FF Hoshiarpur Express, index added, Upd. pg. 51 - Page 3

really interesting! please do continue soon!

its good and do continue,anisha!!

Originally posted by: starstruck2

<font size="2">Hehe 😊It has been my dream that Maan will call Geet jaan someday 😆😆</font>

I hope your dream comes true, but i seriously want both of them to call eachother chalti phirti disaster, and dusht dhanav. That would be their romantic words for eachother, it shows their love alot 😆 😆 😉


Muniza

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 I LIKED UR FF SO VERY MUCH . ITS ROCKING , MIND BLOWING , & RAAPCHIC .😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

Nice update dear, better write lil longer. We are very greedy people here, small bytes not fill our desire lolz....




Muniza

Originally posted by: VJ-LNMDJ

that's very nice and fast !

But you know, Geet and Brija are not BOTH mahinder;'s children...Brij is Mahinder's elder brother's son , as far as I remember...

Anyways, that doesnt matter ...when will you update again ?

You said we cud request scenes ... please do include sweet scenes between maneet due to everyone treating them as mangetar's and they having to live up tp the act in public... and also , at a later time , maan coming to know about Geet's past , roughly, from villagers and his respect for her going up as he remembers her refusals.... then he gently checking it out with Geet as to what happened....

VJ

Originally posted by: rituka7

great part
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I cried all those tears I had put a hold on for so long, for all these months away from home and my mother. She held me in her arms and rocked back and forth, kissing my cheeks, stroking my hair, asking me how I was, where I was, how I managed, how could I leave her like that, she knew she was a bad mom and deserved bad things, how I didn't understand that no matter what she was my mother 😭

Everyone, including Maan and Darji, watched on, dumbstruck. It was like everyone had forgotten how to speak. "Ma. I am fine." I composed myself and backed away. Maan stood by my side and squeezed my hand. Everyone saw this, and my father and Darji and everyone looked on in disbelief. "Maan?" Darji gruffed. "Am I seeing correctly?" Rano rubbed her eyes and looked at me and Maan. US! Maan smirked and pulled me to his chest and stroked my arm softly. Darji growled, "MAAN!" I pushed Maan away and faced Darji. "Shut up! Stop yelling all the time like an uncivilized being. I am talking. He knows how to talk. Why can't you be normal and have a conversation for once? You always jump to conclusions and shout and scream and yell and shriek like you're five! And who are you of mine anyways? If it wasn't for him, I would be dead today! My life is his, whatever he wishes, he is free to do and I'm there to tell him. You and I have no relation, so therefore you have no right to yell at him at this!" I spat at Darji furiously. "Geet, beta--" my father stepped forward. I walked one step backwards.

Amazing...this is turning out to be very interesting....hope you will update it now, shortly

thx a lot.plz update soon.its mindblowing