*|One Year From DMG|* UPDATED P67/68|7th Aug,'011

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shonadesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#421

hey dear
awesome part👏⭐️
loved it so much
thanks for pm
plz continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#422

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

omg dis part was awesomee

luv da fights

cont sooon

harneet <3

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Kiarahh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#423

Oh, Girll!!!!

You have no idea how much i feel like packing my bags and heading off to Goa right awayy!!! (More after reading this part)

And OMG Dil Chahta Hai!!!!

GOAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!

Coming back to your update, it was wonderful!!!!!

Its soooo much Fun to have a group like this!

And not to forget the cricket touch was amazingggg!!!(World cup 2011 was the first time i saw cricket)

Thanks for the pm!

Hope the next part will be up before long!!

Cheers,

Oochita =]

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anumeha khanna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#424

awsum part buddy.........

loved it..

n the whole cricket mania was amazng..

thnx for the pm...............

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Kruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#425

m waiting for the next update...plz do it soon!!

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Dhwani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#426

*|A MUCH-NEEDED BREAK- I|*

They were an hour and a half away from Karjat.. Their conversations had eventually died down and the music played at very low volume since Armaan, Anjie,
Abhi and Nikki had all fallen asleep.. Rahul spotted a dhabba and asked the driver to pull over..
"Guys! Get up.." Muskaan said tapping Nikki and passing a hair brush to a very sleepy and messy-haired Anjali..
"Armaan utho!" Muskaan nudged Armaan who had fallen asleep on Riddhima's shoulder.. Riddhima smiled at her cute husband as he got up with a jerk..
All the others got off the car.. Armaan was about to get off when Riddhima pulled him back..
"I was a little rude in the morning naa? I'm sorry.." She said..
"Riddhima.. Tum humesha aisa hi karti ho! You are just mean.. Mein tumhe itni achhi tarah se sweetly aur nicely oothata hoon!.. Aur tumne mujhpar.." Armaan didn't get a chance to finish his rant as Riddhima pulled him closer by his collar kissed him hard on his cheek..
"Oye! Yeh toh cheating hain.." He said naughtily, pulling her closer..
"Ridzie chal naa.. Kya kar rahein ho tum dono.." Anjie knocked on the car window..
"Haan di.. Ek minute.." She told her..
"Babyyy.." She stressed on the word.. "Ab chalein?" She said sweetly.. And took his hand and pulled him out...
"Kya khana hai?" Atul asked everyone as they entered the dhabba.. The place had wooden planks for tables and almost destroyed plastic chairs..
"Atul.. Jo bhi achha milta hai.. Woh order kardo naa.. And tea-coffee for everyone.." Riddhiam told him..
"Mein yahaan nahi baithoongi.. Its so dirty yaa.." Nikki complained to Armaan.. Since Abhi had gone in to wash his hands, the hygeine freak that he was..
"Kya hua Nikki? They are not so bad.. Okay wait I'll find you a better chair.." He said.. As he went around that place looking for a good chair..
All of them sat themselves at a table under the tree in the corner..
"This place is so peaceful.." Anjie said..
"The boys are not here.. Toh peaceful toh hogi hi naa.." Muskaan guffawed..
Armaan came back with carrying a chair..
"Yeh le.. And now don't grumble.. there is nothing better than this.."
"What are we ordering.. ?" He asked Riddhima, wearing his shades.. Muskaan let out a wolf whistle.. "Armaan.. Tu toh hero lag raha hain..!"
"Oh.. Mein toh humesha hero lagta hoon.." He said, not very humbly.. And lowered his glares and winked at her..
"Atul aur Rahul have gone to order.." Riddhima said, pulling him down into an empty chair next to hers.. Just choosing to ignore Armaan blowing his own trumpet.. She was used to it by now..
Abhi, rahul and Atul came with their hands full of food..
"Foood.. !" Anjie shouted happily as she saw the plates full of parathas and bun maska and glasses of tea and coffee..
They all happily shappily dug in enjoying the aloo parathas and chuskis of chai with bun maska..
"Riddhima.. Don't have so much butter.. Tum moti ho gayi ho pata hain?" Armaan nudged her, speaking softly..
Riddhima who was about to take another big bite of her bun loaded with butter froze for a second, her hand still midway and mouth open..
"Seriously?" She asked him..
"Ofcourse! Shaadi ke pehle tum hot thi.. Matlab abhi bhi hot ho lekin ab thodi si chubby ho.." He told her..
"Toh tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataaya Armaan.." She said, horrified now at the amount of butter and ghee she was eating..
He put his arm around her..
"Arrey.. Shaadi ke baad.. You know.. Obviously you would become fat.. Dekho.. Tumhara face.. Its become bigger.. Its natural.." He teased her..
