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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: malluangel

Yoooooo noorya finally
caught up girl ok go Sid just go Sid lol I love that boy now let's see eat Ruiz does but umm can priya have rohit pleaseeeee 😆

Haila Aish ur back after such long time in my FF😆

and yaar dont worry for Priya she'll get what she deserves😉
btw i love ur SaVan avi😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
OH NOORYa
Baby u just made my day
what an update
radhima reaction was amazing aur us reaction pay Sid ka action
double dhamaka
i just adore angry sid
love ur upodate
plz update fast

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255

OH NOORYa
Baby u just made my day
what an update
radhima reaction was amazing aur us reaction pay Sid ka action
double dhamaka
i just adore angry sid
love ur upodate
plz update fast

😆😆
thanks Kiran
im workin on the part maybe i'll post it in some time
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey guys😊

so here is the next part
as usual sorry for the delay hun😳...
and it may be short par kya karun some of u
absolutly wated the part today so had to post it naa
so basicaly its not my fault😆😆
~Tum Mile~

PART 17

Days passed and now sid n ridz had only a professional rapport but no one seem to notice this change no one exept atul who was feelin that somethin was wrong…on the other hand sid was behavin normaly with priya who was considerin him as a brother…she had recovered completely and yuvi gave her n her family the good news that she can go back home and all of them get happy…sid entered the room n priya was happy seein him

Priya: sid bhaya…main aaj ghar jaa rahi hoon (sid smiles)

Sid: haan pata hai…par jaane se pehle tumse koi milne aaya hai

Priya: mujhse?...mujhse kaun milne aaya hai? (sid looks at the door)

Sid: rohit…(rohit enters the room n priya is shoked to see him he slowly comes toward her n she gets furious)

Priya: tum?...tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Just get lost! (n she looks at sid) sid bhaya…aap isse yahan kyun laaye aap tho jante hain yeh kaisa insaan hai

Sid: nahin priya…tum shuru se hi sahi thi…rohit tumse bohut pyaar karta hai usne tumhe koi dhoka nahin diya hai (priya looks at rohit then at sid confused) rohit ke gharwale iss rishtey se khush nahin the…tho unhone rohit ko ghar mein band kiya tha…main rohit ke gharwalon se milne gaaya tha jaan ne ke liye ki yeh kaha hoga…par unke behaviour se mujhe aise laga ki voh jooth bol rahe hain…phir maine kuch ajeeb se awaaze sun li aur ek kamre mein tala dekha…tab mujhe shak hua tho maine unko phone kiya aur yeh bataaya ki rohit ka accident hua hai aur voh hospital mein admit hai…voh log dar gaaye the ki rohit shayad bhaag gaaya hoga tho room mein check karne gaaye aur vahan maine rohit ko dekha…uske baad maine police ko phone ki aur rohit ko yahan laaya jiske pass usse hone chahiye…(priya looks at rohit with teary eyes n hugs him…her mom goes toward sid n carreses his cheek)

Mom: thank u beta…tumne meri beti ki khushyan wapis lautadi…bhagvaan teri har maang poori kare…(priya brokes the hug n goes toward sid)

Priya: sid bhaya…jo kuch apne mere liye kiya hai…uske liye thanks bola bohut kam hai

Sid: tumne mujhe apna bhai maana hai naa…tho yeh tho mera farz tha…aur ab ek farz poora karna baki hai jo mujhe nahin balki tumhare bade bhai ko poori karni hogi…tum dono ki shaadi (all of them get happy n the olders bless the jodi)

***

Everyone was at the cafeteria and they they were still talkin about what sid did for priya.

