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great one dear
i am glad maan cleared all doubts
and now finally they are getting married after meeting dadi
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Part 17:

After Geet left Maan worked for some time …..Before going back to his mansion …

Maan to himself – " Ek baar dekh letha hoon Geet kya kar rahin hain …." while going upstairs …

Maan goes inside the bedroom silently without making any noise … He sees that Geet is sleeping peacefully …. Maan goes near her & then his eyes fall on a book which was laying close to Geet's hands … he gently picks up the book & turns to see the cover page to see what book she was reading …. & then his eyes fall on a stem which was poking out of the book …. He slowly pulls the stem out & is startled to see a dried rose ….Is this the same white rose what he wanted to give Geet that day but he couldn't …& Geet was forced to throw it in the Dust Bin ….along with the dried rose something else also comes out & falls on the floor which catches his eyes he bends & picks it up & turns it slowly to find a photograph … his photograph … how did she get it …

Maan to himself while sitting on the sofa – "geet kae paas yeh Gulab aur meri tasveer..… iska matlab hain Geet ko maalum tha ki main yeh gulab uskae liye lae kae aayaa tha … par usnae tho yeh baat mujhe boli nahin ….Aur Geet ko padnae ka shok hain yeh baat tho mujhe maalum hi nahin tha ….Geet aur yeh pad rahin hain … aur meri photograph uskae paas…."

Thinking about all these Maan goes to sleep ….

It's almost evening … Geet wakes up & sees that Maan is sleeping in the sofa …

Geet to herself – "Becharae shayad bahut thak gayae hongae … she's checks the time it's almost 6 in the evening … main Inkae liyae coffee banakae lekae aa jaungi tab tak yeh thodi daer aur so lengae …phir jagaa dethi hun …"

She walks out of the room goes in to the kitchen & then brings hot coffee …

She goes near him & keeps the tray on the table & wakes him up….

she's tapping gently on his shoulder…

Geet softly – maan Si…nahin …maan ….maan …

Maan wakes up …Hmm Geet …

Geet – Ji … Coffee …

Maan takes the coffee from her …

Maan While drinking coffee – aur tumharae liyae …

Geet – mere liye bhi coffee…

Maan – tum aur coffee …

Geet – hmm.. jab aap mujhe saath dene kae liyae mere pasand ka khana khaa sakhthae hain … tho main kyun nahin pee sakhthi aap ki pasand ki coffee…

Maan giving his sweet smile & saying – OK ….

Then while sipping his coffee … - Geet tumhari chori pakdi gayi ….

Geet – chori … meri ….kaun si chori …

Maan keeps his coffee on the table & slowly pulls out the book ….

Geet to herself " inhone wo sab cheezae tho nahin dekh liyaa hain … jo ismae hain"

Geet – Yeh aapkae paas..…(trying to take the book from his hand …& Maan is not giving the book … he is playing with her but not giving the book)

Geet now stopped trying to take the book from his hand & is requesting him – deejiye naa …

Maan – abhi nahin baad main dungaa… par tumnae kabhi bathaya nahin ki tumhae padnae kaa shock hain …

Geet – aap nae kabhie pooncha kya mujhsae …

Maan – abhi punch raha hun naa …abhi batao …

Geet – haan mujhae padna acha lagtha hain …. aur yeh meri fav. Novel hain ….

Maan – Pride & Prejudice … tumhara fav novel hain …

Geet – haan … kyun nahin ho saktha hain …

Maan – nahin aisi baat nahin hain … tum…hoshairpur main….English novels…padthi thi…kya ???

Geet – mere paapaji mere liyae sab kuch lekae athae thae …she's getting emotional now…thinking about her parents …

Maan quickly trying to change the subject about her family members – par tumhae yeh novel kaise pasand hain yeh baat toh tumnae mujhe bataya nahin …

Geet – Oh …Yeh humara college kae syllabus ka part hain … aur mujhe yeh story pasand bhi hain … kuch kuch hamari jaisi …

Maan – kuch kuch hamari jaisi …

Geet – haan jaisae pehlae hamari beech galat famiyaan thi aur upar sae aap ka guroor … waise hi rishta in dono kirdaaro kae beech main thi … aur phir… ithnae galat famiyan honae kae baavujood aapnae hamesha mere liyae jo kuch bhi kiyaa ya meri madad ki…. wo main kaisae bhool sakhthi hun … waisae hi is novel main bhi Mr.Darcy nae lizzy kae liyae jo kuch bhi kiya sirf lizzy kae kushi kae liyae kiya tha … aap nae bhi tho wohi kiya … aur Mr. Whickham jaisa kirdaar …aap shayad samajh gayae hongae …uss insaan sae hain jisnae mujhe dokha diya tha....

Maan – geet … maine tumsae kya kahan tha …

Geet – nahin …main kuch bhi nahin soch rahin thi … aur main stress bhi nahin lae rahin hun …

Maan – acha kabhi soch na bhi mat …. Bilkul stress nahin lenaa samjhi tum ….hmm … tho phir main …. Mr. Darcy hun … tumhare according … Proud …

Geet – aisa nahin hain …par thoda thoda aisa hain … babaji main inhae kaise samjaoo… aap pehlae proud thae … aur hum dono kae beech main galat fami bhi thi … par ab aisa kuch nahin hain … aur main yeh bhi jaanthi hun ki aap mujhsae kitnaa pyaar karthae hain … aur main bhi aap sae uthnaa hi ….

