Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87! - Page 56

So at last we have an update......thanks for the update and sorry we were harassing u for the updates...anyways take rest if you have headache...health comes first.


Coming to the update it was nice but i felt sorry for vicky and nargis...whaat is nargis hidding is she pregnant...anyways i liked the way vicky answered his mother...

loved it...plzz update soon...

with love----------vinithaa

Thanks vinitha..

hmmm i am not saying..but..yeah..nargis..has her fears...

and...yeah...i know..i was long in my update..i wrote twice..and did not feel right about it..and here is the final version..when i am on a roll it takes me an hour...

i have added you as buddy to send you pm when i update next..which i hope to do soon..may be tonight..but please dont hold me to it...

i am right now...writing one on Maaneet..and then time permitting i shall write tmba..for i already have and outline...
the mehndi..is up next...

It was a good update Vrush...but don't exert yourself...rest till you're better.

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Thanks vinitha..

hmmm i am not saying..but..yeah..nargis..has her fears...

and...yeah...i know..i was long in my update..i wrote twice..and did not feel right about it..and here is the final version..when i am on a roll it takes me an hour...

i have added you as buddy to send you pm when i update next..which i hope to do soon..may be tonight..but please dont hold me to it...

i am right now...writing one on Maaneet..and then time permitting i shall write tmba..for i already have and outline...
the mehndi..is up next...

hey dont worry i can wait....take your time dont stress to much..i know you do post some other topics other than this ff...so dont worry take your time...

Take care------vinitha

thanks for understanding..girls...
i shall play it by the ear..if i feel upto it..i shall write...

Wow...Vrush great update....very different form the usual banter between Nargis and Vicky. I had feared that there may be this side to him...for a man like Vicky so complex...it cannot be happy go lucky all the time....but the timing is killing...his mom back at the house, she wants to meet me with already a negative connotation in her mind, and now this new worry for me...kare to kya karein?? Loved how you described Vicky's anger and frustration....and how he misbehaved...it put a whole new facet on his character, and personality....adds to the layers that are already there....loved it...not that I like to be MAULED.....but it was a very natural reaction.

Now in the next update...i want him on his knees.....groveling for forgiveness........no?? A man on his knees..........wow...what a killer!!! Looking forward to the next part...when you feel better!!

vrus, i'm sorry...i'm really very very very very very very very very very srry.......i wasn't aware of ur illness....pls take rest....we'll wait...

@ nups..dont worry girl..i am fine..now..

i guess..despite being hatta katta..i am fragile..during that time of the month... and on top of that..i had a fast..yesterday..so it added to my woes..

superb update👏👏👏👏👏

Oh m gee..i really wish Nargis opens upto Vicky..😔 his frustration is understandable...!!