.
Silence continuous...
thx for d p<M
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Posted: 14 years ago
*speechless*...

cant wait for the nxt update!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it yaar...awsome one
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous Update!!!
Just loved reading them and enjoyed them for the fullest...
For a change u didnt give us a sad update...
and trust me I love u for that...
I agree u have an amazing way to express sad emotions that the reader can actually start crying reading ur updates like I generally do...
But at the same time, u write the romantic scenes greatly as well... 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

loved the scenes where Maan and Geet meet in the flashback and even in the present...
Please elaborate more...
I just cant wait to read the story as it unfolds...
Waiting eagerly for the next update...
Love
Sakshi

PS: and please dont leave us at the cliffhanger like u always do...
Please consider the situation for the readers like us whose wait becomes difficult because u leave the story at such a point...

😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ego/ambition clashes...???? Soo real...😡

BTW I just love your words 👏👏👏 Can't get enough of your writing...⭐️⭐️

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