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kooliio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#411

Amazing update!! OMG!! Her family is so mean...losers!! Hope the baby is fine...I don't want the baby to die...can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

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Aleena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#412

hy niha

how r u.

great update dear.
geet k family wale kabhi nahi sudhar sakte

maan entry is superb at the end. he is in full form of MSK

hope geet and thek hoon

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Bhavana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#413

Hi papa, FF reading session 2 😛

Part 9- Story lo unna anni characters ni baaga utilize chestunavu kada…..too much oye 👍🏼….i felt as if I was watching a tv show. 🤓

I loved this line" koi itni baar girta hain kya?" 🤣

Part 10- Wow, niha nee lo writing ki inta talent undi ani ipude realize chestunna.😎

The whole beautiful Punjab like place was like a sweet dream and the next second it turns into her horror past. Seriously naku edo tv serial choostunattu undi. 👏

Part11- ehe , geet Dev peru chepali ani start chesi D ani antadi ,shasha vastada 😡!!! nuvu ne K serial twist ……And in this part my fav line was "geet , tum mujhe jhel rahin ho ?"😆

Part 12- Aha wah wah twist meeda twist aaa too good…👏

tommo next 4 parts

lub

Bhavi🤗

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#414

awwww.... 🤗 ( idi online raandanduku... and for actually reading the next parts religiously.... cos i know how lazy u r with these things.... )
nee comment chadivi buggalu red aipoyaayi...aibaboi.... nanne na intha pogidindi???
Sasha twist ... hehehe 🤣 K serials hit amma india lo... those twists always work...FYI DMG, MJHT, Geet... all of them use the same... shakeela ki powder kotti hero romance cheyamanna... adi em chestundo neeku telida? good you could visualise it all.. just means.. you are also sooo into it... but hands off MSK ... ippude cheptunna!!! sare... thanks for reading.. and love you loads for the detailed commenting... (which proves you have actually been reading... 😉 )
unta...

love,
niha

Originally posted by: bhavi20_s
Hi papa, FF reading session 2 😛

Part 9- Story lo unna anni characters ni baaga utilize
chestunavu kada…..too much oye 👍🏼….i felt as if I was watching a tv show. 🤓

I loved this line" koi itni baar girta hain kya?" 🤣

Part 10- Wow, niha nee lo writing ki inta talent undi ani
ipude realize chestunna.😎

The whole beautiful Punjab like place was like a sweet dream
and the next second it turns into her horror past. Seriously naku edo tv serial
choostunattu undi. 👏

Part11- ehe , geet
Dev peru chepali ani start chesi D ani antadi ,shasha vastada 😡!!! nuvu ne K
serial twist ……And in this part my fav line was "geet , tum mujhe jhel rahin ho
?"😆

Part 12- Aha wah wah twist meeda twist aaa too good…👏
tommo next 4 parts
lub
Bhavi🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#415

Hey Niha....what an epi yar...love Rajji for going to Maan and Maan taking a talwar and standing against the Handa parivaar , how heroic... 😍 i hope the baby's alright ....

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#416

i thought it wouldnt be possible for people to change in such a short span... and moreover... i was getting suffocated in Hoshiarpur... thats why i made them run back to Delhi... i had my selfish reasons ... 😆

Originally posted by: kooliio
Amazing update!! OMG!! Her family is so mean...losers!! Hope the baby is fine...I don't want the baby to die...can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#417

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Mazzy101
hey! i jst finishd reading it! its really good! well done!👍🏼

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#418

hey ...

i am good... hope you are well too... and yes... her family cant change soo soon na.. and people with such views generally never change....!
dont worry.. baby ko kuch nahi hoga...!

love,
niha

Originally posted by: cute-aly
hy niha

how r u.

great update dear.
geet k family wale kabhi nahi sudhar sakte

maan entry is superb at the end. he is in full form of MSK

hope geet and <img src="http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020396.gif" alt="" />thek hoon

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 14 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: -honeydew-
LOl i am not a meano....!!

yay...so you're not harming her baby?
please end the suspense already
please update today...please

