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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Arey tu Adil ko itnja torture karke hume kyun torture karti hai ? Mushkil se toh uski biwi ko laga ke bechaare pati ko kuch hua hai toh woh haal puchne aa gayi, aur tune kya kiya ???

Ohh....sorry Dii...😳....lekin kya kare....Adil hai hi kuch aisa....kuch alag na....kuch hatke hai....isiliye usne Ashna ko bhej diya....aur haan....wo bahut ziddi bhi hai....jo kehta hai bas wohi karta hai....meri bhi nahi sunta...😳😆....but anyways...u dont worry abt him....main Achhi Bacchi hu na....aur Adil se bahut puar bhi karti hu....I'll take care of all...😉😳

Thanks for commenting Dii. 😛

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
Hi Sumi Hey Sur...😛
wow yaar itni jaldi updates..mujhe to tumhe dekhkar apni halat pe taras a raha hai...khair im glad i get to read this. Yeah yeah....mujhse kuch sikho yaar....😕....kab se I Hate you....nahi padha...😭...but anyways....u r busy I knw....but really hope u manage soon...😊
Adil is pretty smart abt his office protection...and seems like luck is on his side that he found Ashna before she created some problems for him. Oh yeah.....he has to think of everything....and he definitely foundd Ashna...but wud SHE find anything out there? 😆😆😉
Storeroom scene was funny as well as intense...:) Well...I liked the word 'intense'....perhaps thats was it was....INTENSE!! 😳 Thanks dear...😛😃
I wonder why Ashna came to ask Adil abt his health though ;) Hehe....lets see why she did that...
insaniyat...good one Yeah....that was the best excuse at thet moment....😉
update the next part plus your other fic soonish :D Sure dear.....😉
Sur
Thanks for the sweet comment Sur....😛

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Umm....this has been too many quotes in one go Ansar.....Pri I hope....when u reply u'll use "@" sign....😆

kya karun...Ansar ko samjhana padd raha tha ki Rajeev ka A.C bann na Himalay par bare foot chdhne jaisa mushkil kaam hai...!!!😆

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#244

aaj phir se vohi hua...😭...main phir se likhne wali hun comments...😭

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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ayesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#245

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! another fic by u😊..........this is the best thing that happened to me today😃😃...i was sooooooooo depressed 😭😭😭[ahh don't ask the reason coz even i hv noooo idea].....but this one surely made me smile😃😃...thankyouuuuu sooooo much😳😳😳.....

i was actually sad after reading last part of " i love u....." 😭😭😭but thankyou sooooooooooooo much for posting this😊😊....

adil...hmmmm such a sweet name...suits rajeev a lot😳....

and ashna.....i guess u must me knowing my choice for this character😉....soo i'll imagine her only...

post first part soooooon😊😊😊...

love u ayesha 😳

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#246

meri aur IF ki lagta hai baht purani dushmani hai...jab dekho mujhe tang karta rahta hai...!!! aaj mere class jaldi khatam ho gaye toh maine socha ki aaj kar dungi tumhe comments...par nahi...jaise hi post kiya...SPAMMING 😡

khair phir se karr rahi hun...agar is baar ho gaya na...toh sachhi me ek nariyal phodungi...IF k sar par...😃

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttttttttttt Ud...😃

abhi thoda sa meetha ho jaye😃...phir tumhe galiyan milengi...😡

ab toh sabhi shocked hi hone the na...!!! Adil jee pahli baar jo late pahunche hain...ab unhe kya pata ki...apni biwi ko niharte hue unhe late ho gaya...!!! yeh toh secreat hai na...tumhare aur hamare bich me...😆

ek shekhar hi hai...jise Adil kuch nahi kah pata...!!! aur vaise bhi us ne aisa galat bhi kya kah diya tha...jo bhi kaha tha...voh toh 100 pratishat satya tha...ha ha ha...!!! khair Shekhar ki ankhen kafi tez hain...us ne jan hi liya ki adil n Ashna k bich kuch toh chal hi raha hai...😆

