Life without youu!! (update on pg 139) - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
can't wait for more hungama
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow manjari rockong update dear!
gunjan saved AR and ahem ahem nups dating sam
and i think gunjan is being jealous
too good yar cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ash_sajan

wow manjari rockong update dear!
gunjan saved AR and ahem ahem nups dating sam
and i think gunjan is being jealous
too good yar cont soon

thanx 4 commenting ashyy!!!
N i am gonna continue sooon!!
Love youu
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Guys! Thanx a ton for such wonderful comments!! Loveed reading themm!!! Mwah! n keep commenting!! .......................................................................
Mayank was so Confused!!
S: nupur chalo hum tumhare room main chalte hain!!
G looks at S
G: OK! armaan chalo mere saath!! she holds his hand and pulls him along..
S looks at her holding his hand.. he felt sad! even he didnt realise why?
S: riddhima chalo!
G: nahi! ridz mere saath chal rahi hain!!
M: umm.. gunjan tumhari aur armaan ki date thii na?
G: haan par... arghh!! maine ridz ko invite kiya tha toh woh hamare saath hi baithegi! hum kabhi aur date par chale jayenge!! Waise bhi aaj mera mood kisi ne kharab kar diya!!
(staring at samrat!!)
S: maine? maine kya kiya haan?
N: chhoro na samrat.. chalo!!
M: main chalta hoon..
N: nahiin!! (ok why did i just stop him? she thought)
M turned around...
N: umm.. tum bhi chalo na.. dinner karke hi jana..😊
M: fine.. chalo..
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M,N,S
N: Gosh! itna confusion...
M: sab tumhari wajah se hua nupur.. agar tum samrat ko date karne ka jhooth nahi bolti toh kuchh nahi hota!!
N and S: WHat???
M: dude.. dont tell me ki tum chahti ho ki main tumhe believe karloo ki tum apne se chhote larke ko date kar rahi ho?? main pagal dikhata hoon..
S: tumhe pata tha!! god! nupur ne yeh jhoot tumhare liye hi toh bola tha!!
N: SAMRAAT!!!
M: hahaha😆 seriously? tumhe laga ki main tumhara yakeen karloonga!!
S: yeh sab tum aur nupur saught out karo main ridz ko dekhkar aata hoon!!
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G,A,R
G: jaldi socho kya karna hain main khana lagati hoon!!
R: gunjan ruko na...
G turned..
G: tum aur armaan baate karo main aati hoon!! waise bhi ab koi disturb nahi karega!!
A: cool! toh jao!
G smiled😊
After G left!!
A: Riddhima sorry.. maine jo date ka promise kiya tha woh main nahi nibha paya!!
R: shh.. its ok..
a: par sach batao.. bahar tumne mere liye hi bola tha na.. ki main itna bhi bura nahi hoon!!
R noded shyly!
A: (putting his hands on her shoulder) thank youu! Tum kitni sweet ho!
R blushed..
A pulled her closer.. now holding her by her waist! her hands automatically went to his chest!
They were just inches away from each other!
R shut her eyes.. scared! armaan bent to kiss her but...
G came running in!!
G: ARMAAAAN!!!
But before she could say anything she fell on him and down!
She was below him! He was about to get up when riddhima muttered..
R: bhai? aap?
S was in shock!! he was staring at them!! saying nothing at all!
Gunjan looked at him and said
G: nahi.. woh.. samrat..
A began to smile!
S: riddhima chalo! sick!!
G got up and held samrats hand..
G: nahi samrat! tum galat samajh rahe ho!! woh mera paer slip ho gaya toh main..
S: enough gunjan! aur tum mujhe explanation kyun dey rahi ho!! mujhe isse kya..?? bas meri behen ko baksh do!!
R: par bhai ek baar iski baat!
G (maine samrat ko explanation kyun diya? usse lag raha hoga ki main... arghh!! wateva mujhe isse koi phark nahi padta ki woh mere baare main kya sochta hain!!)
G: main khana lagati hoon!!
A: rid..
S looked at armaan..
S: Uska naam apni zubaan se lena bhi mat! and pulled her along wid him!
A: I guess is sadu ko life main kuchh problem hain!! god!!
g: bad luck..
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M: toh nupur yeh sab mere liye tha na..
N: umm.. nahi toh..waise dad se kya baat hui!
M(asali baat toh nahi bata sakta) bas unhe mana kar diya ki main unka kaam nahi kar paoonga!
N: SACH!!
M: haan.. toh what say? apni dushmani ko dosti main badal sakte hain?
N: sure!! ( n they shook hands!!)
and smiled at each other!
N: n thank youu..
M: kyun?
N: meri baat mankar dad ko mana karne ke liye!
M: main yeh kaam kabhi nahi kar pata nupur (in mind: tumhe toh main sudharkar hi rahoonga! ab dosti ki hain.. jaldi sudhar jaogi!)
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Everyone came for dinner...
S: wow! smell toh bohot hi achhi hain!
N: I know!! gunjan bohot achha khana banati hain!
