Love is BLIND ( AR-mini FF )4th and last part updt - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks to all of u for encouraging me to write further:)

Well,its a one shot u can say but i have divided it into 3-4 parts:)so it turns out to be a mini FF:)

Heres the second part.


Part 2.

I sighed." I am basically an introvert. I generally like to keep to myself, so i do not attend many parties."

" Good for me that you decided to attend this one atleast. Let me introduce myself. I am Armaan, Armaan Malik, Abhi's friend." Abhi was nikki's husband.

"Pleased to meet you, Mr. Malik, I am Riddhima gupta, nikki's friend."

" That's great! Look riddhima, I would like to know you better, so how about having dinner with me tomorrow night?"

I was taken aback. "you are a fast worker, arent you, Mr. Malik? I haradly know you and you are asking me out to dinner !"

He laughed. " I am like that, a fast paced man. I like you, infact i am fascinated by you, i want to know more about you, so what is the point in dilly-dallying? Besides, you yourself said that we hardly know each other. So, dinner can be the first step in the right direction. Yes or no? "

I hesitated. I liked his voice, deep and soft. I would have loved to get to know him, but that was just impossible,so i said firmly,

"NO"

To be continued.....

Why did she deny even when she too liked him,to know keep reading:)do drop ur comments, they mean a lot for a beginner like me:)
Edited by sweetnirali - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
hey ,

nice part.....
par itnaaaaaaaaaa chooooooottttttuuuuuuuuuuuuu shaaaaaaaaaaa parrrrrrrrrtttttt........😲
but any ways nice concept.
tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Again, amazing! Pls update soon!

Sheenu :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey very nice update
ur both FF r amazing
pm me
update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

Again, amazing! Pls update soon!

Sheenu :)


Thanks dear:)chotuuuuu sa isliye coz its a short story and secodnly its very tedious to type on phone:(so pls bear with me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice concept!!
do cont and plsss pm me wen u update.

Cheers,
Oochita =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey friends,i am lil disapponted as this FF is not getting much of appreciation,but i will continue anyway for those who are liking it:)

Part 3

I hesitated. I liked his voice,deep and soft. I would have loved to get to know him,but that was just about impossible,so i said firmly,

"NO"

He was surprised."NO?"

He asked incredously. Probably he had never been refused before.

Just then a girl butted in,

" Armaan, here you are and i have been searching all over for you. What are you doing in this god-forsaken dark corner or should i guess?"

He laughed. " who can stop your thoughts from running riot? As usual your mind is working overtime. Now be a good girl and give it some rest. Okay? Now buzz off."

After she stomped away he said,

" that was anjali. Did you see the way she was glaring at you? She thinks of herself as a great beauty, but this is the first time i have seen her looking jealous of someone else's beauty !"

" i did not see her, so i cannot comment on whether she was jealous of me or not."

" you have got to be joking! There she was standing right before you and you say that you did not see her?"

I insisted,

"no, honestly,i am not joking. I really did not see her."

Now he was truly puzzled.

"how could you not see her?"

I slowly said,

"you see,i am BLIND."

There was pin drop silence.

To be continued...

What will happen next?will armaan still be interested in her?:)to know keep reading and pls do comment, IF u like it:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely parts
how could i miss thiss ff
read all the parts
but part 3 last line gave me a shocked
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz contd soon and longer parts plzzzzz
and pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute.arsh

lovely parts

how could i miss thiss ff

read all the parts

but part 3 last line gave me a shocked

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz contd soon and longer parts plzzzzz

and pm me



Thanks dear!yes i know it was a shock:)but if u have been reading the story carefully u would have noticed that nowhere did riddhima mention anything related to vision.recall the lines,"hum of the corwd....i liked his VOICE":)yaad aaya?:)and i gave the hint in the title itself stressing on the word,love is BLIND:)

fourth and the last part is on the way:)thanks for appreciating.

If any of u want the pm,pls do add me in ur buddy list.

Love,
Nirali.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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no comments?:(

Well here goes the last part.

Part 4

I said slowly,

"you see,i am blind."

There was pin drop silence. I could hear his uneven breathing. I continued bitterly,

"now that you know the truth, do you still want to get to know me and take me out to dinner????"

As the silence continued, i got up, made my way slowly to where i could hear nikki's voice and told her that i was leaving. She protested but i was adamant so she finally gave in.

As i wiped the last trace of make up from my face with tears in my eyes,i decided that i would never attend parties in the future. Just then the harsh ring of my mobile interrupted my thoughts. Unwillingly i recieved the call.

"hello?"

There was a short pause, then i heard that same deep voice ask,

"hey beautiful ! I do want to get to know you, so how about dinner tomorrow night,for another proposal?" yes or no?"

A smile broke out on my face. He truly was different.

The end.

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