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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Wow yaar

just read part 23

lovely

happy new year

n i'm really happy tht nups is pregnant

thanku somuch dear
thanks for liking
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

omg wat beautiful,amazing,fantastic seriously words r left 2 describe it was one of my fav ff i was really waiting for sumthing lik dis one.....gr8 work dear...

thanku so much for such gr8 kind words
welcum here
thanku so much for liking
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

FIRST time in the history of beacuse u love me ur late😆😆

thanku so much dear...love ya

i didnt get u sweety?? did u mean that i was late 4 commenting????
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

hey

very lovely paet 👏

hey shafyy
after so long i saw u
thanku so much for liking
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: achoose

i didnt get u sweety?? did u mean that i was late 4 commenting????

yup dear
thts wht i meant....nt complainng
u have always been within first 5 people to coment thts why
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

yup dear

thts wht i meant....nt complainng
u have always been within first 5 people to coment thts why

yes dear...this time i was late..bcoz i was in kerala 4 attending my cousin sisters marriage....but yeah..am back,,,,,,,with a bang..so u can expect my comments very soon...by the way howz ur hand???? love ya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: achoose

yes dear...this time i was late..bcoz i was in kerala 4 attending my cousin sisters marriage....but yeah..am back,,,,,,,with a bang..so u can expect my comments very soon...by the way howz ur hand???? love ya

gr8 ..congrats to ur sis ya my hand is perfect with all of ur blesings...so u can expect a update😉...write now i m typing tht
n hows ur feet
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Guys

How r u all….thanku so much for ur love n appreciation….ths time I have replied to all of u..so u can plz check it….as I am back..n healthy also

Ok as most of you have thought…ths chapter was suppose to be last…..but due to ur love n request of sum..i haven't made it last but…yes ths FF is towards its finale…

Two more updates ..maybe together or separate I'lll post….the only thng I want u guys to do is…post ur request ….i want to fulfill it…aprt from stretching ths story

Wht ever u have wished to read regarding ths story…n I haven't shown tht..plz do tel me…cause next update im planning to write wht u want to read….this FF is all because you loved it…

Luv ya

FIZA

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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 24

Sami: kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa….diya diya….no its nt possible…it cant b…its just impossible

Mayank: wht do u mean its nt possible…nhi wht "exactly" do u mean hann

Sami: ab yaar mera woh matlab nhi tha…I mean I just cant belive..u ..matlab u…u like ths….tu itna jawan hogaya hai kya

Mayank: very funny….yaar sach kaho tu mjhy bhi nhi samhj arha ….mein waqi itna bara hogaya

Bth laughed

Diya: tm dono kyun chila rahy hoo..mjhy bhi tu batao

Sami: yaar diya wait…

How r u feeling

Mayank: I don't know….ajeeb sa lag raha hai….daar bhi lag raha hai…acha bhi lag raha hai…pata nhi

Sami: life kaha se kaha agai yaar….gr8 news…arhy yaar….congrulation on ur achievement

Mayank: laughd…thanku thnku

Snatches the phne..n puts on speaker

Diya: deemagh karab hogaya hai kya….ba taty kyun nhi ho.k exactly .kya hua hai

Mayank: wht exactly kya hoga yeah tu mjhy bhi nhi pata tu tm ko kya batao

Sami: point ….ab us ko kiya pata k exactly kya hoga…time hai abhi us mein

Mayank: tjhy bara pata hai ….kitna experience hai

Sami: yaar kyun shadi se pehly divorce kera raha hai…..general knowledge bhi koi chees hai

Diya: tum don bata rahy ho ya mein tum dono ko katal kerdo

Sami: uffo khusa nhi sweetheart….tum exactly ….ek min confusion….yeah buua banay gi ya…chachi

