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How wonderfully written part.ClapClap....for the first part I was rolling with laughter..Rijji and pia...Hey hey hey were having a good time ......This part was hilarious.😆...and the most important part...the wedding night..😳But first of all....a big hug🤗 to you for selecting one of my favourite songs.....no wonder your hands were shaking and I can imagine your blushing too...Day Dreaming. I could never muster the courage to write such intimate scenes..but....Bravo girl...and congratulation...I loved it very much...it was very sweet and not over the top at all.....You kept the sweet romance intact between Maan and Geet.Clap

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Part 34:-

Next day morning after their wedding night …. Maan & Geet are sleeping sideways both facing each other … maan wakes up first & is watching geet sleep peacefully …. Watching geet sleep so peacefully has given him immense satisfaction …. While watching geet sleep peacefully …

Maan to himself"Geet main tumsae uss admi kae baaren main uss din sae punchna chahtha tha … parr tumhare tabiyath ki wajah sae aaj tak poonch hi nahin paaya …. aur main tumsae yeh baath abhi punchana teek bhi nahin samajh tha hun … kyunki Dr. nae tumhae stress lenae sae mana kiya tha … aur main yeh nahin chahtha ki iss baath ki wajah sae tum parr ya hamare hone wale bache parr koi asar ho ….. Main bhi jantha hoon ki tumhae bhi uss ki talash hain ya talash thi … aur tum uss ki talash kaise karna chahthi thi maine uss ki talash waise hi karr raha hun ….…. bass chand ganton ki baath hain … uss ka patha tho chal hi jaayega ….

aur main tumsae yeh wada kartha hun geet ki main iss baath ki theh tak jaaungaa aur sachhayi ki pata karwa ungaa … aur yeh dekhungaa ki tumhe insaaf milae … "

maan still watching geet sleep … & is happy to see that her face right now is free of all tensions …. But he is thinking whether to disclose to her what he is thinking or doing … - "usse main yeh baath abhi nahin bataungaa … agar bataya tho …. Kya iss kae chehrae parr yeh kushi raehegi …. Nahin maan uss iskae baren main abhi kuch nahin bataana … pehlae uss admi tak pohuncho … phir agar jaroorat pade tho geet ko batana …. Haa yehi teek rahegaa …."

maan is happy to see geet having a smiling face in her sleep … - bass aisae hi muskurate hua rehna geet …. Tumhari yeh muskurahat main kabhi khone nahin dungaa geet … aur yeh tumsae mera wada hain … geet … aur aaj kae baad kabhie bhi tumhare aankhon main aansu nahin aane dungaa … meri wajah sae ya kissi aur ki wajah sae …

After some time Geet wakes up & sees that maan is aleady awake & is watching her …

Geet with a smiling face – aap kab uthae …

Maan – bass abhi thodi daer pehlae …

Geet smiles at maan & then she slowly places her left hand on maan's cheek & is gently caressing maan's cheeks while her right hand is on the pillow ….

Maan takes geet's hand & checks her mehendi – tumhari mehandi tho bahut achi rachi hain aur rang bhi acha aaya hain … geet ….

Geet – haan aap ki naam ki mehendi hain …. Achi tho hogi naa … iss main aapka naam hain … doondiyen tho ….

Maan – mera naam …

Geet – haan …

Maan – kahan …

Geet – doond na tho aap ka kaam hain … doondiyen …

Maan is trying to search for his name …. He is looking at the mehandi and is in total surprise now ….

Maan – geet yeh kya …

Geet – kya …

Maan – yeh mehendi … iss main tho …

Geet – kya hua …

Maan – maine tho socha tha ki mera naam ek jagah par hoga …. Parr yahan tumhare poori haath par tho mera naam hi chayi hui hain ….

Geet – jaise aap mere zindagi main chaaye hua hain ….

