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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Wahhhh Beta !!

Yun hi fatafat parts post karti raha karo !! Hehe....I think I can try till my skool is closed...๐Ÿ˜†

Lovely part.....Hope Aashna comes across all the painful incidents in Adil's life and gets to understand him....before she does sumthing drastic...to hurt him even more...Yeah....dont worry she will eventually understand him....though it has to take sum tym....but ha....I can assure you....Adil will always be f9...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

Continue soon !! Sure Vandu.....and haan....ye reply baad me chala aya....donno how I skipped it.....๐Ÿ˜•...anyways....thanks for the comment.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Luv,
Vandu

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

hiiii dear.....finally i managed to read the next part๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Ši m actually veryyyyyyyyyyy busy and the fics help me to relaxxxxxxxxx๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.....I understand that comepletely....in fact jab main bahut zyada busy ho jati hu....tab sab kuch chhor chhaar ke fics padhne lagti hu.....though its not a gud thing....hehe....arre ye fic to sachi mein jet speed se chal rahi hai....Yeah....after all itna gloomy fic hai....I must hurry up....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†mr.seghal bhagwaan ko pyaare ho bhi gaye???????๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†bhagwaan unki aatma ko shaanti de๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...Dont worry....mere haath se nikal gaye hai....ab to shanti me hi honge...warna main pata nahi unse kya kya karwati....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†ashna ko koi kaam pe lagaaao yaar ghar baithe baithe ute seedhe plans banaati rehti hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Mujhe bhi yehi lagta hai....dont worry jaldi hi usse office bhejungi...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†i mean itna acha aur handsome pati mila hai usse nihaarne ki bajaaye usse keh rahi hai apni shakal mat dikhaana iss liye jaldi office chale jaana๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜กisse kisi doctor i mean pagalon ke doctor ko dikaaao....sach mein paagal ho gayi hai....I think usse sadma pohucha hai....thik ho jayegi....main hoon na....main treat kar dungi usse....aur koi complications hui to Mana madat karegi for sure...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†bas ek hi baat dhang ki sochi ki adil ki family ko pareshaan nahin karegi...bas iske ilaawa to iska uppar ka maala bilkul khaali hai......Hehe...I kept it empty deliberately....warna Adil ke thoughts ko kahan rakhegi??๐Ÿ˜†......i don't understand ye suja garewal part 2 kyun bura banne pe tula hua hai๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญjabki kitna cuuuuuuuuuuuttee hai๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ He is cute for sure....EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...par aisa kyun kar raha hai....lets see...๐Ÿ˜‰usse khud shopping pe bhej raha tha rashi ke saath....ab kaunsa pati apni patni ko kehta hai jaao shopping karo aur mere paise udaaao??????๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†U knw wat....I just never thought it like that....Adil sach me kitnaaaa achha hai na....๐Ÿ˜†EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassediss ladki ko to acche aadmi ki kadar hi nahin hai...ek kaam karo ye ashna ko hataao aur mujhe uski jagah pe quick fix se fix kardo๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณi won't hurt him at all๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Hmm....that I knw...ki tum usse hurt nahi karogi....๐Ÿ˜‰Embarrassed...kyunki hum sab be dimag ho na ho.....dil to hai...Embarrassed๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†Embarrassed
abhi jaldiiiiiiiii se next update maangta hai hum sab.....sooo jet speed se update bhi karo๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Jet speed....hmm....lets see if I can do that....but haan....parts long honge shayad....so I think speed can cum under consideration...ryt?๐Ÿ˜‰
bbbyeeee
love u
aman Thanks for the lovely comment Aman....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very good. Thanks Nisha....๐Ÿ˜›

Ashna's father is very happy to hear that she has agreed to marry Adil. He wants to have a grand wedding but when both Adil and Ashna insist on having a small event he agrees. Asil and Ashna get married. Hmm....Adil and Ashna....none was in a position to hav a grand wedding na....but the main part is they r married now...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ
Adil's family welcomes and accepts Ashna with love. Ashna also likes Adil's family.All r gud at heart na...๐Ÿ˜‰
Ashan was completely shattered after her fathers death. Even Adil was very sad as he had always seen Ashna's father as a father figure. Yeah....he meant a lot for Adil as well....
He takes care of Ashan indirectly....as he knows that she does not like him.Yeah....warna pata nahi....kab kahan kaise uss par baras padegi....๐Ÿ˜†
Ashna on the other hand wants to destroy Adil but cannot find any on his weakness. She thinks that he has done all of this to acquire her property but does not know that he is actually thinking of returning her father's property. Yeah....Ashna takes him to be a business oriented cheap person.....and gradually she will start to knw him...๐Ÿ˜‰
Why does Adil's dadi not like him U'll get to knw that soon dear....after two parts I guess....๐Ÿ˜‰
please continue soon Sure Nisha.....and thanks for the wonderful comment.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

