Life without youu!! (update on pg 139) - Page 25

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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww a little sad part but i liked MN
oh no ridz staying away from arman..to bad for him and hey gunjan is gonna say sorry.looking forward towards the precap.cont soon dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeee updt loved it plzzz continue soon n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
tht was sooooooooooooo nice part
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update
nice changed in nupur
i hate samrat
i love AR
gunjan is such a sweetheart but us karwe karele ke saath i don't like it.
plz counti..
update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
cool update
looking forward for sajan scene
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Manjari!!!! Le is baar main phir se late😃 😃.....you know my prob sweety.....but late ho ya early I defo reply you, coz I really love this one!!!!

I really like Sam-Ridz bro sis duo n Gunji infact the brave happy go lucky Gunji in ur ff.....simply superb dear....Ammy-Ridz n sam-Gunji are two of my fav couples n you have given their character a new dimension here.....

loved it to the core sweety.....Hope AR and SG ke beech all misunderstandngs clear ho jaaye n they come together!!!! Do continue soon

ur's
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Posted: 15 years ago

The Next day!!

Gunjan was finding samrat! she just had to appologize.. she felt really bad about what she had done..

Armaan was busy finding riddhima.. why was she doing this to him??

Armaan banged into gunjan...

A: hey gunjan! riddhima ko dekha!

G: hi.. nahi.. kya hua?

A: yaar.,. usne mujhe kal phone kiya aur kaha ki woh mujhse kabhi nahi milna chahti..

G looked down.. she couldnt say anything..

A: tumhe kuchh pata hain kya?

G: nahi.. par armaan meri ek salah maano usse.. usse bhool jao!!

A: kya? gunjan tum yeh kahogi.. yeh maine kabhi nahi socha tha!! hamesha se tum mera saath deti aayi ho aur ab... zaroor kuchh hua hain..

S: har baar.. kuchh hona zaruri nahi hota!! aur ab tum.. ARMAAN MALLIK.. plz meri behen se door rehna..!!

A: par..

G: plz armaan... uski baat maan lo..

S and A both looked at her shocked!!

A: wow gunjan! ab tum bhi.. great!!

G: tum baat samajhne ki koshish karo..

S was about to leave..

A: par--

G: samrat/..

he stopped..

G: mujhe,.. woh.. tumse.. kuchh baat karni hain..

S: ok.. 5 minutes main canteen main milo..

he leaves..

A: tumhe ho kya gaya hain gunjan!! kyun kar rahi ho mere saath aise!!

G: dekho armaan.. maine tumhe sirf ek salah di hain.. usse maanna na maanna tumpar hain! par haan main tumhari isme koi madad nahi kar paungi.. im sorry...

she leaves..

Armaan is shocked!! gunjanb was one of his closest friends and the one who wanted to see AR together!! then? N gunjan was taking Samrat's side? ab usse kya keh diya sam ne? he thinks of talking to riddhima straight away!!

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Nupur comes to college thinking that today mayank wud listen to her and they wud bunk class..

Mayank was lost in his books when nupur saw him.,. he looked so cute while studying she thought!!

N: mayaank.. hi!

M: hi.. class chale?

N: what? this is not fair mayank!! aaj tumhe meri baat sunni hogi!!

M: par nupur hum class ke baad bhi toh canteen ja sakte hain par canteen ke baad class nahi ja sakte na.. toh class ke baad canteen jakar phir hum classes resume kar sakte hain! ryt?

N: haan...

He had said it so fast that nupur didnt realise only.. she was in awe!

M: fine phir chalo!!

N: mayank..!!

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Gunjan went to the canteen.. S was already there.. he glanced up at her.. their eyes met for a fraction of seconds and he looked away..

G:(in mind) kya kahungi usse? keh do ki riddhima ne mujhe sach bata diya?? ki yeh kahoon ki main hi galat thi.. sorry kaise boloon?

S: (in mind) aaj kuchh ajeeb hi behave kar rahi hain... pehli baar mera saath de rahi thi armaan ke saamne!!

G walked up to him and sat down..

S: kya baat karni thi?

G: ok samrat.. mujhe tumhe kehna tha ki..

R: bhaiya..

S looked up at riddhima..

R: hi gunjan..

G smiled.. did she have to come now?!?!!?!!

R: woh main aaj apne aap ghar aa jaungi..

S: par.. kyun.

R: woh mujhe aaj jaldi ghar jana hain..

S: (after thinking for sometime) theek hain phir.. jao!

riddhima sed bye to gunjan and left.. she seemed pretty sad! mayb she wasnt happy staying away from armaan either!!(thought gunjan)

S: haan toh tumhe kya kehna hain?