mujhe na Shekhar future me cupid ka role play karta hua dikhai de raha hai...!!! par jaisa ki yeh fic tumhara hai...isiliye tum toh kisi bhi ka bhi present...past...future badal sakti ho...hai na...??? isiliye main jyada prediction karti hi nahi...😛

jaisa ki maine socha tha ki dono ka cabin aas-paas hi hoga...vohi hua...!!! par sare curtains Adil k taraf the...!!! isi se pata chal jata hai ki tum Rajeev ki kitni badi fan ho...!!! matlab...sare options Adil k liye...par Ashna k liye kuch bhi nahi...😆

yeh ashna...store room me kyoun gayi thi...yeh nahi puchungi...!!! log...store room me kyoun jate hain...obviously kuch purani chizain dhundhne...!!! par Ashna kya dhudhne gayi thi...!!! ab tum toh jawab dene se rahi...!!! phi main kyoun puchun tum se...😆

aage chalte hain...!!! kal tak electry dept par mujhe kafi gusssa aata tha...!!! is UD ne mujhe unhe duyain dene k liye majbur kar diya...ha ha ha...!!! kitne sahi tym par unhone power cut kar diya...meri taraf se sau saal ki umar ho in ki...!!!😆

bichari Ashna toh darr hi gayi thi...!!! par jaisa ki hamesha hota hai...heroine mushibat me gayi nahi ki apne hero ki entry...aur audience me taliyaann...aur whistle ki barshat...!!! yahan par bhi vohi hua...sahi waqt par Adil ki entry ho gayi...!!! aur toh aur...maine jaisa kaha tha ki takrar hoga tabhi toh pyar hoga...!!! lo ho gayi dono me takkar...thoda sa...chutuka sa pyar ka scene bhi tha...aur voh bhi Shri Shri Shri baby cockroach maharaj k kripa se...ha ha ha...😆

yeh scene na sab se jyada sweet tha...!!! aur maine yeh scene kitni baar padhi hai...voh nahi batayungi...!!! n plz...haan...yeh mat puchna ki 'kyoun'...after all meri marzi...😆

phir wapas aane k baad...ashna ko laga ki Adil ko fever hai...!!! voh gayi bhi thi us se kahne...par adil ne jo kaha voh bhi sahi tha...!!! us me hamesha temp rahta hai...ha ha ha...!!! yeh us ka temp hi toh hai...jiss ki wajah se main us ki A.C bann gayi...😆

ab us ne toh Ashna ko vahan se bhaga diya...ab us k fever ka kya hoga...!!! Sumi tum vohin Adil k paas ruko...main Dr Aamir ko bula kar lati hun...!!! abhi abhi maine unhe Kandivali ki taraf bhaagte hue dekha hai...😆

okay...baht ho gaya...guddy guddy batain😃...ab kaan khol kar galiyan sunn lo...😡

"Pata hai''.in fact ye zindagi bachi hi hai''.kaam karne ke liye'...isliye ek bhi pal gawana nahi chahiye'...tum bhi waqt mat gawao Ashna''.at least mere saath to bilkul nahi''😡

yeh kya hai...😡??? agar tum Adil k sath kuch bhi aur jyada torture karnewali ho..na...toh abhi se meri taraf se warning sunn lo...😡!!! main tumhe torture karna suru kar dungi...!!! aur haan...sare DDPA k member bhi tumhe nahi chodenge...samjhi...???😡

arre...yeh lo...yeh kya ho gaya...😲!!! main yahan kabb se bak-bak karr rahi hun...😲!!! aur tum ho ki so gayi...😲??? thik hai...thik hai...ab aage aur kuch nahi kahungi😆...jaldi se next part post karo...😃!!! jaldi ka matlab toh tumhe pata hai na...😃???

