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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#261

heyyyyy sam
fabulous ending to a fabulous story
i havent watched aisha so didnt knew abt that
but having mayur in the story was awsome
now i would love to watch the movie
thanx for pm

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#262

this ss went in fast manner....you started when i went to hostel, when i came back home...you have finished it...i enjoyed reading whole in one dear...samu i loved mayur fighting and mayu making her jealous was so adorable...i was reading it night...i just enjoyed and was drooling over our mayur world...me felt bad watching our nupz getting hurt badly due to that dhruv but this ss made my heart feel light...i enjoyed it thoroughly dear...keep writting maore..i will read whenver i come back home....i want to read your i mean my fav fiery love ff of urs....so bye...love u loads...

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#263

Hello Friends 😳

Thank you so much for the lovely comments 😊

I am highly obliged, thank you so much!

I cant tell you, how good it feels to go back through all the comments 😃

I am not able to reply to your comments individually sorry for that,

But will try to do that! 😳

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#264

Here I am with a new ss o MJHT now,

It will be short one, at most 5 parts...

It will be little different 😆

There is no chracter sketch as such because mostly all chracters will be confused like 😕

Here is the prologue,

Please scroll down

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#265

The story is of a girl, who always thinks about others, selfless. Never had a strong goal to achieve. She pretends to be strong but is really fragile and semsitive.

But now, something is going to change her life ...

Someone will enter her life to change her life...... But for what? Good or bad?

Stay tuned! 😳

Prologue

I was about to enter the party club, all dressed in a new black dress, till knee length, hair left open, not much makeup because he hates it. Today is our office party. I am so so happy today, but yet nervous. Oh God! I am gonna tell him, what I feel for him today. I am so scared now. I slowly entered the club, my eyes searching for him. But I didnt found him.

I looked around in the corner, it was all crowded. I saw him, hugging some one else, and I guess kissing too. I felt as if the world came crashing down, I felt numb. I was broken, I felt helpless. I felt as if there was no power left in me, I was paralysed. That girl turned around and she was none other than my own younger sister. I felt cheated.

He met her just yeaterday and now, both of them are shamelessly kissing each other and getting cosy in a public place. What the hell is happening? I cant believe all this. He was the one who told me, that he doesnt believe in Love at first.... and now!

I wanted to get out of there. "He proposed your sister" I heard Dia's voice, my only true best friend. I looked at her, she looked worried but I was too self absorbed to look and talk with her. I felt horrile at that moment. I just didnt knew what to do....

Love hurts.... I loved him since last 2 years, I trusted him, I thought he loved me too, he used to say, I love you and hug me. He was so caring, gentle, disciplined and loving. I loved him truly and he.... Was he fooling around? But why? May be I took him wrong...

But my sister...... Tears were continuously making their way out through my eyes. I didnt realise for how long I was crying. I realised that I was no longer in the club, I was walking on a deserted road. All alone like I have always been. I wasnt scared anymore. I tried to calm down, but still fear gripped me. It was all dark. I looked at the sky, few starsw were still twinkling as if trying to accompany me, but I didnt wanted anyone. Suddenly I saw abright Flash of light and shut my eyes tightly. Before that vehicle hit me, I was pulled away harshly.....

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So that was it.

Updates will come quickly..hopefully.....

Please do leave in your comments!

Those who want PM , do press Like tab!

Thank you 😳😊

Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#266

*EDITED*

Omggg... Amazin concept re.. Tooo good ..

I was expecting some fun tyoes..but u floored me yr

Poor Nupur..feel so sorry for her.. But then life has always new thing restored..

U are amazin .. MINDBLOWING re.. Loved it re..

-Ruchi😃

Edited by ruchimayur - 15 years ago

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
Reserved !!..

Waitinnn...

Am waiting for Broken ends..... 😲

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#268

Samidha, it's very interesting and I am surely going to read this one ... this sounds so good ...

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#269

Hii.. well I dont read mayur stories.. But this one seems to be really nice..

Plz do continue sooon!

I loved the way you started...

Wow. majan.. oops.. thats not a very good news for nupur.. BY GOD!

Loved this SS.. Do PM me!

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#270

2BD, nice one...tum tho gift pe gift hi deti jaa rahi ho iss diwali pe... Aur mere paas tho iss comment ke alawa kuch bhi nahi hain return mein dene ke liye.. and of course this hug...aaja.. 🤗

I don't mind sad prologue - But you know how much I hate sad epilogues...😉 Looking forward to next updates 😍

Love you,