U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago
❤️THANK YOU NOTE❤️

THANK U SOOOO MUCCCH GUYZZ!!!😊 FOR LIKING MY UPDATE!!😃 I M VERYYYYYYYY HAPPY AFTER READ ALL UR COMMENTS!!😳 I WANT TO WELCOME TO MY NEW READERS WHO JUST CATCH MY FF THANX ALOT FRDS ☺️A BIG HUG FOR U ALL 🤗


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PART # 11

new day arrived room is lighten up with sunlight! nupur slowly opened her eyes and found herself in totally strange place she quickly get up but then she remembered that she is in sharma mansion in mayank sharma's bedroom she slowly move her neck to see mayank beside her but the bed is empty he is not their, she take a relief breath and went to wash room , after that a middle age woman come to in her bed room and said
W: madam do u want to take ur breakfast in ur room or on dining table? nupur thought breakfast on dining table meaning to face that crazy sharma again noooo, she said to the woman
N: noo i want to take my break fast here!! women noded her head and move out frm the room, after break fast nupur went to balcony its a beautiful view frm their whole garden of sharma mansion is visible frm their, a cool breezes touch her faces which made her feeling better but suddenely she listen the tapping of horse she opened her eyes and saw mayank riding on a white horse , the horse ran so fastly with in a blink they move backside of the mansion, nupur's face fell down after seeing him she went back to her room, that women again arrived with another stylish lady and said
W: madam.. tonight is ur reception and she is ur dress designer so she bring some dresses for tonight function so u will pick wht u like?? nupur nodded her head and saw wht the lady brought for her.......
mayank was trying hard to not make any single move which will hurt nupur thats why he get up early and went away frm the room, he thought nupur might be upset by seeing him on bed beside her he send dai maa to the room for the breakfast he knew that she will not came to the dining but he feel hurt so he went to his garden for riding on his favourite horse he is riding on it then suddenely he saw her she is smiling her eyes were closed and the air breezes playing with her hair tendrils which make her more beautiful mayank forget his pain his tension every thing but suddenely she opened her eyes and saw him her beautiful smile swept and her face fell down, mayank feel his heart will be tore in to pieces, so he move fast his horse, to make him away frm her sight......
RECEPTION NIGHT
nupur is ready in her golden saree with matching jewellery and a natural make up she is looking gorgeous, all day she is along with the lady which introduce herself to her as a dai maa she is so sweet and help her in every thing nupur feels thank god there is someone whom can i talk, she find her mother in dai maa, she is ready then dai maa came in to her room she pick the koal frm the dressing and put behind her earand said
DM: kisee ki nazer na lagay!! meri beti tu ek dum paree lag rahi hay!! nupur 's face is lighten up she is touched by her gesture, dai maa move toward her she has a box is her hands she open it she saw a pair of diamond kangan she slip it in her both hands and said
DM: yeh chotay sahab ki maa k hain! unhonay mertay huway mujhay diye thay k yeh unki bahoo ko pehnaoongi!!! aj mainay apna wada pura kiya!! nupur is not moving she looked at the kangaan she said nothing she did not want to hurt dai maa so she remain silent... after a while there is a knock at the door nupur opened it and saw him , he is wearing black dinner suit and he is looking freaking hot but no use nupur move her face frm his side mayank move towards her and stop his feats take break he put his hand in his pocket and said
M: r u ready??? he try hard but cant move his eyes frm her jaan face! nupur look to her and move toward door, mayank follow him, they reach in sharma mansions ground which is beautifully decorated as they reached the enterance spot light flash on them mayank put his hand araound her waist lightly nupur get shock she look him in disbelief he smile and said
M: ur parents is coming here so smile for them jaan.. nupur look at the garden where her family move towards her happiness easily visible on her faceshe forgot every thing she take a step and hug her mom , her dee her dad her whole family around her wht she want more. in mean while situation uday take the mike and said
U: ladies and gentleman welcome to the grand reception of my beloved frd so guyz plz welcome "MR & MRS MAYANK SHARMA"!! mayank and nupur look at each other and move towaard the stage, mayank put his hand on her shoulder so nupur give her only a look which bring smile on mayanks face.......
U: so u have to dance!! nupur get a shock by listening this, mayank observe nupur keenly so he move towards uday and said
M: no uday we cant do dance!!
U: wht r u saying jahana pana??? this is ur reception u have to do dance ok now i m not listening come here he grab mayanks hand and move towards nupur and said
U: come on bhabi all our guests waiting for ur dance come he grab nupurs hand and put in hand of mayank and went out the spot light is now on them whole crowd were silent n music start........ mayank hold her hand tightly grab her bare waist lightly and push her toward him self....

ek din, ek din teri rahoo main
bahoon main panhoon main aoonga...
ek din tera ho jaonga...
yeh dil tu na keh saka yeh batain....
dil tu na keh saka..........

nupur get shiver frm his touch she feel her body is burning where ever he touch her she not see in her eyes how ever she know that his intense gaze is on her face....
tu janay na tu chahat meri kitne betaab hay..
hoo jo bersoon mere palkoon main tha tu wohi khawab hay...
her gharee teri yadoon main, batoon main
iradoon main aonga kho jaonga.....
ek din tera ho jaonga......
yeh dil tu na keh saka yeh batain
dil tu na keh saka...........

