Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 71

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update!!!

cant wait for the next part!!!

pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

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Posted: 14 years ago
intresting damaka!!!!
waiting for the next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
Totally superb update👏.... Awesome is an understatement.....
I had guessed that his mum might have cheated his father..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey really nice update ya... I like the twists... gr8 going... I really wanna know how Maaneet will tackle this situation
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Posted: 14 years ago
sooo awsome update
really nice
update real soon
love
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: geet.a

@ all- thanks guys...

Its NOT a dream tishuu baby... The dream is diff.
Things with mr o happened



But but but at that moment it was a dream ryt, woh confrontation in front of geet dint hapz yet, maan did nt in reality feel broken ryt cos geet dint believe him? I really hpe team maaneet and rajky sort out this twistd demented man!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet woke up with a heavy heart.

SHe had refused to let Maan talk last night...but had sensed the amount of pain he was going through.
How could he think I was leaving him?, she thought angrily..
He still believes he is a killer..but I refuse to believe so..
There is something missing.

MAan was pacing in the bathroom
Something doesn't quite figure...
Could it be that...that I didn't kill anyone?
Could it be that....that I'm not the monster?

I must talk to Geet...

He came out and saw Geet likewise occupied in thought

Maan(softly)- Geet...

Geet jumped

Geet- Maan...
Before you say something, I want to tell you that I trust you implicitly..I always will.
You are a life-giver. Not a life-taker.
You saved a mother's life.
You saved the life of an exploited girl.
You can never be a killer...You could never have been.
The way you talked to me about 'maa' you loved her too much.
That man- Maan he told me a horrible tale.
but I KNOW it was a tale..it was a lie.
MY Maan..never killed. THE MAan Singh Khurana- is not a killer.
A mother's loving son- can never be that.
I trust you MAAN...And I will stand by you at all times.

Maan- Geet...You scared me yesterday. When you went away from that room..you left me cold..and unwilling to live.
Geet please..never do this to me. It might just kill me.

Geet- shhh...chup..bilkul chup.

(she whispered)

MAan- Geet..tell me please..what all did he say to you.

He touched her forehead where the cut was...a gentle touch

Maan- He had the nerve to touch you😡

Geet told him what mr O had said

Maan- He's a liar. HE is a cheat,a brute and a liar.
It is true I hated him but my reasons were that I knew what he wanted..I had overheard him on the phone and when I told maa, she scolded me and laughed it away.
So I went and told Dad that this man was troubling maa..and so Dad went to confront him in the room where he was forcing himself on Maa..so that she signs over everything to him
To protect me- that is what she had told him. Dad had given things over to Maa because he loved her so much, and she to me. So, To protect me from him, she lied and refused to sign.
HE took out a gun when my dad entered the room and I at his heels.

Maan's voice broke..Geet stayed silent and gave him strength with her eyes. She put a hand on his cheek

Maan continued
Maan- he...he..shot at my father.. and maa leaped at him.
In their struggle, the gun slipped away and I picked it up...

Geet-😭😲

MAan- I...HE slapped maa..Geet...he slapped maa...
And so...so I threw the gun and leapt at him..pushing maa aside...
But he...he was strong and he threw me across the room..and I ...

Geet at this moment

Geet- 😭
She broke down completely when she saw MAan going down on his knees

MAan had his head in his hands
MAan- I...I picked up the gun...again..and shot blindly to make them stop.
And fainted
NExt thing I know..HE was not there...
And maa...maa....
The gun was still in my hands Geet...
And Maan broke down completely

Geet hugged Maan
Geet- shhh..Maan..shh...aap ki koi galti nahi MAan.
Aapne kabhi bhi socha that he ran away...and put all blame on you...a child at that time?
He made a false narrative..
You didn't kill . HE did..and he will be punished..

For the first time, she wiped his tears and made him look into her own eyes, glowing with love

Maan- Geet..?
Geet- Yaad hai..Mr Chopra had said we made a great team? Well..we do, don't we?
Maine aapse kaha tha..Maan aur Geet ke beech koi nahi aa sakta.
MEre MAan ko jisne itna dukh diya...use keemat chukani padegi

Maan- You mean..?

Geet smiled

Maan- but he's too dangerous. he wants me to sign over everything.

He told her all that Mr O had said

Geet- Maan..LEt him get that false sense of victory...He doesn't know your style of signing...LEt, Vicky sign...We need them in this plan- both Vicky and Rajji

Maan- No. It's too dangerous.

Geet- Maan..family. He destroyed a family. It's only right that the family destroys him. MY family...OUR family. There is no one more important than you for me. Vicky and Rajji are a part of this home. My home. and therefore of me. YOU and ME together therefore will destroy that killer.

MAan now got up with a vigour and zeal.
MAan- Ek ek aansun ka badla chukayega woh. You are right. Let's back trap him. Let me think of something..

They spent the next two hours making plans..and came up with the plan...to trap the man who sought to separate Maan from Geet.


Vicky- rajji

Vicky- Why are you so quiet?

Rajji, who was lost in abstracted thought didn't answer

Vicky- Rajji!!

Rajji- hmmm?

Vicky- What happened?

Rajji- Everyone is troubled in the house. I don't understand. Jab se didi ke Sir aayein hain..tab se..jeeju, aur didi dono bohot pareshaan lagte hain

vicky- I know..I noticed...Somehow I think he looks familiar..Like I have seen him...MEt him before..

Rajji- shayad pichle janam mein..😆

Vicky-😆 tum bhi naa...
Listen..I had fun last night

Rajji-😳 me too..I told you it would be fun..You should listen to me more you know..

vicky- Yes maam...
to himself- lagta hai poori life yahi karna padega..
Bhabhi ko bataunga..uske baad bro ko pata chalega..aur phir rajji..won't give her any kind of fear or pain of either bro or bhabhs or dadi..

Rajji was thinking- I wonder what's troubling him now..
Kya hua??

Vicky- hmm..nahi..I have to go talk to bhabhi.

Rajji- okay..I'll come with...

Vicky- Nahi...you..uh..You stay here..I will just be back..

But that time, Vicky's cell phone rang.
Vicky- Ji..ji...ji..okay..ji ...rajji? Okay..ji

Rajji- ohh..ji ji ji...bolo ji..kya hua?

vicky- Calling us..bhabhs n bro need to talk about something very important

Rajji looked at him with scared eyes

Vicky put a hand on her shoulder
Vicky- don't worry..I'm here with you😃

And they went to get the shock of their lives...



Alrighty guys..I will continue tomorrow...Have to write some other stuff too

take care!
hope it wasn't too heavy or anything.
Love to all

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Posted: 14 years ago
@TISHUU- confrontation happened...that is why na..thoda mess up ho gaya tha that i sorted out.
There is a line there...

After MR O goes away.

ThEN MAan is having a dream at night becoz hes thinking of what happened..but Geet refuses to talk about it at night cuz he's screaming in agony etc..

She made him feel that way for a reason..but maan got tortured n all...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for pm
I will comment then after I read
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
once again a nice update.. waiting to know how the story unfolds

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