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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#171

hey dear thank u for the part................but just one mistake dear..............my birthday is actually on 3rd not 2nd sweety........😆............

well one thing i have to say....................am somewhat confused with this part with that additional character.................adil and rishabh share what kinda relationship and dunno why adil is so very protective and secretive with the things....................i just hope ashna doesnt hurt adil more than hes already suffering................adil if fine na coz he said he won't be there forever.....................wonder why dadi hated adil this much and also the rishabh...................but glad that they share the bed...............good good................cont soon sweety..................

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#172

hi.......😊😊😊..... firstly kuch toh connection hai............. 😛😛😛........... we update simaltaneously 😆😆😆😆............
ok........ coming to part.......

......... it was 2gud............ 👏 👏👏..........the way everything was expressed............... every character's feeling was explained appropriately from adil to rashi to dadi to ashna...........😃............ even late Mr. sehgal 😛😛.....bahut ache admi the.... guess he wud have gone direct to heaven 😃😃...... itna nek kaam karke gaye hai....... 😃😃😃

as 4 dadi 😡😡😡😡............ let her meet me.....😆😆... i wanna ask wats her problem is.... 😆😆😆😆.......why does she not like adil 😳😳.........

rashi the ever loving sister......... the only supporter of adil 😃😃.....bechari akeli sabse ladti hai adil ke liye....... 😆😆😆😆

ashna...... going to office 😊................ so all the best to adil 👍🏼......😆😆😆guess u will not be surprised maine adil ko all the best kyun bola 😆😆😆........ advice 4 ashna....... kuch gadbad mat karna.....😡..... don't do anything wrong to my adil ....else .....😆😆😆😆

oh by the way where is Adil's papa....... 😕😕............ bechare adil ko sab ke beech fasa kar where he is....😆😆😆

does it feeling strange.......😛😛.... i'm yet say something about adil 😳😳😳😳............. kya kahu 😍............ ok.......... want to give him tightest hug 🤗............. he is so alone.......😭😭 inspite having so many members in family.......... inspite having a wife....... 😭 😭😭.......... no 1 to share his sadness, problems......... 😭😭😭............. Main hoon na 😉 😉............ seriously 😛😛😆.........

special mention for the office leaving scene........... adil......... finding his wife b'ful....... 😉😉😉.......... kya ho raha hai..... 😛😛😛

again such a long comment ........ 😈............ wake up sumi...... ab tak toh so gayi hogi 🥱🥱..... 😆😆😆
wake up & start writing the next part 😛😛😛😛.......

........coz eagerly waiting 4 next part 😛😛😛.........want to see wat ashna is cooking up 😕 😕😕............ & don't make my adil dumb like sujal..... who suffered everything with a smile ..... whatever wrong kashish did 😡😡...

continue soon.......... 😃 😃 😃.........pretty soon 😛😛

as 4 ur font problem..... guess on ur computer also u write in same font that u gonna use on IF.....
like if u use arial on IF .......... while writing on computer use arial only....... 😊😊

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

hey sumi
great update...this fic seems to be getting more and more interesting day by day...
wasnt expecting Rishabh to be like Dadi too...gosh, why do all of them hate Adil so much? He cant be that bad even if he is reserved.
Adil is pretty smart to figure out Ashna's intentions so accurately...:)
I really hope the misunderstandings get cleared up before Ashna does something really disastrous.
nice ud
Sur

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

great part want to read more dear

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

hi 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

the up is really a sweet one😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😃😃😃😃😃

adil aashna ke kahene par uske papa ke pooja mein nahin raheta haai

he is really caring 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊par aashna doesnt like her

aur yeh dadi inhe toh bas moka chaheye adil ko neecha dekhane ke liye😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

buddhe khusat kahe ke 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢😡😡😡😡😡😡

aur ab yeh reshab yeh bhi adil se nafrat karta haai😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 aur uske piccha baja yeh haai ke adil ke papa ne sab business adil ko sop diya

savh mein yaar adil ke life mein dukh he😭😭😭 uske dadi uska bhai aur ab uske patni bhi usse nafrat karte haai😭😭😭😭😭😭

poor heeeee

plz cont soon and do pm me

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Hi Sumaiya

How r u???

Update was really gud..👏👏

Now I really feel sorry for Adil..😭😭

Every1 is expectinh him do something..Firstly It was Ashna's dad n den his brother n dadi..by the way who is Sameer Sharma??

No1 knows real Adil except his frind Shekhar n he too is not very much aware of his personal life.It seems that he has a dual personality..One where he is a shrewd business man and the other where he is a family man..

Aashana's dad trusted him with his life..When will Aashna learn to trust him?

She is trying to destroy his life..She doesn't know that Adil can do anything for her happiness.

Rishabh n Adil seem to b step brother's else why wud Rishabh hate him so much??

Atleast Adil is sleeping in his own bed ..I thought he must b adjusting himself on a couch or sofa as usually shown in serials😆😆😆

I think Adil is falling hard for his wife but she seems to b unaware..😉

Pls dont let anything happen to my Adil..

Bye

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

awesome part

woww

excellent

amazing

but feeling really sad for adil...

cont soon

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

wonderful part sumi !!!

but y is Adil saying ki woh hamesha nahi rahega???

continue soon...😊

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#179

Update was very good.

Adil, Ashna ko naraz nahi karma chanta tha is liye who subah ghar se chala gyaa. Adil hamesha dusron ko kush rakh ne ki koshish karta ha. Then why is he always misunderstood.

Everyone has expectations from him. Ashna's father wanted him to take care of his daughter after his death. His brother wants him take care of their family business and does not want to help Adil. He hates Adil. And no matter how much Adil does for his family it is never enough for his dadi. No one ever thinks about what his expectations are.

He had to behave rudely with Ashna because he did not see any other way to convince her for their wedding. Ashna's father trusted Adil completely, with his business, his daughters future and even his own life. Can't Ashna have a little confidence in her fathers decision and try to trust Adil. She is infact trying to destroy him.

The only person who understands him is his friend Shekhar. Its good to see the trust that he has on Adil...the way he never questions Adil's decisions. He even goes to help Shekhar knowing that he will need help.

Adil is falling for Ashna, but he would never admit this even to himself.

Please continue soon

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#180

Sumi yaar tu kar kya rahi hai?

isse itna interesting kyun bana rahi hai...ab next update tak intezaar karna padega.... abhi ek aur naya character..waise it's good ki Ashna joining the office...hey plzzz try to update soon n bit too longer than this one.offcourse if possible,so in short m waiting..........!

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