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Posted: 15 years ago

hi yory too good i read all parts its simply superb can you plz add me in pm list

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Posted: 15 years ago
I'm sorry for the late post, but pls forgive me my daughter is sick
I want you all to let me know whether you want a traditional Indian wedding or a western wedding:)

To love Again - part 10

'Daadima..Daadima..' cried Geet while running into Daadi's room. Daadi was talking on the phone.

Maan, on the other end, heard Geet's voice and put down the phone.

'Come in. Geet, my dear, why are you crying now? Is everything alright? please stop crying dear. come and sit here' Daadi made Geet to sit on the bed, wiping off her tears.

'Daadima, do you think I'm that bad? How can I not cry? I'm trying to talk to Maan since last night, but he isn't willing to see me even. Daadima. you need to help me. it's really very important, I need to explain him everything' Geet concluded within a single breath.

So that means Geet still didn't speak to Maan with that matter. Daadi thought. She should not let Geet to know that Maan met her and the terms they agreed. So, she decided to change Geet's mind.'Geet. let me deal with Maan, how come he ignore you. I will see to it.' Daadi then looked Geet who nodded in agreement.

Knowing that her plan would succeed, Daadi tried her second attempt'Geet,dear, I have an important thing to buy. if you could come with me it will be easy for me. after that we can look for Maan too'

Hearing Daadi's last words about looking for Maan, Geet agreed to go for shopping.

In the car, Daadi explained what she needed to buy'Geet, actually it's not just one thing, but a list of things I need to buy and we have a limited time'

'Unless you show me the list, how will I know?' Geet replied.

'oh! you are right. I didn't write the list, but I can remember evrything. actually my friend Parvathi's daughter is getting married and she asked me to choose the bridal wear. listen! everything should be perfect, or else she will be upset..Geet..it should be in red, but simple' Geet noted everything in her mind.

Daadi made Geet to wear everything before she buy, saying that Parvathi's daughter looks like Geet. Daadi admired how the dress matched the jwelleries on Geet. Geet wearing them brought a new shine and purity to everything.

They reached home in the evening, so Geet suggested Daadi need to rest.

Later in the evening Daadi asked Geet to have dinner, but she refused. She kept on saying that unless Maan comes she won't eat anything. Daadi knows the stubborness of both Maan and Geet.

Daadi called Maan and ordered to come home as soon as possible. If not she will go to get him.

Maan didn't want to go home. He didn't want Geet to talk about that again and to make her sad. He has no choice. Daadima keeps her words true. So she will defintely tries to find him.

He opened the door slowly and saw Geet sitting on the stairs, sleeping. Even in her sleep, she looks as beautiful as an angel.

His body and soul was dragged towards her, without his knowledge. Within few seconds he sat next to her, offering his shoulder for her head to rest.

He kept on looking at her without blinking his eyes. He wanted to stay there looking at her forever. Lot of conflicts went on in his mind. Why did God let all the bad things to happen with her? That too without her knowledge.

On the second thought, he stood up and lifted her in his arms to carry her into the bed. He laid her on the bed and adjusted the blanket before leaving.

After a while he came back with her meal. Gently he made her to wake up and fed her by his mouth. 'Did you eat?' she questioned him after the first gulp. He shook his head. She fed him with her hands. It was the first thing he ate since last night. They shared the meal together.

'good night, Geet' he turned to go.

She held his hands. 'Maan, I want to talk to you..of something very important' She pleaded him by her eyes

He sat on the bed.'Geet, it's too late now. you need to sleep..we will talk in the morning' he placed a gentle kiss on her forehead.

'promise?' she won't leave this time without talking to him

He nodded his head to agree her and turned off the lights.
Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Veryyyyy nice part.
Plzzz continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry for the late reply

@PrithviSanyo1 glad you liked it...your wish is my command...who knows? what if Geet turns out to be the run away bride?

@rituka7 Thanx...sorry took so much time to update, coz my daughter is sick 😭

@shalini_s Thanx dear..ok

@kooliio Thanx...read my comment on PrithviSanyo1

@neha2005 Keep on hoping..thanx

@pickachu Life isn't always happy :) do you think that they should marry?

@swetha10 Thanx...hoping...still hoping

@.sireesha. Thanx

@kirannaryani Thanx..did it

@jennifer1993 Thanx
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Posted: 15 years ago
adorable!!!
cnt wait for next bit!!
btw hope ur little 1 gets better soon!!
Edited by Tishuu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hii amrita

i read this ff its really interesting how the story goes on

liked the way geet shout at dev in full anger

n thanx that dadi n maan believed her

i hope next part itll be maneet wedding

u r doing a great work

continue soon

see yaaa


Hii Monu 🤗
I'm glad you liked this
aww..Maneet wedding...preparations, right?
thank you sooo much
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww that was soo good
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww that was a cute update...cant wait for the next part. Do cont.soon and hope your daughter gets well soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
😭😭 that was not enough at alllllllllll.need a big update but u wrote it beautifully. waitin waitin
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey amrita
that was a nice n sweet 1
cant wait 4 next
continue when is possible
see yaa
love yaaa

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