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Posted: 14 years ago
it was fantabulous part
loved it hazra nupsi is
still angry from mayu
and thnx alot 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update hazra........ do continue sooooooon.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum update Hazra
really great
do continue soon
thxs for the pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...👏
nice part....cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for Pm hazara I read all the parts of your FF all are just amazing>plzz cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear
awesome part
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
update on pg 25-

i am worried for nupur

hope sab jaldi thik ho jaye


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Posted: 14 years ago

hi guys...updated next part after a long time...i hope u all remember my story....so read n njoy..

both went from there..they reach home...
dm-tum dono itni jaldi kyu aa gaye??
g-vo chachiji..di ki tabyet thic nahi hai isliye..
dm-huh...sab natak hai...😡
g-di chaliye..
both went in their room..
g-di..apko kya ho raha hai??ap aise kyu behave kar rahi ho??di ap chaliye mere sath doctor ke paas..😔
n-mujhe kahi nahi jaana hai..mai thick hu...mujhe aram karna hai..
g-thick hai di jaise apki marzi..ap aram kar lijiye...
other side...in clg..
b-samrat...gunjan kaha hai??
s-vo nupur ke sath ghar chali gayi...
b-kyu??
s-nupur ki tabyet thick nahi hai isliye...
b-ha ye to sahi hai...kuch to baat hai..nupur ka behaviour bohot ajib hota jaa raha hai...aj bhi canteen mai vo bina matlab ka gussa hoke chali gayi..
s-mujhe lagta hai ki nupur hamse kuch chupa rahi hai...
b-hmmm....
other side..
g-di...mai apke liye coffee bana kar layi hu...lijiye..😊
n-gunjan..mera coffee pine ka bilkul mood nahi hai...
g-di...coffee pine ke baad ap ekdum fresh ho jaegi..chaliye ab jaldi pilo..😊
n-nahi gunjan maine kaha na mujhe nahi pina hai..
then gunjan sits beside nupur..
g-di...ap aisa kyu behave kar rahi hai..ap itni tense kyu hai..kya baat hai di..ap mujhe nahi kahegi..😔
n-gunjan..aisi koi baat nahi hai...
g-di...ap mujse jhoot bol rahi hai...
n-nahi gunjan..maine kaha na meri tabyet thodi kharab hai isliye...
g-to di mai doctor ko...
n-nahi..uski koi zarurat nahi hai...mai thick ho jaogi...
g-acha to coffee pi lijiye..maine apke liye special coffee banai hai..😊
n-thick hai..
gunjan cell rings..
g-ap coffee pijiye...mai ati hu...
n-thick hai..
gunjan went outside the room...
g-ha samrat...
s-chasmish...nupur thick to haina??
g-nahi samrat..pata nahi di ko kya ho gaya hai....bilkul bhi mood mai nahi hai...
s-i think vo mayank ko bohot miss kar rahi hai...
g-ha samrat par fir bhi..mujhe aisa lagta hai ki di kuch hamse kuch chupa rahi hai...
s-ha chasmish...mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai.....
g-mujhe lagta hai ki hame mayank se baat karni hogi...
s-mayank se..
g-ha samrat...shayad mayank ko pata ho...
s- i think u r rite...aur vaise bhi kal mayank clg to aa raha hai to kal clg mai hi mayank se baat kar lege...
g-ha samrat...ye sahi rahega...
s-thick hai chasmish..mai tumse baadme baat karta hu..ok..
g-ok samrat...bye...
s-bye...
after sometime..its 10 o clock....in hospital...mayank was thinking about that night incident..
m to himself-mai kyu baar baar ye sab soch raha hu...ye mujse kya ho gaya....itni badi galti...magar maine ye sab jaanmujkar nahi kiya..par nupur...maine uski life hi kharab kar di...aur agar hamare baare mai kisiko pata chal gaya to.....to sab hame galat samjege....kyu mujse ye galti hui...😔
mm-mayu...beta kya soch rahe ho??
m-maa....mujhe apse kuch kehna hai...😔
mm-ha beta bolo na..
m-maa...maa vo...
mm-ha beta bol na..
m-maa vo nupur...😔
mm-acha...nupur ko miss kar rahe ho...😊
m-nahi..mai..😔
mm-samaj gayi beta...nupur ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai...bas aj ka din sabar kar ke...kal to tujhe usse milna hi hai....ab so ja..thick hai...😊
m to himself-mai maa ko kaise samjao..kaise batao ki maine nupur ke sath....😔
other side...its 1 o clock...nupur switch on the lights..gunjan woke up...
g-kya hua di??ap abhi tak soyi nahi...🥱
n-gunjan..mujhe nind nahi aa rahi hai..😔