"Armaan.. I'll come with you for a swim everyday.. Please.. I have to lose weight.. Mein moti nahi hona chahti.." She told him, worriedly..
"Don't worry Riddhima.. I'm sure it'll go away.. Like puppy fat.." He teased her more..
"Armaan!" She smacked him in the chest as she realized that he was pulling her leg..
"Oww.."
"Tum dono ka.. Roz ka rehta hain naa? Armaan.. Don't you get tired of teasing my little sister?" Anjali asked him as she heard the last bit of their conversation..
"Little sister? Please.. Woh itni bhi little nahi hain ab.. And she personally enjoys it! Oosko puchho.. Agar mein oose tease nahi karta hoon naa.. Toh she thinks I found someone else and I don't love her anymore.. Right Basket.."
"Nahi di.. Aap ooski mat suniye.."
"Aww.. Both of you are adorable!" She said.. Hugging Riddhima..
Armaan nudged Riddhima again.. "See Anjali ko bhi lagta hain ki we are cute.. I love you!" He said, giving her the bun maska,he realized she was really not eating!
"Riddhima khao naa.. "
"No Armaan.. I can't.. Even I feel I have put on.. Tum khao.."
"Arrey baba Basket.. Mein mazaak kar raha tha.."
"Dekho mere kapde mujhe thode tight lag rahe hain.. Pehle loose they.. Soon from Basket, you will start calling me Ball!" She said thoughtfully, a frown etching across her face..
"BASKET, you will always be Basket.. Even if you become like a ball.. And I will always love you the same!.. Ab agar tum nahi khaogi.. Toh I will go on my knees and ask you to eat it.."
"Lekin Armaan.. Mujhe---"
He pushed his chair behind and went down on his knee..
"Riddhima... Please please yeh bun maska kha lo!" He told her..
Nikki: "Armaan tu bhi naa.. Nauta---"
The legs of her chair gave away and she fell down.. Screaming "oww! Stupid chair!"
"Oh shit.." Abhi said.. And got up to give her a hand.. Armaan too,got up, forcefully put the bun maska in Riddhima's mouth and turned to look at Nikki..
"Nikki.. Tu theek hain?" He asked her..
"Nahi.."
"Okay wait.. Let's take you to the car.. I've got a sprain band" Armaan said..
"Nooo.. I can't move!"
"Arrey Abhi hain naa.. " He told her naughtily..
Rahul called the driver as they were moving out.. However, the driver wasn't picking up the phone..
"Arrey yaar.. Yeh driver ek number ka useless aadmi hain.. He isn't picking up the phone!" He told everyone..
"Try kar.. He'll pick up.. " Muskaan told him..
Finally after 20 minutes of Rahul and Muskaan trying to continuously reach him and Nikki's dramatic squeels everytime anyone tried to touch her ankle... The driver picked up the phone..
"Bhaiiya! Aap kahaan ho? Kabse aapko try kar rahein hain.. Aap phone kyun nahi ootha rahe the?" Muskaan screamed at him..
"Khaana kha rahein the matlab? Toh phone toh oothana chahiye naa? Aur gaddi kahaan par le gayye hai aap? Aap ab yahaan daabe par jaldi aaiye.. "... "Arrey.. Thoda chalna padega matlab? Yahaan kisi ko chot aai hain... Chalke nahi aa sakti.. Itni dhoop hain.."... "Toh phir aap gaadi aage kyun lekar gaye?"...
"Muskaan.. Kya bol raha hain woh? Idhar de phone.." He said, as she gave him the phone.. Her face red, from the heat and the anger..
... "Dekho bhaiiya.. Aap naatak na karo!" He said on the phone..
Armaan took the phone from him..
"Agar aap abhi, 5 minute mein yahaan jis dhaabe par chhoda tha, wahaan nahi aaye.. Toh aap apni jo gaadi hain naa.. Woh lekar jaiye.. Hum koi doosri gaadi le lenge.."... " Dekho woh meri problem nahi hain.. 5 minute.. Idhar bahaar khade hain.. " He told the driver calmly and kept the phone..
"Sun naa Rahul, yeh driver.. I get this weird vibe from him.. Let's just self drive the car? Hum dono manage kar lenge.. Kya bolta hain?"
"Haan theek hain.. Driver ko kya bolenge?"
"Oosko aane de.. I'll handle it.."
"Okay buddy.."
The car came within 10 minutes..
Abhi put Nikki in the middle seat, while Riddhima removed the sprain band from their bag.. Muskaan and Anjali jumped at the back to escape another second of the heat.. !
Atul, Rahul and Armaan came to the driver's side of the car and knocked on it..
"Kya?" The driver asked, pulling the window down..
Armaan put his hand over the window, opened the lock and opened the door..
"Bahar niklo.. !" He said, calm yet again..
The driver got out.. "Kya hua.."
"Aap bohot badtameez hain.. Gaadi chalane se pehle tameez se baat karna sikh kar aaiye.." He said, calm yet again..
He pulled out a Rs 1000 note and gave it to him.. "Yeh aapke 2 ghante chalaane ke paise.. Aur yahaan se Mumbai ke train ticket ke liye.. " He told him as Rahul got behind the wheel and shut the door..
"Ajeeb log hain aap.. Aise kaise? Hum poore paise lenge.. Aur yeh gaadi hum waapas le jaayenge.."
With that, Armaan's dam of patience broke and he held the driver by the collar against the nearby tree..
"Ab ek aur shabd bola naa.. Muh tod doonga.." He warned..
"Doctor hain yeh gunda.." The driver muttered..
"Kya bola.. ?" Armaan asked..
"Nahi.. Kuchh nahi.."
"Tere boss se baat kar lenge.." He said, stuffing the note in his pocket as he got into the car next to Rahul...