india me ek hai Satabddi xpress...kahte hain ki voh kafi fast jati hai...!!! par Bangladesh me ek Sumaiya Xpress hai jo us se bhi jyada fast hai...yeh ab pata chal raha hai...ha ha ha...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Oh yeah....maine bhi kuch waqt pehle hi discover kiya....๐Ÿ˜†...waise sach to ye hai....I'm very much attached to Droplets....isliye aksar likhti hu.....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

nice...awesome...beautiful...yeh sab nahi kahungi is ud k liye...!!! kyoun ki Adil ki shaadi jo ho gayi Aashna se...isiliye yeh ud ek damm dil khush karnewala ud tha...๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Yeah....pehle hi sabse imp kaam ho gayi....SHAADI....baki sab to hota rehta hai.....๐Ÿ˜†
ashna k father ko le kar dono hi dukhi the...!!! par adil ne yeh baat apne ander chupa li...!!! sayad voh apni weak point kisi ko dikhana nahi chata...!!! matlab voh kis baat par khush hota hai kis baat par dukhi...yeh kisi ko batana nahi chahta...๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š Oye hoye....kya pakra tumne!! Yeah....Adil is a reserved person....๐Ÿ˜‰
shekhar ne sahi kah...'jate jate adil ki shaadi toh kar gaye...๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Yeah.....unhone kitnaaaaaaa mahaaan kaam kiya....unka andaza abhi bhi unhe nahi hai....๐Ÿ˜†
n ashna bhi aa gayi adil k ghar me...aur sabhi ne use bade pyar se accept bhi kar liya...!!! aur us ne bhi sabhi ko... Yeah....they r all gud ppl at heart...๐Ÿ˜‰
aur phir suruwat hui mahabharat ki...!!! mujhe pata hai ki yeh fic abhi suru hui hai toh main abhi se yeh xpect nahi kar sakti ki adil n ashna k bich sab kuch thik hai...!!! obviously dono me probs toh hongi hi...!!! Bilkul sahi....kitnaaa achha janti ho sab kuch yaar....๐Ÿ˜†....ab agar problems nahi hongi....to main solve kya karungi? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰par jahan tak baat hai Adil ki toh voh toh baht hi sweet hai...kisi ko bhi hurt nahi karega...par jahan tak baat ashna ki hai...toh us ne kai sare plans bana kar hi aayehonge na...toh voh unhe sayad karne k liye maidan me kudd jaye...!!! par apna hero akhir hero hai...sare k sare readers us k support me honge...ha ha ha...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† How true again!! Firstly....Adil is actually never gonna hurt anyone....he is very sweet to do that....and yeah....Ashna has her grudges against him....she must take them out.....and rahi baat support ki...to readers k saath saath....writer bhi unhi pe fida hai madam!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ โค๏ธ
aur jahan tak Adil ki baat hai...toh kuch doubts toh mujhe hain...!!! sayad us k past lyf me aisa kuch hua tha...jiss ki wajah se us ki life kuch is tarah se ho gayi hai...!!! ab yeh sab toh tum abhi nahi batanewali ho na...kyoun ki mujhe aur bhi bahhhhht sare uds padhne hain...aur un par comments kar k tumhare dimag ka dahi banana hai...!!! ab tumhe toh pata hi hai ki dahi...dimag aur pet ko thanda karta hai...ha ha ha...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Yeah....again u r ryt.....isliye tum achhi tarah dahi banane ki practice karo....main unhe hazam karne ki practice karungi....and inn sab me....shayad wo part aa jaye....jab tum Adil ko puri tarah se jaan pao....though I must say....that part is not gonna cum that soon....๐Ÿ˜‰
lekin adil...ashna jaisa nahi hai...!!! kahin na kahin mujhe laga ki voh us ki baht care karta hai...!!!Ohh....ok!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ ab us k dil me kya hai...yeh toh tum hum se batane se rahi...!!! phir bhi main wait karti hun ki aage tum aur kitne jhatke deti ho...!!! platform par jab train rukkti hai toh jhatka toh lagta hi hai na...๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› Yeah.....aur ye train apni manzil tak pohuchne se pehle bahut se platforms se guzregi....so be prepared for all the jhatkas....๐Ÿ˜†
simplyyy superbbb ud...๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Thanqqqqqqq Pri....๐Ÿ˜‰
cont soon. Yeah sure....yakeen maano.....I'm in more hurry than u all....๐Ÿ˜†....thanks for the BEAUTIFUL comment anyways....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey Sumi...Superb update...n it's totally diff. Thanks Namita Dii....and its gud to knw u found it different.....
m egerly waiting for next update..plzzz update asap. Sure Dii....I'll try my best to UD soon....and I so hope to live upto ur expectation....thanks for the lovely comment Dii. ๐Ÿ˜›

