Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 62

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Posted: 15 years ago
will be waiitng for ur update today!.... BTW, we all are ok with the track just waiting to find out the dark secret of maan's life...plz cont soon... u r doing a great job...
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Posted: 15 years ago
UPDATE

Maan woke up in the morning before Geet. His heart clenched at seeing her innocent face shining in the sun.
HE remembered their first night together..when they had finally become one.
He grazed his fingers across her cheek...gently..afraid to wake her up,knowing how sensitive she was to his touch😆

HE wondered how she had accepted him without asking for explanations.
He wondered how he should save her from that man who was a teacher for Geet.
How will he ever make her understand why he hates him so much.
Geet had seen so much pain in her life that he never wanted his past to come on her too...the shadow of his dark past, filled with the loss of everything good for him..that made him grow up and take all responsibility; that made him change everything about himself and defiantly go about his life.

Geet had come into his life and brought into light the kid in him..the one who rejoiced at the small moments of life; the one who waited for every moment life gave him but perhaps his past will always be a shadow..

It tortured him when he thought of that man...the man who took it all away..who destroyed all that he had grown up with...who had destroyed his home

THAT Man sat in his study, sipping coffee and reading the paper.
He read a report on how a man had been caught after committing the murder of his neighbour.

MR O- tut tut...(a smile) I wonder how people can be so stupid. The delicate planning must be paid attention too.

HE put down the paper and thought of Maan.

Mr O- Now THAT was amazing.
His face as he came in that day and saw me with his dear dear wife..
charming girl..I quite like her...hmmm...

Ramu(his servant came in)- Saab...naashta ready hai.

MR O- thank you Ramu. Main aata hoon.

Humming to himself, he went to have his breakfast, mind perfectly at ease..waiting for a plan to hatch.

MAan decided he must protect Geet from that conniving man..but how?
If he said anything to Geet..she will say no, she liked that man and she liked being taught.
Should he confide in Vicky?
Should he handle it himself?
HE will do nothing for now and just keep a close watch on that man's activities.

Geet cuddled upto him...and all of his mind stopped working

Geet- uhmmm...Maan...

Maan smiled as Geet muttered his name into his chest..
He kissed her head and said

Maan- Aaj soti rahogi kya...mujhe office nahi jaana?
Geet- nahi...Kahi nahi jaana..bas mere paas rehna hai..

MAan- Geet..don't tempt me..I have to go..chhodo mujhe..

Geet smiled into his chest
Geet- Kabhi bhi nahi chhodungi Maan..

ANd thinking of the past few days, her eyes filled with tears
MAan felt the wet tears on his chest

Maan- Geet...?

He made her look at him and asked her what was wrong

Geet impulsively hugged him

Geet- You won't go away from me na? Please promise me...I have a really bad feeling..
Maan, please be careful, I feel something bad is about to happen

MAan felt a chill in his heart but decided to laugh it off

Maan- Geet...th eonly thing bad that can happen is that we will get tired of lying on the bed all day...so wake up...and don't cry...I won't leave you. Maan Singh Khurana ko promise karne ki zaroorat nahi hai

Geet- Nahi hogi..Par Geet Maan Singh Khurana ko promise chahiye

Maan- thik hai. I promise, I won't leave you...But you will listen to me.

Geet- NEver...😆

MAan- GEET...😡

Geet- MAAN...😡

MAan- kya karunga main tumhara?

Geet- I have a few options...

And she dragged him to her again

After some time, Maan got dressed and was about to leave when Geet got a call

Geet- hello sir
pause...extra class...pause as she listens, okay sure..in an hour
bye sir

Maan- Kaun tha?

Geet- Sir. HE says he wants an extra class..He has some extra questions he wants to give me..

MAan- Geet...don't tire yourself out too much okay?

Geet- okay...ab jaayiye aap..😆

Maan wondered how to protect him...Should he talk to Vicky?
No..Vicky was very small that time...he wouldn't be able to understand..But he was protective of Geet..

Maan went to Vicky's room

Vicky- bro aap? aayiye na..

Maan- Vicky..I have some very important favour to ask you

Vicky- anything bhai..boliye

Maan- I do not trust Geet's tutor

Vicky- 😆bro..I highly doubt Mr O has any interest in bhabhz

MAan- Vicky...I'm serious..There is something not right with him. I want you to keep close watch on him

Vicky- but bro...

Maan had walked out

Vicky thought
That's weird.. why would bro doubt this man? Nah, he's just over protective of bhabhi...But I will do as he says because his hunches were almost never wrong

TUITION

Geet was feeling quite uncomfortable at the side glances sir was giving her..
She wondered what was wrong.
She thought she was imagining things and decided to ignore it and concentrate on her studies
And so she did that..

Vicky barged in

Vicky- Bhabhs...oh sorry.... I didn't know you were studying

MR O was quite annoyed...he quite liked making Geet uncomfortable..

MR O(thought)- really this girl's face is way too expressive..all the more easy for me...
but where did he come from?

Geet was relieved

Geet- vicky..kya hua?

Vicky- Bhabhs nothing..i just wanted to meet the guy who is going to make you top 😉

MR O thought he looked quite dedicated to Geet..

Vicky- Hi..I'm Vicky Khurana

Mr O was stunned for a moment

Mr O- wow..he's grown..

He smiled charmingly adn put Vicky at easy...

MR O- hmmm...now I know why he came..OF course..MAan must have put him to sentry duty..
He will be very useful nonetheless.

MR O- well..I think we should cut the class short..you have the questions..If you have a doubt..call me anytime dear😊
Bye Vicky..we'll meet soon. Bye Geet..I'll show myself out

Geet- Vicky...wow...you read my mind kya?I really wanted to stop studying..uff..I'm soo tired

Vicky- uska bhi ilaaj hai! Chalo mere saath bhabhs!

Geet- rre...but where?

Vicky- Go get ready bas..I will tell Rajji too

Geet- hmm...We must talk about that by the way!

Vicky- talk about what?😕

Geet- bette, sab jaanti hoon main...jaao bolo Rajji ko

Vicky went to Rajji's room while Geet got ready in the outhouse

Vicky- Rajji...

Rajji- kya hua? why are you so excited?

Vicky- c'mon get ready! we're going out

She got up shocked with eyes wide open

Rajji- KYAAA?

Vicky- Gawd..you girls...C'mon...YOu, me and Bhabhz are going out...get ready in a jiffy...I'm in the car waiting

he went away

Rajji- What am I going to do with this guy? ullu kahin ka...

She got ready and went down, Geet had still not come

Rajji- Didi kahan hai?

Vicky- Do you see her here? She's not come yet

Rajji- Wait, do you want me to go and check?

Vicky- hmm...yeah okay..go

Rajji decided to go to the outhouse and check what had happened


Rajji- Didi...didi...

She went to the room, kitchen, study...

Geet was nowhere to be found...

she decided to go back to Vicky .

Vicky was really shocked and scared now...he went too and checked...

they tried the bathroom door..it was locked...

They both shouted Geet's name...
No response.

Now, Vicky decided to call Maan

Vicky- bro..

Maan- kya hua?

Vicky- bhabhi...woh..

MAan- Kya hua Geet ko?

Vicky- bhabhi ....shayad bathroom mein band hain

Maan- WHAT? toh todo bathroom ko!

Vicky- bro..main kaise..?

MAan- is she responding?

Vicky- n-n-no...

Maan- WHAT? Wait..I'll come

And he rushed to his house...wondering what had happened now...and worried for Geet



Okay..so that's it guys..I don't want to bring in everything at once...so I'm weaving everything in..or at least trying to..

The mystery won't be revealed that soon..so sit tight...I won't test your patience too much though..

Thoughts about Mr O?
What did he do? What is his plan? Does he have a plan?
😳
suggestions please!!

lots of love




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Posted: 15 years ago
really awesome...great update it is...i am so loving it...
maan and geet totally adorable...and this MR O.....
is so annoying......well really hooked..keep writing
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ohhhhh godddd........
what happend to geet????
is he alrite???

That stupid guy did somthing???

eagerly waiting for next update


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Posted: 15 years ago
you cant leave us in suspense!! great update! i hope geet is alright!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ansah

really awesome...great update it is...i am so loving it...

maan and geet totally adorable...and this MR O.....
is so annoying......well really hooked..keep writing


I am glad..I wont test your patience much longer...bas want to build up and flesh out mr O..😊

yeah...maneet adorable scenes will be more! I will mix it up.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: neha2005

you cant leave us in suspense!! great update! i hope geet is alright!


neha- glad u liked it love!

I know..I won't do it for much longer..😊

next update will be tomorrow!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya satish

Ohhhhh godddd........

what happend to geet????
is he alrite???

That stupid guy did somthing???

eagerly waiting for next update



you'll know..pakka...kal you'll know if Geet is fine or not..🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ansah

really awesome...great update it is...i am so loving it...

maan and geet totally adorable...and this MR O.....
is so annoying......well really hooked..keep writing


ansah- thanks!!🤗

Will defo write an update tomorrow!

if you have suggestions..please send them in!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey,
Such a wonderful update. I loved it. Thanks so much. 😳😳😳😳😳
Cannot wait for the next one.
Rachana

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