G: umm..woh..ki..im..im. sorry.. samrat!

S: kyun?

G: woh kal maine gusse main kuchh zyada hi keh diya!

S: im sorry too.. maine bhi tumse bohot rudely baat ki..

G: ab main tumhare aur riddhima ke matter main interfere nahi karoongi! kabhi nahi..

S looked at her.. he knew riddhima was her best friend and she would be quite lonely widout her!

S: nahi.. aisi koi baat nahi hain! tum uski best friend ho aur bas mera ek kaam karna..

G: kuchh bhi.. anything...

S: usse please kissi cheez ke liye force mat karna..

G nodded.. kabhi nahi.. n again.. mujhe please maaf kar do.. mujhe nahi maloom tha ki tumhari mom..

S looked at her with widened eyes.

G; oh.. sorry.. par main kissi.. ko bata--

S: oh! toh isliye mujhse maafi mang rahi thii.. daya aa rahi hain mujhpar?? bolo? isliye armaan ke saamne meri side le rahi thi? wah.. god! mujhe laga ki..

oh 4get it!!

he got up and went!

Gunjan shut her eyes.. shitt!! ye maine kya kiya! usse toh obviously yehi lagega ki main uspe taras kha rahi thi.. Oh god! mujhe usse baat karni hogi!!

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Riddhima was going home.. when armaan stopped her..

A: mujhe tumse baat karni hain!!

R: tum kyun kar rahe ho aisa.. maine kal sab saaf saaf keh diya tha!!

A: tumne apni baat keh di thi.. par meri baat nahi suni!!! Tum mujhe ek achhi wajah batao ki hum kyun nahi mil sakte?

R: kyunki bhaiya nahi chahte! Aur agar tum apni bhalai chahte ho toh plz door raho mujhse bas!

A: not a good enough reason! Main tumhare bhaiya se nahi tumse pyaar karta hoon riddhima!!

R: Toh main kya karu armaan? Tumhi batao? Main apne bhai ke khilaaf kuchh nahi karoongi aur itna tum bhi jaante ho..

A: plz.. riddhima.. aisa mat karo mere saath!

R: sorry armaan...

She walked away!

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Nupur attended class that day..

M: ab canteen chale?

N: haan.. chalo.. par mayank ye abhi fair nahi hain!!

M: kyun kal toh hum canteen bhi gaye the na!!

N: haan par—

A man came rushing by and pushed nupur she was about to fall when mayank caught her!

They had an eyelock... then mayank broke off!!

N: (in mind) yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain? Kal bhi main mayank ke baare main hi soch rahi thii...

M: toh chale?

N: haan..

Canteen..
N saw G sitting in the canteen alone..
N: hey gunjan.. yaha akele kya kar rahi ho?
M: hi gunjan...
G: hi di hi mayank.. bas aise hi..
M: tum itni udaas kyun ho?
G: nahi.. woh. bas.. samrat ...
N: usne phir se tujhe kuchh kaha kya? kya woh bhool gaya ki tum MERI behen ho! uss din toh cake khakar itni taareef kar raha tha...
G: CAKE!!
M: kya hua?
G: thanks di.. love youu.. mwah! bye..
N: ajeeb larki hain?!!?
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Gunjan goes home and makes an awesome chocolate cake.. she writes a letter with it and send it..
She writes on top of it 'Im Sorry'....
She gives it to her driver to go and give it to sam!
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Precap: letter main kya likha tha? kya sam gunjan ko maaf karega? what will happen with riddhima and armaan?
n kya nupur ko pyaar ka ehsaas hoga?
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyy manjari..🤗🤗
yipeeeeeeeeeee ..i am d 1st one 2 cmnt...gr8888888888
awwwwsum n mindblowng update..👍🏼
loved d way gnjn took sams side😃 while armaan was lft alone..
bt poor armaan..he toh doesnt evn knw anythng..
bt stil sam z sort of crct in his place...😊
n cmng 2 d canteen scene..wel it was superb..⭐️⭐️..bt end mai thdi garbar kar di gnjn ne..
bt am sure dat sam gnjn vil make up by dat delicious chocolate cake..n sam maan jayga..mayb thda naatak kare initialy😆😆..bt den maan toh zarur jayga..😳😃😃
😃w8ng 4 sams reaction n ol..
cont sooooooooon n thnx 4 d pm..😃
it was mindblowngggg👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Edited by ar4evr - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update...........precap is also very interesting ,cont soon
Thanx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Part...
LOVED It!!!
Chocolate Cake Yummyy!! 🤪
Aur Maine FAST Kiya Hua Hain..Lollzz
Pllzz Cont Soon

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