SujalKashish-Mera Naam Hai Mohabbat-Kiran - Page 14

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Sun mill gaya pm janu...aur haan karti hoon conitnue!

Originally posted by: kahish-rox

btw main ne kal tere liye ka turning point aur climax scene dekha..its great..u will love it!!

can someone give me the links to where the rest of the parts to this story is pleaseee im dying to read it 😳

jaanvu tere liye to FANFICTION walay link per hai...idhar post ekr doon?

yaar abhi main Tere Liye bhi shuroo se post kerti hoon yahan

Tere Liye!!!

Characters:

The Garewals:
Misha Garewal: She is a strong and a very promising woman. She is the head of the family as she has taken divorce from her husbamd, CG, who had an affair with anotrher woman..She takes care of her family and the business as well. A very intelligent and sharp woman who is very responsible.She is a businesswoman but is aware of her duties as a mother..She takes good care of her children and loves them a lot..Overall, she is a very successful woman, a great mother.
Sujal Garewal: The hero of the story...He is an eligible bachelor of 24...a very good and responsible son, a wonderful brother...he is not a very prim and proper person...he is still a young boy...doesnt dress formally but casually...shirts, jeans, caps, craperies and stuff...he is a very proud, arrogant and full of attitude person...very hard from outside but sft from inside...cuz of his father his family ahs been ruines so he hates him and is VERYYYY close to his mother and sister
Kamal Garewal: he is Misha's devar and Sujal's chacu...the cute and sweet chachu who is like father and very understadning...almost worships his Bhabhi and loves his children A LOT!!
Charru Garewal: well she is the cute and adorable sister and daughter...a sweet gurl of 20 years...she is a very open minded gurl and loves her family a lot


The Sinhas:
Arindam Sinha: he is a proud man who is always relatedand concerned abt his business,,,always going around the world fro business....doesnt care for his family (his wife is dead)
Shobha Sinha: the cute and sweet gurl of teh family,...she is a very responsible and a very cute gurl...the GOOD GOOD gurl who deosnt do anything wrong..and is loved by everyone
Kashish Sinha: this gurl is the heroine...the beautiful and cute girl...but she is not the savatri type...as her mother died when she was born, her father never loved her as he held her responsible for her mother's death...so due to his rude beahviour she has become stubborn, lives fro herself and is quite impertinent at times as well


The Rahejas
Lalit Raheja: he is a wise businessman...(the type in KTh so i cant explain)
Vassu Raheja: well this woman is the devil...always criticising and taunting...exactly like our VASSU AUNTY
Veer Raheja: Veer is a stubborn person who works with his father...he is not bad but he is a botn rude still a good guy (played by PIYUSH)


The Shergills:
Aditya Shergil: (the man from K.Street Pali Hill called aditya) he is a very storng-minded and kind person..a very good father and an extra good husband...the ideal person...good in business
Ishita Shergil: (Aditya's wife in K.Street) well seh is the msot sweet, and caring person...she is an excellent mother and a veru understanding woman...housewife and a very devoted person
Akshat Shergil: the good boy...mama's pet and father's soul..the janu Akshat of all of us!!

First of all lets see teh relationships btw these 4 families...
The Garewals are very good friends of the Raheja's....
The Sinhas are best friends with the Shergills...as their father is always away so for Kashish and Shobha Aditya is like a father and Ishita is the mother....Kashish is specially close to Ishita and is like her daughter....Kashish's best friend is Akshat...and Akshat's good friend is Sujal...well here is the first part of the story...hope u like it!

