ONLY YOU FF(Maaneet) Part 13 : Page 131 (28/8/11) - Page 6

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Hey nice SS

Liked Maan n Geet's relation

Loved the way Geet got mixed wit all Maan's family

Maan strted loving Geet

Geet is lil confusing she achanak came in Maan's life

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Part4

He came out of her room ….making sure Geet slept peacefully….when he came out he saw his mother waiting for him……..'Maan don't try to escape from the situation…….be practical Maan……..' Naina asked seriously trying to put the situation in his mind……….'what practical ma……being Geet here is no trouble to anyone…..and I don't think any need to send her to mental asylum…and I never think of it also……' Maan said seriously…….

'Maan don't be stupid….in two months your going to get married….what you will tell her…' Naina shoot straight question….. Maan felt something piercing when he heard that he is going to get married to Sameera….but answered 'I can make her understand about Geet and I think she will understand….' Maan told with shivering voice…..'Who Sameera will understand……..?' gaaytri asked ….'Ye…Yes…' Maan said but he is not himself sure about his answer…..somewhere he also knows that Sameera never accept another girl besides me…..he very well know that Sameera is very possessive for him……….

'Maan stop this non sense you and me know that Sameera will not accept Geet to be in this house with us or I should say with you………' Naina said sharply…Maan is feeling restless hearing his mothers questions unknowingly those questions raised his insecurities loosing Geet…….the thought itself made him drown deep in sea………

'Beta listen me….i also equally love Geet as you…..but keeping her here is not solution….' But Maan didn't look like convincing……'Maan look at me….' Naina lifted his face keeping her hands on his cheeks and said 'Maan u want her to be normal like others or not….?' Maan nodded 'then u have to listen to me beta….we will send her to asylum and get her treat with best doctors……' Naina said calmly…..she saw nothing but pain in his face and with heavy heart she said 'this is the only solution to get things right for everyone…..' and stood to make a move from his room but stopped at door and said 'Maan everyone means u, Sameera and Geet….all three will be happy decide on it peacefully……..'and left room

'No ma no one will be happy with that reason atleast me…..u don't know that ur son cant live with Geet…….without Geet ur son is nothing……..' his thoughts were disturbed by ring on his mobile seeing the caller name Maan felt shiver……..but with heavy heart he received…..

'Maan what happened to you…….from last two weeks im trying to call you……but u always switch off or not answering…….and even I called your home number but I dint get you there also…..and if I call office number they saw ur always busy…….what is this Maan……why are u ignoring me ……did I made any mistake ……?' Sameera showered all her questions and the last question made Maan feel guilty on himself for ignoring such a sweet girl………

He deliberately ignored her calls whenever she calls he made others to receive and told them to tell that he is busy or he is out of house…….he did this for her good only because he don't want her to notice his change if she notices she will definitely feel bad….his thoughts are disturbed by Sameera's words

'Maan u der…Maan Maan?' Sameera asked softly…….'haaa yes Sameera…..im really sorry for not contacting you…..im really sorry Sameera…..' Maan sincerely apologized….'Its ok Maan I can understand that your busy…..but I feel very insecure when you ignore me….i no that u didn't take my calls because your busy but I cant stay away from you and without hearing your voice…i can understand what your situation is but……' she said emotionally……'Sorry Sameera it never happens……..' Maan said not surely….

'Hmm it cant happen ever again Maan….because im going to come to India next week……' Sameera gave shocking news….'What your coming back……why..?' Maan asked shockingly….' "What" is this question to be asked…..?? hmm I thought u will feel happy…..but what happened to you…….your talking like u don't want me to come back to u……..?' Sameera asked straightly……'No Sameera its not like that….u suddenly surprised me naa that's why sounded in that way…..ok so ur coming next week ok then we will talk when u come back…….its already late…..take care Sameera…bye….good night…' Maan cut the call without hearing her answer……..

Maan don't want to talk to her anymore and make her feel sad with his stupid answers……..poor girl she is thinking that im ignoring her because of my work load but she didn't know what im upto…….how can I face Sameera….i feel like killing myself for being such a jerk….i made Sameera feel bad for what she never did…..im sorry Sameera…….with that thoughts he dozed off…..

Next day

'Maan get up… get up…get up…. ' Geet came and sat on his stomach and shouted in his ear……..Maan wake up with her loud voice in his ear and looked all messy due to his uncomfortable sleep..he is not at all feeling good due to his talk with his mother and Sameera yesterday……he is feeling guilty….

He opened his eyes and saw Geet sitting on his stomach and shouting….he once again lost in her pleasant able face but got to earth when Sameera's words rang in his ears which are ringing whole night……..'Geet get up….'he shouted…..Geet didn't obey him and started her non stop chat session….Maan felt defeated and distress due to his lack of sleep and shouted at her 'Cant u see im sleeping….. why u have to behave such idiotically I don't know……..did u have heard word Singhers in ur life…..go to ur room and listen I don't want to hear any noise……..and dont disturb did u get that…………' Maan asked ever so seriously…….Geet when she heard Maan shout at her she immediately got down from him and nodded to his command and went to her room……….

Maan went to office and whole day Maan didn't bother about Geet…he is totally broken…..he want some time alone to get his answers which are disturbing him from yesterday…..he came home late in the night and when about to get into room servant asked him whether to serve his food but he refused and again when servant about to tell something he closed his room door and locked………(Naina and Rishab left to some outstation for someone marriage)

Next day

Maan sleep was disturbed by knock on the door…….he lazily opened his eyes and saw other side of bed and frowned not seeing Geet beside him but he remembered yesterdays events and he felt bad for shouting on her and decided to talk with her……yesterday was not his day….he felt incomplete without talking to her…….whole day he felt dishearten………but now he cant wait talking to her…….

