SAJAN-FF( DIL KA RISHTA) - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
hiii maisha dear congrats for ur new ff loveee da 1st part aww gunji she is so so sweet gal wow she goes to mandir everyday how sweet n den wen shilpa aunty n nups saw dey were all impressed n liking her n now dey r thinking to get her married wid sammy bt poor sammy wants to do love marriage aww bt now cant wait to see sammy's entry do continue soon now
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Congratulations for your new SaJan FF.Maisha what a nice concept.I loved it a lot.I am a big fan of your FF's.You really rock.Can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
nice start
veru mindblowing ff
n with ood concept n character sketch
n by the way
congo on ur new ff
sanu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
loved it.... can't wait to see what happens next... thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
Nice FF Maisha!!!
Do continue soon dear n by god waiting for sajan's marriage....and how sam loves gunji after marriage👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
wonderful cs and start.......cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
heyyyyy dear...
congrats on ur new ff..
d cncpt z amzinggg
i am sure dat it vil b an arrnge marriage..n lov vil happn later....bt raely its sumthng realy new..
cont sooooooooooooooon n plzzzzz update ur oder ffs 2...

thnx 4 dpm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18

loved ur CS na !!

congratzz on ur new FF
do cont soon
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
tht was sooooooooooooo awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee i just love your new ff
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
part-2 nupur comes to her house...n goes in her room...she sees a guy is being ready...he is mayank....her husband..... n=uffo mayank..tum bhi na..ekdam bacche ho..ek bhi kapra theekse nahi rakh sakte kya??????? m=are nupur......tum agayi??? kaha thi..pata ha ma kabse apna wallet dhoond raha tha.... milhi nahi raha tha... n=mayank,....tumhari yardasht itni kamzoor kyu ha??? mane bed ke bagal wale drawer mehi rakha ha.....ruko..ma deti hu.. nupur was searching for his wallet....mayank comes n hugs her from back... n=are...chodo..abhi romance ka waqt nahi ha.... m=kyu??????abhi kyu nahi??? n=kyuki mujhe bohot sara kaam ha... m=ha ha..tumhe to sirf ghar ke kaam hi ha.....mera bareme to khayalhi nahi ha... n=mayank...naraz maat hona...ma tumhare liehi ye kaam karungi... m=accha??? esa kaunsa kaam ha??? n=batatihu..par mujhe to chodo... mayank lets her go..nupur tells him about the girl in mandir....mayank also becomes happy.. m=sach???? n=much.....mayank..yakeen mano..woh bohot hi achi aur sundaar ladki thi..aur humare samrat ke lie...sabse acchi..... m=nupur mujhe tumhari batopar bilkul yakeen ha..... n kisses her forehead.. m=aur ma janta hu......ke tum aur mom jo bhi faisla karoge....woh sahi hoga.. n=ha...par....pehle samratse to baat karni ha... m=chalo..abhi karte ha..... n=nahi..shamko dinner ke waqt mummy karengi.... m=ach apar abhi usse uthaoto....office keliye late horaha ha...
n=ha...chalo.....
mayur enters a room..were a boy was sleeping......he was coving his face with pillooows...n the room was dark..when nupur removes the curtains......the boy turns to the other side...mayank sits beside him..n both give a high five to eachother.......
n=samrat..chal uth ja..abhi aj ye nautanki aur nahi chalegi......
he is samrat...the cool dude..he sits up.......mayank smiles..
s=kya hua?? ese muskura kyu raheho???
m=kuch nahi.........
n=samrat kya hua?? ese mu kyu latkake rakha ha??
s=apki wajase....
n=ab mane kya kia???????
s=apne mera sapna tor dia..sapne me ma apni dream girl ko dekh raha thaa....aur ma uska chehra dekhnehi wala tha...jab apne mujhe utha dia..aur woh chali gayi..
n=sapna?? are wah..samrat bolna..kaisi ha teri dream girl??????
m=ha sam....bolo na.......
s=bolu???
mayur=ha.......
samart gets up..n stands at the window.......he takes his guitar..n starts palying it...... other side..gunjan comes to her home.......she openes the door....n meets her bauji n bui...samrat starts singing......
s=raton rat tara koi chand ya sitara koi gire to utha lena..................gunjan is giving prshad to her bauji n bui
o sunioye tara chmakila hoga..chand sharmila hoga nakh pe laga lenaa........................both give her blessingss.....
zara si savri haa.....woh..................gunjan blushes...
zarasi bawri ha woh.......................gunjan goes to her mothers picture...