"Kya hua Armaan.. You look so angry.. Yeh lo paani pee lo.." Riddhima told him, catching him from behind and running a hand through his hair..
"Nothing.. Annoying driver yaar.. Ab hum hi drive karenge.." He said, dropping a few drops of water on his face, and turning the air-conditioner towards him.. Riddhima pulled out a napkin and wiped his face.. He looked gratefully at her and then asked Nikki.. "Tu theek hain?"
Nikki: "Haan Armaan.."
Atul asked Armaan to play the music.. As they drove off to Sunville, the sun now brightly shining in the sky..
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Nikki:"Oh my God.. This place is soo good! Its perfect!.. " She squealed, forgetting about her sprain and almost hopping around..
Armaan: "Wow Moody.. Not bad haan.. " impressed with Abhimanyu Modi for the first time.. Riddhima and Anjie came out of the bedroom they had gone to check out..
Anj:"Muski tune bedrooms dekhe? They are too good you know.."
Abhi: "Uhh guys.. Ek problem hain lekin.."
Armaan: "Bas.. Modi aur kuch bhi perfect karein.. Not possible.. Ab bolo? Kya hua..?"
Abhi: "Woh humein sirf yeh cottage mila hain.. Aur.. Aur sirf do rooms hain.. Toh.. Baaki.. Baaki ke logo ko yahaan hall mein sona padega.. Lekin don't worry.. Woh ek extra double sofa cum bed laga ke denge.."
Armaan: "Haan toh theek hain naa.. Rahul, Muskaan, Anjie aur Atul baahar so jaayenge obviously.."
Muskaan: "Kya!?" She said.. Hitting him..
Anj: "No way Armaan.."
Atul: "Armaan yaar.. Tu apne Champ ko baahar sone ko bol raha hain?"
Arm: "arrey toh kya hum Nikki aur Abhi ko baahar sone ko bolengey? Its almost like their first honeymoon.."
Rahul: "tera toh first honeymoon ho gaya hain naa?" He said, folding his hands and smirking..
Riddhima: "guys.. Guys.. Ek kaam karte hain.. Mein, muskaan and di we'll sleep in the one bedroom.. Abhi and Nikki, tum log doosre bedroom mein.. And (looking at Armaan) Atul, Rahul aur Armaan.. Tum log baahar so jao.. ?"
Armaan looked at her.. Flabbergasted with her idea.. Thankfully, he wasn't alone..
Rahul: "No wayy! Hum kyun baahar so jaye?"
Anj: "chivalry you know?"
Atul: "Riddhima, yeh kya baat hui yaar.. ? Humesha yeh hi hota hain.."
Armaan: "Exactly.. Isliye mein aur Riddhima ek kamre mein, aur Nikki and Abhi doosre kamre mein.. Baaki sab no license ya learning license waale log baahar.. Waise bhi, tum log andar karoge kya?"
Riddhima(mouth left open): "Armaan!! That's it.. You're sleeping out.. "
And she went inside the bedroom and banged the door behind her..
"Di.. Muski.." She came out asking them to come in, and shut the door hard again..
Abhi(giggling): "Dr Armaan aap toh gayye.. !"
Nikki: "ey.. Not fair yaar, mujhe bhi yeh log ke saath rehna hain.. They are going to have so much fun!"
Armaan saw this as a brilliant opportunity to get the other bedroom..
Armaan: "nahi Nikki, tum wahaan nahi so sakti.. Dr Modi permission nahi denge..!"
Nikki: "Armaan.. Mujhe kisi se permission lene ki zaroorat nahi hoti.."
Armaan: "Poochho.. Dr Modi.. Kya aap Nikki ko girls ke saath sone ki permission denge ?"
Abhi: "Arrey.. Mein aur Nikki yeh kamre mein rahenge naa.. "
Armaan(taking Nikki on the side): "dekha Nikks.. Sweetly lekin Moody neh tumhe permission nahi di.. (Pushing her to the bedroom door slightly) ab tum jao.. Moody ne naa bola toh tumhe wahaan hi sona padega naa.."
Rahul and Atul realized what Armaan was doing and silently sniggered..
Nikki: "Nahi.. Mein girls ke saath so rahi hoon.. And.. I. DON'T. NEED. TO. ASK. ANYONE. FOR. PER-MI-SSION." She glared at Abhi and shut the bedroom door behind her.. Abhi gave Armaan the dirtiest glare he could muster in return.. And helplessly just went into the bedroom.. With the boys following him inside..
Armaan: "Dr Moody.. Chill naa.. We are good company.." He said putting his arm around modi..
Abhi(shrugging his arm off and staring at the bed): Yeh bed dekh rahein hain aap log? Ab yahaan Nikki ke saath nahi.. Teen bandaro ke saath sona padega.. On a bed of roses with Three bandars!"
Armaan:"Arrey.. Aap tension kyun le rahein hain.. Mazaa karenge naa.. You me aur Hum.." Putting his arm around his waist this time..
Abhi: "Mujhse door raho.. Problem kyaa hain aapki?! Pata nahi kahaan phas gaya main.."
Atul(sitting on the bed, throwing flowers at Abhi): Ish... Abhi yaar.. Mazze karengey naa..
Rahul(plopping on the bed): "this bed is so soft.. Aiye naa Dr Modi.."
Abhi: "Mujhe nahi aana.. Chal hatt!" And he went out of the room to probably convince Nikki out of this bad nightmare..
--
They were doing lunch at one of the open restaurants at Sunville.. The restaurant served only pizza and pasta and Rahul and Anjali had literally physically pulled everyone into the joint because they hadn't eaten Italian since ages.. It was a little hot and so all of them were dressed in casual tees and shorts. Riddhima doned a white cotton flare dress because she hated wearing shorts.. Anjali and Muskaan had made her remove every piece of Indian clothing she had attempted to carry.. If she wouldn't have listened, they would have simply taken it away and not given it back to her since they could easily access her suitcase..