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#420

Part 17:
Geet is writhing in pain and she cant bear it.. all along the while she says…. "Maan sir… mera baccha… mera baccha…"
Maan: geet kuch nahi hoga tumhare bacche ko… bas.. patience rakho… hum abhi hospital pahunchne waaley hai….
Maan finally reaches a hospital on the way and geet is admitted.
maan tells the nurse, that geet is pregnant and that he will do anything to ensure the baby is alright…
Nur: sir aap baithiye… sir abhi aate honge….abhi wo madam ki hi check kar rahe hai…
Maan is waiting restlessly in the doctors cabin, wanting to know what had happened when a familiar voice talks from behind…
Voice: ji kahiye.. kya miss geet aap hi ki wife hai?
Maan turns around to respond when he comes face to face with an old friend of his Dr. Armaan Mallik.
Maan: Armaan?
Armaan: Maan?
Both of them hug…
Armaan: teri shaadi ho gayi? No bad… !! aur tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi….
Maan: err… yaar Armaan… kaisi hai wo….
Armaan looks at Maan with a serious and a straight face and says… " kash main keh sakta wo perfectly theek hai…."
Maan is worried….
Armaan: lekin… wo perfect le thodi kam hai…. she is okay…. Humne abhi abhi check kia hai… she wanted to kill her baby?
Maan narrates how he had come here and how her family members had done this with her… …. And why they are here…Armaan's look straightens as he says…
Ar: cant believe, aaj ke zamaane main bhi ye sab hota hai.. shocking na…
Maan: I know, I am shocked myself…!
Ar: but now.. don't you fear… cos….
Maan: Armaan mallik is here? tu yahan kya kar raha hai?
Ar: what a silly question.. ek doctor hospital main kya karega ? tu bhi kya bekaar ke sawaal karta hai....
Maan: nahi... tu toh bombay main tha na? aur teri engagement bhi ho gayi thi...
Armaan has a saddened look on his face as he says… " Maan, tu aaj bahut din baad mila hai… aaj tere bare main baat karte hai.. aur fir iss kahani ka hero tu hai… bataye ga nahi apni heroine se tu kahan aur kaise mila tha?"
As they walk towards the cafeteria Maan peeps in to look at Geet who is sleeping… He wants to go in…
Ar: Ah ah! Main tujhe aaj jaane nahi doonga… abhi ke liye… I am all you have…sone de usse..
Maan: waise Armaan… maine abhi tak ussey shaadi nahi ki hai…
Ar: don't tell me… Maan Singh Khurana is still single.. aur bhi tera koi … ehsaan waala kaam hai… yaad hai kaise school main tune Shaila ko bachane ke liye … teacher ke bare main principle ko complain kar dia tha…
Maan looks embarrassed…
Ar: aur fir bechari tujhse pyar karne lagi.. aur tune uska dil todh dia…
Maan: tu jo hai toote dil ko sambhaalne ke liye….
Ar: well… bechari kitna ro rahi thi… tujhe aise nahi karna chahiye tha…
Maan: arey… maine uski madad iss liye ki kyunki teacher usey bewajah punish kar rahi thi…wo school main late iss liye aati thi kyunki wo ghar ka saara kaam karke aati thi…
Ar: yeah right! Anyways…
Ma: aur waise bhi…kisi se pyar aise hi thode hota hai…
Ar: toh batao kaise hota hai kisise pyar….
Ma: ladki to aise honi chahiye… jiski hasi se tumhari poori duniya khil uthey…. Jiski khushi main tumhari khushi ho.. aur jise ek pal ke liye bhi udaas na karne ka darr tumhare andar ho… jo ladki tumhari zindagi poori tarah se badal de… tumhare behtari ke liye…
Ar: jiske liye saans lene ko jee chahe… aur jiske bina zindagi adhoori lagey… bilkul meri…. ( … Armaan gets a little nostalgic, but he snaps out and he says….)
Ar: not bad! Maan Singh Khurana is finally in love… ab uska naam bhi toh batado…
Maan: Geet!
Ar: see, I knew it… wahi andar waali na?
Maan: I am sorry Armaan.. tune apne engagement ke liye mujhe bulaya tha… lekin uss waqt main nahi aa paya… toh shaadi ho gayi teri?
Ar: …. Wo… humari sagai toot gayi….
Ma: I am sorry Armaan…
Ar: I guess that's life… uski shaadi ho gayi hai…aur I am guessing wo khush hai…apne "hubby" ke saath…
Maan offers Armaan a hug and says… " chalo… jo ho gaya.. hum uss bare main baat nahi karenge… after all… life main kab koun aa jaye aur tumhari zinadgi badal de… pata hi nahi chalta…
Ar: I am okay… use har roz apne saamne kisi aur ke saath main nahi dekh paaya… aur issi liye main yahan pe aa gaya… kal hi join hua hoon.. and look at this… tujhse main itne saalon baad mila hoon…
Maan: Pata hai Armaan… sameera ke baad mujhe bhi laga tha ke main fir kabhi kisi se pyar nahi kar paunga…. Lekin fir Geet aayi meri zindagi main… aur usne mujhse fir se hasna sikhaya… pyar karna sikhaya… life goes on…
