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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Neeru..👍🏼....tumhare FF mein toh sach samne aa gaya,pata nahi show mein kab aayega 😕 ?????????
Loved the beach part,truly Kids can do miracles.....😛......love u & sorry for not replying ut PM's as was on tour but now me back....😉......so,will give full attention to one n only Maaneet.....🤗.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
really sweet...loved geet's part but would love it more if you explained sonia's and geet's relation more...anyways thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was nice......maan finally knows the truth... it is really sad and geet....she did find her frend... it is really good... keep writing
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Posted: 15 years ago


HEY LOVELY MANEETIANS....🤗

Thanks to all of u for
ur wonderful comments....

now without wasting the time
i will update soooooon

so isliye aaj individually
sab ke comments pe reply
nahi kar rahi hoon...

MAAFI... Pleese....

I will make up with my update... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

waooooooo

beautiful update.
waiting for next
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow nice update n waits 4 the next good luck
at least pari knows where geet is.

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Posted: 15 years ago




PART-22


GEET : pata hai sonia??? aaj sirf tum ho
mere saath dene ke liye....
Warnaa... babaji ne hamesha....
HAMESHA.... mujse un logonko cheen liya hai
jinke saath rehkar mai apne aapko
sambhaal sakti, Jo mere liye sabse zyaada
ehmiyat rakhte the....

She had tears slowly.... flowing from her eyes....and she continues to say....
what her heart felt ...right from the moment, when DEV abandoned her
in the airport,the bitter times she had to go through in the jail,her family
forcing her to feel her false marriage as a bad dream,she felt... how easy it was
for her family, to treat " MARRIAGE - A life time relation " to be a dream????

GEET : Babaji ne HAMESHA mujse un logonko cheen liya hai
jinse meri saansein chalti hai....Pehle mere bauji, jo
merei taakat hai, unhey bebas kar diya ki wo mujhe,
khud se door kar de... aur AB....? MAAN SIR ....
jinse mujhe alag hone pe Majboor kardiya.....

Sonia looked at Geet crying soooo painfully... but she dint know why
Geet cried sooo much.........


on the other hand,Pari who was listening to Geet's words wondered why Geet is saying all her
pain to sonia who could neither understand and giive solution to her problem
nor could hear her .... she was DEAF.....

GEET : MAAN SIR.... mujhe aapki zarurat hain.... [ she says in her sob's ]
doondlijiye naa aap mujhe .. har baar ki tarah...
Main aap ke bina nahi jee sakthi....

Geet stops speaking when she see's sonia in tears...
she cup's her face and asks in signs .... what bothered her...
to which sonia points towards her sand castle which collapsed
just after she built it entirely....

Geet felt bad for the poor child... and tried to make another one
in which she succeeded and that bought smiles back to the little one's
face... Sonia calpped her hands and hugged Geet in gladness...
and Geet reciprocated... and as she found it was Getting darker
she got up to get back to the orphanage... but sonia denied making
innocent childish faces .... Geet had to promise her a kulfi to come along...
watching all this pari's eyes got teared, she turned around, got into her car...
and instantly dailed to Maan.... who was standing in Geet's room and trying to
analyse the reason for which Geet had to leave him alone, as he knew it by now....

MAAN : Tho Geet isiliye mujhe chod kar chaligayi thi....
DEV ki wajay se... Pata nahi wo ab kaisi hogi???
kahaa aur kis haalaath mai hogi???

His phone rings by this time.... and he starts to clear his voice
and try to speak normally...

MAAN : hello ....

PARI : Maan ... mai Pari....kaisey ho???

[ even Pari could not speak properly,after seeing Geet in pain ]

MAAN : Ha ... Pari mai teekh hoon aur tum ???

PARI : MAAN.... GEET....

she was about to say, but... Maan interrupted...

MAAN : Geet... nahi hai Pari... wo Ghar chod kar chali gayi....
chaar din hogaye ... wo ab bhi nahi lauti...
pata nahi wo kahaa.. kis haal mai...

PARI : Wo MUMBAI MAI HAI....

MAAN : kya??????

PARI : HA Maan... GEET MUMBAI MAI HAIN....

MAAN : tumhe kaisey...

PARI : Mere orphanage main... [ now she was scared to say what she knew ]

PARI : AUR WO PREGNANT HAI MAAN ..... [ she slowly said overcoming her fears ]

mai nahi jaanti ki usey pataa hai bhi yaa nahi ....

and she starts saying all the story right from the time when Geet
reached MUMBAI ....

Maan was shocked,happy,sad, and scared...happy as he knew Geet's
whereabouts,sad as he could not find her,shocked to hear about her ppregnancy
scared as he thoyght how she would react when DEV would confront her
and reveal his relation with Maan ....but for a second he forgot everything and asked....

MAAN : MUJHE USSEY MILNAA HAIN,Wo... mai...
uskaa pataa do mujhe , abhi.....

PARI : Maan... tumhey fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hain...
trust me... Main uskaa poora khayaal rakh rahi hoon
aur rahi baat address ki.. tho mai tumhey mail kar
chuki hoon... ab tumey koi nahi rok saktey hain
Geet's se milne se.... kyu ki main ne sunaa tha
usey yeh kehte hue....

MAAN was not paying attention to her words...but pari
called him twice and he said..

MAAN : haa... wo... kya ?? KYA suna tha tumne???

PARI : maine sunaa tha usse... yeh kehte hue...
ki usey aapki zarurat hain...
aur yeh ki... wo

MAAN : kya pari ?? BOLO...

PARI : ki wo... aapke bina nahi jee sakthi...

saying this she ended the call and Maan stood in silence....
looking at the door... Dev entered the room and came near to
him...


Sorry... 😔
mom's scolding me...
cant update more...
even i could not pm u all
Goodnight....friends...😭 😭 😭





Edited by wiinie_pooh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
not fair it was sooooo gud
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Posted: 15 years ago
its fine for not sending pm.........you need rest after giving us such lovely update......its just awesome...at last maan knows the truth.....now he will run for geet...anyways its an amazing update loved it..

-----------vinitha
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanksssssssssss see soon with another awesome updateeeeeeeeee

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