FF-Maan's confession&Geet's revelation-53last part - Page 18

Part 18:

Maan is about to enter the outhouse …. Geet is walking out of her room ….

Maan entered the out house & Geet is walking down the stairs …. & just then maan sees Geet & is memmerized by her beauty & is lost in her when he sees her & stands still …. & geet is walking towards him ….

Geet is wearing lemon yellow work saree …. Geet is now in front of him ….

Geet – maa … maan …. Maan ….

Maan comes out of his trance –haa…. Geet …..Geet tum bahut achi dikh rahin ho… dil kartha hain ki ….( he's coming close to her)

Geet is going back & is feeling shy …. – Thank you … ab chale …

Maan is not listening to her ….is lost in his thoughts about her …

Geet raising her voice little bit & touching his shoulder – Chale shayad dadi maa humara intezaar kar rahin hogi … hain naa … aap nae dadima sae baat ki ….

Maan – haan …. Wo …. chalo ….

As they both are walking together towards the mansion …first their shoulder's are touching to each other & then slowly their hands Maan sees that there is some kind of tension on Geet 's face ….& then Maan holds Geet's hand & puts his fingers in her fingers & closes their fists….

Maan – main tumhare saath hun …. Teek hain …

Geet – maan …. Mujhe thoda ajeeb lag raha hain ….

Maan – kya …mujhe maan bolna …. Finally tumnae mujhe maan bola tho sahi …

Geet – wo tho maine pehlae bhi aap ko bhola tha ….par pata nahin aap kaha khoye hua thae ….

Maan – pata nahin … kya … pata nahin … tumhari khayalon main khoya hua tha…

Geet – mera …

Maan – aur nahin tho kya …. Aur kiskae khayalon main khoya rehta … ek tumhi tho ho … jiski wajah sae meri aisi haalat hogayi ….

Maan trying to tease Geet - Main kya tha aur kya ban gaya hun …

Geet trying to go away – acha …tho teek hain main jaathi hun ….

Maan holding Geet & pulling her back – Geet … main mazak kar raha tha …acha ab bolo tumhein ab kaise lag rahin hain … abhi bhi ajeeb lag rahi hain tumhein ya abhi teek hain ….

Geet – haan ab teek hun …. Yeh sab baathein aap nae is liyae ki mujhse ….

Maan – haan … par Kuch baatein sach thae aur kuch mazak …mazak tho kar sakhtha hun naa…. Ithna tho haq hain naa mujhae tumhari upar ….

Geet – haan …pura haq hain …. Aur yeh baat aap bhi janthe hain …phir kyun poonch rahein hain …. waise aap mere saath kabhie bhi kuch bhi galat karhi nahin sakhthe … hain naa …

Maan giving his sweet smile….moving the tresses that were covering her beautiful face – hmmm….

They reach the mansion …. Dadima is already in the hall ….

Dadima – Tum dono ek saath …kya baath hain …. Waise Geet aaj kya khaas baath hain bahut sundar dikh rahin ho …. Saree main … kahin jaa rahin ho kya ….

Geet is blushing – thank you dadima …

Dadima – kya baath hain maan …aap mujhsae kuch baath karna chahthae thae …

Maan – haa dadima …. wo main …maine aap sae bola tha naa ki main Friday ko aap sae meri pasand ki gayi ladki sae milwaungaa … par ab wo …

Dadima – tho phir kya aap nae mujhsae jhoot bola tha …

Maan – aap janthae hain naa dadima ki main kabhie jhooth nahin boltha …

Dadima – tho aap kya kehna chahthae hain … maan …

Maan – wo main …. Aapko uss sae kal nahin aaj hi milwana chahtha hun…

Dadima – acha …aaj hi milwana chahthae hain … phir wo kahan hain …

Dadima is looking for the girl …. – kya usse bahar hi chod kae aa gaye tum dono …. (saying this she walks out of the hall & goes out of the door is checking on either side of the door ….) --- yehan par tho koi nahin hain (& silently smiling to herself …observing both Maan & Geet simultaneously) …

Maan & Geet are talking through their eyes & sign language …now they both are very very softly talking to each other ….so that dadi does not over hear them ….

Geet 2 maan – kya hua …aap ko saanp sungaya kya …dadima kae saamnae aap ka jubaan ko kya hua … baat kyun nahin kar paye … mujhe daanthae waqt tho aap ki zubaan kabhie nahin rukhti … ab kya hua …

Maan – main bolnae hi wala hun Geet …par dadima uth kar bahar chali gayi tho main kya karun… abhi boltha hun...