Mayank: confusion

Diya: kya kaha…mein kasay bano gi yaar………..after a min ek sec ek sec..is Nupur

Mayank&sami: exactly….laughed

Diya: OMG…OMG really….my GOD its so impossible

Mayank: irritated….tum dono yeah zara mjhy yeah tu batao k ….yeah impossible kyun hai….hann

Diya: array baba…tum …woh bhi itni chaldi..gr8..thank God Nupur ny tmko akal tu di

Mayank: us ny mjhy aur bhi buhat kuch diya hai…

Diya: ufff..lover boy…kaha hai apki wife…ap ki life..hum un se baat ker saktay hai

Mayank: sure…ap k pora haq hai….tameez se baat kerna …meri beti k kharab kerny ke zaroorat nhi…samjhi

Diya: hannn….tu already pagal ho chukay ho

Hi Nupur congrats yaar ……such a gr8 news …..how it feels

Nupur: gr8 diya…it really feel so gr8

Diya: I cant belive mayank is celebrating …he seems to be too excited

Nupur: don't ask…even I was so scare to tell him….didnt know how he'll react…we never talkd abt it…….but my happiness was complete after seeing him so excited n nervous too…chuckled

Diya: laughed…gr8…take rest ..n have loads of food…I want a golo molo han…

Nupur: I I ma'am..

She was siting in her balcony, viewing the beautiful waves of sea. Life can change to such extend, never she thought about. There was a time when she was living her life all alone, scared, broken but then it's truly said

Right in the middle of ordinary life, love gives us fairytale

Love an emotion she was scared to feel the most but than it happened and made her nightmares into dreams, dreams into reality

Mayank: Shona…where are you ….nupz…..gosh hear u are….i was looking for u all over the house n ur

He stopped there….looked at her…she was not responding to his words…nt because they doesn't mean anything to her….but she was all lost in her dreams, his dreams

He lay down on her lap…kissing his unborn child…

Nupur…u …when u did come

Mayank: look my little princes your mom is not interested in listening to my words na……hope u come soon and than v will have fun together ONLY

Nupur: she smile on his husband childish behavior.. Husband yes he is my husband… a relationship I hated the most but he made me worship him

Nupur: looking at Mayank with a sad face…hmmmm than mama will feel alone na ..if u and dad are not gonna talk to me

Mayank…hey shona not fair ..you know very well I cant see u like that…..your such a bad girl….sure know how to make a fool out of me

Bth start Laughing

Mayank: I never thought that after 3 yrs I'll b lying like this and talking to our daughter……I still remember when we first meet… you use to be soo arrogant, quite,

She laughed at him…so true he was saying

Nupur: ek min….wht do u mean by daughter han..how cum u know…..it can b a boy also

Mayank: ok …lets bet..if it's a boy u name him …n if it's a girl …I'll name her….n tht I m so sure of

Nupur: carsing his hairs…mayank

Mayank: hmmm

Nupur: im thinking of leaving job

Mayank: wht …why..ur ok na….

Nupur: ya dear I m…dnt worry ..its just tht I want to give time to my home more…n I get tired early these days…honestly I dnt want any mishap to happen…..just

Her words choked there…n he very well knew wht she meant…he stod up n set bside her….n make her look twds him

Mayank: Nupur…took her hands in her…I don't mind u do job or nt….i know ur career means a lot to u…thts why I was asking…n dnt be scar neither of losing me..or her….im there always with u..nthing …NTHING will go wrong as long as we are together…n we'll always will remain together….