mayank put her both hands on his chest and grab her waist with his both hands tightly he can't take his eye frm her face, her scent make him more crazy she is near to him very near now his thoughts were end, he tighten the grip more a bit of sudden nupur look in to his eyes with anger but she found so intense filled with love chocolate brown eyes.. she can't take it any more she lower hwer eyes again..

yeh jhukti nazer janayjiger hosh lay jatey hay..
main kaisey kahoon ek ajnabi derd day jate hay..
chup k say teri neendoon main ,khwaboo main panahoon main..
aongaa khojaonga..
ek din tera ho jaongaa......
mayank towel her and bound her in his arms he put his chin on her shouldersuddenely he relaised nupur is feeling uncomfortable in his arms he get back in his senses loosen his grip around her and hold her hand only..
and take a bow frm the guests., then he left her hand all guest were clapping and praising the heavenly made couple....
as they left the stage nupur 's family come around them they are going back to home becoz suhani is not feeling well she is pragnant so they leave mayank went to scout them, nupur also feel very tired so she move towards mansion as she enters in the lounch she heard a voice
g: hey beautiful!!!! nupur turned back and saw a guy standing infront of her she thought she saw him any where the guy came near to her she look him and said
N:i think i know u? nupur is in confussion, guy shed his weired smile and said
G: how can u forget the guy whom u slap infront of whole collage!! who only asking u for a date???? nupur suddenely remember the incident which happened 6 month ago....
N: "ranvijay"...... wht r u doing here??? rv laugh and said
RV: u remember my name thats good! so now tell me do u like my revenge??? nupur looked him in confusion rv laughed again on her and said
RV: my revenge "MAYANK SHARMA" and he told her all! anger brust on nupur's head she take one more step toward him and give tight slap!!!!!
mayank is back in ground but he not found nupur their he look here and there then he ask benji that where is nupur ? and benji told him that he saw her going in mansion mayank move towards mansion but the scene make him brust..
RV: u!!!!! i will kill u bi...h!! and he tightly hold nupurs neck, nupur try to out his grip then they listen a horrible roar
M: how dare u??? how dare u rv to touch my wife??? he push rv hard and grab nupur's hand rv get up once againand move towards nupur but her feet take break becoz there is mayank sharma in between nupur and him , mayank's eye filled with blood anger he clutch his coller and give tight punches on his nose blood brust out frm rv nose , nupur is stunned she is not in condition to understand any thing he saw mayank beat rv badly then suddenly benji arrived in lounch mayank move toward him and grab the revolver frm his pocket and point it on rv,
M: i will kill u!! nupur is back on her senses she ran towards mayank and put her hand on mayanks hand she breath heavily and said
N: noo dont do this!! but mayank not listening to her he load the revolver then suddenly nupur scream
M: my SWEAR on u! dont do "MAYANK" mayank looked at her in shocked he saw her face is wetting with here tears he want to kill that man but he cant nupur gave him her swear and the first very first time she take his name he cant kill him he down his hand in which he clutch revolver but his anger is not vanished he shot again n again on the floor thaa thaa thaa nupur put her hands on her ears he continue shot until the revolver get empty
mayank look at benji and roar again
M: take this bas...d away frm my sight now!!!!! he grab nupurs hand and take her to bedroom he make sit her on bed give her a glass of water and said
M: r u alright jaan! take it easy i m with u nothing will be happened to u hmm now take some reast i will be back ok!!! he went out frm the room. and nupur is shivering becoz first time she saw mayank sharma 's actual anger,and after that he is speaking with her so politely how this man changed so sudden all the thoughts were brust in her mind she fell down on the bed and cover herself with a blanket!


pheww lonnngg update so guyz do u like it or not tell me?? and yes there is another attack on nupur but mayank is not with her so is nupur hurt or die??? is mayank will happened to any thing to nupur ? wht happened to rv want to know so wait for next update!!! till then seionara!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for update and PM komal I am terribly waiting for it.
Really its a Great update i like it soooooooooooooooooo much yar.I just loveeeeeeeeeeee it❤️
Waoooooooooooo nupur wear a golden sari Imagen how beautiful she was looking.
Oh my God.
mayank safe nupur know this is the right time for nupur to think about how much he love her. lets see what happen next.
keep writing .try to cont soon.
with Love
DHANAK
Edited by DhanakZ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
res😃 will un res tom 😉
Edited by maloo19 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was awesome update loved it mayur dance although nups wasn't comfortable but good i hate RV 😡 plzzz Komal don't do anything with nups fabulous part lov thanks 4 d pm n update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks komal tht was soooooooo awesome update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Komal

this was beautiful update and long too
sorry cound comment in the morning
I loved it
the way nupur was feeling and dai ma and then mayank who really made himself away
uske bad reception and the dance awesome yaar
RV - i hate this guy always
Good mayank gve him good lesson but one thing
story laga jaise achanak se fast bhag rahi ho
a\but u r the writer u know how to apply the break
Thanks for the pm dear
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowww!!!!!!!!!!fabulous update
mindblowing
awww mayur dance......they r soooooo sweet
arghhhhhh!!!!!hate dat rv...mayank point gun on him!!!!am shocked
he love her sooooooooo much man!!!!!
dnt do anything with nupur plzzzzzzzzz
cont soooon n tnx fr pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dear mind blowing plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome
update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanx 4 d pm

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