He got up and opened door and saw servant who is so tense….'what happened why are you so tense….' 'Maan sir Geet beti didn't get up till know and she didn't have anything yesterday also…….and she closed her room door yesterday when u shouted and till now she didn't open…………I called her but she didn't open…'

Maan panicked hearing that Geet didn't have anything whole day and why she is not opening door………..he ran towards her room and knocked door and shouted her name several time but no use……Maan tried to hit door after several attempts door opened and Maan entered room and saw its empty……..

Maan searched whole room and to say he searched full house but there is no sign of Geet……..he felt heart ache…….where should have she gone….he thought calmly and he searched every place she would go like near park near shops…….but no use………servants with doubt search her shelves if she would have gone forever but her clothes dolls everything are in same place…

Maan felt like someone stabbing his heart with sharp weapons……next two days Maan spent his days in searching her and he also gave police complaint but no use nothing made her return home……………

'Maan ……u came….???what is this Maan….. Neither u called us nor u received our calls…u know how much worried we were ...?' Naina asked Maan who entered house after 3days after Geet missing from home……Maan didn't answer and passed her and went to Geet's room and looked whole room with a trivial hoping she might have return. He knew that she didn't but with a hope that never die for her………….

He sat on floor and looked at her dolls fondly….he touched her toto and said 'Toto do u know were Geet went…….???why she left me…….how can she leave me and go…….please toto call her…….i want Geet back…………please call her toto…………….CAAALLLLL HERRRR BACK……..' he shouted at toto……

Rishab and Naina rushed to him and comforted him with sweet nothings but Maan didn't get anything….. his mind is occupied with Geet Geet Geet……….Maan dozed off while sobbing in his mother lap……….he closed his eyes after complete three days………….Naina placed Maan's head on pillow and went to Rishab who exited after seeing Maan's depression…….

'Rishab im really worried about Maan……he didn't eat anything in last three days……I don't know what to do……..???' Naina asked Rishab ….after not getting any response Naina tugged his arm and said 'What are you thinking….tell me Rishab now what we have to do ????….' 'Geet…' Rishab just sounded her name…Naina is now pissed of and said angrily 'Here our son is killing himself because of that girl and your thinking about that girl…….'

'Naina im also worried about Maan but now he is in front of us…..but Geet where is she….and that innocent girl doesn't know about world…..im worried about her whereabouts………and how can u say that she is responsible for all this…. She is my princess Naina….never make her responsible for all this….'

Naina calmed herself and told 'Rishab what u said is absolutely correct and we did everything what we can do…..but we could not trace about her….now we can do only one thing, that is to pray for her safety………but we shouldn't ignore Maan……..he is deeply disturbed with sudden absence of her……we shouldn't leave Maan like that…..and about Geet im also feeling sad and most importantly I also like her atmost Rishab but that doesn't mean we should end our lives thinking about her ……im not saying to stop searching for her but in this process we shouldn't neglect Maan………..' Rishab also thought Naina is right….they did everything what they can do…..

GEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTT……….

Both Rishab and Naina startled after hearing Maan shout and rushed to Geet's room………'Maan beta what happened…..' Naina asked Maan who is shivering and his face neck and hands are sweating like hell…..'Maan what happened…..??' Naina and Rishab asked him and they are now really worried about him…..his condition is worsening……

'Maaa Geet maaa……she is in trouble…..i have to save her ma…..she doesn't know anything…..i know that she cant leave without me…..ma I'll go and get her back….' Maan said while shuddering and started to leave to bring her back…..

'Maan where are you going………police are searching for her……where you will go….u don't know where she is………' but Maan didn't listen her voice and ran towards the hall and when he is about to leave the house Naina caught him and turned him to her side and gave a tight slap……

'Maan where are you going…….???and listen now clearly "Geet LEFT us"……………….did you get that Geet LEFT US……..now just get the truth and go to your room……….' Naina said sternly and caught his wrist and pulled him to his room….Maan all the way telling himself that 'nooo Geet cant leave me…cant leave me…cant leave me…' Naina took Maan into his room and made him sit on his bed and sat beside him and caressed his cheek where she gave him slap……….'Im sorry beta…..'

Naina took his head lovingly into her hands and kissed his forehead and said 'Maan look at me….' Naina said while lifting his head and said 'Maan I know u care for her sooo much…….and we all do care for her….Geet will be safe somewhere….she is princess of our hearts…..nothing can happen to her…….'

'She will be safe no ma…..????' Maan asked innocently while keeping his head in her lap…….Naina caressing his hair said 'Yes Maan she will be safe…. she is angel….angels will be happy and safe anywhere they go….' She said

'But ma I want to see her…..i cant leave without her……u please tell her to come back to me ma……u know Geet will listen u orders………she likes u soo much………..' and cried historically for his angel………

Rishab came to his side and said 'Maan beta Gee..' but interrupted by Maan 'Bauji u know its all my mistake……..i scolded her like a jerk………I behaved like a moron no im moron………..she did nothing bauji but I scolded her……..and bauji if u call her she will definitely come…she likes you more than me…..please bauji tell her to come……and I promise I'll never ever shout at her………please bauji please……..' begging so Maan slide to his fathers feet and cried badly………………

Seeing him both Rishab and Naina felt miserable and consoled him but nothing made his sad lessen…………

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Originally posted by: zubi123

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Originally posted by: niharika_87

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Originally posted by: Tishuu

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luving it soo far- cnt wait to find out wat happens next

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Originally posted by: priza

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