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Sumi...Hey Guglu....๐Ÿ˜›

This was really a quick update yaar... I am so glad to see u updating so quickly...but I know this trend is just short lived.... soon u will be taking ages to update...so m glad to find a few updates of Droplets... Ahh....u knw me sooooo well yaar....ekei bole frnd er moto frnd....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....but yeah....I will try not taking Ages....๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰

But tell me...when Adil was so close to Mr. Sehegal and plans to transfer the company to Ashna why doesn't she realize that he is so good...Mainly because he shows a different face to her...??? Yeah.....thats the reason mainly...and also....she doesnt really knw him that much to understand him that deeply....๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜‰

Ashna's loss was really sad...but what touched me to the core was Adil's grief.... he was so attached to Mr. Sehegal....Oh...that he was....warna shaadi hi nahi karta yaar....๐Ÿ˜‰ And I really don't understand why dadi hates Adil so much....and what did mr. Sehegal know abt Adil that we all don't know....yaar clear the confusions soon....Oops....Guglu....tumi to bhalo read koro yaar....u get sooo many blur hints....very impressive!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‰.....and I knw....there r many confusions....and I promise to clear them soon....๐Ÿ˜‰

Update asap... Sure dear....thanks for the lovely and interesting comment!! ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks to u all....for 'liking' the post....and letting me knw that u read the part. This means a lot guys!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Part # 4

Next day'..Adil leaves for office really early'.and as thought a puja is arranged at home'.

Shekhar: Adil??

Adil: Yes'.who else but me??

Shekhar: No I mean'.aaj itni jaldi??

Adil: Main to roz jaldi ata hu'.

Shekhar: I knw'.lekin aaj Main jaldi aya hu'.phir bhi tum pehle '.anyways'.breakfast kiya??

Adil: Kar lunga'.

Shekhar: Promise??

Adil: Mera 'breakfast kar lunga' kehna aur' 'promise' kehna'.dono me aisa kya fark hai jo tum dusri baat yakeen karoge'.par pehli nahi??

Shekhar: Sorry baba'.I blv anything u say'.ok?

After a while Rashi calls Adil'.

Rashi: AB'.ghar me Sehgal Uncle k liye puja hai'.arent u cuming??

Adil: Nahi'mujhe behadh zaruri kaam hai'.

Rashi: Par AB'.Bhabhi ko kitna bura lagega na??

Adil: She'll understand'.waise I got to go'.will talk later'..bye. (and he hangs up)

Rashi: Bhabhi'.AB to nahi ayenge'.

Ashna: Haan'.pata hai'.

Rashi: Pata hai matlab??

Ashna: Matlab'.kal raat baat hui thi'.he cant make it'.

Dadi: Wo kyun ayega?? Uska na aana hi sahi hai'.shubh kaamo me uska na hona hi behtar hai''uske kadam sab kuch barbaad kar deta hai'..

Rashi: Dadi'please'.AB k bare me aise baat mat kahiye'.at least mere samne nahi'.(and she leaves in anger)

Ashna silently witnesses the scene'.there was definitely sumthing becoz of which Dadi didn't like Adil at all'..she wud taunt him for everything'.and it had happened even before'.may be in small incidents!!! However'.the puja goes on smoothly'..with Adil not being a part of it!!