Rahul:"Kitni garmi hain naa yaar.." He said biting into another slice of pizza
Armaan: "Nahi nahi.. Delicious pizzas won't even make you feel the heat.. Its totally worth it!" He said repeating what Rahul had told him while dragging them in..
Anjali: "Hey.. The pizzas are so nice but! Yumm.." She said as she bit
into her slice..
Armaan( just stares at her): "Where does all the food go Anjie?"
Anjali: "I work out you know.. So I'm allowed to enjoy my food.."
Atul(pulls Armaan aside a little): "Armaan.. Woh ladkiyaan hain naa.. Woh table par.. Tujhe kabse goor rahi hain pata hain?"
Armaan: "Kya? Kahaan?" He said a little shocked and amused at the same time..
Atul: "Woh teen ladkiyaan.. Table to the right side.."
Armaan turned to look to the right and saw the women.. They were in their mid-twenties most probably.. As soon as they saw him look, they stopped their animated whispering.. And one of the girls winked at him.. He gave a courteous nod and then turned back, letting out a sigh.. If a guy would have done that to a married woman, she actually had the powers to take him to court of law for it after he had been beaten up or threatened by her husband or people around.. Biased world.. Gender injustice?
He looked at Riddhima chatting away with Muskaan and Nikki.. And he realized why he didn't care one cent percent for any of the female attention he got.. It was because of HER.. She looked angelic, he decided.. White was really her colour.. She had left her hair open.. And the fan blew it a little bit.. She looked so pretty.. She had been his perfect partner.. Companion.. Lover.. Better half.. Soul mate.. She filled in for all his imperfections.. He now had a home to go back to.. With someone waiting for him.. He had a reason to wait up for someone.. He had company while he ate his food.. And had someone who would be worried if he didn't come home...
Smiling to himself, he served more pasta into his plate..
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They were almost through with their lunch.. And were getting up to head back to the cottage.. To Armaan's surprise, he saw one of the girls who had been staring at him earlier walking towards their table..
Girl: "Hey.. I'm Jessie.." She extended her hand out to Armaan.. She seemed to be non-Indian and was obviously into random flirting..
Armaan: "Erm.. Hey! Armaan.."
Jessie: " Armaan..Nice name.. What does it mean?"
Armaan: "Desire.. Armaan means desire of the heart.. " He told her hastily, uneasy because he knew Riddhima was listening in.. And she wasn't the biggest fan of people who flirted with him.. But she just asked him his name.. He couldn't punch her face out for that..
Jessie "Wow.. That's a deep name.."
Armaan: "Yeah.. Listen, I have to go.."
Jessie: "Yeah sure.. It was nice meeting you Armaan.. Btw, that's my number.." She said as she grabbed a tissue and started writing her number..
Armaan: "Uh.. Jessie.. I'm sorry.. But I'm married.." He said.. Smiling at Riddhima.. Taking her number when she was obviously flirting and seemed to have other intentions wasn't the right thing or the best idea..
"That's my wife Riddhima.." He said pointing to her, she was giving Jessie her 'How dare you Bitch' look..
Jessie: "Hi Riddhima.." She smiled casually..
Riddhima: "Hi.." She said making a face..
Jessie: "You are one lucky woman.." She said with a wink.. And then turned to Armaan.. "Its a shame that a man as sexy like you is married.. " And then walked away..
Rahul/Abhi/Muskaan/Atul: "Oooh"As soon as she walked away.. Rahul and Abhi came and patted his back..
Rahul: "Good going bro..!"
Armaan: "Thanks dude.." And then looked at Riddhima who looked so red in the face, that Armaan was scared.. How was it his fault if some random girl came up to him?
Riddhima: "Good going? Thanks!? Guys.. I'm going back to the cottage.. I need to freshen up.. Its irritating out here.. And annoying.. Because of the heat ofcourse..!" She said as she stomped her feet and went out, giving Armaan a glare..
Anjie: "wait.. I'll come with you.."
Abhi smirked at Armaan..
Abhi: "Dr Armaan.. God punishes those who trouble others.. Nikki and I aren't in the same room but Riddhima isn't even talking to you now.."
Armaan: "Ha ha.. Very funny.. Moody!! Aur hum doosri class mein nahi hain.. Jab teacher humein cheating ke liye bolti thi.. God will punish you for your bad deeds.."
Rahul: "Chal guys let's go.. And Armaan tujhe Riddhima aaj kachcha chaba jaayegi.."
Armaan: "Arrey.. Mera kya fault hain yaar?"
Rahul: "Main kuch nahi bol raha hoon.. But Riddhima kaafi gussa thi.. Its normal you know.. Koi ladki ooske husband ke saath ooske saamne flirt karti hain.. So she will be angry.. And oosne tujhe sabke saamne sexy bola.. " He winked..
Armaan: "Aisa mere saath hi kyun hota hain..? Hey bhagwaan.. Mere love life.. Sorry married life mein itne problems kyun hain?" He said looking at the sky and hugged Atul..
Atul: "Kyun hain?"
Armaan: "Kyun?"
Atul: "Mujhe kya pataa.. Mein bhi woh hi poochh raha hoon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

