Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 66

Created

Last reply

Replies

983

Views

235.7k

Users

133

Likes

3.3k

Frequent Posters

geet.a thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

geet is so cut & adorable thanxs for the update

I can see ur back in form...
love u
yaar heart brain sole wala update bhi karna...regularly..plz plz


muski..hey!!!

Long time!!🤗

I see you have been updating a lot..I will check it all out on the weekend and comment!!

HEart-brain and soul..I will try darling..but ab toh koi kashmakash nahi hai na...
zubi123 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
nice updated bt Mr,o is really irritating nd i jst suggest u tht u tke the whole truth infront of geet nd thn geet shuld mke maan understnd tht he is not responsible fr his mother death. hope u will sort out each nd everythng properly nd softly without any misunderstnd creatng btwn maneeet nd updatet the nxt soon
geet.a thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
UPDATE

MAan ran upstairs...taking 2 stairs at a time and reached the bedroom to see Rajji crying...

HEart in his throat..Maan asked her what's wrong..

MAan- What's wrong?? where's she?

Vicky- she's inside bro..not responding..and I really..

Maan silenced him with a look

Maan- go out. Take her with you. I will open the door.
Get out of the way

Maan knocked

MAan- Geet...geet...Geeeeeet!!!!

No reply

Vicky took Rajji out of the room..unnoticed by Maan

Maan broke open the door with some force to find Geet naked..splayed across the bath tub with a cut on her head

MAan rushed to her

MAan- GEEt...

Tears in his eyes, and scared..he took her in his arms and brought her to the bed...covered her after observing more wounds..there were none

MAan caressed her forehead and wiped the blood off her cut...bandaged it and sprinkled some water on her face

Her eyes flickered..she opened them gently...a searing headache..She wondered what had happened..
Maan came into focus..her Maan..

Geet- Ma-an

MAan- Geet...

And he gathered her into his arms

Maan- kya ho gaya Geet...tumhe kisi ne kuchh kaha? kya hua?

Geet was feeling woozy still...and thought of what had happened

She had gone into the bathroom to change her clothes and stared at her tired face

Geet thought- wow..so much has been happening...And flash backs of all that had happened in the past few weeks came into her mind

She was overwhelmed with some lines that kept repeating
'I am a killer' 'I am a killer' 'go away from me'

'be careful Geet'

'we'll meet again..soon'

She felt overwhelmed and then...she started to feel dizzy...
She wondered why...and she remembered the tea she was drinking while doing her questions..

And into the present, as she stared into Maan's eyes

Geet- ..Sir..?

Maan- Geet..? What are you talking about?

Geet thought- nope..That isn't possible..I must be tired..I won't annoy him..

but her head cut..?

Maan- Geet...please..bolo..kuchh toh bolo

Geet- Maan..I fainted...I was overwhelmed with everything that had happened...and then suddenly..I fainted I think..I might have hit my head somewhere..I was changing..was going out with Vicky..I must have fainted..haan..

she smiled gently and cupped Maan's face

Geet- don't worry please. I am fine. It's okay

MAan- Geet..please..I don't care. You are staying with me for some time now.

Geet- Poori life Maan..I will stay with you forever

MAan touched her bandaged cut gently and kissed her on the lips..a gentle kiss

Maan- Chalo..dinner laata hoon tumhare liye

Geet- suniye

MAan looked back to see his love, his life(injured) on the bed

Maan- hmm

Geet- Maggi...😳

MAan smiled and nodded

Geet's smile disappeared
What should I tell him?
Should I tell him about Sir?
But I 'm sure I'm being foolish

Chup kar Geet...forget it.

Maan while making maggi was thinking deeply

Geet had taken lots of information in the past and never had this happened..Why did he feel something had happened...something that connected with that..that brute?

His cell phone was ringing

Maan- Vicky..Abhi toh call kiya tha..Geet is fine

MR O- well..I'm glad she is...Was something the matter ?