Late at night'.Adil returns home'..to find Ashna asleep'..peacefully'.with not much lines of distress drawn on her face!! She literally didn't hav to see his face all day long'.

Mera tumse dur rehne se hi'.tumhare chehre pe ek sukoon laut ayi hai Ashna''yehi sukoon to main tumhari zindagi me hamesha chahta hu..''kash aap samajh pate Uncle''

And he remembers his convo wid Mr. Sehgal'.at the hospital that day''

MS (Mr. Sehgal): Main chahta hu tum usse shaadi karo Adil!!

Adil: Kya? Wat r u saying uncle? Aisa kaise'.

MS: Agar tum kisi aur se'

Adil: That's not the point uncle'

MS: To phir kya problem hai Adil?? Mera yakeen karo'.meri beti bas thoda ziddi hai'lekin dil ki bahut achhi hai'.

Adil: No uncle'.wo baat nahi hai' par main'

MS: Yehi meri khwaish hai beta!!

Adil: Lekin main hi kyun uncle? Dekhiye'.aap k baad main Ashna ka pura dhyan rakhunga'.main khud ek achhe ladke se uski shaadi karaunga'.jo mujhse kayi guna behtar hoga'.Par main nahi'please'. Aap to jante ho na'.meri pehchan'.

MS: Bahut achhe se janta hu main tumhari pehchan'.main janta hu tumhe Adil'.aur isiliye main keh sakta hu'.Ashna k liye tumse behtar koi aur ho hi nahi sakta'.meri nadan beti k liye tum hi sahi ho'.main issi bharose to jeeta aya hu'.ki tum ho'.aur ab issi bharose marr bhi sakta hu'.ki mere baad bhi tum ho'.

Adil: Lekin main bhi hamesha nahi rahunga'.

MS: Wo to koi bhi nahi rahega'.par mujhe pata hai'.jab tak tum ho tab tak kuch ghalath nahi hone doge'..har rishte ko bakhubi sambhala hai tumne'.aur aage bhi sambhaloge'.iss baat ka yakeen hai mujhe'.

Adil: But uncle'

MS: Kya abhi bhi mana karoge Adil? Meri ye aakhri aas mat chhino tum'.main chain se marr bhi nahi paunga'.

And he cudnt say anything further'.how cud he?? That was not possible at that point!!

And again later on'.they had another conversation'..

MS: Mujhe tumhe ye dena tha Adil'

Adil: Ye kya hai??

MS: Meri company ki power of attorney'.

Adil: Aap ye mujhe kyun de rahe hai??

MS: Kyunki maine isse tumhare naam kar diya hai'..

Adil: (looks up) What? Lekin kyun??

MS: Kyunki'waise bhi kuch mahino se sab much almost tum hi dekh rahe ho'..main to bas papers sign kiye jaa raha tha'.par ab maine wo power bhi tumhe de di'..

Adil: Main ye sab isliye dekh raha tha'.kyunki Ashna office join nahi kar rahi thi'.and u didn't want her to knw abt ur condition'..but now she knws it all'..aur ab to wo office join karegi na'..to phir aap mujhe iss bich kyun laa rahe hai??

MS: Kya fark padhta hai'..waise bhi tum dono ki shaadi'.

Adil: (cutting him) Shayad aapko yaad nahi hai'.usne almost mana kar diya hai iss shaadi se'..

MS: (smiles) Mujhe yaad hai'..par saath hi ye bhi pata hai'..tum usse baat karke usse mana loge'.

Adil: Aapko kisne kaha main aisa karunga?? No uncle'.main usse force nahi karunga'.

MS: Main force karne ko nahi keh raha'..main bas chahta hu'tum usse milo'.usse baat karo'.and usse samjhao ki tum waise nahi ho jaise log tumhe portray karte hai'..Ashna bas tumhari world image se thodi si influenced hai'.and she thinks tum shayad ek achhe dil ke insaan nahi ho'.sirf business samajhte ho'..par ye sach nahi hai'.aur tumhe usse milke yehi baat samjhani hai'.so that u two can hav a life together ahead!!

Adil: But we cant have a life together Uncle'(he raises his voice a bit in frustration)'.mujhe nahi lagta ye sahi hoga Uncle''pls iss shaadi ki zidd chhor dijiye'.