G: thanx di!!
S: i hope taste main bhi utna hi achha ho jitn abahar se lag raha hain!
Giving g a glare!!
A: yumm!! delicious gunjan!! Pasta toh bohot hi achha hain!!
R: yeh tumhara favourite hain na..
G: par pasta maine nahi.. Ri..
R looked at gunjan and gave her a *plz dont tell him* stare!
S: gunjan ismai mirchi kam hain!!
He said pointing at the pasta!
R: woh kyunki armaan mirchi nahi kha sakta naa..
A looked at riddhima and understood that she had made it and thats why gunjan stopped while saying that she hadnt made...)
G got chilli sauce and gave it to samrat!
S: thanx.. he put a little..
After dinner..
G: tan-tada! she got cake!
S: awesome chocolate cake!!
G was happy that samrat liked chocolate cake!!
R: wao gunjan.. it looks delicious!!
M: khana toh itna achha tha hi.. aur ab yeh!! im full already!
N: mayank cum on!! thora sa taste toh karo!!
S tasted first!!
S: yumm!! delicious!! kaha se mangwaya!!
N: hahah!! yeh home made hain! once again gunjan ke haatho ka!! yeh bohot ki superb khana banati hain!!
S: seriosuly!! Its yumm!! riddhima tumhe bhi seekhna chahiye!!
R: bhai gunjan kahi ja thodi na rahi hain!! jabhi chahiye hoga toh woh bana degi!!
G: haan... sure..
A: mujhe toh chocolate bilkul pasand nahi hain!! 😛
G: fine!! taste bhi nahi karoge?
M tasted some and loved it!!
M: yumm gunjan!! btw, nupur... tumhe khana banana aata hain?
N: NO...🤢
M: kyun? gunjan se seekho na!!
N: nahi plzz.. woh banati hain aur main khaati hoon!!
M: isliye itni moti ho gayi ho!! (under his breathe)
N: kya kaha? main moti!!!!!!
S: hahaha...
M: umm.. nahi.. bas..
N mayank!!! she started hitting him on his shoulder!
He got up
M: bas yaar! apne guest ko koi marta hain!!
N: guest ko nahi par dosto ko toh marta hain!! spcly jab kissi ne mujhe mota kaha !!!
M: im sorry baba!!
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Their thoughts at nite..
Armaan: riddhima ne mere liye itna achha pasta banaya! aur mujhe batane se bhi mana kiya! Kal usse khud bulwa kar rahoonga!!
R: aaj jab armaan mujhe kiss karne wala tha sach mujhe pehle darr lag raha tha par phir dukh hua jab gunjan room main aa gayi.... Par agar bhai ne dekh liya hota na.. pata nahi main unse kabhi sach bol paungi bhi ya nahi!
M: aaj nupur se dosti toh karli! bas ab usse dheere dheere sudharoonga!! sir se kiya waada main zaroor poora karunga!! bas nupur ko pata nahi chalna chahiye!!
N: mayank itna bhi boring nahi hain!! sweet hain! pata nahi pehle itna boring lagta tha.. aur usse pata tha ki main aur sam date nahi kar rahe hain tabhi kuchh nahi bola!! Aur ab hum friends hain..
S: aaj mujhe pata nahi kya ho gaya tha.. armaan aur gunjan ko itna kareeb dekhkar mujhe itna dard kyun ho raha tha..
kya ho gaya hain mujhe!! mujhe yeh sunkar gussa kyun aaya ki gunjan ne armaan ke liye pasta main kam mirchi daala?? Kya mujhe gunjan se... nahi yaar! pyar toh sirf bekaar films main hota hain!! aur waise bhi mujhe woh bilkul pasand nahi hain!!
G: mujhe aaj pata nahi kya hua? sam ke saamne mujhe armaan ko boyfriend maanne main itna bura kyun laga?
Kya ho raha hain mujhe? use jab cake achha laga toh mujhe khushi kyun hui??
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Precap: next day college...
Gunjan comes to know Samrat's past!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyy manjari..
awwwwsum update tha..
lovvvved d cnfussion alot..
n bechare sanu ka plan strt hone se pehle hi mayu ko pta chal gya..
n sam ka gnjn n armaan ko dkhkar jealous hona was like ..bilkul bindass..
realyyy lovved it
n especily lovvved evrybdyz thaught at d nyt..
watng 4 d nxt updtae eagerly..realy wana knw sams past..cz tbhi toh sajan ki luvstry strt hgi..
thnx 4 d pm n cont soooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
fantastic update dear
i am loving the samrat gunjan armaan riddhima combination scenes.........love the confusion
continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update manjari!!!!
loving it!!!
lots of luv...
yashu....
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Posted: 15 years ago
fantastic update
loved it
do continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow manjari absolutely wonderful update yaar!
fisr of all i loved the scene when gunjan falls on armaan and sam came in!it was too good
then i realy loved the dinner scene and specially the pasta scene!
then i loved the last scene where everyone was thinking about each other
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mind-blowing update.
mayur become frinds now.
happy for my mayur
good part
keep it up

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