FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 2 - Page 31

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey muski maan is so cute in this scene but when he forced her that was not fair
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Posted: 15 years ago
HI Muskan,

Sorry if I am a spoil sport. But As said fior the earlier (part 52), he should not have carried away & forced. Yes I can understand his love for Geet for the last 2 years though he realizes it and gave a name just 1 day before. If he were frustrated for just 2 years of his feelings, he should have thought of his hatred towards her for the last 4 years. He hated the fact that he had remarried so much that he conveniently forgotten that fact. Yes Geet loves him more than her life and that was evident when she brought back Priya for him. So all she thinks is that he will be happy only with priya. So let him first win her heart and make her understand that he loves her as much as she loves him. He has all his family & Priya with him to help him in this. Pria is aware of the fact that both are loving each other so anyways she will not be a barrier in their life. Let him take her help to kindle jealous in Geet (the way she buttoned his shirt @ college possessively).

It was nice that he moved into Geets room. but what a fate yaar, being the owner of the mansion, master & mistress of the house has to live in the guest house. Why he had show that fake anger of my house & I will stay whereever I want. Instead he could have said, I would love to stay with my wife. She would not have said I am not your wife. let him take help of Krish, the little kid knows his mom better than anyone. So Let him be a kid once again alongwith his son to spend some quality time with Geet. Let there be priya lso with them having come all the way to join these 2 people, let her also enjoy the company of her son for some time and help Maan to get his wife in full (heart & soul then body obey the command of heart).
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Posted: 15 years ago

maan of ur FF is so adorable.....just love him yaar....

fab update and looking forward for more updates...........
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago
This was too cute:) Hope that Maan actually behaves like that in the show soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwww muskan di ...............u update so fast!!!! i cant even have d pace wid u 😆 😆 anyways i really lyk Maaneet in this FF...........i m loving it!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG OMG muskan ur simply brilliant yaar 👏 ur pulling off evry update really well.......... but the only prob im havin is just dat i became sooo greedy wid ur ff dat nowadays ur ff is seeming sooo short so can u plz make it a little longer.. 😲 other than me & my selfish probz u ROCK & so does ur FF... 👍🏼 i think itz abt time geet realizes her luv 4 maan 2 & accept him & his luv 😍 ok i no enuff of me now.. well plz plz plzzzz update soon & make it a little longer... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: deejagi

HI Muskan,

Sorry if I am a spoil sport. But As said fior the earlier (part 52), he should not have carried away & forced. Yes I can understand his love for Geet for the last 2 years though he realizes it and gave a name just 1 day before. If he were frustrated for just 2 years of his feelings, he should have thought of his hatred towards her for the to get his wife in full (heart & soul then body obey the command of heart).

about maan forcing her...UMMM!!!
not exactly forcing forcing...u will understand maan
s point of view..in the next few updates..
Jealous..on popular demand including Jealous in the up coming parts
but from my point of view😆😈
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rockin_gal

OMG OMG muskan ur simply brilliant yaar 👏 ur pulling off evry update really well.......... but the only prob im havin is just dat i became sooo greedy wid ur ff dat nowadays ur ff is seeming sooo short so can u plz make it a little longer.. 😲 other than me & my selfish probz u ROCK & so does ur FF... 👍🏼 i think itz abt time geet realizes her luv 4 maan 2 & accept him & his luv 😍 ok i no enuff of me now.. well plz plz plzzzz update soon & make it a little longer... 😊

I have certain scenes in mind..try to narrate it ..
some times I am able to give lots of detail to the scene..whic makes it longer & some time
I get lost in the scene so much...I run out of words...
shall try to detail each scene to give full justice
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Posted: 15 years ago
maan moved into geet's room v.gud... & idiot geet why so confused????? maan hav to love her more to make her realize he is only for her... lol....

anyways nice update..... waiting for next
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanxs for all the replies I just get doubled motivated to after reading that..
thanxs thanxs thanxs a lot..love u all wonderfull people
he kissed her again slept hugging her..geet was not sure about her feelings yet
but she was really helpless when maan demands firmly..