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*|A MUCH- NEEDED BREAK -II|*

They had retired to the cottage to shower and then go to the beach.. Sunville was beautiful.. It had random cottages splattered all over with stone paths connecting the places.. Some of the cottages even had a stream of river going below them and were raised a little higher on a platform.. But what fascinated Armaan the most was that they were provided with small cars, and bikes, having a capacity of only 2, for transportation around the resort.. The place was vast, needless to say.. And they were enjoying every minute of it.. They had gone on a small tour of their cottage area which had taken them more than 15 minutes.. There was a small discotheque where they played good music at night... And there was an artificial lagoon they had created for dolphin shows that Riddhima was more excited for than anything else.. ! There was a garden with swings and see-saws.. And a small cafe which served coffee and varied pastries.. All in all, this place was absolutely vibrant.. Cozy and almost straight out of a fictional book..
--
Rahul: "Guys.. I'm sleepy.. I'm going to wake up in some time.." He said, getting into bed and pulling up the covers..
Sleep and work are directly proportional to each other.. The harder you work, the more you want to sleep.. But unfortunately since a single day has 24 hours only, its always the poor sleep that suffers... And when you're in a room with a bed that cozy..
Sleep calls you inevitably and you give in even if the bed is actually filled with rose petals...
Abhi(reading a magazine): "Aap shower ke liye jaa rahein hain yaa nahin?"
Armaan: "Haan.. Just taking my clothes.." He wanted to go and spend some alone time with Riddhima.. But since she was holed up in the girls' room and also pissed at him because of that stupid Jessie incident! Knowing Riddhima, he knew she would forget it in sometime.. It was hardly a big deal.. But right now she was pissed and he hated it, but he wasn't going to go behind her and fight over it right now..
Atul(coming into the room): "Armaan.. Tune Muski ko kahin dekha hain kya?"
Armaan: "Rahul yaha hain.. Toh woh girls ke saath oonke room mein hogi naa obviously Champ..."
Atul: "Dekh kar aata hoon main.."
(Atul goes out while Armaan goes in the bathroom)
Armaan: "Dr Modi.. Yeh bathtub aapne fill kiya hain? Bubbles and all huh? Candles.. ! How romantic..."
Abhi: "Mein aapko paagal dikhta hoon ki main akele akele bubble bath karoonga.. Woh bhi candles ke saath?"
Armaan: *thinking to himself: kya fark padta hain who filled it up.. ? This bubble bath is too irreristable.. And candles.. Smells good..*(And he gets inside the tub..) "Aahh.. This is awesome.. Kaash Riddhima hoti mere saath.. Heaven.." He said to himself, taking in the scent and the warmth of the water.. He found the bubble bottle with a blowing pipe at the side of the tub.. And began blowing bubbles...
Armaan: "pata nahi why men don't like bubble baths.. Its so peaceful.." He said relaxing his head and reclining further in the tub.. And started singing a song.. "sexy sexy sexy mujhe log bole
haaye sexy hello sexy kyun bole" he got up with a jerk and picked up a scrub and began scrubbing his back.. "neeeli neeli aankehin meri, main kya karoon...? gore gore gaal mere, main kya karoon
hont mere laal laal, main kya karoon? kaale kaale baal mere, main kya karoon" He was rapping to himself.. Thoroughly enjoying as he broke the bubbles formed in the water.. And blew some in the air..
"Ho…! sexy sexy sexy mujhe log bole haaye sexy hello sexy kyun bole.." He finished the song.. And splashed around the water, proud of his singing skills...
Atul:"Kyun bole ? Mujhe kya pata?"
Armaan:"Champ! Tu yahaan kya kar rahAa hain!? I'm taking a bath.. ! Baahar jao.." He broke out from his self praise and singing..
Atul:"Arrreyyy.. Aise kaise? Yeh bath tub meine fill kiya hain.. Tu baahar nikal.. !" He caught Armaan's hand and attempted to pull him out..
Armaan: "Champ champ champ.. ! Kya kar raha hain yaar tu?"
Atul: "Meine itni mehnat se yeh paani bharra.. Ab tu meri mehnat par aise paani nahi pher sakta.. Tu nikalll..!"
Armaan: "Arrey.. Aisa thodi hota hain yaar? Oodhar Riddhima naraaz hain.. Aur idhar tu mujhe pareshan kar raha hain.."
Atul kept his towel on the basin.. And got into the tub, fully clad.. !
Atul: "Theek hain mat nikal.. Mein bhi nahin jaunga.."
Armaan: "Champ.. Kya kar rahaa hain tu? Koi dekh lega toh kya sochega.. !"
Atul: "Haan.. Koi dekh lega to kaisi kaisi baatein sochega.. Aur tu toh shaadi shuda hain.. Mera kya hoga? Tu nikall.."
And they continued arguing in the bath tub.. None of them ready to get out..
--
Outside the bathroom, in the room.. Riddhima comes in..
Abhi(sitting on the bed): Riddhima.. Aap?
Rid: "Haan woh Armaan ke kit mein mera shampoo hain.. Mujhe chahiye.."
Abhi: "Lekin Armaan bathroom mein hain.."
Rid: "Theek hain.."
Abhi got off the bed and tried to stop her.. But she knocked and entered within seconds.. She was going to get such a shock.. Then he thought to himself that it was good in a way.. Armaan deserved it!
--
She walked over to the bathroom and knocked on the door.. After waiting for 2 seconds.. She spinned the lock.. And surprisingly, it was open..
Rid: "Armaan?" She said as she peeped in through the door..
Armaan: "Basket... ! How nice.. Tum mujhse gussa nahi ho?" He said as he saw her..
Rid: "Nahi baba.. Mein mera shampoo lene aai thi.. Tumhare kit mein rakha tha.. ."
Armaan: "Haan toh le lo naa..Achha Basket.. Shampoo le liya naa? Ab tum baahar jao.."
Riddhima: "Kyun?"
Armaan: "Because I'm taking a shower... "
Riddhima: "So... ?"
Armaan: "Privacy... "