Dadima peechae sae chup kae sae aathi hain aur aa kar un dono kae kaan pakad thi hain … tum dono ki chori pakdi gayi ….. tum dono ko kya laga is budhi dadi ko kuch bhi malum nahin hain tum dono kae beech main kya chal raha hain … main sab janthi hun …

Geet & maan seeing each other's face & then dadima's face …

Dadima now putting her hand on Geet's head – Geet tho mujhe pehlae din sae hi bhaa gayi thi … Waise bhi maine tho Geet ko usi din apna bahu bana liya tha …. jis din aapnae 'maan' pehli baar Geet ko sorry bola tha … usi din sae hi mujhe lagnae laga tha agar koi mere sahabzyadae ko zindagi jeena sikha sakhthi hain ….tho wo Geet hain …. Aur agar Geet jaise ladki mere maan kae zindagi main aaye tho wo tho…sonae pae suhaagaa jaisae ho gaa …. Aur meri yeh kwahish puri hogayi hain … ab mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiyae … bas tum dono ki shadi ho jaayae…(dadima's getting all emotional now)

Maan & Geet simultaneously – dadima … aap … sambhaliyae apnae aap ko …

dadima - main teek hun … muhje kya hua tha …waise bhi mainae jaisae socha tha waise hi hua … tum dono ko tatool nae kae liyae hi mainae yeh ladki dekhnae ki natak shuru kiya tha …. Aur jab maine ladki dekhnae ki baat geet sae kahin thi tho geet ki tho hosh hi ud gaye thae…. tabhi mujhe laga tha ki teer nishane pae hi pahuncha … kyun geet kya main sach bol rahin hun …

Geet – Jee …(Geet's like Oh no meri chori pakdi gayi …twisting her sareee palluu in her hands ….) maan watching geet too & giving his sweet smile. ...

Dadima – aur maan aap bhi kuch kam nahin hain … aap ko kya laga ki mujhe kuch bhi pata nahin chalega …aapki chehrae ko dekhthae hi mujhe malum padgaya tha us din jab maine yeh kahan ki ladki dekhnae ki zimmae daari maine geet ko sonp di hain … aur aap ki hairaani …wo tho dekhnae layak thi ….

Par aap tho Geet sae mujhe kal milwanae walae thae naa ….tho aaj achanak kyun ….

Maan – wohi baath tho main kab sae aap ko bathana chahtha tha dadima … mujhe aap sae ek jaroori baath kehni hain … Mujhe geet sae 7 din kae andhar shadi karni hain ….

Dadima – 7 din …

Maan – haan …dadima … 7 din …

Dadima 2 herself – "hey bhagwan …yeh ladka bhi naa… kab kya kartha hain kuch samajh main hi nahin aatha … pehlae tho shaadi sae dur baag raha tha …aur ab achanak … shadi karna chahtha hain …wo bhi 7 din kae andhar…iss sae pehlae maan apna faisla badlae main haan kardae thi hun…waise bhi main bhi tho wohi chahthi hun…"

Dadima – jab miya biwi raazi tho kya karega qazi … teek hain main kal pandit ji sae baat karkae muhurat nikal wa lethi hun …

Maan – teek hain dadima ….

Geet & Maan both take blessings of dadima …

Dadima after blessing them - par maan … aap kae chote bhai abhi idhar nahin hain …aur unko aanae main shayad 7-10 days lag jaayengae … tho hum shaadi tab karlae … unkae aane kae baad main …

Maan – haan … yeh baat tho main bhool hi gaya … meri baat adi sae hui thi …uss nae kahan tha ki pune main kuch kaam tha tho chote ko udhar jaana pada … par koi baath nahin dadima …shadi hone sae pehlae hi pahunch jaayegaa …main baad main usse baat kar lungaa …

Dadima – teek hain … geet humae aap ki gharwalon sae milna padega naa beta… aap ka haath mangnae kae liyae …

Geet – gharwalae …(she is feeling all sad remembering about her family)…

Maan – dadima … aap bus shadi ki tayyari kariyae …geet ki family members kae baaren main hum dekh laengae … teek hain dadima ab hum jaathae hain …(holding geet's hand … about to leave …as he sees that geet was feeling all sad thinking about her family)

Dadima – maan … rukhiyae aap aise kahan jaa rahen hain … pehlae kal ki baren main puuri baath karlae …(maan is impatient seeing a worried geet…)

Maan – haan dadima kal shaam ki party main engagement announce karlenge … dadima kal subah sab discuss karengae jab panditji shadi ki muhurat nikalengae …Teek hain naa …dadima …

Dadima – teek hain …tum dono yehin rahon kahin math jaana ….main abhi aathi hun …

As soon as dadima leaves …

Maan – geet tum teek ho ….tumhare ghar walon ki yaad aa rahin hain geet …

Geet – haan …main teek hun ….

Maan – tumhae apni paapaji aur maa ki yaad aa rahin hain kya geet …

Geet has tears in her eyes – wo ….yaad tho aayegi naa….. aisi kushi kae maukae par agar wo yahan mere saath hote tho kitna acha hota …hain naa … wo dono kithnae kush hote …. Ki mujhe aap jaise pyar karnae wale pati mil rahen hain … par wo nahin aayengae mujhe maalum hain …

Maan - geet please sambalo geet apnea aap ko … please rona bandh karo ….tumhara rota hua chehra dekhna mujhe acha nahin lagtha geet … tumnae mujhe promise kiya tha naa ki tum stress nahin logi … tho please mere liyae … ronae sae kamzor ho jaathae hain geet … so please rona band karo mere liye …. Main hoon na tumhare paas ….

Geet – main stress nahin le rahin hun … bas dil bhar aagaya tha …. Main janthi hun aap mere saath hain or hamesha mere saath rehengae ….

Dadima is coming down the stairs ….

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