Subbah ka waqt hai aur Simla barf main lipta hua hai...sab log apnay apnay kamon per nikalnay ke liye tayar hain...
Aik barra sa ghar hai...mandir main kharri aik larki hao jo pooja kar rahi hai..woh pooja karnay ke baad wahan se chalti hui aik kamra main jati hai jahan aik elderly insan koi file parh raha hai...
Girl: Good Morning Papa!!!
woh insan murr ker dekhta hai with an exasperated look on the face..lekin uss larki ko dekhtay hi uss ke chehray per smile ati hai..this is Arindam Sinha
Arindam: Shobha! tum itni jaldi uth gayi?
Shobha: jee haan...aj ramu-kaka chuti per hain to ap ka nashta main ne hi bana diya hai...ap ki chaye table per rakhi hai aur newspaper bhi...(Arindam takes the blessings from teh pooja)
Arindam: aj tumhara interview hai na?
Shobha: jee Papa...i hope aj sab theek ho jaye
Arindam: tum tension na lo sab theek hi rahay ga!
Shobha: aj main hi drive ker ke ley jaon gi kyunki driver ki tabiyat theek nahi hai...Kashish ko Akshat ke ghar jana hai iss liye ussay bhi main drop ker doon gi!
Arindam: theek hai!
Shobha: Papa...aj Kashish ka birthday....
Arindam: Shobha aj mujhey America jana hai...wahn aik bhut hi important meeting hai..i will be away for a mont...yahan sab tumharay hawalay hai..mujhey late ho raha hai main chalta hoon!
Shbha: Papa aj Kashish ka birthday hai aur...
Arindam leaves without listening to her...Shobha looks at the door, disappointed and then leaves the pooja thali on the tabkle and leaves the room.
Shobha aik aur kamray main jatti hai jahan bed per koi gehri neend main soya hua hai....kamra bhut khubsurati se sajja hua hai..full with balloons and flowers...Shobha ahista se bed pe ja ker bethti hai aur chehray per se blanket hatati hai...aik bhut hi pyara and masoom sa chehra hai jiss per masoomiat aur itmenan hai...ankhain band hai aur baal chehray ke gird ghiray hain...Shobha uss ke chehray se baal hatati hai aur forehead per kiss kerti hai...woh larki ahista se apni ankhain kholti hai
Shobha: Happy Birthday Kashish!
Kashish smiles and wakes up, aur bethti hai
Shobha: Many many happy returns of the day honey!
Kashish smiles and then looks around the room and has a surprised look on her face
Kashish: yeh sab kia hai?
Shobha: meri taraf se tumharay liye aik chota sa gift!
Kashish hugs Shobha
Kashish: Thanks a lot Di!! i love u for this!
Shobha: acha ab jaldi se tayar ho jaa...mujhey late ho jaye ga aj mera interview hai...tujhey waissey bhi Akshat ke ghar jana hai...jaldi se tayar ho jao
She gets up lekkin Kashish uss ko phir se bitha deti hai
Kashish: Di...ap ne kaha tha ke mere liye bhut barra surprise hai..batao na kia hai?
Shobha: abhi nahi...aj raat ki party main
Kashish: please Di ab bata bhi do
Shobha: kaha na party main....tu ne sab ko bula liya hai na?
Kashish: haan...main ne Akshat ko kaha tha...adhay log uss ne bulaye aur adhay main ne...now i hope ke Hitler aker sab kharab na ker dey
Shobha lightly hits Kashish
Shobha: chup! Papa hain woh tumharay...aissey nahi boltay...aur waisey bhi Papa aj America chalay gaye hain
Kashish: oh...I see....unhain mera birthday bhi yaad nahi hai...
Shobha: nahi Kashish...aissi baat nahi hai..Papa ne tumhain wish karna tha lekin....
Kashish: mujh se jhoot na bolo Di...aj takk kabhi bhi woh meri birthday per gahr pe nahi rahay...khair ab jaldi karo mujhey late ho raha hai!
Shobha: late mujhey ho raha hai...jaldi se aker nashta ker le
Kashish: oh no Di...aj to Ishita-mom ne mere liye apnay special Alu ke Parathay banaye hain...specially mere liye...and u know ke i cant resist Alu ka Parathas woh bhi Ishita-mom ke haathon ke banaye huay (Kashish calls Ishita Mom cuz she is like a mom to her)
Shobha: acha jaldi kar...main tujhey Akshat ke gahr chor doon gi...chalo!!
Kashish gets up and goes inside the bathroom to change and Shobha goes out of the room