MS: Nahi'.ye nahi ho sakta'.ye ek sapna hai Adil'.aur at least tum isse nahi tod sakte'.U hav to do it for me'.mere liye Adil'pls'

Adil: Shayad aapko ehsaas nahi hai Uncle'.ye sapna pehle se hi tuta hua hai'..aur main bas isse jod sakta hu'..jo main karunga'.sirf aapke liye'..par haan'.darare to hamesha reh jayegi'.I cant help that!!!

Kash tumhe iss zindagi ka hissa nahi hona padta Ashna'..kash mere paas koi aisa raasta hota jo sahi hota'.har mayne me'.

And then he lies down beside her [Okay'.let me tell you the bed is big enough to share''isliye main Adil ko kisi sofe pe nahi sulane wali']'..he keeps staring at her for sometime'.and then at the ceiling'.he had so much to take care of!!!!

Next morning'..

Ashna: I wanted to talk to u abt sumthing'.

Adil: Kaho'

Ashna: Mujhe office join karna hai'.pura din aise hi baithi nahi reh sakti main'.

Adil: Hmm'.I'll make the arrangements!!

At office'..

Adil: Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi'..

Shekhar: Listening'.

Adil: Main chahta hu'.Sehgal Industries se related koi bhi document iss office me naa ho''jab bhi zarurat hogi'.I'll go there myself'..lekin yaha kuch nahi hona chahiye'..aur jo bhi highly important projects hai unki files tum apne paas rakhoge'.apne flat pe'.and yeah'.ye sab akele karna'.kisiko shamil karne ki zarurat nahi hai'..these r confidential'..

Shekhar: As u say'..(he is abt to leave)

Adil: Sawal to honge mann me'.

Shekhar: Haan sawal hai'.par ye bhi pata hai'.jab jawab milna hoga'.mil jayega'.lekin usse pehle main tumhe apne sawalo se pareshan nahi karna chahta'..guess'..thats the least I can do for u'.

Adil: I'm sure'..very soon'.u'll figure out the ans urself'..

Shekhar: If u say so'.I might figure out then'.but let me leave now'.bahut kaam diya hai aap ne mujhe'.(and he leaves as Adil nods)

Here at home, Ashna tries to find sum thing in the house itself'.but she was having a hard tym'..Adil always had every cabinet locked'..even the study room was locked'..and as she thought of searching the other empty rooms'.she realized there were too many of them'.this mansion is not called a palace'.just like that!! Yet she did her best'.but all attempts went futile'..Adil seemed to be very cautious abt everything'..and now she was doubtful of finding anything in RGI as well'.after all the guy who is so much careful abt his things'.must hav taken the necessary steps to hide it all away from her!!

Shayad mujhe usse office join karne ke bare me batana hi nahi chahiye tha'.I'm sure wo sari documents hatha dega'..hmm'.itna bada staff hai uska'..saari documents hathane me waqt hi kitna lagega'..but then usse bina bataye uska office kaise join karti'..and I guess I'm lucky enough that he has allowed me to join'.mana kar deta to bhi kya kar leti'.lekin aise thodi chalega'.itna waqt ho chuka hai'.aur mujhe aisa kuch nahi mila jisse main uske liye ek bhi pareshani create kar saku'.wat the hell are u Adil Raichand?? Tum sab kuch aise chhupa kar nahi rakh sakte'..I'll get everything out for sure'.

Here Rashi gets a call'.and she seems excited'.

Rashi: Hi Bhaiya'.kaise ho??

Person: I'm gud'.ghar pe sab kaisa hai?? Pata chala usne shaadi kar li'.

Rashi: Yeah'.and Bhabhi is really gud'.waise aap ne AB ko congratulate kiya??

Person: I've got better things to do'.

Rashi: Bhaiya pls'.

Person: Okay'.I forgot main to AB ki chamchi se baat kar raha hu'.

Rashi: Don't sound so mean ok?

Person: Chal Dadi se baat kara'.

Rashi: Yeah'.just hold on'.

And Rashi goes to call her Dadi'.

Rashi: Dadi'.Rishabh Bhaiya ka phn hai'..

Rishabh Raichand (played by Samir Sharma): Another son of the Raichands '..Rashi's another elder bro'..he and Adil r of almost same age''but he is in Canada right now'..not really interested in joining RGI'.he has mastered in business management'.but now he is out there'..enjoying his life'..mostly becoz he doesn't want to cum bak'..

Dadi: Hello Rishabh beta'.kaisa hai tu??