Sue: im soo proud of you superboy…jo tumne apne patient ke liye kiya voh aaj kal apne bhi nahin karte (sid smiles)

Naina: haan sid…infact apne tho aaj kal do pyaar karne vaalon ko alag karne mein toole hue hain…(yuvi holds her hand)

Yuvi: tum fikar mat karo naina…tumhare papa hum dono ko alag nahin kar paayenge……aur agar aisa hua naa tho sid hai naa…voh hume milaayega (he winks n at n she smiles)

Atul: sach mein Sid…do pyaar karne vaalon ko milana duniya ka sab se shub kam hota hai…im sure tum bhagvaan se jo bhi maangoge naa tumhe mil jaayega (sid looks at ridz)

Sid: I don't think so…kabhi kabhi jo hum chahte hain infact jiss se hum chahte hain jab tak voh hume dene ke liye tayaar nahin hai tho bhagvaan bhi kuch nahin kar sakta…(ridz was feelin uncomfortble n atul looks at him confused)

Atul: aisa kya chahte ho tum kissi se jo voh de nahin paa raha? (sid comes to his senses n looks at atul)

Sid: heuu…kuch nahin main bas…example de raha tha…jaise ki jab tak meri stubborn behen maanegi nahin tho uski dosti raj se kaise hogi? (everyone laugh)

Sue: shut up bro!

Raj: don't worry Sid…humari dosti bohut jald ho jaayegi…uske liye bhagvaan ko interfere karna zaroori nahin hai

Sue: ecxuz me! Tum naa din mein sapne dekhna band karo!

Raj: sapne kya main tho din mein taare bhi dekh sakta hoon…dekhogi?

Sue: u know what tumhare tarah tumhare jokes bhi stupid aur boring hai!

Raj: par maine tho koi joke nahin kaha hai…(sue gets very annoyed)

Sue: goshh main jaa rahi hoon! (and she leaves from there with anger)

Ridz: atul mujhe toda kam hai main bhi chalti hoon

Atul: theek hai hum baad mein milte hain ridzi (ridz looks at sid but he pretend bein focused on his cup of coffee n did not looked at her n she leaves. Atul again notices their weird behaviour)

Naina: ab jab saare ladkyan chali gaayi hai tho main bhi chalti hoon…bye (n she follows ridz)

Sid: raj tum sue ki baaton ka bura mat maan lena voh bohut ziddi hai par she is very nice

Raj: c'mon sid main sue ko itna tho jaan chuka hoon…aur vaise bhi usse gussa dilana mujhe bohut acha lagta hai…(sid smiles)

Sid: alright guys main bhi chalta hoon…baad mein milte hain (he leaves from there also)

Atul: guys main bas abhi aaya…(n he runs after sid) Sid! (sid stops)

Sid: kya hua?

Atul: sab theek tho hai naa? (sid gets confused)

Sid: haan kyun?

Atul: nahin…mera matlab hai tere aur ridzi ke beech…maine notice kiya hai tum dono bohut ajeeb sa behave karte ho ek doosre ke saath infact strangers ki tarah

Sid: aisa kuch nahi hai atul…hum bas kam pe toda busy hai aur kuch nahin…

Atul: sure?

Sid: yes atul…tum pareshan mat ho sab theek hai (he smiles n leaves)

Atul: nahin Sid…agar sab theek hota tho tum do baar ek hi galti nahin karte…tum mujhe atul nahin AJ bulate…mujhe ridzi se hi baat karni padegi…

***

In ridz cabin:

Ridz: atul maine kaha naa kuch bhi nahin hua hai!

Atul: haan maine dekha ki kuch nahin hua hai…ridzi maine tum dono ki dosti dekhi hai…sid tumse ek din bhi baat naa kare aisa ho hi nahin sakta…aur peechle kuch dino se tum dono baat tho kya ek doosre ko avoid kar rahe ho…sid se poochta hoon tho jooth bolta hai ki tum dono kam mein bas busy ho aur tumse poochta hoon tum kehti ho ki kuch nahin hai…akhir koi tho mujhse sach bolo

Ridz: atul plzz mujhe iske bare mein aur baat nahin karni hai

Atul annoyed: theek hai mat karo baat! Main tho tum dono ka dost nahin hoon naa…tum dono ko jaise rehna hai raho mujhe koi fark nahin padta! (sayin this he left from her cabin n ridz gets sad)

***

The day ended everyone already left from sanjeevani. Sid was goin in the locker room his labcoat restin in his arm…when he entered there he saw ridz sittin on the bench…they look at each other for a second n sid goes to his locker annoyed n throws his labcoat n his stethoscope inside. He was ready to go home when ridz call him from behind

Ridz: sid tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho? (he turns back to face her)

Sid: kya?