g-di..raat ke ek baj rahe hai...
n-pata hai mujhe..par mujhe nind nahi aa rahi hai..😔
g-di..
n-gunjan...tu so jaa..mai ati hu..
g-ap itni raat ko kaha jaa rahi hai??
n-gunjan...mai hall mai jaa rahi hu...tu so jaa..
g-thick hai di...
nupur went in the hall...
n to herself-kaise batao mai gunjan ko...kya batao mai use....ye batao ki mayank ne mere sath.....kya karu mai...muh dikhane ke layak nahi hu mai...agar sabko pata chal gaya to mera kya hoga...kya hoga mera....kyu mayank..kyu tumne mere sath aisa kiya...kyu....😭😭
next day....20 february(friday)..
g-di...ap abhi tak bethi hai..chaliye clg jaana hai...
n-mai nahi aa rahi hu...
g-kya..par kyu di??
n-mujhe nahi ana hai clg...
g-di...par..
n-gunjan...tujhe pata haina meri tabyet thick nahi hai..tu jaa...
g-di..ap yaha akeli....ap clg aaegi to apka mood bhi fresh ho jaega...aur aj to mayank bhi clg aa raha hai..
n-isiliye to nahi aa rahi hu...
g-kya...
n-kuch nahi gunjan...tu jaa..mujhe nahi ana hai...
g-di pla chaliye na...pls..
n-gunjan...
diya comes..
d-hey girls...abhi tak tum nightsuit mai ho nupur..wat is this..wer r getting late..😔
g-diya..di clg nahi ana chahti hai..
d-y?
n-diya...meri tabyet thick nahi hai..
d-of ho nupur..common get ready...tumhe clg ana hi hoga...
n-nahi diya....mujhe nahi ana hai...
d-i dont want to listen anything...common get ready...gunjan nupur ke kapde cupboard mai se nikalo...
gunjan took out the clothes from nupur's cupboard...
g-ye liye di..jaldi se taiyar ho jaeye...
n-mujhe nahi ana hai....
d-gunjan...tum chalo mere sath niche...nupur..u get ready fast...
n-par..😔
gunjan and diya went from there..then nupur gets ready and went down...
g-aa gayi di..
d-ab chale...😊
then they all went to clg....in clg...
d-nupur..mayank ko dhund rahi ho...😊
n-nahi...
d-i know i knw..😊
n-kya pata hai tumhe...ha kya pata hai tumhe....ye baar baar mere samne mayank ka naam mat lo....samje tum log..😡
nupur went from there..
d-nupur...how dare she can talk with me like this...😡
g-diya....😔
d-gunjan..apni behen ko samja do ko vo mujse is tarah se baat nahi kar sakti...😡
diya went from there....after sometime..
s-hey chasmish...😊
g-samrat...
s-kya hua??
g-samrat....aj di ne diya par gussa kiya..
s-kya...
g-ha samrat...
then gunjan told everything to samrat...
s-ye nupur ki problem kya hai...
g-di to aj clg bhi nahi ana chahti thi...
s- mayank aa gaya..chalo ham mayank se baat karte hai...
gunjan and samrat went to mayank...
s-hi mayank...ab kaise hi tum??😊
m-mai thick hu samrat...😊
s-mayank..hame tumse kuch baat karni hai..
m-kya baat karni hai??
s-mayank....kya nupur ke sath tumhara kuch jagdaa hua hai??
m-........
g-mayank....di pata nahi aj kal bohot ajib behave kar rahi hai..pata nahi di ko kya ho gaya hai....kya tumhe kuch pata hai iske baare mai...
m-vo....
nupur comes...
n-gunjan...😡
samrat and gunjan turned back...
g-di...
n-jaa yaha se....😡
g-di mai...
n-jaa yaha se gunjan..😡
s-nupur relax......chalo chasmish...
samrat and gunjan went from there...nupur gave an angry look to mayank...she was going from there but..
m-ruko nupur....
she turned back...
n-mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai..😡
m-par mujhe tumse baat karni hai..
n-abhi bhi kuch baat karne ke liye reh gaya hai mayank sharma..😡
m-nupur...mujhe tumse kuch bohot zaruri baat karni hai..
n-😡
m-nupur...agar tum aise behave karogi to sabko pata chal jaega...
n-mayank....tumhe kya lagta hai ki ye baat kabhi bhi kisiko pata nahi chalegi....kabhi na kabhi to ye baat sabko pata chal hi jaegi..tab tum kya karoge mayank..😡
m-tab ki tab sochege...par nupur..agar tum aise react karogi to....
n-mayank...tum...tum kabhi bhi meri feelings ko nahi samaj sakte....😭
m-nupur....
mayank went close to her..
n-mat ana mere karib...dur raho mujse mayank..dur raho mujse..😭
hey guys...here ends my part...i hope u like it...dont forget to comment..so kya hoga ab??kya ye sach sabko pata chal jaega??kya nupur mayank ko maaf kar paegi??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..
hazra
Edited by hazraluvarjun - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

gr8 update..!!luv itt..!!rckin 1..!!do cnt soon..!!😛

Edited by neha-2 - 14 years ago

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