woh surme ki tarah meri.......akhome hi rehti ha...............prays to god..n takes ashirwad...then rushes to dias room....
subhah ke khwab se urayi ha...............moves the curtains....
palkoke niche chupayi ha......................feels the sun rays..n smiles
manonamano tum sote sote khwabo me bhi khwab dikhati haa...................wakes up dia..both sisters hug
manonamano tum pari ha woh pari ki kahania sunati ha...........................gives dia a kiss...
khudaya kahir.........khudaya khairrr.....khudaya kahirr......khudaya khairrr..............gunjan is smiling...n samrat is looking at the sky.......the scene divides in two...............mayur comes to samrat...n shakes him.....samrat blsuhes....n sits on the bed.....gunjan was coming downstairs....when her dupatta was stuck on the stairs.....
s=tu hawa...ma zameeennnnnnn........tu jaha ma wahi..........gunjan takes her dupatta... but it flyies aways....she also runs behind...
jab ure.....mujhe leke kyu urti nahi....................gunjan takes her dupattaa.....n smiles..
tu ghata ma zameen......tu kahi ma kahi......................gunjan gives everyone breakfast....she feeds uday....sits with everyonee......
kyu kabhi...mujhe leke baraste nahi????????????...................
nupur comes n pulls samrats earss....samart comes out of his dream.........
zara sa savla ha woh.........................samrat touches his hair...n blushes
zarasa bawla ha woh...................he stands near the window.....
woh sumre ki tarah meri......akhome hi rehta haa...........samrat feels the air...n again starts singing.....
s=subhah ke khwab se urayi ha...........gunjan n dia rushes in the garden.....
palkoke niche chupayi ha...........
manonamano tum sote sote khwabome bhi khwab dikhati ha.............dia n gunjan twirls in the garden...
manonamano tum pari ha woh pari ki kahania sunati haa..........................gunjan takes ashirwwad from her bauji..n bui n starts for her hospital....
khudaya khairr.......khudaya khairr.....................samrat goews down.......gunjan is walking in the road.....
khudaya kahir......khudaya khairrrrrrrrrrrr.........................both r smilinggg.....gunjan enters the hospital...she greets everyone.......n goes to the children ward....everychildren hugs her n kisses her.....she gives them chocolates....samrat is lying ong the garden....he sits in the bench
s=jab daat me ungli dabay.........gunjan tells a girl not to bite her nails...
aur unglipe naat liptayee.........she moves her hair from her face....
badal ye nichrata jayee....hoooooooo.............a few drops of rain falls on samrats face.....
kuch karke woh baatko talee......jab mathe pe woh baal dalee.....samrat is walking..n thinking about the dream girl
amber ye sugarat jayee...hoooooooooooooo.................mayur comes to him...he takes mayanks hand..
s=woh jab nakhun utarti ha....to chanda ghatne lagta ha....
woh panipar kadam rakhee.....sagar bhi hath jata ha.................gunjan is checking files...when all the papaers accidently falls down...she also sit s down..n starts picking them.......
subhah ke khwab se urayihaa............gunjan is smiling...
palkoke niche chupayihaa...............her specs is falling..but then she puts it properly........
manonamano tum sote sotee khwab me bhi khwab dikhati ha........her collogeas come....n they takes her files....n starts running...
manonamano tum pari ha woh pari ki kahaniya sunati haa.................she starts running behind them..n takes her files.....
khudaya khairrr...........khudaya khairrr.................
khudaya khairrrrr.....................khudaya khaiiiirrrrrrrrr..................samart lies on the groundd.....gunjan is smiling....the scene divides in two......samrat n gunjan smilingg.....
mayur sees this..
m=nupur..samrat ki to alaghi duniya ha....
n=ha par...mummy jo duniya uske lie banayi ha..woh sabse acchi haa...
m=i hope so...........
at the evening....the panditji comes....
p=ye lijiye maji..gunjan ki janam kundali........samrat se puriki ppuri milti ha...
n=woh mummy.......
sh=aur uske gharwalose baat ki?????
p=nahi..ek baar apko bata deta...uuske baad.......
sh=to theek ha....humari tarafse haa haa.......
n=par mummy...samrat.....
sh=usse ma aj baat karungi........
p=theek ha...ma chalta hu.....
the panditji leaves n sayanak comes....
s=mom...ye panditji?????
sh=samrat....mane tumhari lie ek ladki pasand ki haa........
s=what???????????????????????? shadi??????????????
mayur look at eachotherr..........samrat in a shcoking lookk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PRECAP: SHERGILLS GOES TO BHUSHAN HOUSE.....

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