love story (ff) update part 6, pg 18

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

hi...

just started reading this one...

thanks for the Pm....

loving it yaar.....

i was just laughing n laughing.......

it's a good thing everyone thinks I am immune to the charms of MSK (oh, the delusions of the innocent), or I will have to leave college and run away to some small town.

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no is missing but she is not looking at them'so what am I missing? (yes, he's that dense)🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

too good yaar....

will now read 2nd part...😆😆😆

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553993

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

wow wow wow...

amazing update

just loved it..

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Merry Christmas..............
wow loved the intro and part 1 so much........................the way u described was so lovely and awesome..............................................the brothers helping Maan and Geet and Maan realising that Geet was looking out for HIM was so lovely........................

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

part 2
Geet is convincing herself that Maan doesnt look at her like that only if she knows that the fire is burning equally both the sides.................oh no shes gonna avoid Maan for few days and now Maan will will be desperate..................

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

part 3
Maan knows and understands his jaan too well.................hes planning many back up plans to make her confess.................how sweet...............

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

part 4
awesome part......................
i just love the way u write the ff....................
Maan is completely prepared to get the confession from Geet unaware of sherni skipping the class to avoid such thing happening............and hes too worried to handle her giggling gang.............and the plan to make it work at her home itself is too interesting........................

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

part 5
awesome once again..................
both the families are somehow into this match making.................
the connection from vicky to his mom to geet's mom to the whole family..............wah..................
looks like everythings set just the confession to happen and then straight to shaadi.....................

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

part 6
honestly u deserve a 1000000000000000000 👏......................
brilliant....................
there goes Maan's another plan.................
dunno how many plans of his and his brothers and her family included will go like his letter in the fountain before the confessions happen..................
looks like their love and romance will not happen like the filmy ones here.................and maan will have to work hard i mean real hard to make his Geet his Mrs. Khurana....................
thanks for the pm dear....................
cont ASAP.....................
am just loving this ff.......................