Rishabh: Main thik hu Dadi'.aap kaisi hai?? Aur Maa??

Dadi: Hum sab thik hai'.bas teri bahut yaad ati hai'.

Rishabh: Mujhe bhi Dadi'.

Dadi: Achha? To phir laut kyun nahi ata??

Rishabh: Nahi Dadi'..jab tak wo hai'..tab tak main nahi lautne wala'.jab wo naa rahe'..tab laut aunga'..

Dadi: Tu apni zidd nahi chhor sakta kya?? Kyun uski wajah se tu apne parivaar se dur hai??? Yaha sab kuch tera hai Rishabh'..aur ye tu achhese janta hai!!

Rishabh: Main to yehi janta tha Dadi'.tab tak jab tak Papa ne sab kuch sirf uske naam nahi kiya tha'..but never mind'.agar unki yehi marzi thi ki sab kuch unka Adil sambhalega'.to phir yehi sahi'..wo sambhalta rahe sab kuch'.main yaha bahut khush hu Dadi'.kaafi maze me hu'.its a fun life'.quite like heaven!!!

Here at office'..Shekhar was sorting out files'.when Adil joined in'.

Shekhar: Arre tum?? Tumhe yaha ane ki kya zarurat thi?? I mean'..u must be having ur meetings Adil'' I'll manage!!

Adil: Akele itna kuch nahi kar paoge'.aur phir maine socha'.koi aur nahi shamil ho sakta'.but I can certainly join in'..right??

Shekhar: Of course'.if u say so!!

Adil: Waise'abhi ka meeting cancel ho gaya hai'.thats y am here!!

Shekhar: I knw'.meeting cancel naa bhi hota'.to bhi tum aa jate'.

Adil: In that case'.I guess u hav been w8ing for me'.(and Shekhar looks confused) U hav done almost nothing Shekhar'..did I forget to mention tumhe ye sab kuch aaj hi khatam karna hai??

Shekhar: (looks at him shocked) Yes'.u did forget that Adil!! Mujhe laga do chaar din me araam se kar lunga!!

Adil: Ahh'.am sorry abt that'one sec'(and Adil makes a call to cancel his meetings for the rest of the day and tells every1 else to take the day off) Now'.I can help u!!

And Adil starts to take out files and all'..and here Shekhar just smiles at him'.happy that he knew his frnd well enough but that smile also bore a stint of sadness'..coz he knew this guy in front of him'.was mostly highly misunderstood!!

Adil: Why r u staring at me??

Shekhar: Nothing''was just thinking'.its a hell of a life'.

Adil: Well in that case'.u must never think of life to be a heaven!!

At night Adil returns home'..but to his surprise Rashi was still awake'..she had been w8ing for him at the doorway only'.

Adil: Hey'.tu jaag kyun rahi hai??

Rashi: Aaj Rishabh Bhaiya ka phn aya tha!!

Adil: Ohh'.to kaisa hai wo?? Koi problem to nahi hai na??

Rashi: Nahi'.lekin unse baat karne ke baad se Dadi ka mood bahut kharab hai AB''aur wo'.(she doesn't continue further)

Adil: Aur wo mere bare me kuch keh rahi thi kya??

Rashi: Haan'.mujhe bilkul achha nahi laga AB'..in fact mujhe wo bilkul achhi nahi lagti'..

Adil: Kitni baar samjhau inn sab baaton se pareshan nahi hote''.ye sab matter bahut critical hai Rashi'.tu abhi nahi samjhegi'.aur haan'.wo Dadi hai teri'.wo tujhe achhi nahi lagti'..aisa kehna sahi nahi hai!!

Rashi: But I cant pretend to like her AB'..mujhe bahut gussa ata hai jab wo apke bare me kuch kehti hai'.wo kyun nafrat karti hai aap se??

Adil: Wo mujhse nafrat nahi karti hai Rashi'.kyunki kisise nafrat karna itna asaan nahi hota'.pehle khudko uss nafrat ki aag me jalna padta hai'..tab jaa kar aap kisise nafrat kar paate ho'..aur rahi baat Dadi ki'.to agar main kahu ki mujhpe gussa karne se unke dil ko sukoon milta hai'.unhe tasalli milti hai'.to isme ghalat kya hai??

Rashi: Ye kya baat hui AB?? Apno par gussa karke kisiko kaise sukoon mil sakta hai??