Riddhima: " Privacy? Armaan.. Tum aise baat kar rahein ho ki tumne pehle kabhi bhi mere saamne shower nahi kiya hain.."
Just then Atul kicked Armaan hard from under the water.. He couldn't stop his breathe for a longer time than this..
Armaan taking the cue from that, told Riddhima to get out once again...
Armaan: "Jao naa tum.. Mujhe sharam aa rahi hain.. "
Riddhima: "Tumhe? Aur sharam aa rahi hain? What rubbish Armaan! Kuch toh gadbad hain.. Kya chhupa rahein ho tum?"
Armaan: "Basket.. Apna shampoo le liya naa? Now go! Bye.." He said hurriedly
Riddhima: "Haan okay.." (She goes and comes back again).. "Armaan.. By the way.. Yeh sab kya hain? Candles? And bubbles?.."She said with a laugh...
Armaan: "Haan toh?"
Riddhima: "Armaan..!"
Armaan: "Riddhimaaa..."
Riddhima: "Armaaan..."
Armaan: "Riddhim--"
Atul(he came up with a gasp):"Tum log ke Armaan-Riddhima ke chakkar mein koi bhi mar sakta hain!"
Riddhima didn't know how to react.. She was stunned for a few seconds.. While Armaan waited for her reaction.. Atul was just trying to gulp as much oxygen he could get.. Idiots! They got him killed almost... !
Atul: "Tumhe pata hain.. Oxygen supply cut off hone se.. Ek insaan ke vital functions band ho sakte hain?"
Armaan(irritatedly): "Champ! Mein ek doctor hoon.. Remember?"
Atul: "Exactly! Toh tu itna irresponsible kaise ho sakta hain?! Mere vital functions band ho jaate toh!"
Riddhima: "Armaan... ! Tum Atul ke saath bath tub mein kya kar rahein ho? And Atul.. You guys--"
Armaan: "Mera fault nai hain.. Atul crashed in.. "
Riddhima: "So you decided to crash in and shower together?"
Armaan: "Riddhimaaa.. !"
Riddhima: "Shut up! Baahar niklo tum.."
Armaan: "Okay first of all.. We are not (does quotes with his fingers) showering together..!"
Riddhima(raises eyebrows): "Really want to argue on that right now?"
Armaan just shook his head in reply.. While Riddhima went out, bewildered at what she just saw!
Abhi: "Riddhima.. Uh.. Aap.. You're okay?" He asked skeptically..
Riddhima: "Nahi.. I'm not okay.."
Nikki(entering the bedroom): "Kyun? Kya hua Riddhima?"
Riddhima just pointed to the bathroom as Nikki saw Armaan and Atul get out.. Wrapped in towels, looking as if the ground should rather dig itself out and eat them alive!
Nikki: "My God you guys... ! This is seriously the LIMIT.."
Armaan: " Nikki I can explain.. "
Abhi: "No need.. Please.. Nikki tumhe pata hain.. Yeh log hai hi aise.. Weirdos.. Rahul wanted to hug me in his sleep.. And they were together in the bathtub.. ! Abnormal log.. Mein inke saath nahi reh sakta.. !"
Armaan: "Oye! Abhi.. "
Riddhima: "Armaan.. Shut up! I can't believe you!"
Armaan: "What? Its not such a big deal you know... "
Riddhima: "Atul.. Tum roz ghar aanaa.. Theek hain? Shower together.. I'll set up the scented candles!" She said and she fumed out..
Rahul(getting up from his sleep): "Yahaan itna shor kyun hain?"
Nikki: "Too late to explain now.. Drama over.. So jao..". She said as she followed Riddhima out..
Rahul simply shrugged and went back to sleep.. And Atul and Armaan ran back inside the bathroom to get in the bathtub before the other.. While Abhi just looked like he was going to cry...!
--
The others were fast asleep and Armaan took this opportunity to spend some alone time with Riddhima.. It was almost 2 in the morning.. There was silence all over except for the sounds made by the crickets.. He went out of the boys' room.. And tried to sneak into the girls' room.. Earlier in the day, he had sorted out the whole Jessie incident and the bathroom debacle as well.. Riddhima was okay with girls like Jessie once in a while.. She was used to it.. But she was completely troubled with the whole Atul incident.. She had pulled his leg about it the whole day.. And told him she would take some time to "recover" from THAT.
"Arrey yaar.. Locked hain!" He muttered angrily..
"Bbm kis din kaam ayega!" He took out his phone and started BBMing her..
"Hey!"
He impatiently waited for her to read it.. He just hoped her phone was with her.. He would have normally just knocked and asked her for a walk or something but Dr. Nikita Malhotra was in there.. And when Dr. Nikita whined, it was dangerous.. Nikki wouldn't let Riddhima come with him as they barely spent together.. Which was true.. And he didn't have the audacity to argue with Nikki.. If she could make Abhi sleep in another room on their so-called honeymoon.. She could sure as hell get Armaan to do as she said..
"Hey!"
"I love you.."
"I don't.."
"I know that.."
":P"
"Read this.. Its so true..
"If Columbus had been married, He might never have discovered America, because he would have had to answer all the following questions:
Where are you going? With whom? Why? How are you going? To discover what? Why only you? What do I do when you are not here? Can I come with you? When will you be back? Would you have dinner at home? What would you bring for me? You deliberately made this plan without me, didn't you? You seem to be making a lot of these programs lately... Answer me why? I want to go to my Mother's house. I want you to drop me there. I do not want to come back ever! What do you mean, OK? Why are'nt you stopping me? I do not understand what this whole discovery thing is about. You always do things like this. Last time you also did the same thing! Nowadays you always seem to do this kind of stuff. I still do not understand what else is left to be discovered after we discovered each other!"
":O :O"
"HAHAHHAAA.. ! =))"
"I treat you like that?"
"Maybe"
"I'm so sweet to you always.. Meano"
"You want to take a walk??"
"I'm with all these people.."
"Why aren't ya'll sleeping..?"
"Top secret stuff!"
"Come naa.."
"Okay.."
"Waiting outside the cottage"