Kashish comes out of the house wearing a shocking pink shirt and white pant with a whit cap (exactly like in the promo pf Sun Leyna) she has hair loose and is looking WOWW!!!
She sits with Shobha in the car and starts talking....After some time, Shobha stops the car at a HUGE mansion and Kashish gets down, waves to Shobha and goes inside the house and Shobha leaves!
Kashish ghar main enter hoti hai...wahan hall main koi nahi hota...
Kashish: aj bhi sba apnay kamron main hain! Chalo...sab ko main hi bahir nikalti hoon!
She goes upstairs and enters a room....wahan aik aged couple hug ker rahy hottay hain
Kashis stands at the door and sees this, laughing
Kashish: Ahem-Ahem!!!
Woh couple separate hotay hain....two very smiling people stand there...yes they are Aditya and Ishita!
Kashish goes inside the room
Kashish: mujhey samajh nahi ati ke jiss ghar main ITNAY romantic log rehtay hain woh darwaza band kyun nahi kartay?
Ishita smiles
Ishita: Happy Birthday darling! May u have a very longg life!
Ishita hugs Kashish and kisses her on her cheeks
Kashish: thanks a lot mumma....
Aditya: Kashish...apni mumma se hi gallay millo gi?bhayi aj tumhari birthday hai koi hug shug ho jaye!
Kashish: Adi-Unclee!!! (she says while hugging him and laughing) birthday to wish karain!
Aditya: happy Birthday my child!
Kashish: thanks a lot! ab yeh bataiye ke ap ke laad-sahib kahan hain?
Aditya: bhai uss ka dost aya hua hai...ussi ke saath kamray main hai...ja ker mill lo
Kashish: theek hai..main abhi ati hoom...mom...alu ke parathay?
Ishita: haan haan bana deti hoon...jaldi ana main abhi bana ker deti hoon
Kashish leaves the room...she goes to another room humming to herself...and chewing her gum....she enters the room carelessly and shout out: AKSHHAATTT!!!!