Ridz: mujhe iss tarah avoid kyun kar rahe mujhse baat nahin kar rahe ho…

Sid: tho aur kya karun riddhima?...tumse baat karun…hassun mazak karun? (she looks at him with teary eyes) im sorry…par main tumhari tarah yeh natak nahin kar sakta hoon…main bhi ek insaan hoon riddhima mera bhi ek dil hai jo chot khane par dukhta hai…aur main tumhari khushi ke liye apna dil dukha nahin sakta…

Ridz: tum mujhe selfish kehte ho naa…tho phir tum kya ho sid? (sid smiles upon that)

Sid: selfish…riddhima tumhe selfish ka matlab pata bhi hai?...chalo theek hoon main selfish…par at least main aisa kar ke tumhari tarah doosron ko tez nahin pooncha raha hoon…infact main ek dil ko toothne se bacha raha hoon…apne dil ko…par tum…tum sirf apne bare mein soch kar baki sab ko dukh pooncha rahi ho…par tumhe iss se kya riddhima tumhe tho sirf apne bare mein sochna hai naa…apni zindagi…apna pyaar…(ridz was badly hurt by sid's words so to hide her pain she started to shout at him)

Ridz: HAAN! HOON MAIN SELFISH!...nahin chahiye mujhe tumhari dosti aur naa hi tum jaisa dost !...main hi pagaal hoon jo tumse phirse dosti karna chahti thi…LEKIN AB BAS! Koi bhi rishta nahin rakhni hai mujhe tumse…tum meri zindagi mein koi bhi nahin ho sid koi importance nahin rakhte ho mere liye tum…thank you mujhe yeh sab yaad dilwane ke liye…ab dobara bhoolungi nahin! (sayin this she leaves from there n now sid is hurt)

***

Sid was standin in his balcony thinkin about riddhima and what she said to him in locker room. This time whatever she said to him had badly broken him…the pain of refusin his love was nothin comparin to this…he was tryin not to think about her but it was in vain…riddhima was printed in his heart mind n soul…

Sid: main kitna bhi koshish karun tumhare bare mein naa sochne ke liye riddhima par tum mere khialon se kabhi door nahin jaa paogi…har pal teri yaadein mujhe satati rehti hai…

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Sid lookin at the sky: kyun baar baar aap mera hi dil todte hain?...pehle meri zindagi mein tamana aayi…aur jab maine uss se apni dil ki baat keh di tho usne kisi aur se shaadi karne ka faisla kar ke Canada chali gaayi…phir riddhima ko baijh diya…waqt ke saath mujhe uss se pyaar ho gaaya par usne tho mujhse har rishta hi tod diya…agar hum dono ka saath sirf itna hi tha tho apne usse meri zindagi mein laaya hi kyun?...kyun aaj bhi mera dil yeh maan ne ko tayar nahin hai ki riddhima voh ladki nahin hai jisse apne mere liye banaaya hai…(he was lost in all his questions when he felt a warm hand on his shoulder n when he turns he finds sue n quikely wipes his tears) Sue?...tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Sue: yahin tho main tumse bhi pooch sakti hoon bro…tum iss waqt yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Sid: heuu…kuch nahin bas…neend nahin aa rahi thi

Sue: aa nahin rahi thi ya phir kisi ne cheen liya hai? (sid was still tryin to hide the truth)

Sid: aisa…aisa kuch bhi nahin hai sue im fine

Sue: Sid…kya hum bada ho kar sirf naam ke hi bhai behen hai?...bachpaan mein tum apni har choti si choti baat mujhse share karte rehte the…school mein bad marks, ghar mein chupke saari chocolates khana…everything sid…tho phir aaj mujhse itni badi baat kyun chupaayi?...shayad ab main tumhari best friend nahin hoon aur tumhe meri zaroorat nahin…(sid couldn't control his pain anymore n hugs sue tightly)