Armaan waited for Riddhima outside the cottage... She came out wearing her pajamas and her worn out white tee..
They smiled at each other.. And began walking away from the cottage.. She wrapped her hand around his arm and walked closer..
"You like the place?" He asked her..
"Love it.. !"
"Its so peaceful here.. "
"Yeah.."
They walked on in silence.. It was a little breezy.. A welcome change from the Mumbai humidity..
"Riddhima"
"Hmm?"
"Don't you think we should take some time off.. We barely get time together.. All we do is get up, work, come back, eat and sleep.. Kabhi kabhi hum ek doosre ko theek tarah se dekhte bhi nahi hain.." He told her.. Pulling her on a bench with him..
"Armaan.. You have chosen cardio.. I'm not the one who works for 16 hours a day.. You should take out more time.. Tum mujhe mat kaho.."
"Riddhima.. I'm trying to get a solution for this.. Why are you talking to me like that?"
"Because the only solution is for you to slow down! Tum mahine mein 2-3 baar out of town jaate ho.. You have even started working on Sundays!..."
"When I chose cardio as my speciality.. Humne is baare mein baat ki thi na Riddhima.. Its different from pediatrics.. You have to understand that!"
"Are you trying to tell me that cardiologists are superior than pediatricians?"
"God! No.. Riddhima.. What is wrong with you? Hum kya baat kar rahein the? Aur tum kahaan se kahaan le kar jaa rahi ho baat ko.."
"Why are you fighting with me Armaan? You don't have the time.. Ever! I've been so patient all along.. Tum kabhi kabhi 2-3 din ke liye ghar nahi aate ho.. Do I say anything to you?"
"Whatever happened to being understanding.."
"I AM being understanding.. There's a limit.. Do I say a word to you? I just can't take it when you come and say we should take some time off.. When I know and you know that you are not taking any time off.. Its just hypocrisy.. !"
"That's what I was going to tell you Riddhima.. We should spend some more time together.. And I'll try my best to take time off.. Stop calling me a hypocrite! You don't need to act like that all the time.. "
"Armaan.. Stop catching onto one word I said.. You know what.. Let's not even talk about this.. All these months.. I've kept quiet.. Because I understand.. I'm a doctor.. And I don't want to pressurize you more than you already are.. Half the times we go out.. You have some emergency.. I don't say a word.. I drift off to sleep waiting for you on the couch half the time.. I don't say a word.. I don't expect you to come and pamper me everytime I'm unwell because I know you're saving lives.. And that will always be a priority.. But you don't get to fight with me over this.. I won't accept that.." She was in tears by the time she finished.. Realizing how much she had missed him since the past few months.. He was there.. And somehow, he wasn't around..
"Pshsh!" And he took her into a hug..
"No.. I'm okay.. Really.. "
"I'm sorry.."
"No.. You don't have to be.. "
He drew her closer.. "It is my fault.."
She continued to cry..
"I'm sorry..." He whispered against her lips..
"Its okay.."
"I make you cry even when we are on a fun trip.. I'm sorry.. " And he captured her lips with his.. In a slow, passionate kiss..
"Its not your fault.. Its just that... I miss you.." She pulled apart a little..
"I miss you too!" He whispered.. She could feel his breath on her lips.. She pulled his face closer as he took her into a long passionate kiss.. !