Maan – aur main bhi aap sae uthnaa hi … kya Geet … iskae baad mujhe kuch sunaayi nahin dae raha hain … kya kahan tumnae …

Maan is coming close to her ….

Geet – kuch nahin … meri book deejiyae …

Maan – kyun aisa kya hain is main …ki tum ithni baar punch rahi ho …sirf ek book hi tho hain …(smiling in a naughty way)…

Maan – acha yeh batao agar tum ithna acha novel pad sakthi ho …to tab kya hua jab Ms. Rasika jaise log tumhae insult kar rahae thae … tab tumnae kuch kyun nahin kahaa…

Geet – main kaise keh sakhthi hun … wo aap kae saath business karnae aayae thae …humare client thae … is liyae main chup thi … main inko jawab dethi tho aap ka nuksaan hota naa …

Maan – meri nuksaan na ho isliyae tum sab ki taanae sun rahi thi… tumnae yeh sab meri liyae bardaash ki…

Geet – hmm…. Ab tho mera book wapas dae dijiyae …

Maan – acha … tum nae bataya nahin ki aisa kya hain is book main jo ki tum ithna bechain ho rahin ho …

Maan is opening the book now…

Geet – aap issae nahin kholengae ….

Maan – kyun tumhari chori pakdi jaayegi isliyae …

Geet – chori meri …maine kya chori kiya hain …. Maine koi chori wori nahin ki hain …

Geet is trying to go away from there now ….

Maan quickly holds her hand …- hamesha bagthi hi rahogi kya …

Geet trying to free herself – mujhe tayyar hona hain … aap hi rakhiyae yeh aap kae paas main … main jaa rahin hun …

Maan– tayyar bhi ho jaana …pehlae dekh toh lo … (He is opening the book & shows the rose)

Maan – maine dekhliya hain Geet … is main kya hain

Geet – ah ha ha ha … waise tho chori aapki pakdi gayi thi …meri nahin …

Maan – chori … meri …. Maine kya kiya …

Geet – haan …aur nahin tho kya … kisnae chori chori rose ko file main daalla tha… maine … aur jab sabkae samnae wo gira tho … kaun chup tha … badaa bolthae hain.... apnae aap ko … maan singh khurana yeh maan singh khurana wo … ek phool tho deni ki himmat nahin thi aap main …

Maan – Geet …

Geet – aur nahin tho kya …

Maan – haan .... wo mujhe laga tha ki Ms.hoshiarpur agar sab kae samnae meri insult kar dae tho …

Geet – aap ko aisa lagaa tha … par main tho aise kaise kar sakhthi hun wo bhi aap kae saath …

Maan – tumnae toh is ko dust bin main daala tha naa … phir tumharae paas kaise aayaa tha …

Geet – wo …baad main jab main garden gayi thi tho maali kaaka nae mujhe puncha tha ki mujhe yeh gulab mili ki nahin aur yeh aap mere liye lekae ayae hain … phir baad main maine ise nikaal liya tha ….

Maan – oh …tumhae maaluum tha … aur mujhe tho kuch pata bhi nahin chala ….

Geet – hmmm…

Maan – waise tumnae yeh kahan sae liya tha … (taking out his photograph from the book)

Geet – wo … main … (trying to still free herself …)

Maan - kahan jaana chahti ho …tum mujhsae kabhie dur jaa hi nahin sakhthi …koshish bhale karlo …photo chor kahin ki …

Geet – is main chori kahan sae aayi … isse chori thodi kehthae hain … aap nae bhi kabhi aisae kiya hoga naa bachpan main …mujhe acha laga tho maine lae liya … waisae bhi aap ki ithniii saari photos main ek photo gayab ho gaya tho aapko kuch farak pada kya….nahin naa tho .…waise bhi aap kae photos aap khud ko dekhnae kae liyae nahin hoti hain … dusron ko dekhnae kae liyae hotae hain ….

Maan – hamesha aisi hi raho Geet … udaasi tumhari upar achi nahin lagthi … waise bhi main hoon naa tumhare saath main … to tum aaj sae hamesha kush hi rahogi … hain naa …

Maan – ab jao jaake tayyar ho jao …. Main abhi thodi daer main aa ungaa …

Maan leaves & Geet gets ready …..

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Will be updating the next part very soon ….

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Lolz..he was teasing her so much...
Thanks for the upadte
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Originally posted by: premspadhu

really beautiful update
thanks for pm

Thank You & U R welcome ...
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Originally posted by: Soni-Sanraj

What a lovely part Dew-dropred 😍 am blushing when Geet blush 😳

Thank You ... I know don't V all blushDay Dreaming whn maan's naughtyDay Dreaming...😊
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Thank you😊
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Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Cute part ! Update soon !

Thank U ... i did ...hope fully will b able 2 do the next 1 soon
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Originally posted by: kooliio

Amazing update!!!
It was really cute!! Loved it!!
Can't wait for the next part
Pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

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Originally posted by: pickachu

Veryyyy nice update.
Plzzz continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


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