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Posted: 15 years ago

hi honey,


loved all your updates..!!! gosh, u update so fast!!!! you are on fire.........

but, on a serious note, amazing updates...!!! i like them so much and it is nice that i get to read 3 or 4 updates at on go....... and i get so excited about it..!!! so, who is the new character haan??? more jealousies for maan, on the way????? ...!!! but i love the possessive and jealous maan.....


do update soon...!!!!!!!!

soumya...








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Posted: 15 years ago
pls emil me... i wont be wait for whole 5 days commen plssss
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Posted: 15 years ago
u doing 2 now... thats unfare jenny..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

hay you all thanks for allllll those lovely comments :D here is the next part xxx

part 56:

Living room:

Dadi: "beta.... why don't you take rest!
Geet: its ok dadi... i will wait for maan...
dadi: beta he will take long time! you know him...
geet: "dadi its ok..." she smiles... "i will be fine..."

dadi leaves and walks towards the bedroom....

meantime vicky and his friends comes in... geet stands up straight way....
she was surprised and shocked to see vicky friend! vicky and his friend walked towards her.... before vicky could introduce him to her... Geet shouts out....
Geet: ANU!....
Anu stood there silent.... socked to see geet at the same time... "OMG geet..." both hugs each other tight ....
Geet: "How are you? i mean here... OMG..."
anu: "you have changed sooo much... all grown up!" both laughs...
vicky coughs: "he is my friend 2!... you know!"
anu: "sorry dude!.... well me and geet are old buddy.... from nursery" he laughs...
vicky: oh....
geet: yep...
anu: after soooo long time!
Geet: "i know.... you left us in year 8" she gave him an disappointed glare.
anu: "i am sorry!... you know... mum and dad brake up!"
Geet: "oh yes how are they?"
anu: "they are good!.. dad remarried!... i hop thats a good news... and mum still in shock! she just cant get over it!'
Geet: "i am sorry! i should let you freshen up! i mean you just came.... so take rest... will talk to you 2mx!"

he did look extremely tirade.... vicky dropped him in his room and came back to the living room... seeing geet still waiting...

vicky: bhabi...
geet turns around "yes!"
vicky: "who are you waiting for?"
geet: "your bro! still not back!"
vicky: "he did say he will be late!"
geet: "I know! but i am bored without him!..." she smiles... "i rather wait for him!"
vicky laughs... "you love him allot! don't you!"
geet smiles... which indicates yes...
Vicky: "Bhavi...." he hesitated for a minute... "I am really sorry"
geet looked at him in surprise.... "for what?"
vicky all embraced! then geet realized.... its there fight AT THE MALL
Geet: "don't worry vicky! it happens.... i already have forgave you!"

maan walks in... "forgave who?"
vicky: hi bro!
Geet: "you know old stuff" she smiles and walks towards maan...
vicky smiles at both and leaves the love birds alone...

Geet: "what took you sooo long?..."
Maan: "sorry! silly meeting with Miss Radihka!"
Geet: "Miss hu"
Maan looks at her! "umm.... i already have canceled the deal..." he adds... "before you become all mad at me!"
Geet: what? you cancel the deal!
Maan: but...
Geet: "Maan! did i say anything!"
they are in bedroom!
Maan: per!
Geet: you always presume stuff!
Maan: but...
Geet: maan... per what?
Maan: holds her close... "chup! ek dum chup!... if you let me talk then i will be able to say something"
geet nodes... as maan grabs her more close to him...
Maan: "the proposal was pretty rubbish... and not a single good idea!" as he explains the whole meeting geet helps him to get change....

geet was extremely tirade, she falls sleep on maans lap as he continuously explain the meetng in details... after a while he finds geet sleeping on his arm... he smiles... "Pagli! what will i do with this girl!"


next morning...
geet was still in deep sleep... cuddled up in maans arm... maan really didn't like to distrube, he waited a while then geet moved on the other side by her self. its maan usual getup even in her sleep he knew that very well. maan smiled and leaves the bed.

Maan was doing his usal exercise... kick stun.... vicky walks in...
vicky: bro...
Maan looks at him in surprise: you are early!
Vicky: yes bro... actually i wanted to ask you something.
Maan: "yes"
Vicky: my friend came round... well can he stay with me in the office for few days.... you know... he is also an arcitcs and here for holiday!... as i am busy for 2 more days... i dont want him to get bored so.... just for 2days...
Maan looked at him... faint smile: sure....
vicky walked out... extremely happy... geet was about to walk in and behind her anu....
Anu: geet....
Geet turned round gave a maan smile who was happy to see her... then it started to fade way as anu gave her a big hug....
Anu: "good morning...."
Geet: "good morning" accepting the hug from him...
Anu: "we all can do something together today..."
geet looked at maan who was really irritated... geet realized... "umm.... maybe some other day!"
Anu: "no geet today!"
Vicky: "we will see her in office! lets go"

maan wasn't happy at all... some other man hugging his wife... specially this early... and no.............


NEXT: someone is shocked!


if you like it do comment.... and the LIKE :D



GR8 loving it hahah
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG WHAT R U DOING I AM NOT EMILING YOU>>>>> DEFO NO NOW
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice, lovely part.
loved it.
I guess maan feel jealous
let's see what will happen in coming parts?
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago


pls pls pls
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

OMG WHAT R U DOING I AM NOT EMILING YOU>>>>> DEFO NO NOW


PLS PLS PLS fine how about 4 parts... i wan see man jealous lol
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

nice, lovely part.
loved it.
I guess maan feel jealous
let's see what will happen in coming parts?
continue soon.

hehehe glad u liked it xxx
will update soon xx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jennifer111


PLS PLS PLS fine how about 4 parts... i wan see man jealous lol

no its unfare

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