Sid: im sorry sue…mujhe pata nahin main kya karun…yeh dard mujhe adaar se kha hi jaa rahi hai…bohut dard ho raha hai sue…bohut dard…

Sue: Sid main hoon naa tumhare saath don't worry…dekho tum apni dard mere saath share karo you'll feel much better…

Sid tell her the whole story…who was armaan n hw much ridz loves him…hw they became friends n he fell in love with her and finaly that they are not talkin to each other after he confessed his love to her few days ago.

Sid: koi mujhse kehta hai ki apne pyaar pe bharosa rakho…tho koi kehta hai riddhima ko toda time dedo…par jo kuch usne aaj kaha uske baad sab khatam ho gaaya hai…

Sue: kuch bhi khatam nahin hua hai bro…I mean kal tak tum dono dost the aur tumne usse yeh kaha ki tum uss se pyaar karte ho…tho obviously voh aise hi react karegi…I mean riddhima ko time ki zaroorat hai sochne aur samajhne ke liye ki tumhari uski life mein kya jagah hai…

Sid: sue usne mujhe saaf saaf kaha hai ki main uske life mein important nahin hoon tho ab time dene ka kya matlab hoga

Sue: yahin tho tum samajh nahin paa rahe ho bro…tumne riddhima se bohut kuch kaha hai jiss se voh bohut hurt hui hai aur uska badla lene ke liye usne tumse yeh sab kaha…par bro why don't u understand ki jo kuch usne tumse kaha voh ek tho gusse mein kaha but also kyunki she really cares about you…tum uske life ka ek bohut imporant hissa ho…aur agar tum uske liye important nahin hote tho tum dono ki dosti toothne par voh itna udass nahin hoti…(sid was not sure) trust me bro main bhi ek ladki hoon aur jab koi apna hume hurt karta hai naa tho hume sab se ziada bura lagta hai aur hum voh kehte hain jo hum sochte nahin……sid abhi tum soone jao toda rest karoge tho better feel karoge…aur haan don't you dare mujhse dobara koi baat chupana (sid smiles n hugs her before goin to his room…sue lost her smile after sid left seein hw much he loves ridz) sid ek ladki se kabhi itna pyaar karega maine socha nahin tha…I just hope God sab kuch theek kare…

Love and Luck to All
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Edited by ...Noorya... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤗🤗🤗🤗

hi nooryaaaaaaaaaa
i havent talked to in forever, so hi!
and omg loving this, now make these ridiculous people [err person] realize theyre just meant to be already!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update...awww poor sid...n rids ....they both said those wrds to eachother that they r gonna regret....bt i guess this distance is good for them...maybe sid will get time to think frm ridz perspective n ridz will realize sid's importance in her life...loved sue n sid scenes...kinda miss those....n ur vm was very nice..thanks fro the pm n plzz update ASAP...b/c the sooner u update..the sooner SR will be together n i want them to be together Like.... NOW!!!:):)..... lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
Noorya
Awesome update
Loved hw Sid brings Rohit & Priya together
Also loved SR , sid & sue convo
I think d distance B/w SR is necessary as now dey both will think from each others perspective
And now dis stupid Ridz needs to realize dat dey r meant to b

Can't wait 4 d next part
Continue soon....

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome os please keep writing. very well written
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi noorya 🤗
awesome updates.
sid always makes others happy............that our sid.
i know riddhima will take time...........but dooriyaan hai bhi zaroori..............
can't wait for next part.
Edited by monty22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Noorya🤗

Awwwww......Sid united Rohit and Priya.....how sweet is he!!
and LOVED SR convo....this was needed to strengthen their relationship.....hoping to see Ridzi realizing her feelings for Sid...hope she has feelings for him😛
Also really lykd Sue-Sid's convo....very sweet!!!

and the short nd sweet VM....reminded me of our beautiful SR😭Cry

and thnx for the PM....do continue soon!!!!

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