U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi im ur new ff reader...
I alwz love to read ff on mayur and u've written this ff wonderfuly...👏👏
First time i saw mayank in such an obsessive character...He's like dhruv and i should hate him coz he gave utter pain to nupur...But u know wat i cant help but love him so much...Though he has done very wrong with nupur but never misbehaves with her nor touch her...He is crazzy but have a kind heart in him...
And in last part he just took my heart..😍😍.i mean u coz the whole thing is written by u so a biiigggg hug to u for such a sweet update...🤗🤗.
Really love the concept and ur writing style...
Keep it up...👍🏼👍🏼
Cont soon and do pm me nxt tym...

love❤️
Auroni
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi komal
thanks
for lovely update
and for beautiful song and the dance you describe very well
lovley update
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guyz thanx alot for liking my update!!!! i love all ur comments! thanx once again!

PART # 12

a week passed away mayank maintain his distance frm nupur, he watch her all night but secretly bcoz ,he go to bed when she slept and get up early in the morning before she woke up, but the time he spend watching her is enough for him to be happy , nupur is now adjust in sharma mansion its too beautiful every day she explore new place in mansion ,she is now satisfied by mayank's behaviour , so its help her to regain her calmness back she is used to of dai maa she is just a sweet heart she remain with her entire day, telling her old stories and the best thing is that she never talk about mayank infront of her, the days are passed just like that..
its saturday evening nupur recieved a call that suhani is in hospital she rush to dai maa and panically said
N: daii maa!! dee is in health care hospital! i m going their ok!! she about tu turn when daain maa hold her shoulder and said
DM: beta take tha car keys u can drive?? she handover keys to her and asked nupur just nodded her head and ran towards door....
tears fell down frm her eyes she was hell worried about suhani its her 1st pragnancy don't know wht happened to her?? nupur was in her thoughts suddenely she found some one lying on the road, she quickly put the foot on the break, her car stop with a jerk ,
N: OMG! wht happened to him?? she opened her car door and move towards the man, she petted his shoulder and said in concern
N: helloo!!! hey r u alright??? suddenely that man grab her hand and move his face toward her , nupur get shocked , fear came across her spine, that man laugh in weired way and said
G: now i m fine!! hahaha little pigeon is now in trap of the great "ranvijay" hahahah he stand up but nupur's hand is still in his grip, nupur was trying to move out her hand frm his grip but no use rv saw her and said
RV: nice try babes!! now tell me who is going to save u frm me??? nupur lookes at him tears falling down frm her eyes she said loudly in anger
N: leave me!! i said leave my hand!!! rv once again laughed at her and said
RV: ohh my poor baby!! wht u thought u slapped me twice and i will leave u?? not in ur dreams MRS MAYANK SHARMA and i also take revenge wht ur husband did to me ! now be ready to die he said and take out a sharp dagger and move it toward nupurs face lightly , nupur was pale she start shivering with fear, rv looked at her and smile in weired way and said
RV: come on babes scream! i gave u chance he take 2 step towards car and scream himself
RV: is there any one who can save this little pigeon frm me???? oohh no one !! so .... , nupur closed her eyes becoz she know no body came here to save her , she is going to die rv cluth dagger tightly in his fist
and move his hand whom in which he clutch dagger with all his power the voice came frm his throat awwwww.....
today is saturday so he came early frm his office, he enter in his home sweet home with smile on his face he saw daii maa moving towards him he said
M: hey dai maa!! where is nupur??? daii maaa take his court frm his hands and tell about the phone call and hospitilaization of suhani, mayank became furious he dialed a number after a tone he said
M: hi adiraj! h r u? and suhani?? adiraj become his good pal in short span of time he likes mayank and all the persons related to nupur is being lovely for mayank!
A: hey mayank!! we both r fine! howz u and nupur??? mayank sense something wrong suhani is alright and adiraj asking about nupur that means nupur is not reached their he get furious he calm down himself and said
M:we r fine! ok adiraj i will call u layter bye! he cut the line n ran towards daii maa
M: daii maa! tell me? benji or driver is there any one of him gone with nupur??? daii maa shook her head and said
DM: no chotay sahab! she gone alone .... noo mayank ran his hand on his head and asked again
M: is she tell u where is she going?? daii maa gave confused looked to mayank and said
DM" wht happened chotay sahab?? mayank hold her hand and said in frustation
M: dai maa plzzz tell me now!!! dai maa nodded her head and said
DM: she said she is going to health care hospital.. mayank ran toward his car he can sense something wrong will be happened he ran his car toward the health care hospital rout, in his heart he prayed to god for the first time in his life he never prayed to god bcoz wht he want he get before saying but now he is praying to his god
M: god plzz save her!!! a single tear ran down frm his eye he wipe it harshly with his wrist but the sight infront of his eyes became him freeze he saw rv with bare dagger in his hand and his jaan was standing so pale and helpless her eyes were closed ...more than that he can't see or thought he ran like thunder and hold the dagger before it touch his nupur........
rv looked shocked when he saw mayank holding the dagger now he became pale he know very well that mayank sharama wht will do to him. nupur opened her eyes and saw him standing infront of her she move her eye on dagger a scream comes out her mouth he holding balade side of a dagger with his bare hands and blood is flowing like a water frm his hands, rv try hard but mayank make him loosen his grip he gave him a tight kick on his stomach which make him fall he threw the dagger and cluth rv' frm his coller his eyes were bllodshot he roar to rv
M: wht u thought?? haan wht u thought to do with my wife?? he gave a hard punch on his nose which make him fell once again but mayank cluth his neck and said with damn anger
M: listen carefully u bas...d!! if u want to reached nupur u have to go over frm me!!! "" in the distance between death and nupur there is always u found MAYANK SHARMA""
after recieveing mayank call benji reached to health care hospital but in way he found them he ran towards maynak
B: chotay shahab!! leave him on me!!! he said by seeing blood which flow frm mayanks hand , mayank looked at him and said
M: take nupur to home!!! benji move toward him and trying to say something but mayank roar again
M: now!!!!rv is in uncouisness mayank is still clutching his coller ,benji immediately move towards nupur who is in shock position he hold her hand suddenely she back frm his trance she ran toward mayank , she put her hand on mayank's shoulder she breath heavily and said
N: mayank!!! mayank look back to her he leave rv and stand up infront of her ,she is shivering badly he put his hand on her cheek and said
M: go with benji nupur!!! tears roll down frm her eyes she is damn feared now however whtever he is but she feel save with him, she don't know benji if he ditch her she shook her head and said while crying
N: noo i will go only with u!! she start sobbing once again, mayank look at her with love he smile and lift her chin and said
M: jaan!! do u trust me!!! for a while nupur saw in his deep eyes she thought "these eyes never ditch me" then she nodded her head, which make mayank beyond happiness he clean her tears by the back of his hand and said with all his love
M: come jaan!! he take him to the car after she sit he close the door and pepped through window and said
M:jaan if u trust me than go with benji!! nupur who sitting relaxed in car jumped once again she look him with fear but he smile to her and nodded his eyes to say like "i m there" she trust him so she nodded her head but she look him again and said
N: tum??? mayank like her concern over him , he take a deep breath and said
M: i have to teach him a good lesson!! he looked back at rv who was lying on the road i will be back!! benji go now!! benji move fastly toward car and drove frm their, nupur look back frm window he looking at her but soon he vanished... she rest her head on the back seat and close her eyes whole incident was start reminding her how rv trap her how mayank save her his words resounds in her mind
""in the distance between death and nupur u always found
MAYANK SHARMA"""


