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wiinie_pooh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: misbah92
wow lovely update
poor maan abhi to khush hua tha aur rano di nai armano pai pani pher dia
loved all your updates till date
do update soon waiting for next part

Hey thank u sooo much for

liking it and commenting....

feels really good that u

gave a big comment......

Just made my day....🤗

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wiinie_pooh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: dee30
hey winnie🤗......dont stop.....love your FF.......sorry for not commenting before ......please dont stop.........👍🏼

Heyyyyy😛🤗

Woooow... slowly but nice...

i am reading the comments...

really happy....

and dont worry... this FF has a long way to go....😉

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wiinie_pooh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan
hi, awesome update..
oh geet is so weak, maan shd really tek gud care of her. :-)
oh bechaara maan, rano gave her a big blow..
waitng 4 d nxt part..
n plz dnt end ds ff.. luv it vry much n main to har updates me comment karti hoon..
cont soon.. thnx a lot 4 d pm..

Hmmmm😊

Maan will take care of Geet like a princess dear...

dont worry....😳

And yes u do comment every time...

but i said all that bcoz others dint comment...

thank u sooooo much bachaa... for giving a biggg comment...

u dont have an idea how much i missed updating ...till date..

I love updating too...😉😆😳

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wiinie_pooh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: cute-aly

update

but dont like maan Banjo ki wajha se geet ko bhul gya

RANO : hmm... aap bhool gaye naa Maan...
aaj hum Geet ko ghar lejaane aye hai...
Pag Pheron ke liye....

And Maan is not happy to hear this... good good maan app k sath aisa hi hona caheye

waiting for next yaar

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooow😍

firstly thanks for such a biiiiiiiiiiig comment....

Love u loads for posting this sweet comment...🤗

and Maan Geet ko bhulaa nahi yaar...😔

wo tho sweetheart hain... bas ab

aagey aagey dekho hotha hain kya???😉

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 14 years ago

#535

awesome update yaar

she fainted at the sight of Banjo???LOL

Thanks for the update

Love you

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Aleena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#536

Edited by cute-aly - 14 years ago

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wiinie_pooh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: cute-aly

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooow🤗

👏👏😳

Thanks Jaan....

wonderful... u posted Pooh and piglet....

wooooow ... Thank u sooooo much...

sooooo happy to see that....

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whitepearl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#538

Oh dear itna gussa...tum to bilkul Maan ki tarah naraz ho jaati ho....Ab tumhe manane ke liye here is a BIG HUG....🤗 ....Your updates are always awesome....They contain elements of various emotions...like the last one...I loe the way U showed a caring Maan....Keep updating dear...Don't stop.

Edited by whitepearl - 14 years ago

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wiinie_pooh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#539

PART - 45

And Maan is not happy to hear this...

MAAN : Par ....woh...

RANO : Par Geet ki iss haalath mai hum usey pareshaan nahi

karenge....

Maan was about to be cheerful and he get's a blow...

RANO : hum usey kal lene aayenge...

saying this Rano leaves from Khurana Mansion....getting back to her job....

but Maan on the other hand is really sick at the very thought of Geet

leaving the next day...

He stopped thinking when he realised...Geet was alone upstairs....

He straight away headed towards the room and watched Geet ,

Who was feeling a bit uncomfortable....she was changing positions

but was unable to sleep well....

He sat beside her... caressing her .... his touch calmed her down...

and she felt better when she grabbed his arm towards her...and cuddled

up... in deep sleep....

Maan tried his best not to disturb her... but when she felt the breeze

passing by her....she woke up... and was happy to see Maan sitting

by her side... her betterment....made maan cheerful...and he helped

her sit up right...it was almost mid day... they had their lunch....

and Maan said...showing the iron supplements

MAAN : chalo Geet... ab yeh supplements lene hai tumhe...

GEET : Kya??? Nahi.. Mai tablet nahi le sakti....

she said in a shivering tone...as she had a pile of bitter experiences

with swallowing the capsules...

MAAN : GEET.... yeh Rano ji ne diye hai...

unho ne kaha... zaruri hai.. inhe lena..

GEET : par mujhe nahi chahiye sir.....

She gave a stubborn look to him.. like kid making a protest.....

But Maan wont accept a defeat..

MAAN : GEET...tumne aadat kyu banaya hai???

mere har baat ka jawaab naa mai dene ki???😡

maine kahaa naa.. yeh tumhaari bhalayi ke liye hai...

ab chup chaap inhe nigal lo... mai paani laata hoon...

saying this he makes his way to get some water... while our smart Geet

finds a way out from those huge size capsules.. by closing the door...

so as to prevent Maan from coming again to force her,on having those capsules...

Maan returned with a glass of water ... but he had to face a door shut....

he shouted Geet's name many times...asking her to open the door,but

she was no where to listen to his words...with no option left with him...

he walked to Khurana Mansion to meet Dadima... and ask for help...

she laughed at how Maan complained like a child about Geet not

taking proper care of herself ... but it reminded her ... she too was angry

with both of her grandson's for some strong reason...while Maan pleaded

her for more than twice... she had no choice but to let go her anger

for sake of her beloved Geet....

She went to Geet's room... Geet dint protest as it was DADI....

Dadi firstly enquired about her health...and when she felt it was

not a problem ...she tried to convince Geet to take her medicine...

but the word medicine...got onto Geet's nerve... and she smartly

changed the topic ....to an extent that DADI completely forgot the

reason of her being there....and went back to her room...where

Maan and Vicky were waiting to hear from her....Maan started

off saying...

MAAN : DADIMA....? Geet ne darwaza kholi???

DADI : Haan Maan bete... waisey... tho usne darwazaa bandh hi nahi ki thi...

This made him realise the tricks she played .....

MAAN : Acha??? aur wo dawaai??

DADIMA : Dawaai???

MAAN : DADIMA....😡 aap tho Geet ko dawaai dene gayi thi naa...

DADIMA was dumb struck... she had no answer...how she missed the very point of her visit...she knew Maan would yell at her... but she was left with no choice...

rather than confessing for her mistake....so, she said...

DADIMA : Hmmm... woh... woh... bete hum.. wo...

MAAN : DADI??? aap yeh wo woh... kya kar rahi hai???

bataayi na.. Geet ne dawaai li???

DADIMA : Nahi.. Maan...humse nahi hua...wo kaam...

Vicky laughed at both of them... he laughed out loud...which Added to the anger

of already annoyed Maan Singh Khurana....and made him shout at the pitch

of his tone...

MAAN : Vicky... tumhe hasi kyu aa rahi hai??

kiske joke pe hass rahe ho??😡

VICKY : Haar gaye... hhaahha... haar gaye tum dono...

tum dono kisi ko dawaai dene se haar gaye????