Life without youu!! (update on pg 139) - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
tht was sooooooooooo nice part
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey manjari dear wat an update dear so so so sad n touching past of sammy man how can sammy's mom do like dat wid dem man god so selfish der mom was n den in starting sajan convo god gunji said so hurting words to sammy man poor sammy wen she talked abt his mom n den wow wow mayu bringing some changes on nups awesome loveee mayur scene awesome anyways cant wait for next update now do continue soon lets see how gunji will ask forgiveness n make it up wid sammy
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nice update
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nice part

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Manjari sweet heart, really sorry fr late replies....I read ur each n every updates bt sometyms skip to comment....hope you wont mmind...I really love all the three ffs written by you sweety, but my health condition is very bad these days n I m admitted to hospital, so most of the tym cudnt make a reply...

I specially like this one very much..So Samrat's truth is out n his past is really dark..her mom is too bad!!!! how can she leave her two littl kids just for money!!!!

Anyways great update dear....you are the best honey....keep writing n dont forget to pm me!!!! he he:) just kidding....coz I kno you never!!!!!

love you a lot

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Aditi
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing n rockkin updt dear....
plz cont soon!
thanx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

Hey Manjari sweet heart, really sorry fr late replies....I read ur each n every updates bt sometyms skip to comment....hope you wont mmind...I really love all the three ffs written by you sweety, but my health condition is very bad these days n I m admitted to hospital, so most of the tym cudnt make a reply...

I specially like this one very much..So Samrat's truth is out n his past is really dark..her mom is too bad!!!! how can she leave her two littl kids just for money!!!!

Anyways great update dear....you are the best honey....keep writing n dont forget to pm me!!!! he he:) just kidding....coz I kno you never!!!!!

