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meravigiliso

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

awesme update.very cute and can understand geet dilemma.hope mann willunderstand her.waitig for yournext lovely update

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Mounchy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

loved it yaar!!! continue 4 sure....

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uzmam1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

great update ...

typical man woman divide ..women tend to think outside the box .. taking into consideration family members, co workers, social circle, society in general ..

men think more immediate .. their lives .. thier relationship ..

the best place to be .. surprise surprise .. is in between the two!! now that is for you do .. make them both realise and they have to shift slightly from their view points and meet in the centre somewhere .. fall head over heels in love, express that love like there is no tomorrow and be very very happy!!!

**sigh sigh**

uz xx

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

hi sri!! 🤗

i love situations where everyone is right in their own place and still there are complications.. trying hard to maintain that balance...!! 😊

love,
niha

Originally posted by: sri_4
Niha akka.. 🤗
U made the next part too..wow..and i totally enjoyed reading it..Geet playing ankh micholi with maan so that no one can know abt their relation atleast not so soon...she has her own worries and they definetly are not small..shes married..and her husband left her and shes pregnant too..and she loves maan above all..And this is just one side of story.."Its complicated"..i would say it all..😆
I hope maan soon understands geets insecurities..and helps her..
Good wishes..😃
Sri:-)

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

yes which is why, my next update is going to be a slightly hard one to write... i am still thinking and structuring it out in my head!!

Originally posted by: sarita21992
ur question is so confusing yar, oth r rite in thr places, aise sawalo ka unfortunately koi clear ans nhi hota.
btw gud wrk going keep it up.

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

yes! and i want both of them to benefit from one another ... by being in a relationship .... Geet learns from maan and maan respects Geet for what she feels.. since they are only babies.. this will take a while...thanks alot for the feedback.. encourages me to write more.. and not goof up!

love,
niha

Originally posted by: uzmam1
great update ...

typical man woman divide ..women tend to think outside the box .. taking into consideration family members, co workers, social circle, society in general ..

men think more immediate .. their lives .. thier relationship ..

the best place to be .. surprise surprise .. is in between the two!! now that is for you do .. make them both realise and they have to shift slightly from their view points and meet in the centre somewhere .. fall head over heels in love, express that love like there is no tomorrow and be very very happy!!!

**sigh sigh**

uz xx

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Sakshi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

awesome niha!!!! 😊 plzzz update soon............

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Love14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

@honeydew, that was really wonderful, loved this update😛😛😛😛, plz update next part soon, thanks for the PM

Ada

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

its on the next one!

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

🤗

this is for all the lovely things you guys have said...!! here;s the next part! part 5

Maan cant get why Geet doesn't want anyone to know about their relationship-as he does his crunches… he thinks out aloud…
Maan: yeh ladki, kya sochti hai…? Usey lagta hai ke main usey dhoka doonga? Main usey chod ke chala jaunga…
As he says this.. this work out vigor intensifies….
Dev comes and joins him.. and observes his brother closely…then he says…
Dev: bro main jaanta hoon, aap mujhe daant ne waale ho.. lekin… mujhe lagta hai… aapko aapka tension mere saath share kar lena chahiye… after all ladkiyon ke maamle main, you know me…
Maan: dekho dev, mujhe pareshaan mat karo… main uss ghamandi ladki ke bare main baat nahi karma chahta….
Dev: bro.. maine kisi ladki ke bare main nahi bola.. lekin lagta hai aap bade problem main ho…
Maan doesn't react… and changes his exercise… he shifts to doing yoga… as if meditating trying to concentrate… with his eyes shut…
Dev: bro.. ladkiyan jo hoti hai na… badi hi sensitive hoti hai.. they need to be handled with care… unke haar baat, haar sentiment ka khayal rakhna zaroori hota hai…aur fir aap thehre angry young man… aapse toh koi bhi darr jaata hai… toh, thoda sa pyar, thoda sa understanding… sab theek ho jayega…
Maan has his eyes closed…. He isn't reacting…
Dev: bro?
When Maan doesn't respond… Dev says.. "okay bro aap apna concentration bhang mat karo… par meri baat pe dhyan zaroor dena…
Dev gets up and leaves from there… The moment Dev leaves maan opens his eyes…
And the words that Dev had said come back to his head….
He thinks to himself… " abhi thodi der pehle main ussey itna gussa tha.. aur ab … mera gussa gayab ho gaya… yeh ladki mere zindagi ke saath khel rahi hai….waise kar kya rahi hogi who iss waqt… main usey fone karu?
He takes his fone.. and looks at it.. there are some 5 missed calls….

On the other side…
Geet is trying Maan's number and he isn't lifting the calls.. she wonders if she did the right thing by telling him she didn't want to work with him…
Geet: oy geet, tune kuch galat toh nahi bola na…waise bhi who sasha aur tasha kitni gandi gandi baatein karti hai.. ab agar…
She tries his number again.. but he doesn't respond…
Ek kaam karti hoon she thinks… " main unke liye unka favorite paste banati hoon… lekin usey banate kaise hai?
Geet: idea! Computer pe check karti hoon….
The moment she turns on the computer … her attention gets diverted to Dev.. and she tells herself.. mujhe pata lagana padega.. lekin abhi ke liye… pasta ki recipe dhoond leti hoon…
She goes thro the recipe of Pasta in Alfredo sauce ( my fav :D) and decides to make it for him….
She takes a print out of the recipe…and walks into the kitchen…

