FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 2 - Page 35

Originally posted by: cute-aly

hey muskan
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loved maneet
plz update soon

Originally posted by: VJ-LNMDJ

lovely, lovely updates ...it took me long, but this time I read all of them ..and enjoyed ! thanks.

VJ

part 56

geet walks in with priya & krish for the dinner
close family friends and relatives around..
every one was shocked to see priya..few of them spoke well
and enquired about wat she was doing & how are things
Mrs.kapoor taunted why was she here after so many years
maan just walked in at that time..he glared at geet
daadi tried to cover up telling about krishna and his holidays
Mrs.Kapoor(openly asked) - so why are here priya
priya was little embarressed
geet looked at maan gettig angry ..still he was not saying anything..
she stood up & said
geet - ji ..woh I requested her to come over
Mrs.kapoor - geet beta u don't know about her..
she left maan & krishna ..when they needed her the most
now she will ruin ur relationship too
geet(shouted at krish) - go inside at once
as krish left geet looked at Mrs.kapoor..wat do u know about Maan & priya
mrs.kapoor - better than u atleast..I have seen them fight like cats & dogs
Geet - exactly...u have seen them fight & i have seen them love...
there was a perfect silence..geet continued
Priya left because she did'nt want this day to day..nok jhok
spoil & ruin their love...she could'nt see love of her life hating her
(maans eyes met priyas ..both of their eyes were moist)
it was too much for an 18yr old girl to take..child, studies,
her lover boy suddenly become her husband/father..
Mrs.kapoor- nok-jhok to sab jagha hoti hain..is kai liya koi ghar
nahi chot tha..
geet - lekin sab ki aapni aapni samtha hothi hain sahnai ki
mrs.kapoor - how could she leave her child behind
geet - u noticed she left her child ..sad u could not see why
(maan looked at geet wondering..)
priya di knew maan could'nt have taken her separation itself..
how will he ever stay away from krish...
she left krish for maan ..how selfless was that..
how difficut it would have been for her...to leave her own child
(priya broke down..maan held her & hugged her)
woh bhi to ek maa hain..she carried krish for 9 months
went through all that pain...of bearing a child..
u could not see the pain ...to stay away from maan..who is not just her husband..but the guy
whom she fell in love with..the guy how completes her..
why can't she come back to her family...who are u or me
to talk in between its their life..if they want to be togather
no one can come between..the person who should have any problem should
be me..when I don't have any problem why are u all interfereing..
I will not let any one come in between(her voice was firm like a warning)
I guess i am done with the dinner
geet says sorry to daadi & walks to the outhouse..
daadi walks to priya & says
daadi - beta I am really very sorry..I was too concerned about maan & krishna
did'nt realize ur pain..
priya nodes her head..
priya goes to see krish..maan followed but stood near the door..krish was weeping..
priya - krish..sorry about all that
krish - aap yanha kyu aaya ho?
(priya was taken a back)
krish - are u going to ruin maa's life? (maan gets angry & shouts at krishna)
maan - krishna say sorry to ur mom
krish - yah meri mom nahin hain(he snaps back)
maan raises his hand to slap krishna..geets holds his hand
geet - maan yeh kya kar rahin aap (maan has never seen geet so angry..he bangs the wall instead)
sab ka dimag ek saath karab hogaya hain kya..
krish say sorry to priya mom now
krish - I am sorry priya mom

precap
Jealousy plan 1

Really nice update muskaan