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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey nice update loved ar alot ur ending this ff i dnt mind as long as u dnt end his first obsession soon lol dnt take it as an offense i love this ff too will miss it alot though


Lol, No it's okay honey! I won't be ending His Perfect Obsession so no worries. :)
Thanks for the comment. <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Mel, this part is simply great!! I just can't get tired of saying how cute they both seem!!
I understand it is quite difficult to maintain two FF at the same time. I was also thinking of starting another one but realised that It's gonna be too much hassle!! Make it end on a good note though I'm pretty sure you will. I'm glad that you've decided to continue with 'His Perfect Obsession' cuz I'm enjoying that so much!!

Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome



thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mel <3 I loved the update!

AR are just so adorable! I love the way you describe them and their moments. It was SO cute how even though A wanted a girl and R wanted a boy, they both wished that the other would get what they want .. it just shows how much they love each other! And Armaan decorating the baby's room was ADORABLE! He really is the best husband and will be the best father! <3

Looking forward to the final parts, and thanks for the PM! :)

-Noru <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Mel.

Loved the part. It was very cute and emotional too. Loved the way you described all the pictures hanging in the room. Yeah we all can understand how difficult it's for you two manage two FF together. Sad it will be end but i guess every good thing has to end one day (like OUR DMG )..

Continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hy very nice part! love it!!! they're soo cute n Armaan's so caring, very nice.
it's just awesome.

waiting 4 the nxt parts eagerly...update soon n thanks 4 the pm..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear!!! I just finished catching up with this FF...the story is different and so nice..I absolutely loved it..and moreover, all the dialogues are so DMGish that I could connect everything you wrote...amazing job dear...I have sent you a buddy request already, so I'm hoping that you would include me in your PM list..

btw I read your note and I can understand how hard it might be to manage two FFs, and I wish you all the best for the perfect ending of this FF....hehe and now I'm gonna start reading your next FF😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Mel..:) woww this part was soo cute..:) <3
u know i'm soo loving these months of Ridz pregnancy time..:) 😳
AR r soo cute..:) <3
i luved it.. and awww shopping for their baby..:)
but what u r going to finish this part in another 3-4 parts..😭
i luved this ff.. am gonna miss it.. but u still updating the other one.. itzz ok..:)
but make the parts 4 ok..so we can get more out of this ff.:)
thanx for the pm and continue soon..:)
tc :)
Preet <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
mel, i have stated this before but i am ging to say it again, your just an amaizing writer! love every little thing you describe and i understand how hard it is to manage two ffs, wish you luck with both and plz update his perfect obession soon, xx priyanka
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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved this part yaar
He is such a cute Daddy already
And this scene reminded me of the scene in the show when he puts up Riddhima's pictures in this room
You know what, had we seen something in the show in this track i am sure they'd have had Armaan decorate this room for their baby
its like Awwwwww how he cares so much and Riddhima too is such a cutie pie :-)

Its really ok when you want to wrap this up
This FF is such a light hearted one that i guess even 3-4 more parts will be so awesome that it wont feel like we r rusing to the end
Plus it really is about them having a baby and i guess that would be the culmination
So its fine

It'd give u more space to work out the other ff :)

So good luck and keep updating this one ! :)

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