Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: anu_luv_maan

👏 it was so cute ...i love to see maan's caring side............

dadi's entry at exact time ..... 😆 .great part


thank you 🤗



HAaha..you're most welcome sweetheart!

glad u liked it!

MAan and geet..both care soo much but ego beechh mein aa jati hai..oh well.not for long hopefully.. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
@ Crazzy girl- thanks!! glad u liked it!

@rituka- thanks honey!! any suggestions?

@Juliel- thanks!

@LEkha- thankie thankie!! GLad you liked it!!

@Reva- haha..really?! cute tha na..imagine Dadi walking in..unka toh din ban jaayega!LOL

@Noor- they fought..because Geet doesn't want maan to leave..and maan is silly cuz he didn't get it

@shreya- hmmm..good suggestions! she wont go to thailand..doori thodi si...which will bring them closer!

@Prithvi- thanks honey! will continue soon!!


love to all of u!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
@ afsha- thanks!! isn't dadi the coolest!!hehe

@janu- thanks honey!

@uz- hey! glad u like the 'maneet fixes' i give! you'll get one today!

@sireesha- I love your name!! thanks! glad u liked it!

@Dhara- DR maan hai after allHAHA..hope u njoy the next update too!!

@koollio- glad u liked it! main jaldi update karoongi!

@neeru-hmm...toh aaj kuchh aur meetha ho jaaye!!*wink wink*

@Nidhi- thanks a lot!! yeh maneet bhi na-ya ladte rehte hain..ya chup rehte hain! LOL

Love ya!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94


haaaa yaaar
kyu nahi???????
i love sweet
aur maneet tho
sach mai diabetes
dene ko hai
😉 😳 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
hey guys!!

sorry for making u wait so long!!

I won't guarantee kal ak update cuz of Rakhi...but will try my best!!

HEre is the FIGHT.. 😆

At the office,


Maan goes to his cabin while Geet goes to hers

Sasha- Geet..you're back

Geet- ji.. I am

Sasha- how was your trip?

Geet(thinking)- isse kya ho gaya? why is she being nice?

Vicky comes in without knocking

Vicks- Bhabhs..woh bro..

Geet and Sasha look at her..

Vicky horrified, backs off but Geet stops him

Geet- Vicky..kya hua?

Sasha is staring at Vicky with admiration

Vicky looks at her and then at Geet

Vicky- Bhabhi..bro itne bure mood mein kyun hain?

Geet- pata nahi...

Vicky- aap bhi...koi jhagda hua kya?

Geet turns away

Geet- kuchh nahi..

Vicky- Sasha..did you have some work?

Sasha- Nahii...

Vicky- toh leave!

Sasha goes..

Geet- Vicky..itni buri tarha se kyun baat karta hai isse?

Vicky- LEave her..Tell me what happened?

Geet- kuchh nahi..your bro will one day irritate me to death!
HE's going to Thailand...

Vicky- toh..kaam se hi toh jaa rahe hain

Geet- haan..but..

To herself- ab kaise samjhau...I don't want him to go anywhere..

Vicky- hmm..Bhabhs..you can't bear to let him go for even some time, haina?

Geet blushes- Ab yeh unhe kaun samjhaye...he is 24/7 working working working..uff


MAan in his office

MAan- Kya karunga main Geet ka..She really doesn't want to go with me? Itna bore ho gayi kya mere saath? She would love Hua Hin so much and she doesn't want to come 😕
I don't know WHY she's angry now..

HE calls Geet

MAan- Geet..

Geet- ji sir

MAan- mere cabin mein aayo

She looks at Vicky

Geet- bula rahe hain..

MAan- Geet..kya hua hai?
Geet- did you have some work
waise bhi- it's all you think of these days

Maan rolls his eyes

MAan- Geet..what has happened to you?

Geet- If you don't understand Maan..then I'm not telling you

Maan- I want you to come with me..but..you don't want to come..then why are you angry?

Geet-Rehne dijiye Maan..you will not understand..Let it be..

MAan grabs Geet and pull her close

MAan- Geet..if you don't tell me..hwo will I ever know what you're feeling? your eyes are expressive but your actions confusing...Don't do this to me please..and tell me why you're upset

Geet disentangles herself from MAan and leaves

Vicky comes in after some time

Vicky- bro..Aap bhabhi se gussa hain?

