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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx for the updates.
why there is ignorance part ?ok update it soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

aur jald hi maan ko khushi ki khush khabri mill jayye.so we want manneet to hve a great time with each other these days.

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Posted: 14 years ago
part 65
maan once again became the angry young man
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskaan,
Another great update .. how sweet a little geet/ maan is on their way .. sooooooo chweeeeeettt!! 😛
Lets wait and see how the daddy to be reacts .. krish seems really happy which is wonderful ...
excited already!!!
Uzma xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part
plz continue soon
eagerly waiting for the next update
aur plz is khadoos maan ko bhagao
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was sooooooooo sweet
but hate it that maan will be ignoring her
i was thinking about ur ff in clg. couldn't stop myself from thinking about it
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello muskaan,

ahem ahem.... do i need to say anything about your updates, muskan? 😉...!!!! here you go... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

so, geet pregnant, nice...!!!! daughter's name khushi, i knew this before...!!!! even nice...

and maan ignoring geet???? 😲..... pyaar kar karke bechari ko pregnant bhi kiya aur ab phone calls nahi le raha hain.... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

pardon me and my XX ratedness...!!! i could not help... all because of you... 😆.... and now update soon..!!! i want to see maan's reaction when he knows geet is pregnant ...... 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
well muski i think it's too early 4 geet to become preg i m c'mon yaar thoda time aur lena thana na
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww..sucha cute update muski!!!

Loved it!!

love khushi!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi guys...I hated pari so much in maan's arm today..I coud imagine how u all woud have felt with priya...but thanxs not hitting me with chapals..so sho sho priya...please do reply
geet - khushi..tumhari daddy ka main kya karoon..
dekhoo na..abhi tak nahin aaye..
nahin..nahin..gussa nahin hain..woh to busy hain


part 67

maan walks in at 2am..geet was sleeping on the bed..
he saw her & was delighted...he loved that sh actually shifte to his room..she smiled & saw her smile even while sleeping he kissed her..changed his dress & slept next to her..
maan got up & went to the gym..
geet got up & looked for maan...
she went to the gym..maan was working out..
she stood their looking at him...he was perfectly carved..musculine
sweaty..his every move was so erotic..& driving her wild..she was not
sure..it was her thoughts or her senses have become extra hyper due to
change in hormone levels..due to pregnancy...
she was drawn towards him...she hugged him from back...passionately
maan snapped back - yeh kya kar rahi ho..
geet did'nt expect that coming..after..20 long days of wait..
her heart fell & shattered..her eyes filled up..
she mumeremed..nahi woh..main..she was breathing very hard ..
she could barely say a word..maan did'nt realzise how rude he was to her
this was the first time ever geet had made a move towards him &
he just snapped her..shut her..crushed all the feelings she harboured
geet ran to kitchen ..
geet - teek hi to hain...nothing is changed between us..
how could I just go & hug him like this..
tears roll down her cheeks..she was not able to stay away from him..
& she knew she had to..thats way it been ever since they were married..
how could few intimate moments change maan...or was it just a moment
which meant nothing to him...she was confused..& totally heart broken..
maan gets ready & leaves to office..

geet was restless..but she spend the day..with krish & planning things
for khushi ..they went shopping ...krish kept on picking
girls stuff for the baby..geet was very happy ..they arranged the stuffs in
the guest room..krish got every thing in pink & pulled out a long chart for
writing notes fot khushi ...
krish - maa i am going to write a note every day for khushi here
geet - i will also write..something..every day..
krish - why are u keeping khushi's things in this room
won't she stay with u in ur room
geet - we are just keep it here now..we shall move it the bedroom
when she comes..
krish - umm
geet - when I go for delivery..u can arrange it in my room then..
krish arranges the soft toys inside the cradle.. I will do a better job then..

maan had a rough day.. & was still quite angry with geet
he came late..geet was still waiting..for maan..
geet smiled at maan..but he ignored her..
geet stood there wanting to tell him about their baby
but his indifferent attitude was scaring her...
maan - kuch kaam hain..
geet - nahi
maan - why are u standing on my head(he spat)
geet turns to leave..with tears..& stops
geet - maan woh..hamri..khushi..woh.. main..
maan - geet just stop it..jab yaad ajaye kya bolena..hain..phir bolena
I am really too tired for ur natak now..
geet was not able to take maan's indifferent behaviour..
she felt ..those moments did'nt mean any thing to him..
but why after so many years he had to do some thing like that.
was it just act of lust..she feared...all that has made it even more
difficult for her..geet thought..I could live my whole life..with his
hatredness..but after seeing so much of passion & love..
this hatredness in his eyes is killing me...
woh..mujh se kyu naraz hain..aab maine kya kiya..
woh kya hamri khushi se bhi nafrat kareghe...
she goes to the guest room..& pulls out the chart...
khushi..paapa love u...???
then she cuts ??? & writes..loves u...!!!

precap
maan leaving for a business trip

hope u all like this part too...sorry slight..twists..here & there...
plz let me know how do u feel
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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