Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 77

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow wonderful update.. luved the trap for Mr.O.. gud tht he is arrested.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr888 update.
Finally Mr.O has trapped.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago
finally Mr O's charade is over, please do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update Geet 👏 👏 👏

End of the Mr. O ka saga. 😃

Me likey 😉 ......maybe Maaneet can take a trip to make themselves feel better and enjoy each other's company 😉

👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
yayy!!! an end to the diabolical Mr.O!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
MR>O chapter is closed!!!

superb update....looking forward to sum cute maneet scenes!!!

continue sooN!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht's gr8 nd nw tht Mr.O is out now nd now i'm happy tht manneet is rocking like alwys loved it nd update the nxt soonnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
thankgod!! finally MR.O went to the place he belonged to.!!
want to see what happens next !!plz update ASAP

Edited by abhi402 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
HEllo darlings!🤗

Who's up for some romance? LOL..
I will try n keep the mush out n bring some light-heartedness back before seriousness returns again..LOL

Update will be posted in a an hour or two


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Posted: 14 years ago
Vicky had told Rajji to stay in his room where he could ensure she would be safe.

Rajji jumped from the bed where she was sitting cross-legged
Rajji- is everything okay?

Vicky- yes. Bhabhs had told me to wait for her signal and thank God that part went off smoothly.
So- it's all good! and we should celebrate

Vicky leaned back on the bed while Rajji smiled

Rajji- yes. A celebration would be great..but you were supposed to teach me something today na?

Vicky- hmm...I don't remember. what was it?

Rajji- UFF...Let it be. You have a horrible memory.Ek din main bhi yaad nahi rahoongi..hmph..

Vicky (to himself)- ek theory nahi samjhai toh itna naraaz ho gayi..😆

He got up
and came to her..placed a hand on her shoulder

Rajji- hmph..bade aaye..Vicky Khurana. Forget it- I will go do it myself

Vicky- oho..Don't be angry. Tell me something- do you really want to study the laws of economics when such a huge museebat has gone away? LEt's have some fun

Rajji- but..

Vicky- Let's throw bhabhs n bro a huge bash

Rajji- but..

Vicky- ...with champagne, music..OR better still- let's set them up on a date!

Rajji(to herself)- no point. He has gone cuckoo... apne aap se baatein kar rahe hain..conveniently forgetting me..has he always been so alone?

Vicky- haan? Did you say something?

Rajji- nope. GO ahead..I'll help you arrange a romantic setting for them.😊

But Maan and Geet of course didn't need anything such.
Far had they come from the days of going for a date..They had traversed many areas now..her past and his past being the two major ones

They were still downstairs hugging each other..drawing solace from the ordeal they had both gone through

Maan- I thought I would lose you..
Geet- so did I..Please never let me go away even for a second from you..

Maan pulled back
Maan- It was your plan
Geet- Yeh sahi hai..blame me for everything, why don't you?

Maan- Tumne hi toh kaha tha yeh karo..

Geet- toh aapne kar diya? Kyun? Meri har baat maanna zaroori hai kya??

Maan- Geet...Bas karo tum. Chalo..hum bahar jaa rahe hain

Geet- Don't you stop me from speaking.

MAan- toh apna point bolo naa

Geet came closer to him and cupped his face

Geet- my point is that I want to be with you hamesha hamesha ke liye

Maan bumped his head with hers

Maan- woh toh hum rahenge na..how can you forget..we're married😆

Geet- MAAN....😡Aap toh na..rehne dijiye. You just love to tease me.
Ab mujhe padhaiyega kaun?

Maan's face shadowed as Geet realized what she has said

Maan turned away

Geet- I'm sorry..

Maan- Jaanti ho Geet...He gave me my mothers' last words.

Geet put a hand on his shoulder
Geet- does that make you feel better?

Maan- It actually does. A lot.
I know..maa is there watching over me now. and i know she would have approved of you

Geet smiled

MAan- after all...bilkul sherni bahu mili unhe!!

Geet- hmmm..sherni haan? Chalo...Aaj dikhati hoon sherni..

Maan- but..Geet...

Geet- Don't worry Maan, Maa yeh nahi dekhengi😆

Maan-uh..woh..mera matlab..

She drags him to the outhouse, where he picks her up and carries her to the bedroom

MAan places her on the bed

and comes closer to her

Maan- hmmm...kyaa keh rahi thi..?