Maan – Jahan dekhu wahan mera hi naam hain …. Agar main dyan sae nahin dekhtha tho aise hi lagtha hain ki yeh regular mehendi ka design hain … yahan tho Mere naam sae tho tumhari mehendi ka design bani hui hain …

Geet – jaise aap mere roam roam main basae hain … waise hi maine socha ki mere haath main …. main jahan bhi dekhu wahan aap ka naam ho …

(maan is looking at geet in such a way that he wants to kiss her for these sweet words that have come out of her )

Maan is now kissing geet's mehendi waali left hand first & then her right hand … geet stops talking for a second …

Geet - is liyae maine mahendi rakhnae waali bhabhi ji ko bola ki meri mehendi aise banaye ki uss main sirf aur sirf aap ki naam ho aur agar design banaye bhi tho ussi sae design banaye …

maan – acha tho tum mujhe apni mutti main band karkae rakhna chathee ho ….

Geet – nahin …. Waise baath nahin hain …

Maan too now has his hands on geet's both hands & is looking into her eyes & his face coming close to hers …. – waise baath nahin hain tho kaise baath hain geet …

Geet is feeling shy & is trying to get up from the bed … maan does not allow her to get up from the bed …. bends on to her …& does not allow her to move …

Geet – abhi aap utiyae …. neche sab hamara intezaar karr rahen hongae …

Maan – tho …

Geet - muje jaane dejiyae … mujhe tayyar hona padega …

Maan – maine kab mana kiya hain … jaa kar tayyar ho jao …

Geet – phir mera rastha kyun roka hain …

Maan – maine kahan roka hain …

Geet – mera haath chodiyen phir ….

Maan – teek hain chodungaa … pehle mujhe meri aaj ki morning gift do ……

Geet – morning gift …

Maan – haan morning gift … sweet heart …

Geet – kaun saa gift ….

Maan – oh babaji … kaise tube light biwi diya hain aapnae mujhe … kitni baar gift ka matlab samjaya maine isse phir bhi samajh thi ... hi nahin hain …. Haan yeh baath nahin hain ... ki iss ka dimaag nahin hain … dimag tho hain … parr aise maamlae main hi iss ka dimaag nahin chaltha …

Maan shaking geet's nose with his right hand while still holding geet's right hand with his left hand - Babaji iss ka main kya karun ….

Maan takes off his hand from her nose & touches geet's lips gently with his right hand index finger & then his lips …

Maan – samjhi … gift ka matlab bhul gayi meri tube light …. Hamesha gift ka matlab samjana padtha hain …

Geet – oh babaji … DD ko hamesha DD ki hi yaad aathi hain ….

Maan – kya …

Geet – shayad aapne teek sae suna nahin … wapas bathathi hun … DD ko hamesha DD ki hi yaad aathi hain ….

maan – DD matlab dusht dhanav wo mujhe maalum hain … doosra DD kya hain … sweet heart …

Geet – ab kaun tube light hain …. Bolo … bolo …

Maan loosens his control over geet – kya kahan tumnae …

Geet gets up & is on her knees on the bed … Maan is also on his knees now on their bed....

Geet tooo shaking his nose with her left hand which maan freed – mere tube light … DD matlab Daily Dose … aaj kal aap daily doses maang rahen hain naa …. Iss liyae …

Maan has his hands on his waist – tum nae mujhe tube light kahan … maan singh khurana ko tube light kahan ….

Geet too has her hands on her waist – haan kahan … tho … kya karlengae …. aap nae bhi tho mujhe kahan tha …. Agar aap maan singh khurana hain tho main bhi Geet handa hun ….

Maan with little bit gussa wala face – geet handa

Geet too with her ms. Handa wala attitude – oops sorry … main bhul gayi kal raat sae tho … mera naam badal gaya hain … hain naa … main bhi… Mrs. Geet Maan Singh khurana hoon ….

Maan slightly moving towards geet & geet is slightly moving backwards ….

maan with his gusse wala face – maine iss liyae kahan tha ki jab …. Babaji akal baant rahen thae tho shayad tum line main sab sae akhir main kadi rahin hogi …. Iss liyae tumhe bahut kam akal milee … jo tum kabhie kabhie use karthi ho ….

