Star-crossed-lovers (AR ff) part 4&5-- pg 11 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey cornelia,

I was temporarily away from IF since the past few months and didn't gewt to read any of my PMs. I just read this PM and came running away to read this one, the love of your previous FF brought me here lol. This one is really really awesome and i'd love to follow it, Please PM me whenever you get time to update. Wouldn't wanna miss this one 😉

luv Miya <333
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi friends! Extremely sorry for late posts but have been really busy with school and some stuffs in life. So haven't written that much. I wrote the summary for all the parts so far as it has been a looooooooooong time. Hope you enjoy it!😃
Also, thanks a lot for your comments and for clicking the like button..unfortunately, I am in hurry right now, so will be out once I'm done updating my ffs.
if u get time, do check out my other ff as well..

Part 4

"Pick it up. This is the second time you got that call," said Ridhima looking at Rahul's cell which had buzzed once when they started their conversation.

He moved his hand in the air, "Ah leave it. I really don't want to. It's Armaan's girlfriend."

"Oh then you definitely should. She might be really worried."

He rolled his eyes and shook his head, "Oh please.. If she cared so much wouldn't she be here by now? She is just a selfish bitch."

Ridhima gasped while Muskaan, with twinkling eyes started her BBC news on Armaan Mallik. "Oh my god! Is her name Anjali Gupta? I heard they broke up because she went with a guy called Atul. Even though I shouldn't be judgmental, I think only a crazy person will break up with him."

"I say you got the wrong information. She is indeed his girlfriend but they are still in relationship. It's just that she likes playing with his feelings just to convince herself that she is the only girl he loves," said Rahul with a frown which didn't go unnoticed by both Ridhima and Muskaan.

Ridhima couldn't control her curiosity, "I don't get you. Why would any girl do such thing to her boyfriend and what made her feel so unsecure? I'm confused and where does Atul fit in the picture? And you just said Armaan only loves you and his grandma, does he really love Anjali?"

"To be honest I don't know how Armaan feels about her. I know I've been with him for such a long time but he is so secretive that no one can guess what is in his mind. He was the one who proposed her but they don't act like real lovers. I mean, they don't go out that often and don't talk that much. They always have some third company with them. Armaan is workaholic. He spends most of his spare time doing something in his room alone that no one knows about. He doesn't give that importance to Anjali. She wants extra attention, if you understand what I mean by "extra attention." Sometimes, I do feel bad for her but just can't help my hatred for her. Atul is Anjali's secretary and she is using him to make Armaan jealous which I am not sure is working," he finished with a smile.

Ridhima soon departed saying she has to go for rounds and after that to Armaan's room. She suggested Rahul to visit his friend while she goes for round and let him know that he will be shifted to his home tomorrow morning. Muskaan decided to go with Rahul and talk to Armaan Mallik.

For some reason, she was feeling really shy with Rahul. On their way to Armaan's room, they had a little conversation. Even though they just met, it felt as if they knew each other from a long time. Pretty common line used in every love story or story of friendship. But which one is between these two..friendship or something else, if you understand what I mean by "something else."

Part 5

She was indeed very chirpy girl: talking out her heart no matter what, just as he thought on their first meeting. However, his attention was rather caught by her quiet friend who seemed to enjoy her own company: the last time he ever saw her was the time when he regained his consciousness. Seeing Muskaan and Rahul getting involved in a small discussion brought the weird smile on his lips. This was the smile which had found its home in his lips. It had a unique kind of nature.

Many mistook it as sarcasm; but only few could understand the real gayness hidden in it. Mr. Mallik was a man of his own rules. He did what he thought was right, never bowed before his so called parents who did a very good job of bringing him to this world but unfortunately not so good in raising him up. He was raised in all luxuries but how could he be happy when all those luxuries provided to him were the money taken from poor and helpless. How could he ignore the fact that his parents gained all the money from illegal works! His father was a politician and his mom a social-worker, whose only job was to party with her friends in name of society's welfare.

For the world they were great humans who selflessly worked for the society and only society. Hadn't he seen those men with arrogant smile, hadn't he seen the ill humored politicians, hadn't he heard those dirty words from his father's mouth; he would have agreed with the world as well. He had seen the nastiest things ever in his childhood: from a half naked girl roaming around his father's room to his mother biting up their middle-aged house maid.

After his parents' divorce, it was hard living in a boy's hostel; but it was his determination that kept him moving on. He could care less of being separated from his parents for he knew he was just a mere toy to be decorated at home for the sake of their status in the society as happy couples. Happy couples, of course only he knew how happy they were. The biggest pain came to him with the death of his grandma, the only person in the world who understood him even if the world tagged him as arrogant and selfish.

Seeing her knocking on the door, he came back from his trance. The smile on his lips was gone and once again was replaced with nothing but an emotionless expression hanging on his face. His heart told him to smile but how could he smile when he was known for his frown! He made it clear to his mind that it was giving too much attention to this stranger and it's not going to do any good.

She acknowledged Muskaan and Rahul with her sweet smile but once when her eyes found Mr. Mallik, she found hard to keep up the smile. She tried to act serious for the man infront of her seemed to ask for only business and nothing else. First, as always she started with the formality.

"Hi Mr. Mallik! How are you feeling today? Everything's good?"

"Yes, I'm fine. Thanks for asking Dr. Gupta."

Rahul and Muskaan exchanged glances then excused themselves from the room. On coming out of the room, they brusted out into laugh and Rahul started mimicking Ridhima and Armaan. Oh, if only they knew they were being watched by Ridhima from the window. Ridhima came out and gave them a look and went back in to continue her work.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Kirti.. nice part..:)
awww feel awful for Armaan..:( he had to bear all that pain since childhood..:(
and tht Anjali..uughh hope she never cums back..:-)
AR r soo serious in front of e/o... :( but hopefully they will eventually open up and become friends..:) plzz plzz
Rahul is soo sweet and Muskaan as usual.. maii life charmer lady..:-)
great part..:) thanxx for updating and continue soon.:)
tc :-)
Preet <3
Edited by cutiepreet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey awsome part dear
thnx for the pm
love u
salina
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear awesum ff plz cont sun n plz pm me when u update d next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
such sort parts ......increse their length

update sooooonnnn

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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
just lvd it............😊

hey plz try to increse the length of the part & also update soon..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great part....Eager to read more.... Continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear

just read ur FF in one go..

its new one..so i dunn need to go thro much.....😆

nice one....plus one of the among wid different background ...


continue soon...n pm me from next time...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely updates...plz do contnu soon

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