MAan- Koi ho sakta hai kya? Har baat pe ladayi karti hai..I tell you..mere ilaawa koi nahi jhelega is siphiri ladki ko

Geet overhears and huffs off...And Maan follows her

Maan- Geet..Geet..I didn't mean..Geet..

She goes to the ladies room

MAan enters not realising 😆

Geet- Aap yahan bhi aa gaye

Maan- Main nahi jaaunga jab tak u don't tell me

He backs her up against the front view mirror where Sasha spent hours trying to look her best for MK, and then Vicky

Geet turns her back on Maan so that both are looking in the mirror

MAan- Geet...please..please don't be like this..tell me..please tell me..I'm dying here. I can't see you upset..

Geet- then why do you have to go away from me?

MAan- 😲 Geet..main sirf 3 din ke liye jaa raha hoon

Geet- and you think that's SIRF?

MAan- I know it's not Geet..but come with me

Geet breaks the eye contact

Geet- mujhe nahi aana...i'm tired after the trip maan..

MAan realises that she indeed was tired..and needed rest..she was pale and looked weak

MAan- tum bohot patli ho..sachhi..you should eat more

Geet- ji nahi..MAin jaisi hoon thik hoon

Maan- we'll do something about it once I come back..till then..

Geet- matlab?

MAan winks at her.and gives her a smile

Geet hits maan playfully on the arm

MAan- ouch!

Geet- oops..lagaa?

She kisses his arm and then places her head there

They stare at each other through the mirror

Maan- Geet..I really don't want to go..but it's important..you understand that right?

Geet- I do...but it doesn't make me happy

He puts his head on hers and they just stand there..in the ladies room...Maan Singh Khurana and Geet 😲 😆 😉

Tasha- But Sasha..

Entering..and break off seeing this

Sasha- MK..a.ap..yahan?ladies room mein..

Maan- haan..woh ..uhh.main..Geet se kuchh baat karni thi important..file ke baare mein..

I'm leaving now..Geet...give it fast to me

And he leaves..immediately followed by Geet whoc an barely control her laughter

MAan catches her laughing sneakily and smiles to himself..

MAan- chalo..at least she's happy..PAagal ladki..I will try my best to finish the work as fast as I can..

At night..
Geet and Maan are deciding what clothes to pack and what not

MAan- Geet..yeh shirt kyun nikaal di..it's my fave shirt!

Geet- MAan..this shirt is a fave of many girls who see you in it..you are not taking it along,..s.amjhe?

MAan- haanji Boss..aur kuchh?

Finally, she finishes finding problems with everything he is taking...

Geet- MAan...mat jaao na...

MAan- Geet..Main nahi jaana chahta..but I promise..these days will pass by very quick..

Geet- hmph..of course..u will be working so much...you won't even think of me

MAan- I think of you even when I'm working Geet..and I'm used to that distraction of work while I think of you..

Geet- So work is the distraction?

MAan- since you have come into my life..yes, work has been a distraction..Ab so jaao..I have an early flight remember

They sleep(of course in each others' arms)

MAan wakes up at 4 in the morning and gently disentangles himself from Geet..
Gets ready and bends down to kiss goodbye..

He decides to write a note

As he is walking away, Geet holds his hand and places a kiss on the inside of his palm..

Geet- jaldi aana..

Eyes closed, she whispers and he smiles in the darkness..wishing he were back right now..

He leaves..and Geet is still sleeping

In the morning..Geet feels around for Maan and then remembers he's not there..

HEr eyes fill with tears

Geet- hey babaji..agar abhi yeh haal hai..toh 3 din mein toh I'll die.. 😭 😭
Arre..yeh kya

A single white rose and a note
which says

From Maan to Geet
You turned MSK into Maan,
A minute away from you seems so long,
I wish dearly to return as soon as I can,
BAck to your love and your loving arms

Don't cry my love!


LEaving Geet smiling and crying at the sweetness of it. She kissed the letter and the rose..

Geet- Dusht...Danav.. ❤️


That's it guys...Hope you liked it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
that was super sweet....😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97


OMG ......... 😍

Geet plzzzzzz meri
tumhare fiction waale Maan se meri
shaadi karadona plzzzzzzzzzzzz
kya sweet story hai teri
it lingers all the time
even in my classes i keep telling my
friends about this fiction 🤗 😳 😛
Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
dat was soo cute!!!!

update sooN!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
so sweet msk to maam hmmm! i like maan more
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow. great update. Maan and geet scene was so cute. Maan going into girls bathroom is hilarious.

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