Geet too with her I don't care a damn attitude – aur jab babaji … gussa baant rahen thae tho shayad aap … line main sabse pehlae khade rahen hongae … aur babaji sae kahan hogaa …. Sorry kahan nahin babaji ko order diya hoga ki aap kae hissae main sabse jyada gussa aaye … hain naa …

Maan moving towards geet & geet is moving towards the edge ….

Maan – geet …

Geet – haan … main geet … tho …

Maan – geet … sambhal kae …

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Geet is about to fall off the bed … maan just catches her in time & pulls her towards him with his right hand …

Maan falls on his back & geet falls on top of him … maan has his left hand on her back & his right hand in her hand …

Maan is moving her tresses which are covering her face with his right hand …. While now having his left hand on her waist which was on her back earlier …. Keeps his right hand on the back of her head & is gently moving her head close to his head … now their faces are very close to each other … their lips are just few millimeters away from each other … maan is about to kiss her on her lips ….

Pia – bhabhi …. Bhabhi … bhai …

Geet – chodiyen mujhe … dekhiye … ab tho humein bulane kae liyae bhi aagaye hain …

Pia – bhabhi …. Darwaza kholiyae …

Maan freeing geet – abhi tho bach gayi … parr main tumhe chodnae wala nahin hun … mera gift …. No no … tumhari language main mera DD (daily dose) tho main laekae rahunga …

Geet's blushing & going near the door - agar nahin diya … tho …

Maan lying on his back & hands under his head – acha apna pati parmeshwar ka agna ka niraadar karogi …

Geet – aha ha haan … jab dekho tab gift gift gift ya DD… main nahin denae waali …

Geet opens the door … pia enters …

Pia – kya nahin daena waali bhabhi ….

Maan turns to the other side now with his back towards pia & thinking to himself … - "tum khud nipatlo abhi pia sae … pia ka sawal ka jawab do … main bhi sunna chahtha hun …ki tum usko kya jawab dogi ... "

Geet – wo … wo … haan main tumhare bhaiyya ko bol rahin thi ki main unhae permission nahin denae wali hun office jaane kae liyae aaj … iss liyae muh phulakae so gaye dekho …

Pia – acha … apne bhai sae aisa bola … aur unhonae maaan bhi liya ….

Geet – agar manthae nahin tho kya karthae …. Akhir main … main unki official wife hun … tho baath tho meri maanni padegi hain naa …

Pia – so tho hain ….

Pia - Bhabhi … dadima aur sab neechae aap ka intezaar kar rahin hain … jaldi sae aap tayyar ho jaayiyae … aur neechae aa jayiye ...

Geet – haan pia main abhi tayyar ho kar neechae aajathi hun …

Pia – teek hain bhabhi …

Geet goes to the rest room …

Pia - bhai … bhai …. Kya hua … bhabhi ki hukum start ho gaya … aap abhi sae joru ka ghulam ban gaye hain …

Maan – aise koi baat nahin hain pia …. suno ... jab hum shadi kae bandhan main bandthae hain …. Ya phir koi bhi relationship main hotae hain … humein ek dusrae ki baath ko sunna padtha hain …. Samajh na padtha hain … ek dusrae ki izzat karni padthi hain ….

Aur kabhie kabhie relationship main kissi baath parr aap ki life partner correct ho sakhthi hain … aur kabhie tum khud bhi … tho aisi koi bhi baat ho uss main jo sahi hotae hain … humein unki baath manni padthi hain … hain naa …

Aur aaj tumhari bhabhi ko meri jaroorat hain … tho iss liyae uss nae mujhe rok liya office jaane sae …. Bas ithni si baath hain … samjhi …

Pia – wow … bhai … aap husband wife kae relationships kae baaren main ithna sab kuch jaanthae hain … yeh baath main nahin janthi thi … mujhe tho lagtha tha ki aapko emotional baathein achhi nahin lagthi hain … aaj maine aap sae ek aur baath seekha hain ….

Maan – Yehin nahin pia …. Sabse jaroori baath jo tumhae yaad rakhni hoti hain .... wo yeh hain ki jab aap dono ek bandhan main hote hain … tho uss bandhan ko tum log kaise nibhathae ho ... usse nibhane kae liyae ... rishton main bharosa aur ek dusrae parr atoot viswaas yeh dono bahut jaroori hoti hain .... agar rishtey main yeh dono nahin hain … tho wo rishta rishta nahin rehta hain … samji Pia ...