Maan's blood curdled...

Maan- YOU? How DARE you call me??

MR O- I just wanted to see your reaction and hear the concern in your voice..for your beloved wife..how is she?

MAan- Listen..you...??

Mr O- You thought I will leave you ?

Maan- What more was it for you to take?

MR O- everything that you had Maan Singh Khurana..everything that you still have

Maan- You want the money...the property...take it..I never stopped you.

MR O- YOu didn't but the one who did had to pay for it.

Maan- innocents had to pay for it. You ruined my life. And YOU dare come back
Take everything you want. Just go away from Geet

MR O- but I really like that charming beautiful girl

Maan could barely control himself..shaking with fury

Maan- DOn't you dare lay a finger on her. What do you want??

MR O- well..I have taken a fancy to her..I don't think I'll go away just yet...and..if you don't get out of the way....

He cut the phone..

Maan stared at it.

MR O sat in his room...fingering the blade with which he had put a cut across Geet's forehead.

MR O thought- How ingenious...I had to jump out of the window yes...but such a nice gift for dear MAan...

He laughed softly and hummed to himself

MAan decided it was time to warn Geet..
but she was hurt...Maybe in the morning

They ate Maggi and slept..her in his arms..like the way it seemed had been since eternity

In the morning

Maan- Geet how are you now? Sir pe zaada chhot lagi thi kya?

Geet- Maan...I'm fine😊why?

Maan- nahi..woh tum mujhe ghoor rahi ho na isliye...😆

Geet hit him playfully...

Geet- uff aap bhi na...

MAan- achha Geet..I need to talk to you

Geet- hmm?

Maan- Geet...I do not like your sir. Please..ek minute..hear me out.
I know him. HE is not who he makes out to be. I want you to stop all contact with him

Geet-Maan...??? YOu didn't tell me this because?....
I think it was him who put something in my tea because of which I fainted.

MAan- He called me.Last night. HE put this cut on you.. AND I will NOT let him harm you again.Samjhi tum?

Geet's phone rang

Geet- h-ello...

MR O- good morning Geet dear

Geet- hello sir

Mr O- I hope you're not cancelling class today?

Geet- woh actually..sir...

MR O- no..I am not hearin anything. I will come at the usual time and we will have a regular class

And he cut the phone

HE stroked his chin thoughtfully

MR O- hmm...So she's trying to avoid me? HA...Well...she doesn't know..how .....persuasive I can be. I think I should remind Maan..

That's it guys..It's not much..but I have given out valuable info..
A few pieces left..that will complete the puzzle..

hope you like it!
516645 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
am glad am the first one to comment.!!
first of all...am scared.!!
about this Mr.oberoi...he's so scary yaar...!!
anyway...the track is awesome...u r handling it quite very well .....

kuch kuch clear ho raha hain...hmm..but plz update jaldi yaar...
and how dare he hurt our GEET??
i know he'll get nice return gift from MAAN...

Edited by abhi402 - 14 years ago
SahSah thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
really awesome....great update....so loving it...
what is this mr O.....he is so annoying......
hating him.....
kyphfanz thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
wow! Mr O is scaryyyy ...!
nice update tho- building up the suspense :)
saadi88 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update..This mr.O will def. Get it frm maan for hurtng his geet..Waitng for the next update.Plz update soon.
febinyusuff thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
unwind the suspense please... Who si Mr O... and why can't Maan stop her from going to his classes
vivacious_gurl thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
geetu - i can very well predict if u want.... coz i know where it is heading.... lol.... but no predictions..... will just applaud u..... hahahahaha...... well done....
KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.loved it.
so mr. o did it. he defo mixed something with that tea.
I guess this time maan defo give mr o something nice
update soon.

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 5 years ago

Kumkum Bhagya: Rishton Ki Ankahi Kahani - Chapter 108 updt on pg 22

Book cover by Prii @SweetButSpicy. Thanks a million Prii for this wonderful book cover.

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".