UPDATE
Maan stared at Geet wondering how to get her away from him.
Geet stared back...wondering how he could ask her to stay away from her
Geet- dur chali jaaun? May I know why? Oh wait..I'm sorry..I forgot..you NEVER give reasons...
Seriously Maan...I thought THIS was my home...and my family..I thought you were my own??
THIS is what I get after all your promises? that I leave you? after you promised you will never hurt me...that you love me and can't bear to live without me?
Maan started pacing back and forth
MAan- that was before...
Geet stopped him and turned him around to face her
Geet- before WHAT Maan?
Before I told you I loved you? Is that it?
I don't know what has happened to you but THIS is MY home too..and I WILL not leave you.
I don't know what you're going through but however much you think you can bear it on your own...some things you can't
I know you don't want me to see you weak, and in pain...BUT Maan..Our strengths come through our pain...
MAan- You don't understand. Just go.
Geet- Of course..why don't I understand? Am I some innocent sheltered girl who has never faced hardships Maan? AM I a girl you can just throw out of your life?
NO..I am your wife...YOU love me. ANd I love you. I am sorry but that makes us life-partners.
I am not leaving you..or this house.
If you go somewhere, i am coming with you- be it heaven or hell.
Samjhe aap Maan Singh Khurana
MAan stared at his wife wondering what's gotten into her
Maan- Geet...
But Geet was on a roll...
She came closer to him and took him by his hair
Geet- NOW IF you don't Kiss me RIGHT now..I am going to make you regret it...Understand?
Maan tried to pull away but Geet won't let him
Maan- Geet...tum paagal ho gayi ho. Let me go.
Geet- Why Maan? why should I ? I have never let go of my rights..
she came even closer and whispered to him
Geet- I know you are MSK..the mard who shows no dard..but you are my MAAN...and I will not let you give up on this.
What are you doing? Letting go of something you love...we're lucky we found each other and are together..and you want to give that up for some ego battle??
MAan thought
MAan- how will I ever explain it to her..she's killing me here...
I can't show her the "dusht danav" in me..
Geet- I have seen in you when you were strongest as well as when you made yourself vulnerable...
Whatever it is..unburden love...I am NOT leaving you..no matter what...
MAan- Geet...I'm not that good..i'm not a good man Geet..I killed my mother
Geet pulled away, shocked
Geet- nahi...yeh nahi ho sakta
Maan looked at her with tears in his eyes
Maan- go away from me...I am a killer...
Geet walked away...packed her clothes and went out of the house
Geet(thiought)- nahi..yeh nahi ho sakta...Maan...cannot do this...no..babaji..but he doesn't lie...then why would he lie about this?
Nahi..Geet...you promised you won't leave him...
NO..I will hear him out..I will ask him the full story...
She went into the outhouse
MAan in his room
Maan- I knew as soon as she saw ME..she would run away....why shouldn't she?
I got hurt because I hurt somebody.
I am glad I isolated everyone from me...They mustn't know...and now..she won't want to hear the entire truth..
Kyun Geet...?itni jaldi vishwaas kar liya? Ek baar nahi poochha mujhse?
kyun?
Nahi..I can't let her go..I need to tell her..but will she hear me out?
HE ran out of the house not finding Geet anywhere and decided to check the outhouse where Geet was in the nedroom..
Geet- Maan...aap?
MAan(thought)- why isn't she running away...Let me see...
Maan- Kyun? ab kyun nahi bhaag jaati...go away..I am a killer..run away from me..
Geet had tears in her eyes...Came closer to him
Maan walked back till he was against the wall
Maan- Geet...
He was confused at what she was trying to do
Geet- I am sorry I ran away..I was just shocked.
You're a killer...you think that will make me run away from you?
W*Hout asking you what happened? without knowing the entire story?
I know you Maan Singh Khurana..aapki ragh ragh se waakif hoon...I know who you are..what type of man you are..
You accepted me with my past..made my pain your own and showered me with love.
You have a past that I don't know much about. And I will not press you to tell me before you are ready(which I know you are not)
I am not going away.
AND then she kissed him
Maan's heart soared...she didn't leave him..she knew..and she didn't go away...that's all that mattered...
so he kissed her back with everything he had...
BReathless, she said
Geet- and since when do YOU take decisions about our relationship? I thought it was me who did that?
MAan merely smiled and hugged her
MAan- Geet...
Geet- chup...bilkul chup..I will cry if you say anything more...no talking
MAan pulled back...
Maan- so...tell me..
His hands traced her collar-bone, moved down to her arms...
Maan- does the offer still stand?
Geet- what offer?
MAan- ohh sorry..I meant your command?
Geet blushed...
MAan- then madame..sar aankhon par...
And he carried her to bed..
Geet was on top of Maan. Kissed his eyes..
Geet- Do you know how much I love those eyes of yours?
They speak volumes...
Maan- to you...they talk only to yours..kya karu?
Geet kissed his cheeks
Geet- and that slight blush when you have to say sorry...
MAan- never said it to anyone but you...
Geet- and those lips...
MAan- never kissed anyone...
And he kissed her
MAan- Geet..you said no talking..but tumhe chup karwana is...
Geet slapped him on the chest...
Maan held her hands
Maan- these hands..that support me whenever I fall..
Geet- err..this line should be mine na?
Maan looked at her with eyes filled with love
MAan- Geet..I meant metaphorically *rolled his eyes*
Geet took his hands and kissed them
Geet- your hands..that support me whenever I fall..and take the opportunity to pull me to you..whenever I don't...😉
Maan- your mouth...that never shuts up...
Shh Geet..bas...
And he didn't give her a chance to talk after that
Maan slept soundly after a long time with his life in his arms again...knowing that now..MR O couldn't do anything.. He was there with her..and SHE would not leave him..
Okay..so..I hope this was okay..
And that you saw the kind of progression I was talking about.
Empty promises, filled with dreams of forever,
don't capture the essence of everyday life too well,
when faced with experience that often breaks the spell,
with the love that accepts, the essence is captured better
😳
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