Pia – thank you … bhai …. Sach main aaj maine aap sae bahut kuch seekha hain … Love u my big bro …(pia hugging maan … maan pats her head & back)

Maan – pia abhi mujhe work out karnae jaana hain … already daer hogayi hain … tum bhi chalogi …

Pia – nahin …. Bhai … aaj nahin … aap jaayiyae … mujhe dadima kae paas jaana hain …

Maan – teek hain … tum jao … main abhi change karkae chaltaa hun …

Pia leaves & maan changes to his tracks ….

Maan – geet main work out karnae jaa rahan hun … thodi daer main aa jaungaa …

Geet – teek hain …

Geet is getting ready in their room …. Geet selects a peach color work saree which has cream work done on it … for the muh dikhayi rasam they are going to have now … in few min.

Geet finishes her bath & comes out of the room & starts getting ready …. She is fixing her pleets for her saree …. While maan is on the way to their room … She tucks in the pleets …. Maan is near the door of their room … geet is fixing her saree palloo now …. Geet is in front of the mirror & As geet is about to tie the dori of her blouse … maan enters the room … geet turns back & sees that it is maan who had entered the room … & maan is closing the door …

Maan has a dazzled look on his face as soon as he sees geet in the saree … he automatically gets drawn towards her & is walking towards her & geet is looking at him & trying to tie her dori … maan comes close to her … he takes the dori into his hands & ties the dori … geet & maan both are looking into each other's eyes in the mirror …. Then he places his hands on geet's hands & hugs her from back … both are lost in their moment …

Maan then turns geet so that she faces him … & he sees that she did not apply sindoor in her maang … he takes sindoor & applies it in her maang … maan kisses her forehead … geet hugs him …

Geet – maan …

Maan – haan … geet …

Geet – mujhae aap sae kuch poonchna hain …

Maan – kya hain geet …

Geet – main … aap kae saath …

Maan – haan mere saath …

Geet – aap kae saath main aaj shaam ko darga jaana chahthi hun ….

Maan – darga … par kyun …

Geet – darga jaa kar chadar chadayengae aur dhaga bhi band kae aajayengae … hamare yeh rishta kae liyae …

Maan looking into geet's eyes – geet … teek hain hum shaam ko jayengae …

Geet – teek hain …

Maan holds geet's chin & pulls her close towards him … - ab tho tumhein meri gift / DD deni padegi …

Maan is pulling geet close to him …. Their both faces are really close to each other now …. & their lips are just few millimeters away from each other … maan is about to kiss her on her lips ….

Rajji – di … di …

Geet – rajji …

Maan is angry now 😡… - yeh behnain …. tumhari aur meri … dono kabab main haddi kyun ban rahin hain ….

Geet is now laughing ….

Rajji – di … di …

Geet – haan aayi …

Maan is going inside the rest room – hanso …. Hanso … aur hanso … main tumhe baad main dekhungaa … waise bhi tum kaise bhi karkae mere paas hi tho aane wali ho ….

Geet pulls her toungue out😛 & shows thumb's down to maan👎🏼 … goes & opens the door for rajji …

Rajji – kya di … ithni daer … darwaza kholnae main …

Geet – haan … wo … tayyar ho rahin thi …

Rajji – di … hum sab neeche tumhara intezaar kar rahen hain … chaliye …

Geet – rajji … tu chal main aayi …

Rajji – teek hain … di … jaldi …

Geet gets ready now … she is wearing a moonstone set which goes with her peach color saree …

Geet – maan main neechae jaa rahin hun …

Maan – teek hain … tum jao … main bhi aa ja ungaa …

Geet goes down … she sees that her parents are over there along with dadima …

Rajji ,pia & tito are having a gud time among themselves ….

Dadima – geet tum apne gharwalon sae baath karlo … main abhi aathi hun …

Geet – maa …

Rano – geet puttar … sab kuch teek tho hain naa …

Geet – haan maa …

Rano – tu khush tho hain naa … geet …

Geet – haan maa … aap ko aisa kyun laga ….