Kashish enters the room without caring that anyone would be stting insie...she opens the door and shouts out AKSHATTT!!!
Bed per betah hua aik larka murr ker dekhta hai...he is wearig a sleeveless blue shirt and off-white craperies..he looks behind and a smile spreads on his face...he jumps up from the bed and runs towards Kashish...woh Kashish ko hug ker leta hai
Akshat: Happy Birthday Kashish!
Kashish: Thanks a lot..(phir apnay bag se ussay marnay shuroo ho jati hai)stupid...idiot...u fool...itni dair se yahan kia ker rahya ho? main ne kaha tha na ke jaldi tayar ho jana...aur yeh kia pehna hua hai?
Akshat: dekho main tayar hoon
Kashish: no way! tum yeh kapray pehen ker merey saath nahi ja rahay...(she drags her to teh cupboard and starts taking out clothes) umm...yeh nahi...tum..aissa ero ke YEh wallay kapray pehno!
Akshat: no Kashish...main yeh bhut dafa pehen chuka hoon
Kashish: kyunki sirf yehi kapray tumhain suit kertey hain! now shut up and go and change...main wiat ker rahi hoon!
Akshat: lekin mera friend....
Kashish doesnt even look back to see what friend
Kashish: tumhari best friend kaun? main na...to meri baat manno aur jaldi karo
Akshat: Kashish mera friend yahiin betha hai (in her ear)
Kashish turns back to look at a guy standing in front of her....he is wearing a balck olo neck with jeans and looking tooo good
Kashish: oopppss! (in Akshat's ears) pehley batana chahiye tha na...
Akshat: kisi ko bolnay ka mauqa deti ho tum kia?
Kashish: acha introduction to karao
Akshat: oh haan....Kashish yeh hai...
Guy: Akshat....ur mom's calling u since the past 2 minutes...u go ahead i will introduce myself!
Akshat: ok....jaldi ajao neechey.
Akshat leaves aur Kahsish is left in the presence of that stranger
Guy: Hi.....main Akshat ka friend hoon...Sujal Garewal!
Kashish: oh to tum Sujal ho jiss ke barray main Aki itni baatain karta hai....
Sujal: Aki???
Kashish: oh tahts what i call Akshat..by the way i am..
Sujal: Kashish...janta hoon
'He raises her hand in front of her....Kashish is about 5 steps away from her...she comes nearer and trips over the stool she hadnt seen...she is about to fall when Sujal holds her at once..
Sujal: you alright?
Kashish: yeah..thanks!
Sujal: no problem...By the way...Happy Birthday!!!!
Kashish: oh....to tumhain mera birthday ka pata hai...thanks a lot!
Sujal: ap ki harr baat pata hai mujhye...Akshat bhut baat karta hai ap ke barray main!
Kashish: sab se pehli baat...tum mujhey AP na bolo....kyunki ab to hum friends hain na
Sujal: friends? itni jaldi?
Kashish: friendship karnay main kaun sa koi sadiyan lagti hain...pal do pal kii baat hoti hai...mujhey lagta hai keh humari friendship hut jammay gi...what say? Friends?
she raises her hand in front of him...he thinks for a moment and hold her hand
Kashish: very good...to aj mera birthday hai aur tumhain wahan zaroor ana hai..ao gay na?
Sujal: haan...annay ki koshish karoon ga
Kashish: koshish nahi paka ao gay...mein tumhai apni Di se milaon gi...aj un ka interview hai..i hope everything goes well
Sujal: dont worry it will be ok....so what do u do?
Kashish: aj kal to fashion designing ker rahi hoon...pata nahi kaun si museebat ko pallay daal liya hai
Sujal: ahan..'
they start walking towards the hall while talking
Just then Aditya comes form behind
Adi: arey Sujal beta tum aye huay ho....mujhey laga ke Ronit hai...khair aur sunao kia chal raha hai?
Sujal: kuch nahi Adi Uncle...bass chal raha hai...office main sab theek hai
Adi: Misha? Charru? Kamal? sab theek?
Sujal: yes uncle perfectly fine...infact aj to mumma yahan arahi hain
Adi: excellent...muujhey Misha se koi baat karni hai...Kashish Arindam kahan hai?
Kashish: hamesha ki tarah se woh aj bhi meri birthday per America chalay gaye hain
Adi: yeh Arindam bhi na...kitni baar samjhaya hai ussay...khair choro...excuse me meri call arahi hai!
he leaves them alone
Sujal: tum apnay papa ki baat ker rahi ho na?
Kashish: Papa? Papa na hi kaho unhain....aj ke din bhi merey saath nahi hain...khair i dont care
Sujal: lagta hai tumhari Papa se banti nahi hai
Kashish: banana bhi nahi chahti...khari yeh choro...mera mood kharab ho jaye ga....tum apni family ke barray main batao
Sujal: meri family....meri family mein Charru hai,meri choti behen...Chachu hain aur sab se important mumma hain
Kashish: tumhari mumma bhi hain?
Sujal: haan to sab ki hoti hain
Kashish: sab ki nahi hoti...khushnaseeb logon ki hoti hai
Sujal: kia matlab?
Kashish: my mom's dead!
Sujal: i am sorry!
Kashish: its ok..khair tum batao ke tum apni mom se milao gay na?
Sujal: haan sure...kyun nahi?balkay mumma abhi aj yahan arahi hain....Chachu, Mumma ayur Charru,...yahiin mil lena
Kashish: great! abhi chalo bhi...merey pait main choohay nahi hathi dorr rahay hain! chalo bhi...
They go to the dining table where the nashta is set
Ishita: arey tum log agaye...acha hua...nashta bilkul tayar hai...ao betho! Sujal beta betho
they all sit down to eat
Kashish: wow mumma...ap ne to bhut sarri cheezain banayi hain...woh bhi meri favourite
Ishita: aj tera birthday hai na issi liye
Akshat: oh no! matlab wohi sarri boring cheezain....alu ke parathay, gajar ka halwa...
Sujal: wooo!!! yeh sab to meri bhi favourite hain..
Kashish: really? dekha Akshat...ab tumhain yaqeen ho gaya na ke achay logon ki choices achi hi hoti hain....ab harr waqt continental khanna khana acha nahi hota...pata nahi kiss angraiz ka asar hua hai tum per
Akshat: ab aissi baat nahi hai....Sujal bolo na..batao issay ke mujhey kia kia pasand hai
Sujal: ab bol doon ga to tere sarray poll khul jayengay
Akshat: haan...to behtar hai tum chup hi raho
Ishita: acha yeh sab choro...Kashish beta..aj tumhara birthday celebration se pehley tumhari mumma ki barsi ke liye pooja rakhwayi hai...tum aur Shobha ajana...aur Arindam ko bhi ley ana
Kashish: mumma.....ab to ap ko aadat ho jani chahiye ke woh meri birthday per yahan kabhi nahi hoti...Infact kabhi bhi mere se judi kisi bhi ahem din per woh mere saath nahi hottay...anyways main aur Di ajayengay....pooja yahan rakhi hai?
Ishita: haan...ghar per...tum mind na karo to main ne Misha logon ko bhi bulla liya hai
Kashish: come on mumma...iss main mind kerne ki kia baat hai? ap ko poora haq hai..jissay chahy bulla lein
Ishita: waisey Shobha kahan hai?
Kashish: Di ka aj interview hai....wahiin gayi hain...khair Akshat tum mere saath ghar decorate kar rahay ho na?
Akshat: oh no! main to bilkul bhool gaya tha....sorry Kashish lekin aj mujhey bhut zaroori kaam hai
Kashish: this is not done Akshat...please..main akeli ghar kaisay set karoon gi?naukar bhi gahr per nahin hain
Akshat: i am sorry Kashish...
Sujal: umm....Kashish I can help u...i am free...that is only if u dont have any problem
Kashish: arey mujhey kia problem ho skati hai? yeh to acha hai ke tumharay saath aur waqt mill jaye ga...u r most welcome....oh haan...thanks
Sujal: you are welcome!
Just then the bell rings
Darwaza kholnay per enter hottay hain.....

Sujal and Kashish meet for the first time and become good friends...They are having breakfast over at Akshat's house when the doorbell rings
Ishita: lagta hai Shobha agayi....Tushar ja ker darwaza khol
A very lame looking, stupid kind of guy with a very long face comes there...he has the look as if he will cry now...no expressions...he comes there wearing an apron, a brown untidy shirt and old jeans...He puts down the parathas
Tushar starts going bac to teh kitchen
Ishita: tu ne suna nahi main ne tujhye kia kaha?
Tushar doesn't listen as if he is dead...Kashish laughs and nudges Sujal..as if she is going to do something funny
Kashish: mumma rehney do....umm....(she speaks loudly) Tooooooooshar!
Tushar suddenly moves around quickly
Tushar: kisi ne bulaya?
Kashish: Tooooshar...woh darwazay per koi aya hai na Tooooshar...to Toooshar tum plz ja ker darwaza khol do...
Tushar: huh?
Kashish: Tushki baby.....jao darwaza kholo! (teasing him)
Tushar: mujhey tushki na kaho....bolo kia kaam hai?
Kashish: (in Sujal's ears) chaar ghantay cheeko gay phir bhi iss dumbo ko samajh nahi ayegi....umm...Tooooshar...DARWAZA KHOLOO!!!
Tushar: chilati kyun ho...kholta hoon
Kashish: nawazish apki...tum na kholtay to mein to marr jati..jerk! mumma...plz issay nikalay...plz! bhut irritate kerta hai...aur uss se zoada stupid ekta-mayi...oh Sujal i wonder...tum ektamayi se to nahi millay na?
Sujal shakes his head as a no
Kashish: great main millwaon gi...she is a character....Tooooooshar...kaun hai?
She turns in her seat to see keh kaun aya hai
She sees a woman clad in a black sarri with short hair...very attractive..behind her is walking a short chubby cute sa man and behind him a girl of round about 20...she is wearing a blue T-shirt and jeans...
They very friendly meet everyone...kashish is still not getting who these people are
Misha: Ishita...alu ke parathay? baray dinnon baad banaye hain..
Ishita: haan aj Kashish ka birthday hai na iss liye (she nods and smiles at Kashish)
Till then no ne has seen Kashish cuz she is sitting at a side...Misha turns to see who Ishita is talking about
Misha's mouth opens and a smile appears...she comes towards Kashish and Kashish stands up to meet her
Misha takes Kashish's face in her hands
Misha: kitni barri ho gayi hai....Kashish...apnay naam ki tarah bhut khubsurat hai! Ishita...bilkul Kusum jaisi dikhti hai na (kusum is Kashish's mother)
Kashish: ap meri mom ko janti thi?
Misha: haan...Kusum, main aur Ishita bhut achay dost thay...college se hi...phir main London shift ho gayi shadi ke baad...
Kashish: oh....main apni mom jaisi lagti hoon kia?
Misha: lagti ho? lagta hai Kusum ki copy ker ke khara kar dia ho...(she laughs)
Kashish smiles...
Kamal comes over
Kamal: Kashish...bhut pyara naam hai aur bhut pyari ho
Kashish: thanks a lot!
Kamal: introduction karwatay hain...main Kamal hoon...Sujal ka chachu!
Kashish: ap...Sujal...tum ne bataya kyun nahi?
Sujal: bolnay kahan deti ho tum?
Kashish glares at him
Charru comes over
Charru: hi...
Kashish: let me guess....tum Sujal ki choti behen ho...umm...
Charru: Charru....Charru naam hai mera
Kashish: oh haan...Charru...cute name
Charru: thanks...oh by the way...Happy Birthday!
Kashish: thanks a lot...all of u are invited to my birthday party tonight...ap sab please ayie ga!
Misha: haan haanz aroor ayen gay...
Just then the doorbell rings again
Tushar goes tomsee who it is
Shobha enters...she meets all of them...after some time Kashish and Sujal leave for their shopping spree for the party!