U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 27

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Posted: 15 years ago
sis you said na ki tumhe te ff jaldi khatam karna hai
so update it na
jaldi update karogi tabhi to jaldi khatam hoga
so update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
love u jaan.
lovely update.👏its amazing dear.
please update soon dear.😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful part thanx for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guyz! i m back with my update! thanku soooo much for liking it!!! so here now!


PART # 13

as nupur reached sharma mansion, she ran toward her room and shut the door, she was damn feared the whole incident was continuesly romming around in her mind, she sit by the corner of the bed and rest her head against wall, she closed her eyes but once again with a jerk she opened her eyes rv's face was came infront of her eyes , she shook her head and stand again she was feeling thirsty she move towards jug but suddenly she saw her reflection in a mirror, their is a blood on her cheek, she touch her cheek with her fingers and remember how mayank's blood flowing frm his hands, she ran towards bathroom splash water again and again on her face, after coming back she stand near by the window, she was waiting for mayank who was still not came back, its about 12 o clock and there is no sign of mayank... she sit again on her bed and rest her head for a while.............

its dark very dark and she is alone nobody is here she was running but suddenly someone clutch her wrist tightly and a sharp dagger is coming to stabble in her heart and it is coming nearer she screamed loudly " MAYANKK" she get up with a gr8 jerk and screamed again "mayank"
M: wht happened jaan?? wht happened tell me?? mayank was lying next to her he getup by listening nupur's screamed, he sit close to her ,she was swetting badly and shivering with fear as mayank petted her back she jumped with fear and screamed again "mayank" her eyes were closed tightly and tears rolling down on her face, mayank hold her hands and said with love
M: jaan i m here!! see i m here with you!! slowly nupur opened her eyes and saw him sitting near her tears fell frm her eyes, she move little forward and hide herself on his wide chest she was clutching his vest by her both hands and crying badly first mayank could'nt understand anything then he wrapped his strong arms around her,, frm one hand he petted her head.... nupur said while crying
N: he will kill me! he will kill me...... mayank tighten her grip around her and whisperingly said in her ear
M: i m with u jaan!!! nobody will touch, u relax i m here!!! don't cry my love! he swept her tears by the back of his hands and hug her again, for a while she stop crying but still shivering with fear .
N:" mujhay darr lag raha hay"!! if i close my eyes he will come here! mayank take a deep breath and said
M: jaan i m here!! tum soojao! main jaag raha hoon! now come on close ur eyes and lay down he made her to lay properly and covered her with blanket, he about to move she held her hand and said in deep fear
N: plzz dont leave me!!! mayank look her with smile he petted her hands and sit in a cuddle position and said with love
M: where can i go jaan!!! my all ways are end towards u!!! now comeon close ur eyes,, i said na i m awaking, get a sleep!!! nupur tightly closed her eyes she is not in state for thinking about anything else, she was not thinking a bit that she is in arms of a man whom she hated most, she remember only one thing that she is save in his arms and nobody could do anything to her...................

a beam of a sunlight came and lighten the room slowly nupur opened her eyes and found herself in his arms,she want to get up she was feeling so much awkward that she was sleeping whole night on his chest then suddenly a voice distract her thoughts..
M: goodmorning jaan!! he said and free her with his grip around her, she get up immediately and trying avoid to meet his gaze,, after overcome with akwardness she said hesitantly..
N: when u awake?? mayank can feel her akwardness so he get up and sit,, he rush his hand in his hairs and said
M: i m awaking frm whole night!! nupur looked him in disbelief but his red puffy eyes giving proof of it, then suddenly she saw his hands which are covered with bandage she look him again
N: howz ur hands??? mayank look his hands and said
M: ya its fine its a just little cut!! mayank look her again she was looking confused ,mayank said again
M: do u want to ask some thing?? nupur look him and nodded her head and said
N: do...do..u..killed him??? as mayank listened this he laughed then put his hand's back on his mouth and said
M: i lovedd to do that!! but how can i do that?? u gave me ur swear other wise his chapter was been closed long ago!! nupur take a relief breath and said
N: then wht u do with him?? mayank put the pillow on his lap and said
M: seriously the first thought was came in to my mind was to kill him then i remember ur swear so........... but i thought death is too smooth punishment for him, so i will make his each breath worst then death by sending him in vikrant central jail. nupur's mouth opened by listening this
N: wht? vikrant central jail thats a most horrible and stricked jail in country but how??? mayank was smiling at her and said
M: wht? wht he did is not enough to send him in jail??? and yes i disclose his drug racked ,after a reception incident i was collecting all the proof's against him and u know i make sure with jailer of that jail to be very veryyy keen and harsh with him! he will cry for his death ... mayank eyes were sparkling with his passion , and nupur feeling fear with that after a while she said
N: u send him in jail thats right but don't do...
M: no!!! mayank cut it off he said again
M: if hi did this to me! i leave him but he try to kill u which i can 't tolerate !! he will pay for wht he did! by saying that mayank move out frm the room and bang the door in anger, nupur was in silent mode she cant understand this man,one sideshe saw his affection, his concern , his love?? then suddenly his passion, his anger, nupur looked at the door which is still moving in back n forth she put her both hands on her head and said in disbelief ..
N: "i will never understand this man" ...................





hey guyz that all for now! sorry if u found spelling or gramatical mistake , so nupur in danger again,........... she will found another face of mayank how it will be? positive or........??? want to know so wait for next update till then love u all and sieonara!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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KOMAL




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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey its great yaar...
I know dat she faces his anger but i think now it'll effect her in positive way...She'll feel herself protective now...And mayank is such a sweetheart..He didnt sleep whole night just to feel her safe...
Amazing update...Loved the way u portray mayank's character...
cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update dear.........
luved mayur scene
cont soon n tnx fr pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part komal plz update soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update komal
just loved it
now i m loving with mayank


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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update
nupur is starting to like or atleast depend on mayank
i hope this new dface of mayank is good n not bad
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Posted: 15 years ago
g8 jus superb................
thanx for sharing..................
luvd it........

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