Geet- uh..woh..main...😳

Maan- Chup...bilkul chup

As Maan is about to close the distance between them the phone rings

MAan -😡AB kaun hai??

Geet- hello

Vicky- bhabhs..suniye...you and bro are having lunch with us..so come for lunch.
I'm cooking

Geet- KYAA?/?

Maan got up and looked at her questioningly..she shook her head

Geet- Please..don't. I'm coming..please stop it

Maan- kya hua Geet?

Geet- Aapka bhai..is making lunch

Maan- KYAA? Use jaane kisne diya kitchen ke paas??

Geet- I'm going Maan..I have to save the house from destruction that might happen

Maan- par Geet suno..hum..thodi der baad bhi toh..(she went) jaa sakte the
VICKY😡

In the mansion

Vicky- Arre..leave...chhodo..Rajji..leave my hand

Rajji- Oho..Vicky..LEt me..please..don't.LEAVE that brinjal!!

Geet- Yeh kyaa kar rahe ho tum dono?
Rajji I told you to always keep him away from the kitchen

Rajji- di..I tried..

Geet- Vicky.. LEt that go. Let me cook.

Rajji- haan..sure..di..I will cook and then we will go out for lunch while you and jeeju can stay here

Vicky- HEYY...😡Aaj ka lunch..

Maan- MAAN SINGH KHURANA banayega

Geet- lo...aa gaye..the Chef Khurana..aayiye..aap hi ka intezaar tha..

Maan glared at Geet and then at Vicky and then at Rajji

Rajji wondered what she had done

Vicky- er.r..bro...

Maan- Vicky, take Rajji out for lunch.

Rajji- but jeej...

Maan silenced her with a glare

They left

MAan(to Geet)- haan...

Geet- yeh aapko..achanak kya ho gaya hai?

Maan- Geet...jab mujhe jo chahiye ho aur woh na mile...toh ...main aisa ho jaata hoon..

Geet- Kya chahiye tha aapko?

Maan- No interruptions from anyone

Geet- Why? what were you doing ?

Maan- Oh you wait..let's have lunch and I will tell you and show you exactly what I was about to do

Geet- Maan..

Maan- chup...bilkul chup..ab chup chaap achhi bachhi ki tarha baithi and let me cook for u

Geet- hmm..

Maan- Bolo na Geet

Geet- abhi toh bola..chup karo

MAan- What do you want for lunch..?

Geet- you really want to know that?

Maan- That is dessert. apart from that

Geet- oh..well..whatever you cook. I'll be happy even with a sandwich cooked with love

Maan decided to cook Raajma chawal for her..
Told Geet to go get fresh

Geet- Nahi...I want to see you cook.

MAan cooked while Geet watched.
MAan got his hand burnt

Maan- Owwwww....

Geet rushed to him and made him sit down
Kissed his fingers and said

Geet- bas. Koi khana nahi banayenge aap. Go sit there. I will go get ready. We are going out for lunch.

Maan-but...

Geet- nahi. You won't say anything. now stay here while I put medicine.

Maan- Tum kaafi ho...no dawai needed..

Geet gently took his hands in hers and kissed his fingers one by one after blowing on them

Geet- achha lag raha hai

Maan's eyes were closed

Geet smiled

Maan- Geet...I'm hungry
Geet- Toh chalo Maan..

They went out for lunch and had ice cream later...

Geet- itne dinno se thik se khaana nahi khaya aapne..u never take care of urself.but now..I won't let anything happen to you..samjhe aap?
MAan nodded

Maan- ab ghar chalein
Geet- hmm

They saw Rajji and Vicky, laughing at something at the other end of the room

Geet- Maan...dekhiye

Maan- dekh hi toh raha hoon

Geet- arre mujhe nahi Vicky ko

Maan- Kya?
Maan looked

Geet and Maan looked at each other

Geet-I wonder if...something's cooking...

Maan- yes. I am. Lets go home please.😆

Finally Maan got his wish that evening. his need to be close and connected to her was getting unbearable..he knew Geet felt it too , but was able to hide it..He needed to be with her, to love her and hold her in his arms..and so he did.

They spent a blissful night..both calm and happy, and most importantly- with each other

That's it for today
I'm sorry guys..I couldn't add more romance and humor..guess I'm tired..
anyway, hope u all at least find a change from Mr O's track now!

😆

love


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