Adil: Kaha tha na'.tu abhi nahi samjhegi!! Ab chal'.so jaa!!

And he goes wid her to make sure she sleeps peacefully leaving behind all these thoughts'..but while talking to Rashi'..Adil fails to notice Ashna who had just opened the door of her room'.and happened to hear the conversation btwn Adil n Rashi!!

Ab iska kya matlab hua?? Dadi itni to nafrat karti hai usse'..lekin phir bhi isse lagta hai wo usse nafrat nahi karti'.mujhe to kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai'.shayad pehle mujhe iss nafrat ki wajah janni hogi'.

Next day'..Ashna is to join the office'. so today Adil decides to leave for office wid Ashna only'..as it was her first day and he shud be the one introducing her to everyone'..she was his wife after all!! But as he keeps w8ing for her'.she cums out wearing a saree'..

Ashna keeps adjusting her saree as she was not much used to it'..and here Adil keeps staring at her for a while'.he has seen her for more than two months'.and in btwn he never found her in a saree'.well except her bridal attire of course'.but then at that point of tym he had much more to think abt'.may be he didn't pay much attention to how beautiful she looked'..but now as he looks at her'..he cud see the elegance in her which was perhaps god-gifted!! Of course she was not wearing any make-up'..yet she managed to look this much elegant'..that Adil was finding it hard to take his eyes off her!!! However he had to look away because if he stared for longer'.he might not remain Adil Raichand anymore!!

Adil: Are you done??

Ashna: Yeah'chalo!!

And Adil notices her wearing the mangalsutra which she must hav taken off before going to bathe'.then he looks thru the mirror how she adorns her forehead wid the 'sindoor''..and seeing that he quickly looks away!!

Adil: Ashna'.pls chalo.

Ashna: Tum khud to baithe ho'.aur mujhe chalne ko keh rahe ho'.kya hamesha tum koi bhi kaam khud kiye bina pehle dusro ko karne ko kehte ho??

Adil: I'm moving'..(he says ignoring her taunt)

The car ride was extremely quiet wid both Adil and Ashna looking out in the opposite directions'.but yes'.both were in thoughts'..while Ashna was thinking of how she can move ahead wid her intentions''Adil was thinking of how to manage everything wid utmost care'..he cudnt afford to hurt anyone!!

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Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello guys....mujhe na bahut gussa aa raha hai....why does this editing disturb so much?? Font bada nahi hota to color thik se nahi hota to kabhi font style thik nahi hota....๐Ÿ˜ก....main to tang aa gayi hu....๐Ÿคข

Anyways....now coming to the UD....guess....intros khatam nahi hue the....and u get to see....another member of Raichands....๐Ÿ˜‰....๐Ÿ˜† Isse kehte hai....confusions solve kiye bina aur create karna....๐Ÿ˜†...guess am too gud at it....๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Btw....this part firstly goes to DEEPA.....who celebrated her bday on 3rd Sept....and I very conveniently am posting this on 6th....๐Ÿ˜†
Secondly...a credit goes to Priya....our Sweet_Lioness....ab to tumhe bhi nahi pata tumhe credit kyun mil raha hai....but mera mood achha ho gaya tha....tumhara ek comment padhke...isiliye UD kiya...
And lastly and mostly...its for Nandu....tujhse baat kar rahi hu....isiliye itni der tak jaag rahi hu...and UD bhi kar rahi hu....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Chalo abhi....bak bak khatam....lets see...if I can do sumthing wid the font size....๐Ÿ˜†....enjoy the LONG part if u can....(without getting bored๐Ÿ˜†)....Thanks to all.....๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›
Luv,
Sumi.๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

* Okay'.let me tell you the bed is big enough to share''isliye main Adil ko kisi sofe pe nahi sulane wali *

Superb ....HAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHHAA !!
I think Adil is both out of an extra marital relationship...Either Adil or Rishabh....Or Else he mustve been adopted...this is why Dadi hates him coz the father left everything to the adopted/illicit son and so the real son of the house left home...
I'd hate it if Ashna decides to join hands with Rishabh to destroy Adil....Poor Adil...I hope he finds some relief ...Bechara...!
I wonder why he said "Main hamesha nahi rahunga"...is he going sumwhere ya is he unwell?
Luv,
Vandu
Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago

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