Rano – nahin puttar … bas tumhari muh sae sunna chahthi hun …

Mohinder – geet puttar … maan kahan hain …

Geet – papaji … wo tayyar ho rahen hain … wo bhi neechae aa jayengae …

Mohinder – geet puttar humein abhi hoshiarpur jaana padega ….

Geet – abhi … papaji …

Mohinder – haan geet puttar … darji nae kal phone kiya tha … udhar kuch jaroori kaam aa gaya hain … tho jaana pad rahan hain ….

Geet – par papaji …

Maan comes down now … he is wearing maroon kurtha & pyjama ….

Geet with tears in her eyes – maan … papaji,maa aur sab abhi jaa rahen hain ….

Rano consoling geet ... but she is crying … maan & mohinder are talking to each other …

Rano – chup ho jaa geet puttar …

Rajji, tito come near geet now …. Pia goes near dadima as she called pia …

Rajji & tito are hugging geet … - di hum aapko miss karengae …

Geet crying – main bhi …

Geet crying – maa kabhi kabhi tho aap mujhe phone kar sakhthae hain naa …. Aur tum dono bhi …

Rano – haan karenage puttar … phikar math karna ….

Geet hugs her mother still crying ….

Rajji & Tito – hum bhi karenage di …

Geet hugs rajji & tito with tears in her eyes …

Maan – papaji … kya hua …

Mohinder – darji nae humein bhulaya hain … iss liyae jaana padh rahan hain …

Maan – oh … teek hain … ab jab darji nae bhulaya tho aap kuch nahin kar sakthae hain …

Pia too comes over there … pia & rajji hug each other …

Pia – rajji … tumhara saath mujhe bahut acha laga hain … tum mujhsae contact main rahogi naa …

Rajji – haan … pia … kyun nahin …sirf do dinon main tum meri bahut achi saheli ban gayi ho …

Pia – yeh lo rajji … mera cell phone # … tum kabhie bhi iss par phone karr sakthi ho …

Rajji – par pia … mere paas tho cell phone nahin hain …

Pia – koi baath nahin … tum jab ho sake tab mujhe call kar dena …

Rano – rajji … tumhare chachaji ka # dedo pia ko …

Rajji – chachi … par …

Rano – koi baath nahin … rajji daedo ….

Rajji then gives mohinder's # to pia …

Geet hugs her dad …

Then geet & maan both take blessings of geet's parents … dadima comes along with changu & mangu with some gifts in their hands …

Dadima gives the gifts to rajji , tito ,rano & mohinder …

Mohinder – yeh sab ki kya jaroorat hain … beeji …

Dadima – nahin mohinder ji … hamari khushi kae liyae .. lae lijiyae …

Final hug between geet & all her family members one by one & geet Is in tears …

Pia & rajji too hug …

Geet ,maan , pia & dadima all bid good bye … to geet's parents …

Geet parents leave … maan consoles geet & dadima to geet …

Dadima – geet … agar tum chaho tho … thode dinon kae liyae apne ghar jaa sakhthi ho geet …

Geet is looking at dadima & maan …. Maan was about to talk to dadima …

Dadima – abhi nahin geet … thode dinon kae baad main … tum abhi tho humare ghar main aayi ho … hum abhi thode tumhe jaane dengae kya … abhi nahin …

Maan & Geet both breathe a sigh of relief …

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Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....
Loved every single line.......❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️...
Loved the way Maan spoke with Pia about Wife and Husband Relationship....😳😳😳...
Can't wait........
Pls Update Sooooooon..........
Edited by .sireesha. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear.............gr8 work.................i was not in gud mood from monring.............but u changed it all together with ur lovely update..................thanks alot sweety......................now i will be in mannet land for whole day...................wish u also a lovely weekend...............lots of luv

n big big big hugggggggg to u for ur awesome updateeeeeeeeeeeeee...............enjoy
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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent update do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.... rajji n pia kabab main haddi 😆 😆 😆 😆 poor maan couldn get DD.. do continue soon

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