phewww~~ long update haan so guyz tell me u like update or not share ur comments with me i m so greedy of it!! soo,, nupur is start trusting mayank, but will she start believing his love or not??? wht lesson mayank teach that rv ?? is mayank keep himself away frm nupur more or.....???? want to know than wait for next update!! till then spread love and sieonara!!!!!

LOVE
KOMAL ❤️



Edited by komal991 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
not liked it but loved dear
brilliant update Komal
i hate RV 4 trying 2 kill nupur
n my mayu the savier love this dilouge
in the distance between death and nupur u always found
MAYANK SHARMA""" 👏👏
i love how nups trust mayank n the whole part
can't wait next update
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
woow i'm 1st 1 to comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice ... let's see how nupur reacts to mayank now ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome prt
luvd it 2 d core
simplyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gr888888888888888888888888
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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will comment in the evening
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hi komal,
Lat part i thought moving faster thi wa balanced
Nupur is getting into comfort zone and thats the best thing
mayank i looking her whole night and getting up soon so that she is not uncomfortable
Nupur is really emotional she just ran for her sis after hearing the news
and mayank i equally smart guy ,he called Adhi to find out about the condition
and then RV on the Road - i hate this guy beyond the limits
Next when he said those words " That mayank is always in middle"
Thats something kind of punch line which will play a vital role i guess so
Nupur was scared and the waya mayank got her back - lovely
now next part RV ki dhunai 👏👏👏
So waiting for the update
aru
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
mind blowing update dear loved it plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 10-

rocking update

i loved it like anything


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