Nupur: she hugged him from side….leaning on him… paka

Mayank: smiled…pakka

Nupur: I'll b in great moodswing ….will scold u, fight with u…will trouble u …asking u to bring tht..n tht…n u need to bring

Mayank: so whts new…u always scold me like im a child

Nupur: cause ur

Mayank: hey hello now I'll b a father of a child…he said proudly n dramatically

Nupur: chuckled..ya …I child turning to father

Mayank: Nupur

Nupur: see ur getin irritated

Mayank: ur deliberately making me irritated ..nt fair…..n whn I fight with u haan

Nupur: u see…ur fighting…I dint said anything n u have started to fight

Myank: Nupur why r v arguing on non-sense

Nupur: wht do u mean …im saying non-sense

Mayank: I didn't mean that..i mean…hum bekar mein lar rahy hain

Nupur: han mein tu hamesha bekar mein hi larti hon

Myank: acha baba…im soory bs

Nupur: kya tu koi ehassan ker rahy hoo

He laughed at her fighting like a child n resume to his lying position hugging her n smilig n nt anwering nt continuing the argument

Evening:

She came from back an encircle her arms around his neck…he move his head back to have a look at her n smile

Nupur: its too late now…..go to bed

Mayank: hmm…I know…but I need to finish ths na

Nupur: kal ker lyna…weekend hai..thak gay hoo..she was pressing his head with her hands

Mayank: took her hand n kissed them…thanks jan….but weekend sirf wifey k lyan hota hai…so I want to finish it nw….plz…..u go n have rest

Nupur: ok …Gud night

Mayank: ek min….wait as ur nt gonna have milk …I'll bring it….chor hoo tum pori,,,

Nupur: rook…mein khud lay lo gi...u want sumthing

Mayank: hmmmm..yup coffe….sorry dear …I m trobling u na

Nupur: shut up mayank….sara din kerti kya hoon mein …kuch bhi tu nhi…tum mjhy hilny tu daytay nhi ho…lazy hojay ka mera beta

Mayank:meri BETI..

Nupur: uff …ur impossible mayank

6 Month later:

Nupur POV

I am all lost and feeling too lonely…missing u missing u terrible. It has been 4 wks only that you have left ….feels like ages to me. I am getting weak, nt feeling alive …ouch….ha..a kick made me feel I am still….it has never been like ths..the way im feeling rightnow….TODAY…I know y it is….

If we would have been together…..we the trio must have been celebrated..i know no matter wht has happened between us ….u have loved HIM ….haaa..HER as u always insisted

I wished everything return back to normal….evrything wch ruined by myself…the same mornings wch always started with you waking me up by slightly caressing my hairs..nt letting me stod up until I have sumthing to avoid my morning sickness..same nights …..same days…whn u nt let me do anything …even nt letting me com my hairs

Nupur: kya ker rahy ho

Mayank: samhj nhi aata kya…baal bana raha hoon

Nupur: mein khud kerlo gi

Mayank: mein hath lago tu koi problem hai

Nupur: maayannk….per mjhy kuch tu kerny do….mein bemar nhi hoon…lazi hojao gi

Mayank: tu tum baz ek kam din raat kero

Nupur: kyaaa

Mayank: mjh se pyaar

I move out of balcony of our new home….its big n beautiful…n we decorated evry bit of it with our hands…the door bell has rung… I know its not u….i m moving down..ya I know

Mayank: aram se…tmh aram se nhi uthar sakti..koi train miss horahi hai tmhari ..bahgna zaroori hai

Nupur: ufff….mayank…itny aram se tu utr rahin hon…acha chlo asay utarti hoon….one

She took one stop n stop… now I'll count till five than will take next step

He was standing down placing his hands on his waist…ran twds her..n swept her in his arms

Mayank: nhi asayyy

I know I need to be careful n I am…..bs jut use to tease u …always loved to c u caring so much

Parcel for u

I took it n signed the paper ..move inside n comfort myself on sofa..i opend the box n found the same dress….i look madly around the box for tag…nthing was there….is it frm you….no it isn't..how I can expect it…it must be from diya…

It is the same dress wch you want me to wear at our anniversary…I said we have loads of time will buy next time..n u were so angry on me….even diya lovd it ….but I was busy irritating u….

sorry guys..marna maat..sorry for errors..n nt formating even😭😕

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the Part
mayank is so concern for his wife an child
But whats happen in the end why they are not together
I am so scar ed Plz plz update soon
Thanks for Pm

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