Ar: yeh baat agar tu keh raha hai… tab toh baat maanni ki padegi… seriously yaar… aaj bahut accha laga tujhe yahan dekh ke… kisi apne se milke…
Maan: aur ab… you better keep in touch… yahan se Delhi zyada door nahi hai.. weekends pea a jaya kar…
Ar: pucca… par apne shaadi ke baad… shaadi and all.. I cant handle that…
Ma: jab mujhe time aur space ki zaroorat thi… tab sabse zyada uss cheez ki ehmiyat tune hi samjhatha… aaj main bhi tujh se yehi kehna chahta hoon…har dard ka matlab ye bhi hota hai… ke khushiyan fir se humari zindagi main aane waali hai….
Ar: kya yaar… ab toh bhabhi ji se milna hi padega… unhone tujhe badal hi nahi dia hai.. bahut hi philosophical bhi bana dia hai…
Maan smiles and raises his hand to hit Armaan but both of them knock their knuckles…
Maan: not bad, abhi bhi teri body fit shape main…
Ar: yes… kick boxing champion Armaan Mallik… wanna fight me?
Maan: tu pehle Delhi aa to…
Ar: pucca….
The nurse comes to inform them that Geet has woken up and she has been looking for Maan…
They get up and go towards the ward. The moment he goes inside, Geet hugs Maan and says… " mera baccha…Maan sir… mera baccha kaisa hai…"
Armaan walks in( he hasn't seen Geet's face as yet) .. and says… " aapka baccha bahut hi strong baby hai…. Usey kuch nahi hua…"
Maan also looks at her assuringly and says … "jab tak main hoon… iss bacche ko main kuch nahi hone doonga…"
Geet looks at him smiling as they engage in an eye lock. Armaan looks at the two of them and slowly clears his throat…..
Ar: as cute as you guys look together… I am sorry… par, iss baar bacche ke safety ka credit main loonga… nice to meet you Miss Muskaan ….
Geet looks around… to see who he is talking to…
Ar: main aap hi se baat kar raha hoon…
Geet: lekin mera naam toh Geet hai…
Ar: lekin aapka naam muskaan hona chahiye tha… you have a very sweet smile…
Man: Armaan tu fir se shuru ho gaya? (warningly)
Ar: arey … meri bhabhi hai yaar… actually meri ek dost hai Muskaan Chadda… you wont believe me if I say this … lekin uski shakal aapse bahut milti hai…I hope there is no kumbh ke waaley waala chakkar and all….
Maan: yeh Armaan bhi na… jahan ladki dekhi nahi… wahin shuru…
Geet smiles…
Maan: Armaan … main isey kab le ja sakta hoon…
Ar: well.. abhi toh raat bahut ho gayi hai… fir first thing in the morning… tum log travel kar sakte ho.. main discharge papers tayar karvaake aata hoon…
Armaan leaves as Maan settles down next to geet on the bed… and he holds her hand and says…" Geet…aaj ke baad, tum kabhi dukhi nahi hogi… humesha hasti rahogi?"
Geet: Muskaan ki tarah?
Maan: haan… Muskaan ki tarah…
He kisses her forehead when Armaan walks in again and smiles looks away and says… " main bas yehi poochne aaya tha… ke Geet tumhara poora naam form main fill karna tha…"
Maan: Geet Maan Khurana
Ar: okay ( giggling and winking)
He goes away as Geet looks at Maan and she has tears in her eyes….
Geet: Maan sir ye…
Maan: bilkul sahi hai… waapis jaate hi hum shaadi kar lenge Geet…
Geet: Par Maan sir…iss haal main shaadi…
Maan: Geet…ab main tumhare liye kisi se ladna nahi chahta … main tumhe apna banana chahta hoon…humesha ke kiye…
Geet smiles … with tears rolling down…
Maan wipes them off and says… "itni jaldi apna waada tod rahi ho"
Geet: yeh khushi ke aansoon hai sir… aap nahi samjhenge… aap ke paas dil jo nahi hai…
Maan: haan… mera dil toh tumhare paas hai…
Geet blushes… Maan tucks her back in bed and wishes her good night with a kiss on her forehead and falls asleep on the chair next to her.
The next morning, they wave bye to Armaan and drive off to Delhi… they would finally be together, there were no worries…. everything seemed perfectly sorted… Both of them act wait to start their new life together …. Dev had gotten his punishment … and so had her family members…
As they drive into the khurana house… Maan looks at his dadi and smiles.. Geet is also with him. Both of them touch her feet. But Dadi's behavior has turned a little cold towards Geet and Maan. She isn't look into their eyes as she talks to them. She asks him…
Dadi: Maan, Dev kahan hai?
Maan has no answer….
NT comes from inside crying…. And says … " isse nahi dadi.. isey poochiye.. ke mere Dev kahan hai ?"
Precap: what is that NT has told dadi that she is suddenly all cold and withdrawn towards Geet?

Special Thanks to Armaan Mallik for his friendly appearance...!

Love,
Niha

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