part 55

geet woke up to see maan looking at her...lying next to her..his head was resting on his firm arms..his biceps were pritty evidently seen as he was weraing his vest....(that was her usuall seductive coffee view very day..for which she used to stand hidding dehind the curtains of the gym..now the coffee seem to come looking for her..every now & then..she shied with her thought..)
maan - goodmorning sweetheart..and kissed her on her eyes one after the other
she was too tired to protest ..by now she knew protesting with Maan was like
asking for more..she got up & maan pulled her back into the bed
she almost fell on his chest..
maan - where are u going?
geet - ji mujhe shopping keliya jana hai krish ke saath
maan - no u are not going any where..
geet - kaan rokaga mujhe?
maan turns her down on to the bed in a jerk &
maan - tumhe rookhne ki himath koyai aur kar saktha hain?
she tried to move her legs..he entangled his leg on top of hers &
held her hand firmly down...maan fanned her face very slowy with his breath..
she could feel his lips..almost touching her she closed her eyes in anticipation
his breath moved towards her jawline ..feathering her shoulder curves
close to her neck & behind her ears..he slowly let go her hands & moved his lips
lower he pulled his leg from her & moved further down..she arched her back & cuddled
her legs...geet weekly says mujhe chodoo na maan
maan - kissed her forehead & said maine tumhe nahin pakada hai geet
geet was embarressed & pink...covered her face in the pillow
maan went in for shower....he came out in the towel & started getting ready
geet was still covering her face in the pillow..
maan went close to her & sprinkled the water by shaking his hair
she got up in a double shock..one water & second maan himself..
wet ..erotically seducing smell of the after shave..those water drops were teasing her
thoughts...she had enough of all this since morning..she pulled his
towel & walked away...maan was shocked at her act..he did'nt see that
coming he smiled & changed ...geet had her bath & was getting ready..
maan came & stood behind her..watching her..she was feeling concious..
she kept stealing glances every now & then..after she was ready..
her eyes met his dark peering eyes..he came close & said..some thing is missing..
he slowly lifted the black chain & slided in her neck..moved her plat with is hand..
his fingers ..where running currents down her spine..he
tied the mangalsuthra & he bent forward to pick the red box..she could
smell his exotic musclaline smell..as he slided back..
he put the sindoor on her forehead..geet was mesmerised...her eyes
filled up ..she looked away..maan ..came behind & opened her platted hair..
& pulled the curls behind her ears..and said now that is perfect...& kissed her head

at the breakfast table..maan, krish & priya were sitting..
geet was in the kitchen..she was not used to being infront of Maan..
& now it was even more difficult...she told the maid to serve
while she prepared...maans eyes were looking for her..
priya - maan did u tell her
maan - I did..she is not believing me
priya mocked & kept smiling
priya - tum se to kuch nahin hoga..shall I talk to her
maan - nahin..I know my wife better...main mana loanga use..
maan walked into the kitchen and noticed geet had tied her hair back into a plat..
he slowly stood behind her & opened her plats again & kissed her cheeks & said bye
geet turned ..maan smiled & left to office..

geet, krish & priya went shopping..
maan calls geet
maan - kya kar rahi ho
geet - aap ko miss kar rahe hoon
maan - really!!!
geet - shopping karne aayi hoon..obvisouly i am shoping
maan - i liked ur first answere better..
geet - kuch kaam tha aap ko?
maan - nahin
geet - then why did u call?
maan - because I was missing u...
geet cuts the call as she felt she was drowning in his words...
geet was getting scared & restless..she was not clear of anything
every thing seemed confusing..her feeling for maan..maans feeling for her
maan & priya..geets phone rings..
daadi - geet we are having a dinner with some close relatives & friends..
be here at 7.00pm ...
geet - ji daadi
daadi - inform maan ..I have been calling..uska number busy tha..
geet - ji..
geet babaji..main kaise unhe call kar sakthi hoon..
she tells krish to call maan & tell about the dinner at 7
krish - dad ..mom wanted to tell about the dinner
maan - give the phone to mom
(geet wispers nahin tell him i am not here..)
krish - dad wants to talk to u mom
geet - ji
maan - khaho..
geet - ji woh..daadi asked to join her for dinner at 7
maan - umm
geet - bye
maan does'nt reply..geet waits..she waits for few mins
geet - gussa ho kya
maan - huumm!
geet - sorry..
maan - sorry is kam nahin chalegha
geet - phir..
maan - say u miss me...
geet - I
maan - u..
geet - miss
maan - umm
geet - u.......not & cuts the call
maan - geet ki bachi..tujhe to main...& smiles ..

Precap
Dinner gets disturbing..

hi u lovely people...hope u liked this part..i am working to include jealoousy part on popular demand..hope u like it
but there is a twist to it😉
love
muskan

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