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

aaj phir se vohi hua...😭...main phir se likhne wali hun comments...😭

OHHH NOOOOOO........pls Pri....meri request maan le....agli baar se do line se zyada bara agar kuch bhi likhe to pls....copy karke wordpad par paste kar lena.........just like Ansar said.....I cant blv....U had to write ur comment all over again???? 😲😲 Main khud itna irritating feel kar rahi hu yaar....😡😡

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

OHHH NOOOOOO........pls Pri....meri request maan le....agli baar se do line se zyada bara agar kuch bhi likhe to pls....copy karke wordpad par paste kar lena.........just like Ansar said.....I cant blv....U had to write ur comment all over again???? 😲😲 Main khud itna irritating feel kar rahi hu yaar....😡😡

tere fic k ud par do line...??? ha ha ha...na tujhe hajam hoga...aur na hi mujhe...😆!!! par haan...lagta hai ab yehi karna padega...

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Hi Sumaiya,

Wish you a very Happy Eid and Ganesh Chaturthi! Hey Nisha....wishing u the same dear....😛

Have fun and enjoy your day out! Ohh...thnx for the wish...and yeah I did hav a gud tym....😃😃....but seriously missed being here....😆😆

Coming to the update'

It was superb as always' Aweee....thanks soo much...😊

Everyone is surprised to see Adil with his wife. Loved Shekhars' dialogue when he said that he was going to have a heart attack because Adil came late to office and that too with a girl. He is the only one who could joke with Adil in such a way. For sure....none dares to look at him....let alone joke wid him....😆😆....but thats becoz Shekhar knws him....😉

Once again it is good to see Shekhar's trust for Adil. Adil knows that shekhar has sensed that there is something wrong between Ashna and him'but he just avoids the topic by giving him an advice that one should not search for answers because life keeps throwing one question after the other. Hmm...Adil knws at least Shekhar will sense the tension btwn him and Ashna....so he has shunned the topic even be4 it started...😉....very smart na!! 😆😉

Ashna is trying to get some information on Adil but he is too smart for her. And shekhar is always there to watch his back. Yup....Adil cant take chance wid her...he knws she is a smart girl....😉😳😆

The scene in the store room was cute. Atleast the cockroach brought these two together. Yeah....jo koi nahi kar paya....wo ek baby cockroach ne kar diya...😳😆😆

Adil does work very hard'he does not give himself a break. It was good to see Ashna's concern for him. She realized that he was having fewer and wanted him to take rest.

But Adil pushes her away. He has never had anyone take care of him and so does not know what it feels like. Quite true.....he is just not used to it...perhaps!!

Please continue soon. Waiting to know what happens next. Sure dear....I'll continue soon....and thank you for such a lovely comment. Loved replying to it....😛😃

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#250

Hi Sumiiiiii.... Hey Princess...😉😳😆.....sweet name change yaar...😃

Mai Mana ki baat e sehmat hun.... kya kar rahi hai Adil ke saath tu.... kitni takleef de rahi hai yaar usse....shekhar kya janta hai apne dost ke baare me jo hum nahi jaante....??? ITNEEE SAARE SAWAL????Adil se complain karungi main....😆😆....but anyways....I assure u fic khatam hone tak aap sab apni Adil ko sahi tarah se jaan jayenge....😉😆...pakka!!
Baby coakroach wala dialogue bahut funny tha.... Glad u thought so...😳par Adil ne Ashna se pucha kaise nahi ki wo store me kya kar rahi thi... Wo samjha nahi kya?? 😉 Jab wo ye samajh sakta hai Ashna usse barbaad karne ki koshish karegi....tab ye bhi samajh jayega na...😉....but anyways....main sab kuch baad me aur bhi clear karungi...as to why he didnt ask questions and all...😉Ashna realized that Adil has fever...but ye kya... usne Ashna se madad lene ke bajaye usse hi dur bhaga diya.... Ab Adil ka sar ghum raha hai... wo bimar kaise ho gaya....??? Umm....maine kar diya....😳....but dont worry....thik bhi kar dungi....pakka promise!! 😛😉

Update asap....Sure Guglu.....thanks for the sweet comment dear!! 😊😃😛[/QUOTE]

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago