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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

loved it yaar........
specially the conversation between sami and mayank......😉
well was wonder that wht hapened between both of them ......😭
update soon eagerly w8ing 4da nxt part........😔

thanks dear
luv ya
glad to know u love sayank part😃
oye u know my schedule.....an asking for quick update....😆
but i am trying to give a quicker one ths time dnt worry
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: valiyah27

Loved Sayank convo🤣.......................n Mayur part was just😍..............but how come they not together😲.............kya suspense hai im so confused n scared😕..................plsss update soon n unfold the mystery...................thnx for pm............!!!

thanks u so much for loving sayank part
luv ya
i will unfold it ASAP...
dnt get scared plzish
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vincikhurana

nyc update..........!!!!!!wht happened in d end?

thnku so much ...abt the end..just wait abit..im trying to give a quicker update

Originally posted by: .rumki.

loved it
but y they r seperate!!
Clear rt soon

thnks
i'll try n update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

mindblowing update

loved mayank sam n dia convo
loved mayank caring fr nupur n their child
bt confused at the last portion...they r nt together
plzzzzzzzzz cont soon

thanku so much
glad u like mayur part😳
i 'll update ASAP dnt worry
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update.
sayank-dia convo wa too gud..........they cant believed in that.
it was hillarious.
bt last part of this update was lil scary.............what happened to mayur? where was mayank? it was a fight or mayank was dead?
i know m asking too much.
bt plz dont answer my questions...................bt update.
waiting for ur update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update Fiza!
i loved the starting but the end.............i m scared 😭
i want a happy ending.........pleash 😔
waiting for the next part
plz continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

superb update.

sayank-dia convo wa too gud..........they cant believed in that.
it was hillarious.
bt last part of this update was lil scary.............what happened to mayur? where was mayank? it was a fight or mayank was dead?
i know m asking too much.
bt plz dont answer my questions...................bt update.
waiting for ur update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

thanku so much dear
ur all questions will b answered soon
n update is cuming soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Wow lovely uld8

cont soon

thanku

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

awesome update Fiza!

i loved the starting but the end.............i m scared 😭
i want a happy ending.........pleash 😔
waiting for the next part
plz continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊

oye thanks dear
dnt worry
main hoon na
sab set hojay ga
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys🤗

I am back as promised?earlier ths time

Thanku so much for showering ur love on me?

Can chk my rpls to u all

Yaar honestly ?tm logo ko meri sahkal?I mean meri akal dkh ker asa laga k mein koi serious ending dayny wali hon?..

Ths one is for Auroni as she askd for ths🤗..n the only person requesting sumthng?.so tmhari mangay pori hoi?😆

Tasfia has an equal share with her at it?.why..u'll soon know?.thanku?as I found the perfect thng in wht u gave me ?love yaaaa🤗

n ya it isnt the last part but second last

Luv

fiza

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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 25

I know I ruined everything ….just because of sumthing stupid….u were so patient ..just like always but I talked above ur threshold of tolerance

FLASHBACK

Diya: hey nupur how r u..kya ker rahi ho

Nupur: I am fine….mayank k wait as usual

Diya: kyun aj bhi late…..yeah kuch zayada he ghar se bahar rahy ny laga hai ….control kero..she laughed as she said playfully

Nupur: diya I'll talk to u later …there is call on other line..

Diay: k…takecare

Nupur: hello

Steeves: hey Nupur…can I talk to mayank…he is nt picking up his phne

Nupur: mayank is in office

Steeve: no…he left abt 2 hrs ago….ok I'll chk his cell again

Worriedly she called mayank again n again who picked after 3-5 calls

Nupur: kaha ho

Mayank: bs 10 min mein nikal ta hon …office…

Uff..low battery….switched off…chalo atleast she knew I m cuming back in sumtime

Nupur: mayank jab office mein nhi tu us ny mjh se jhoot kyun bola…asa tu woh khabi nhi kerta….shayd steeve ny nhi dekha hoga us ko..mein bekar mein hi asa soch rahin hoon…aur diya tu na

Again today he showed up late as was buzy planning his training session….she was feeling to low..n hell angry on him…he wasn't showing up on time frm past wk..though whenevr he is there he compensates for the time he is nt around..but still nupur was nowhere understanding such so called lame excuses….

She moved out of the house..for a walk…as was feeling suffocated at home….she.was feeling hungry so ask drive to take her to nearby mall…she was about to move out when she found HIM with a girl…shoping at the mall..she couldn't lookd at her but can clearly see mayank laughing n having fun around her….she do trust him but past days talk n his so called lies for her…askd her to do so..she took out cell n called

Nupur: kaha ho

Mayank: at mall

Nupur: she smile ..he never lies to her

Mayank: bs ek meeting hai arha hoon ..u take care ..bye

He quickly cut the phne…soryy Nupur didn't want to lie..but need to….he shifted the phn to voicemail..to avoid any further calls or question as would'nt b able to lie

Girl: wht happened

Mayank: nthing…nupur

Girl: and you told her that ur at mall

Mayank: I hate lying to her..but I dint told her why I m here…grinning

Girl: OMG ur soo sweet and honest to ur wife…she is really luck

Mayank: nt more than me..he smile…

She trembled a bit during walk…he hold her just to safe her from falling..

Girl: thanku…ur really a gentlman …and she pulled his cheek In an awww

Nupur ws watching all ths from far end …..was fuming in anger…n disbelieve..her husband can lie she just can digest it

He reached to be welcum by his hot wife…hot due to anger

Mayank: hey wifey..how ru ..he came n hugged her... but she remained cold…he thought its ok…was use to her mood swings

Nupur: agay ap..hogai shoping

Mayank: shoping k lyan thori gaya tha ..meeting thi

Nupur: ohh ..i c..client was very pretty…tu soch us ko impress kerny k lyan thori se shoping kera do….

Mayank: mar gaya…asa kuch nhi hai..bs woh …

Nupur: but wht haan…her voice raised up…. You thought of enjoying with sum1 and thought ur wife will nt know all ths……woh tu bechari ghar per intizar ker rahi hogi…

Mayank: shocked…bt control himself…nupsz….asa kuch nhi hai….mein ny tum ko batay tha ..i am at mall

Nupur: ya in a meeting right

Mayank: It was a meeting

Nupur: oohh so u call ur dates sum meeting..with sum b****h…atleast u shud find sum1 of my class to put against me

Mayank: he came fwd..uffu..my wife is getting possessive …backed hugged her….im urs dear only urs

Nupur: jerked his hand off….im nt cuming in ur cheeses talks…mind it

Mayank: Nupur..kya hogaya hai….ok fine…mein steeve k wife k sath tha..us ko steeve k lyan kuch lyna tha…I was just helping her..bs

Nupur: our sth sath soch thora flirt kerlo….apni bahoon me lay loon…biwi se tu bore ho chuka hoon….ab tu ghar bhi acha nhi lagta…..ru regretting ur decision mayank

Mayank: enough nupr….ur talking to irrelevant…kaha ki baat kaha lay jar hi hoo

Nupur: meri baatein tum ko hamesha bekar aur bekwas lagti hain…chghy woh shadi ki ho sath time spend kerny ke ya aj yeah

Mayank: pagal hogai ho….ek din bhi mein ny tum se kaha k mein yeah rishta regart kerta hoo…mein ny her cheez except ki..shadi..our child n the life's difference experience

Nupur: wht do u mean except ki han..so u regret

He close his eyes to calm himself her words where extremely irrelevant…..he even don't know y they r fighting…he moved fwd n hold her from shoulder

Maynk: ok..i am sorry…sorry for nt telling truth…but asa kyun lar rhi hon…clam don't..its nt gud for u..plz dear…

Nupur: just get out of my sight …plz

Maynk: nupr

Nupur: CANT U LISTEN…I SAID GET OUT Of hERE…kitni tafa k lyan mafi mango gay….kal k lyan bhi jab tum office mein nhi thy aur bola office mein hoon

Mayank: ur spying on me…u doubt on me…u doubt on my love for u

Nupur: I doubt on myself for my choices..now plz…fine as usual I'll do the honurs

She left from there …closing the door behind…he stod there still..wht had just happen…he just cant understand….wht he did..he didn't know..but all he know was he was hurt….he move inside the guest room n through himself on bed

At midnight he went to there room to check her whereabouts….the door was locked…he opend it with spare keys…he found her sleeping in wired position ..he rush towards her..n move her up on bed…comforting her in blanked…he cleaned her dry tears..n shock his head n regret…

NEXT MORNING:

she woke up her head was spinning hard…due to crying ….her cell ringed

mayank: Nupur

Nupur: I dnt want

Mayank: nupru I m leaving

Nupur: go to hell….she cut it

Ring ring

Nupur: wht the hell

Girl: hey Nupur its me…steeve' wife…just called to say tht ur very lucky to find a hubby like tht…I thought of telling u as I ask him promise nt to tell any1..but hewas in huge distress….after nt actually lying to u but hiding from u…yesterday whn u called he was with me…helping me in planning steeves birthday..thnaks

Nupur was shocked numb…she wishd her bye..n throughed her cell on floor…turning it into pieces ….another mistake

Flash back Ends

She was stnding in her room….tired of crying and regretting her most stupidest deed ever done…she looked at the bed parcel and flowers where placed there…she moved towards it and touch the dress in an urge to feel him…wished he would have been here…would hav loved diya for sending ths dress…she took the dress n went to change

Standing in mirro she looked at herself…couldn't find anything special

Beautiful

She heard his voice and turned around to look for him…he was nowhere….se laughed at herself pitifully …she closed her eyes an a tear fall from there…

She felt sumthing snaked around her waist..the familiar touched…she closed her eyes….scared of losing the feel…didn't open her eyes until…sum1 kiss her neck n ear n whispered

Happy Weding Anniversary Ms.Sharma

With this she turned around…find herself in front of his smiling, loving face….raise his eyebrows asking "what"….she touched his face to feel…he was really here

Mayank: kya hua jani

With a flick of second she embrace him in her arms…never to let him go…digging her nails in side him….he didn't question her once n placed his arms around ..holding her tightly but carfully…

Maynk: hey sohana…kya hua…why r u crying…plza asay tu maat roh…kya hua

Nupur: I am sorry ..she said between her weeps

He broke apart n cupped her face…wipe off her tears which where nt stoping

Nupur: I sorry..i was acting so stupid

Mayank: its ok…I irritated u so much…even hided things for u …even couldn't find time for u….but for two days im all urs..pori holiday…

Nupur: no..you weren't…I act stupid..i don't even know why I fought with you ..i had no reason…only if I was feeling lonely doesn't mean tht I should say so much …hai na…she said looking at him

Mayank: he smiled at her cutness…meri jan.. I know u don't mean anything…am I angry at you…han…I know it was just because of ur condition..my hectic schedule…n steeve's hot wife…he laughed…bus ap rona band kero…he wiped off her tears n pecked her on her forhead

Nupur: If u weren't angry at me why u left

Mayank: I went for my traing session..u know tht

Nupur: u didn't inform me..didnt called me

Mayank: now thts isint fair…I called u ..u cut it…n ur phone was continuously switched off…so mein kya kerta…pata hai I was so wooried..ask steeve to keep an eye on u

Nupur: low down her head..it wasn't switch off…i through it on floor in anger….. it broke

Mayank: ufff..itna khusa..agar ap yeah na kerti tu na ap itna pareshan hoti na mein….per han is se ek faida hoa..i got time to plan sumthing for u

Nupur: kya

Mayank: he looked frm upto done…nice dress

Nupur: yeah tum ny

Mayank: nhi tu kya steeve ny

nupur:she hitted him playfully befor hugging him…mayank..i am sorry

mayank: is this the way to wish ur hubby

nuppur: sorry…happy weding anversary

mayank: pouting …asay

Nupur: tu phir kasay

Mayank:asay………asay ………aur as….

Thy broke n he put a braclet around her…silver one having a black eye stone in center

Nupur: waoo its so beautiful….why ths balck eye

Mayank: kisi ke nazar na lagay…..n ur temper remain in control

Nupur: mayankkk

Mayankkkkkkkkkkkk…a scream shocked him like hell

Mayank: r u ok

Nupur: no I am not

Everything will be fine…dear…im here with u…. he kept consoling her moreover he was consoling himself….seeing her in so much pain was freaking him like anything …the misery last few moments as soon it was overcum by a joy when he saw

Nurse: here Mr.sharma..ur daughter

He fwded his hand but thn

Mayank: can i

Nurse: yes u can..she is ur daughter na?...she chuckled

Mayank: yes sure she is…but she is so small n so fragile…..i'll hurt her

Nurse: nthing will happen….just put ur hands like this…n than she placed her in his arms

A huge smile appears on his face…he lean down to rub his nose on her…she pouted n move her head away…he giggle at her expression…attitude just like me…he said proudly

Mayank: oye my sweet heart didn't liked it…he kiss her forhead

Nupur: dkha beti k aaty hi bhool gay na mjhy

He turn around ..n show her there daughter

Maynk: dkho…it's a girl …see she is so beautiful….so comfortable in my arms….

He move fwd n place her near Her side…kiss Nupur forehead…side hugging her

Mayank: thnku

Nupur: she smile seeing her…holding her fingers…mayank she is so pretty na

Mayank: obviously meri beti hai

Nupur: hello Mr.sharma..meri bhi hai…thy bth laughed n kept playing n enjoyng the sight of there new member who prompted them to a FAMILY

Nupur: so nam kya socha…ya nhi

Mayank: soch na ….Tasfia…

Nupur: tasfia….kyun

Maynk: tasfia…my most precious possession

She looked at him in an awwww

Kyun nhi pasand aaya tu change kerday ta ho

Nupur: bulkul acha nhi hai…..he was bit sad…perfect hai…

Mayank: ghar chalein

Nupur was about to say yess..whn she saw he was actually asking his daughter that

Nupur: thk hai ap dono jay..mein yahin rahti hoon…she pouted

Mayank: he put tasfia in cradle….n walk twds his first love…yeah jo sab kuch hai tmahri wajah se hai…phr tmahin kasay bhool sakta hoon….phr asa nhi kahna..ok

They reached there house n he asked her to open the door….opening her house she found it fully decorated with flowers n toys…n a walk way of flowers leading them to there room…she took her daughter to her room n put her in cradle....n was about to leave

Mayank: yeah yaha akali sooay gi…surprisingly

Nupur: array baba …dono room attached tu hain..samany se sab dkh ta hai

Mayank: phr bhi …agar us ko kuch chaiy hoo…dar lagy tu…abhi us ko bolna thori aata hai

Nupur: hain mayank…mjhy tu abhi us ny kaha k papa meray pyar mein pagal hogay hain

Mayank: Nupur..its not funny…he took her in his arm…my princess is gonna sleep with me…hey na shona..he asked tasfia

Nupur: chalo…phly sweetheart ab shona bhi gaya…princess mama se getting jealous hain…she chuckled…chalo

Mayank: tm kyun khari ho…chalo rest kero…he asked her ..lying his princess down… n lying himself too..

Nupur: bs mayank ab aur nhi….mein rest ker ker k thag gai hoon plz

Mayank: acha really..yeah lo…fwding newspaper….salsa classes hain kal se join kerlo…rest nhi kero gi..shakal dkhi hai apni..itni se nikal aai hai….

Nupur: mayank ur impossible…lying down next to him

Myank: cuddle with her….aj kitny dino baat kaha hai ap ny…loved it hann

Nupur: hann fiza yeah dialogue bhool jo gai thi

pardon errors plzzz😳😕

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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