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Dhwani

@Dhw@ni

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#428

HEY GUYS.. !!

Long timeee.. !! -____-

Okay first off.. I am really really really sorry for disappearing for 3 months.. Had exams.. And now I'm interning.. There's just no time.. ! :'(

I'd once said it.. And I stick by it.. As a writer, I would NEVER abandon my readers and leave an incomplete FF.. I know its not exactly right to not have updated all these months.. I'm genuinely sorry.. ! But I just didn't want to leave this FF incomplete.. Its just like a baby.. And I love ArmaanRiddhima today as much as I loved them when the show was on.. Just that there's a time issue and also with no DMG on air.. Its getting difficult to get inspired to write! -__- F***! I miss DMG.. Like so so so much I'm finding it impossible to express how much.. !

If its any consolation, and if I even have any readers left/interested in reading.. I've posted a LONGGG part.. Just wrote it in bits and pieces over these months.. And completed it only yesterday.. !

Also, I plan to wind up this FF.. As Shruti is also very very busy.. I'll be posting one last part.. With a leap.. By next week or so.. *I PROMISE* and I hope the end will justify ArmaanRiddhima.. And you guys won't be disappointed.. This part was something I had in mind from the very beginning for this FF.. And its my personal favorite AR imaginary scene! <33333

HAPPY READING.. !!

I'd love to read comments.. ! :D

Edited by Dhw@ni - 14 years ago

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#429

Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved AR
Da bath scene was hilarious with armaan nd atul
Loved armaan singing
Poor AR
Da ending was sad
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanksss