Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146

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kooliio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Awesome update!! Loved it!!!
Can't wait for next part!!
Pls cont.soon!!

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

geetu love the way u r using other characters.... yes story does become boring if only 2 characters r spoken about..... nice update

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uzmam1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

beautiful .. beautiful!!

nice interaction with vicky, pinky and adi ..bulking out the storyline and adding depth to it!!

luv it sooooooooooooo much!!

Uz xx

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Aleena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

for new thread

update

love geet dadi and pinky's convo
Dadi-Geet bete..boliye na..Maan ne aapko zaada sataya toh nahi

maan and adi convo is also

MAan- kya hua Adi?

Adi- woh..sir..woh..uh..Vicky..uh..nahi mera matlab hai...pinky..nahi..woh Sir..I..

MAan- ek minute..Pinky and Vicky? Really?

MAan pretends a happy look while inside he's thinking

MAan- hmm..toh problem kya hai?
If Pinky and Vicky like each other..then?

Adi- No problem sir..Bas wahi problem hai jo aapko hui thi when Geet left the job

Maan is stunned

MAan- ...that much?

Adi looks morose..

MAan- hmm..and why did you laugh when I mentioned Sasha

Adi- Sir..Sasha has been after Vicky sir

geet and vicky chemistry

Vicky- nah baba na...Unpe toh sirf MAan sir ka bas chalta hai

Geet- hmph...She would wish...

Vicky- Haan..Bro toh aapke pyaar mein lattoo hain na?

superb update

conti soon

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liv2laugh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Hi Geet

Wonderful update. I actually read a lot of the upates in one go today. I apologize for not commenting regularly but work is crazy.

I loved the way you are moving the story along. There is an innocence to the characters that I completely enjoy.

Could you kindly add me to your PM list.

Thanks
Jhan