love you a lot

ur's
Aditi

Heyy aditi!!
No problem...
How r u now? I hope you get well sooon!!
n love youu 2!!!
Thanxx...
yaa his moms really bad!!
anywayz take care!!
-Manjari
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey again ousome part yaar...
urbi!!!
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Heyy Guys! Thanks a lot for your lovely comments! I love reading them!! Hope you like this update. ..........................................................................................
Mayank was happy that nupur was trying to understand...
she reached home and saw the driver standing next to the car.
N: umm..
Driver: sorry maam.. mujhe nahi sona chahiye tha!
N: nahin.. plz.. aap sorry mat boliye.. im sorry.. aap mujhse bade hain phir bhi maine aap par chilaya...
Mayank smiled at nupur.. nupur smiled back..
Driver was shocked.. was it actually nupur bhushan saying sorry to me!!
Driver: koi baat nahi...
N: agli baar agar main daatu na toh aap mujhe ulta daat deejiyega.. theek hai?
Driver tried to smile..
he had tears in his eyes..nupur was happy..
N: mayank.. thank youu..
M: kisliye?
N: mujhe samjhane ke liye! i guess tum itne bure bhi nahi ho!
M: tumhe kya lagta tha pehle?
N: mujhe lagta tha ki tum bade borung hoge aur bohot sadu! tumhe kuchh taste nahi hoga! Ghamand bhara hoga kyunki tum class main first aate ho!!
M: aur ab?
N looked down..
N: hm.. ab mujhe lagta hain.. ki.. tum sadu toh ho.. par tumhara dil bohot saaf hain..
M smiled..thanx!
M: chalo phir kal milte hain..
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Gunjan and Riddhima in the car...
G: chalo.. aaj toh college jakar koi phayda nahi hain.. tum samrat ke paas jao main.. woh.. main usse kal maafi mang loongi.. abhi gusse main hoga na..
R nodded.
R: yahi theek rahega! chalo.. bye.. aur haan agar armaan se milo toh usse keh dena ki mujhe usse baat karni hain!
G: hmm.. bye!
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R went in.. samrat was sitting on the couch lost in his thoughts.
R: bhaiya.. im.. im sorry...
S looked up..
S: arey pagli tum kyun sorry bol rahi ho! isme tumhari koi galati nahi hain! Pakka ye gunjan aur armaan ki koi nayi trick hogi! pata nahi tum gunjan ke saath itna time kyun spend karti ho..
R: bhaiya.. woh acchhi hain.. bas thodi ziddi hain aur bohot brave hain!! Uski life bhi easy nahi hain bhai! woh sirf apne dad ke saath rehti hain.. uski bhi mom nahi hain...
S: lucky hain ki atleast uski mom usse chhodkar toh nahi gayii!!
R: nahi bhaiya.. par uski mom hamesha ke liye door chali gayi.. hamari mom toh ab bbhi--
S: RIDDHHIMA!! MOM... MAR CHUKI HAIN...
R got scared..
R: j.ii.. im sorry.
S: sorry! plz mujhe ek promise karo! plz promise karo ki tum armaan mallik se door rahogi!! plz!!
R: (in mind) kya mujhe bhaiya ko bata dena chahiye? kya sochenge woh? nahi abhi woh dukhi hain.. mujhe hi armaan ko batana hoga!!
R: ji.. "I promise"😭
S: thank youu.. apne bhai kop tasalli dene ke liye!! aur riddhima ki bhi baat ho.. toh mujhe batana! main tumhara bhai hoon..
R: ji bhaiya main hamesha aapko hi bataoongi!
She went to her room and cried... Her phone rang it was armaan... he was calling her! she was going to disconnect but then thought of telling him now only!
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Nupur was at home reading a magazine... and thinking about what happened that day..
Main aur mayank itne jaldi dost ban gaye... woh kitna sweet hain.. aur maine nupur bhushan ne life main pehli baar kissi se maafi maangi!! woh bhi driver se! pata nahi kyun.. mayank bohot hi alag hain.. aaj tak jitne bhi larke dekhe hain woh sirf bolte hain ki nupur tuim kitni achhi ho ur perfect! aur isse,.. isse toh sirf mujhme bura hi dikhta hain!!
Gunjan came in.. she went and hugged nupur..
G: di kitne din ho gaye humne achhe se baat bhi nahi ki!
N: tu riddhima aur armaan ko milwane main jo lag gayi thi..
G: aaj bohot mann kar raha hain aapse baat karne ka..
N shut the magazine and turned towrds gunjan..
N: haan bol. na
Dad: baat toh mujhe bhi karni hain!!
G: dad!! hi!!
He came and sat between them!!
Dad: meri pyaari betiyan and hugged them!!
dad: waise nupur radheshyam bata raha tha ki aaj tumne usse maafi maangi?
G: kya? di aajtak kabhi aapne mujhse maafi nahi maangi!!😲😲
dad: really nupur im proud of you! love youu!!
he kissed her forehead..
G: aur main?
dad: tum toh itni sweet ho!! hamesha sabka khayal rakhti ho! im proud of both of youu!!
he kissed her on her forehead too!!
G: dad.. hum bohot lucky hain ki humme aap jaise loving dad mile!!
N: haan!! ur truely the best!! humme jo bhi chahiye tha aapne humme sab diya dad!!
dad: hmm.. woh toh main hoon!
N: ur the coolest!
G: toh aaj aap itni jaldi ghar aa gaye?
dad: haan.. bas aaj tum college nahi aayi na gunjan!!
N: haan.. tu toh riddhima ko lene gayi thi na?
G: woh.. actually.. koi kaam aa gaya tha..
Dad: ok.. beta.. kabhi kabhi bunk bhi maarna chahiye!
G smiled!!
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A: hello?
R: hm.. armaan,,
A: hi! gunjan ne kaha tumhe mujhse baat karni thi?
R: haan.. bohot zaruri hain!
A: kyun.. doosri date par jaana hain kya?
R: nahi armaan..
A: toh? aur tum itni upset you sound kar rahi ho?
R: woh.. im sorry.. main tumse phir kabhi bhi nahi mil sakti!!
A: KYA? plz riddhima.. aisa mat karo! tum.. tum..
R: plz mujhe bolne do..!!
armaan.. hum.. hum.. kabhi ek nahi ho sakte! bhaiya ko tum pasand nahi ho.. aur maine unse promise kiya hain ki main tumse door rahoongi!
A: ho gaya? tumm.. kya tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti? kya koi feelings nahi hain tumhare dil main.. mere liye? main.. main.. tumhe 11th standard se jaanta hoon!! aur ek hi jhhatke main.. pehli baar mujhe life main woh khsuhi milne ja rahi thi.. par.. kyun? kyun kar rahi ho yeh sab?
R: NAHI KARTI MAIN TUMSE PYAR!! kuchh nahi jaanti main!! mujhe sirf bhaiya ki chinta hain!! aur plz mujhe akela chhor do armaan.. hum alag hain..!!
........ she cuts the line............
A: aise kaise chhod doo main usse akela? riddhima tum yeh theek nahi kar rahi mere saath! Main tumhe aise apne life se nahi jaane dunga! nahi jaane dunga!
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Precap: Gunjan saying sorry to samrat
Mayank and nupur friendship blooming.
Riddhima satying away from armaan!
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Posted: 15 years ago
fantastic
nupur said sorry.... so cute
samrat and ridhima were nice
gunur and dad scene was great
ar were awesome

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