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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

I'm in a daze after reading this EYE-OPENER. . . Even if it failed to open my eyes 😆 (I'll explain this part later though) . . . Will post what I think of ur OS soon!

Edited by -Sharmila- - 14 years ago

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Kankshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

*Edited*

I had been missing onto a fantastic read, sister. Am sorry, I kept you waiting! 😳

Ouch, Priyanka's so sinisterly close to me. I behave the same way when am made to travel, I refuse to adjust all the time, let alone travelling. But erm, this gal here is a different nutcase. Haha! I am amazed at the topic you chose this time, its so real and aspiring. I can clearly make out what she must have been into from that very insant through the marvelous ending you made.

Her brother made some amazingly put remarks and Rishabh's character seemed realest of all, I could visualize him throughout.

Keep writing!

-Kanky!

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Edited =]

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/36109271

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-sam-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

I have read this..
i have this sms...
a small tiny one... 😳

And you elaborated it wonderfully...
Really yaar, I mean Cutiecuchikooo 😆 😆 😆 , pulling your cheeks...

It was really an eyeopener..
and the way you have written it, is as always mindblowing 👏 👏 👏
A very great attempt...

keep going gal!
Love yaa... 🤗

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497410

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Its truly an amazing OS dear!. . .

Its very well written!! .. .

I love Rishab's character!. . . I'm alot similar to him... not the food part though... but I have my own specks of Priyanka in me!. .

I don know where I read this before.. but I remember reading something on these lines a few weeks back... I'm not sure if it was an e-mail or an SMS.. . .

But you've done a brilliant job!. . Kudos to ya! . .

Keep writing!!

-Sharmi

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sariska sujaini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Hey aishwarya

amazing os and ss

loved all of them

next time do pm me

wud love to read them

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Archana

@a-little-hope

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Aish,

This is the first time I'm reading your OS and I'm happy to read such wonderful writing. I admire and commend that you are not writing typical romantic one shots.

Eye opener is brilliant piece of writing...how the superficial girl changes her views and learns about human values and gets a different new perception of happiness.

Wonderfully written. Do write more.

Love

Archana

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Aishwarya

@-Aish-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: --Shika--
so am the first one to comment...!!😉 Congrats, Di!
okay...first of all 🤗... You too! 🤗
and now...!! ur OS is simply superb...!!
i thought my sis writes love stories very well...but yeh serious types kahaiyan kab se??haan??
but seriously u did a good job...!! Thanks so much!!
well ek baat bata...tumhari stories mein sab sweet bros kyun hothey hain??😉 I don't know, maybe because I want one.
and loved that one liner...!!
"Yeah, this keeps happening, you know. I used to fight with my sister too, till your mother came along. Then, I found another ring-mate."
it was awesome...!!!
😆
*edited*
so i found i didnt comment on ur previous OS.. UNTITLED!!
that was damn cute...pillars of love!!! there was so much maturity in ur writing seriously..And loved sam's characterisation...Sweet bro!! Thanks you, loads.

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi
Good one,Aish!!

Thanks, Nivi Di.

This happens almost everyday with me 😊 I mean I end up in one or other issues, start getting emotional and look up to God like WHY ME??

The only difference is that I never needed anyone else to remind me the positive side - God always bring someone who is in deeper trouble in front of me and still living their life ; I am left speechless- Left with no complaints after that... I cherish whatever life gave me!!

Amazing thought, actually. Life needs to be appreciated the way it is. One shouldn't expect too much out of it.

I really hope your story will be an eye-opener for everyone of us..

I hope so too. Thanks.

Your Nivi Di

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: -Daania-
Aish 🤗

Daania 🤗

*Applause* Sweetheart, this is a beautiful piece!

I really love how you've gone away from the typical lovey-dovey stereotypical stories and actually gone for a awareness story. Really this has to be a wonderful eye-opener,

Thanks so much, Daania. You have no idea how much this comment means to me.

It was so brilliantly written! Everything was just perfect. I so loved this OS jaan! Brilliant <3

<3

Keep writing more =]

Love ya <3

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