FF: Inconsolable - INDEX pg 1 UPDATE pg 47 THE END - Page 39

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

<font color="#ff0033">See when Maan wanted to share Geet's pain a few chapters ago, I had an inkling that he would do something drastic...

Also when he first "banged his leg" on the car, I knew it was his way of sharing her pain!

But what I didn't expect was him donating his kidney yet after reading the first few lines of that chapter, I put all the pieces of the jigsaw together...

Their relationship is beautiful...you've expressed that in every single update in this FF! 🤗

I'm glad there was a happy ending..with their two children after 20 amazing years of mariage 😃

I truly loved this FF and I hope that whenever you write again, you will remember to P.M. me!

Thank you for writing this ⭐️

Love

Ayesha</font>

🤗thank you so much..😃
enshAllah i will PM you 😃

Hi Ru,

read your story last night... two hours... so if i flunk in my exam day after tomorrow... all thanks to you!!! lol... jk... 😉

I really loved it...

it was serenely surreal...

And from what I've studies, read, seen and written... surrealism is the best aspect in arts!

All through the story... the title kept me in constant fear of a bad ending but the way you twisted it... that was great and comforting!

It was surreal because even though it's not utterly unreal to have such relationships... this story gives out a feeling of dreaminess... distinct feeling of the line between reality and surrealism.

However, the part when Maan donated his kidney to share Geet's pain was the peak of surrealism... venturing a bit into the impossible.

There were a few things like the typographical errors - such as where Maan is referred to as Maan Ali (which obviously was the name of the erstwhile character)...

secondly there were certain areas where you had to change a certain aspects... like Geet would've worn white on her father's funeral and red at her wedding against what you wrote as black and white respectively.

at certain place the exclaimations made by Geet's mom is 'Hai allah' which would be 'haye babaji'...

sorry for annnoying you with this... been reading and writing for so long that i just can't ignore typos even if i try!!!

besides... everything was perfect and beautiful...

looking forward to your other fic... that i started reading yesterday only...

keep up the good work... all the best!

Luv,
Pree!

Originally posted by: PreeyaKSharma

Hi Ru,

read your story last night... two hours... so if i flunk in my exam day after tomorrow... all thanks to you!!! lol... jk... 😉

I really loved it...

it was serenely surreal...

And from what I've studies, read, seen and written... surrealism is the best aspect in arts!

All through the story... the title kept me in constant fear of a bad ending but the way you twisted it... that was great and comforting!

It was surreal because even though it's not utterly unreal to have such relationships... this story gives out a feeling of dreaminess... distinct feeling of the line between reality and surrealism.

However, the part when Maan donated his kidney to share Geet's pain was the peak of surrealism... venturing a bit into the impossible.

There were a few things like the typographical errors - such as where Maan is referred to as Maan Ali (which obviously was the name of the erstwhile character)...

secondly there were certain areas where you had to change a certain aspects... like Geet would've worn white on her father's funeral and red at her wedding against what you wrote as black and white respectively.

at certain place the exclaimations made by Geet's mom is 'Hai allah' which would be 'haye babaji'...

sorry for annnoying you with this... been reading and writing for so long that i just can't ignore typos even if i try!!!

besides... everything was perfect and beautiful...

looking forward to your other fic... that i started reading yesterday only...

keep up the good work... all the best!

Luv,
Pree!

heya Pree!
thank you so much for the comment 🤗
i dont really understand these things, i mean the surreal and all that 😆 cause writing is only a hobby and it comes straight from my imagination.. as i dont really "think" of the chapter, i only imagine it and then write it..

as i said in the first page, this story i wrote in another forum.. and the main character's names were Sana and Imran.. both Muslims, and so is Sana's mother.. that's why i didn't change the "Hai Allah" to Babaji.. as in Shublee, i think, is a Muslim name..

i did also say that, this story does not resemble Geet the show fully.. just few aspects, like Maan's character and Geet's.. it wasn't meant to be done according to the show.. as i didnt even know about the show last Feb 😊

but thank you again, really appreciate it! 🤗


love,
Ru

i accidently came across this FF, I hve reached the 12th part and so far its amazing! love it. very different.

Originally posted by: kyphfanz

i accidently came across this FF, I hve reached the 12th part and so far its amazing! love it. very different.
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thank you!! 😃

Originally posted by: PreeyaKSharma

It's alright... for writing knowing thetechinacalitie doesn't really matter... it's just termology!

It's just i'm a bit finnicky about facts... well Shublee could'vebeen short for Shubhralata... quite an old name tohugh!

but that's alright...

and yes that was the best part of your story... i could imagine everything... and that's what ames a successful story!!!

keep up the good work...

Luv,

Pree!

thanks again! 😃🤗

Originally posted by: -Zoya-

Just read the FF!!!
It was awesome!!!