Back at the haveli.. maan see's her missed calls and decides to call her back.. and this time she isn't responding.. as she is trying to figure out how to make what…
Maan decides he will directly go meet her at the outhouse…
As he enters .. there is no one in the hall.. he makes his way to the kitchen.. and witnesses the vision of beauty… geet trying to recite the name of the recipe one after another… telling herself how to make it…she makes confused faces.. and he smiles to himself as he looks at her do all this…
Finally she tastes it and says… " yeh toh kitna pheeka hai… maine itna saara cheese daala aur itna pepper aur namak… fir bhi isme taste nahi hai.. ek kaam karti hoon… thoda tadka marti ho uspe… aur maan sir ungliyan chaat te reh jayenge….haina ? she is thrilled….!!
Maan is amused….
Once the whole thing is ready.. she smiles gleefully!! Then she turns to the fridge and looks inside.. and says..
Geet: chee chee! Beer ki bottle! Mere ghar main yeh sab nahi rahega.. ek kaam karti hoon… lassi banati hoon.. who bhi malai ke saath….
A voice says … from behind her " Pasta ka saath lassi… kuch ajeeb sa combination nahi ho jayega?"
Geet: haye rabba, ab toh mere kaan bhi bajne lage hai… yeh maan sir phone uthate kyun nahi…
She notices a pair of hands engulfing her from behind… as a chill runs down her spine… she is suddenly embararsed at the proximity…
Geet: maan sir aap… chodiye mujhe… koi…
Maan: nahi ayega… yeh out house hai Geet.. remember?
Geet: lekin fir bhi sir…
She pushes him away and makes an angry baby face…
Geet: apne mera phone kyun nahi uthaya…
Maan: wo main…
Geet: main kuch nahi sunna chahti… apne mera fone nahi uthaya… fir bhi maine aapke liye pasta banaya… dinner table sajaya… lassi bhi banana waali thi….aur aur….
Maan: Geet mujhe bolne ka mauka to do…
Geet: nahi ! main aapko bolne nahi doongi.. warna aap mujhe fir se daantenge…
Maan: kya main tumhe sach main villain dikhta hoon.. jo har waqt….
Geet: haan.. aur dusht daanav aur raavan bhi….
Maan: theek hai ? main wo sab hoon.. ab khush?
Geet: itni jaldi maan gaye? Mujhe lade bhi nahi! Kuch ulta bola bhi nahi….
Maan: haan geet…! I am sorry! Main aaj wo….
He holds her hands in his …and looks into her eyes.. and says…
Maan: dekho geet, yeh jo khushi mere zindagi main aayi hai… bahut waqt baad aayi hai.. aur main isey in chote mote jhagdo se waste nahi karma chahta… main apne zindagi ka har pal tumhare saath spend karma chahta hoon…waste nahi…
Geet smiles… doesn't know what to say, as she is red her in face.. she says…
Geet: dinner karne chale?
Maan: tadke waala pasta?
Geet: sir… aap pehle isey chak ke toh dekhiye….!!
Maan: chalo.. tumhare liye yeh bhi kar lete hai…
[B][COLOR=BLUE]Maan puts the pasta is his mouth… and geet waits for his reaction…
Maan: dekho main jhoot nahi bolunga tumhe khush karne ke liye… yeh taste toh thoda ajeeb karta hai.. lekin… isme who swaad hai .. jo shayad duniya me kisi aur pasta main na ho.. isme tumhara pyaar hai geet…
Geet: aur yeh pyar sirf aapke liye hai sir says Geet…
Mahi plays at the backdrop as he slowly puts a strand of her hair back and holds her other hand softly! Both of them look into one another's eyes !
Geet: Sir… mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha…
Maan: hmm bolo…
Geet: actually wo… mera job…
Maan: Geet fir se…
Geet: nahi sir.. please aap ek baar meri baat sun lo… aisa nahi hai ke main aap ke vishwas nahi karti.. ya humare bare main kisi ko batana nahi chahti.. lekin yeh waqt sahi nahi hai sir… aur fir.. iss waqt… mujhe aap ke saath ki zaroorat hai… duniye ke sawaalon ki nahi…
Maan: geet tumhe yeh sab kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai.. main sab jaanta hoon.. aur issi liye main chahta hoon ke tum office main kaam karo…
Geet: par sir…
Maan: office main tum apna kaam karogi, aur main apna.. uss chopra waale project main maine, tumhari koi madad nahi ki .. par.. tum khud apne balboote pe…tumne naam kamaya… hai ki nahi?
Geet nods…
Maan: aapne aap pe bharosa kar geet… aur tab dekhna… tum kitne aage jaogi.. aur main toh tumhare saath hoon hi…
Geet has tears in her eyes… she comes forward and hugs maan…
He wipes her tears off and says…
Maan: aur kal se, tum apne kaam pe poora concentrate karogi…
Geet nods…
Maan: kisi baat se nahi darogi….
Geet: ji sir….
Maan: har cheez ka muqabla karogi…
Geet: ji sir…
Maan: lunch har roz mere saath karogi…
Geet: ji sir ( in the same flow)
Maan: aur isi tarah har roz mujhe hug karogi…
Geet: ji ( she starts to say and suddenly looks up.. and notices a naugty smile on his face… and she blushes and shakes her head meaning to say yes shyly)
Geet: ab aap jayiye sir…! Bahut raat ho gayi hai…
Maan: haan… mujhe jaana chahiye….
Geet's expression changes.. as she says… " thodi der agar chaho toh ruk sakte hai aap…."
Maan: (back in his serious MSK tone) haan.. haan.. main bhi wahi soch raha tha ( in a professional matter of fact tone)
There is an awkward silence and then Both of them start laughing loudly to their hearts content..

Precap: Geet was successful the first time she did the chopra project, but does that mean this would happen every time she takes up a project? Would geet's nave ways actually cost Maan a fortune? Now that he is in love how far can maan keep geet away from him, in the name of not mixing work and his emotions together!!

Love,
Niha

Edited by -honeydew- - 15 years ago

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